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"You have sauce on your face ."
Suvreen declared grinning softly. .
"Really?" I asked , embarrassed by myself .
She just nodded .

I grabbed tissue from the table and started wiping it .

"Now ?" I asked raising my eyebrows.

" No. You kept doing it wrong ."
She laughed .
"Here, let me help."
She grabbed another tissue and leaned a little.

Holding my face by one hand she started to wipe the sauce.
Her dark brown eyes concentrated on the task which I enjoy a lot.

Her soft lips .

She is making me go crazy.

"Done! " she declared throwing the tissue on the table .

" Thanks ."

"Okay , You want something else?" I asked her biting my last slice of pizza.

"No I am full . If I eat anything right now , You will have to carry me home ."

" I would love that ."
I said winking at her . She instantly blushed .

.

" How are we going home in this storm ?"
Suvreen asked in worry.

I pushed door open .
"Thanks!" She smiled and got out of the diner.

" Don't worry . Remember we have a car !"
I exited after her swinging my arm on her shoulder.

" I think we should wait for a while . Its pouring all over ."
She said moving closer to me for warmth .

" We can't . We have to clean that mess you made while you were baking the cake ."
I said resting my chin on her shoulder and wrapped my arms around her.

"But-"

" No buts . Besides I have surprise for you . "
I said grinning like a fool.

" What surprise? " she turned around as she was facing me .

" Suvre-" I gulped .
Her eyes were so much excited .

She is perfect !

" I -" She started rubbing my arms encouraging me .

" I want to have a baby."
I said nervously . Smiling a little .

"What ? "

She stopped rubbing my hand . Her mouth was slightly open in shock.

" Is that all right ? Are we rushing?"
I was so scared . I was hoping she would be pleased . It was so confusing to understand her reaction .

"No-... I mean , wow ."
She laughed lightly .

" So ?" I asked pulling apart .

" So ? .. You are an idiot ." she said blinking back the tears forming in her eyes .

" I want a baby too ." She whispered .

I smiled in excitement .

She cupped my face and brought her lips to mine .
She tasted so good . It was of a chocolate and sweet she ate before.

We pulled apart and blushed .
" Let's go we shouldn't do this in public . "

" What ? there is no one here . "
I chuckled .

" Let's go . We have to get home if we are going to work on baby thing ."
She said suggestively .
I raised my eyebrows smirking.

To hell with the rain . I can't miss this offer.

I held her hand and we ran to our car in parking lot.

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I watched intently as I drive . She was resting on the sit comfortably watching the rain . A comfortable silence was giving me peace . I loved it when she is around me . Her hands resting on her lap . her curls softly bouncing on her shoulders .
I smiled contently and turned to look at the road ahead me .

"Yuvraj!"
My attention was back on her as she called my name .

" How do you know that you want kids ?"

I scrunched my eyebrows . I was little confused by her question .
I tried best to answer it anyway .

" Because I feel it . I don't know why, but I feel it ." I said sincerely .

She rested her hand on my knee assuring that she felt it too.

Its been 2 years since we are married .

I love her . She has been great companion . She made it all a lot easier . my only family .
I don't know what I'd do without her.

Suvreen turned music on.
My thoughts were interrupted as
'Boston' was playing on the radio.

" You don't know me, and you don't even care! "

She was singing in high pitched voice .

" You are terrible ." I laughed hard . It was kind of hard to pay attention on the road and watch her hilarious antics.

" I think I'll start a new life,
I think I'll start it over, where no one knows my name,!"

" Stop , please !" I laughed even harder when she started to shake her head and did weird hand gestures .

" Ohh . I know you love it ." She said seductively . But it came funny as she tried to wiggle her eyebrows . I tried best not to burst in laughter .

"Okay. Okay Stop . I can't pay attention here ."
I turned the music off .

" Yuvraj Singh . " She glared at me flatly .

" What ?" I asked smiling stupidly.

She just pouted & turned against me looking outside , watching the rain.
I shook my head in amusement .

Few minutes passed and she still wasn't talking to me .
" Suvreen ?" I called her .
But she refused to be bothered .

" Suvi !"

" Topper"

" Nozzie ! "

" Hey!" I poked her .

Finally she gave in and looked at me .
" What ?"

" I am sorry okay . " I apologized .

" That's it only sorry ?"

I raised my brow and laughed a little .

" Okay , What do you want ?"
Her eyes lit up when I asked that question.

"I want icecream ."
She declared . I looked at her incredulously .

" Please ." She was giving that cute puppy eyes . I couldn't say no to her .

" This is unfair . You know I can't say no to that face ."
She grinned ear to ear .

" I love you ." She said .

" Love you ."

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I parked my car at the opposite side of the Ice cream parlour . The parking lot at front was crowded .

" what flavour you want ? "

"Vanilla ?"

" Okay I'll get it."
Suvi got out of the car and ran towards the parlour .

I watched as she disappeared in the crowd .

I turned music on .
Humming quietly I waited for her .

After some time she emerged from the crowd . I watched her . She was holding one bag which probably have Ice cream in it . It was raining lightly . So her hair was wet . she looked at me and waved as she started to cross road . She smiled widely .

I smiled too . I turned to start the car .

The next moment I heard an impact . I hear metal crushing , Suvreen screaming and cars stopping .
Fear settled in the pit of my stomach as I looked towards the road . Suvreen was nowhere to be seen . I searched around gripping the wheel of steering in my hands then I saw the broken car smashed on the pole and at the side .
Her body was lying on the ground .

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So? How's it please tell me . I really need your reviews .
And please overlook the grammatical mistakes . I know my English is poor but I am working on it.
So thank you for reading !

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indradhanushs thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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So basically this story is based on movie the vow . I hope you will enjoy it.
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M first!
Yaahooo!
Awesum one di! Lovd it. Do continue soon!
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It's amazing 👏
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ur back after very long...missed u..
nice story do continue 😊

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