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braveheartdoc

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: babita..

Pls don't feel nervous Manisha🤗
The poem has come out so beautifully and so natural👏👏

Thanks a lot dear..

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braveheartdoc

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: DEKER
wao hats off to you dear...👏👏👏
its beautiful wao i loved a lot i don't think there will be any another better way to propose Trisha ..
it was amazing soo...romantic the lines are so preety😳 those lovely words wao
and perfectly suits with them
thankyou so...much dear for such a beautiful poem
love you a lot dear❤️🤗

Thanks a lot Lavanya... Means a lot..
Glad you liked it.

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braveheartdoc

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: Shaina744
👏 awsm creation Manisha... Love it a lot...Raghav s expressing his feelings... Love his proposal a lot...love the way in which you described his feelings...your words are so magical ...they have touched my heart..Love the poem a lot...pls keep writing... Tnkuuu sooo much for the lovely poem... 🤗 ❤️

Thanks a lot dear for your motivation... Means a lot... Take care..

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braveheartdoc

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Hi everyone, I'm back with my new RaTri poem...this time i have tried to express the first time Raghav feels that he feels something more than just friendship for Trisha. I have chosen it to be after the first time she hugged him in the forest scene episode 4...its just my piece of imagination...hope you like this...

Kya yahi pyar hai

Aaj hawaaon mein hai ek alag hi saaz

Aaj mere dil se aayi ek aawaaz...

Kya hai yeh us pal ka agaaz

Jab hoga khulasa...aakhir kya hai yeh raaz...

Rehta tha ab tak main khud se hi naraaz

Par badla badla sa hai aaj mera andaaz...

Tum jo aayi mere itne paas

Tham si gayi jaise meri saans...

Kaisa anokha hai yeh ehsaas

Jaau main tujhse door...par chahu tujhe lana paas...

Mere dil ki dhadkan le rahi bas tera naam

Tere bin ek pal bhi...aata na mujhko aaram...

Jaanu na kya mujhe hua

Har pal maangu bas yehi dua...

Tere hone ka yeh ehsaas

Rahe sada mere saath...jab tak chale meri saans...

Aaj mera dil hai bahut bekaraar

Aaye na samajh...kya...kya yehi hai pyar...

Hope you like this one as well...i don't know whether it could express Raghav's feelings or not...but i tried my best...loves to everyone...❤️

This is my way of expressing gratitude towards all of you lovely people...

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Tasha1994

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Wow manisha. ...a new poem ..of to read it and will comment soon

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Babita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Awesome, Lovely, Purely a superb gift for all of us 👏👏

Manisha, this is what the show should have shown, but they never gave a glimpse even after that slight hug of RaTri !!! Loved how U have expressed their love and first hug mentally shaken Raghav to his deep senses and he is out of his own cage to find a heart so loving around him !

Just loved every part of it.

Beautifully expressed Raghav's feelings and his way to think afresh about Trisha ! In the RaTri land right now, 😉 thanks a tonne sweetie pie 🤗

Loves ❤️

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Babita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Kya yahi pyar hai ??

Haan, yahi toh pyar hai ❤️

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braveheartdoc

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Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: Tasha1994
Wow manisha. ...a new poem ..of to read it and will comment soon

No problem take your time...

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braveheartdoc

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Posted: 9 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: babita..
Awesome, Lovely, Purely a superb gift for all of us 👏👏
Manisha, this is what the show should have shown, but they never gave a glimpse even after that slight hug of RaTri !!! Loved how U have expressed their love and first hug mentally shaken Raghav to his deep senses and he is out of his own cage to find a heart so loving around him !
Just loved every part of it.
Beautifully expressed Raghav's feelings and his way to think afresh about Trisha ! In the RaTri land right now, 😉 thanks a tonne sweetie pie 🤗
Loves ❤️

Thanks a lot Babita, I just felt that was the best moment we got in the show to show this type of a feeling...hope we get something better in season 2...

You have an amazing understanding sweetie...loves to you for that...