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Posted: 9 years ago

Nice beginning. Waiting for more.

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anjani

@snehatanu

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Posted: 9 years ago

it is wonderful very nice story and narration, waiting for more thank you so much.

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Swati Kapoor

@Swatishubh

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Posted: 9 years ago

Nice story in making, will review later.

Thanks dear 👏

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Bhavit Kapoor

@bawaswift

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hello dear... !

First of all... Welcome to the Ktlk Forum,,,,, 🤗

Your story has a nice concept of aged Ashu n Mallika still dreaming what she used to dream years ago... ! Liked the way you have handled the story.. ⭐️👏

review in the next... !!!

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Bhavit Kapoor

@bawaswift

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Posted: 9 years ago

Now the story... !!!!

The elderly woman,, Mallika who has changed her profession from a doc to a teacher... she is attracted to the Ashutosh family... unknowingly that they are from his family... !

Liked how you have distinguished the four cousins... n the ailing one in awe of her other cousins... !!!

Mallika who is reviving her own story in these kids,,, is still in the dreams of Ashu... for whom she manipulated his two relations... one with Piyali n then with Nidhi.. !

But she is unaware of the marriage of Ashu with Nidhi,,, n Ashni being their kid,,, ?? !!!!!

Nice to see a new story with a new concept where the characters we already know have crossed their age n now their kids are in their age to see their life move ahead... !

Armaan's plight is unbearable... yet his not getting closer to his daughter is shocking for me... ! He did for his wife... but this girl is her part... he must have thought of it... n saw her only once that on Ashu's insisting..

So... the kids are naughty n the Best Neuro is at their college n the Dean is all in his duty... among all the teachers ... Ashu did not recognise Mallika ... or he still is in wait for an outside meeting... or he is the least caring to meet her personally... ??/ yet to be known.. !

A man of protocols... he is their to take care of his niece Ranjita... But the fact of others is up to him now... the naughty kids...

Will wait to see how he deals with them as Nidhi acclaims that his leniency has made them all spoil brats...

Lovely n a new concept... Keep it up dear... !!! ⭐️👏

May I know your name... plzz... 😳

Thanks n God bless... !!!

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Swati Kapoor

@Swatishubh

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Posted: 9 years ago

Awesome and a new beginning to the Ashutosh family with the kids now grown up and are in the same college. Mallika's POV is an awareness that what she did to Ashu, she herself is out of the profession and now leading a life where she is alone with a wait for him to see him from away at least. She got nothing and lost all.

Liked Ashu coming to see his niece, Armaan's daughter and comes to know about other kids too. The Dean and all the teachers are in his aura as he is famous with many accords. Liked to see him not taking or giving advantage to his family kids through his approach!

Mallika tried to spoil his life twice, but he is married to Nidhi that's not known to her and seems like AshNi is their daughter. I liked this new way to see the story ahead and the relation of Nidhi and Ashu living miles with bad and good times with each other.

Narration is purely magical and way of telling the story is a lovely piece of work dear 👏

I liked the story in making and will be waiting to see what Ashu do to take care of his naughty kids and if Mallika manages to meet him alone.

Thanks dear for coming up with your new story to this forum. You have named Nidhi as Solanki's daughter and Verma and Bua are now where in the story. But it's all okay as it's a new concept to see the life through your penned down tale.

Will be waiting for more - Welcome to the Ktlk Forum! 🤗

may i too get to know your name?

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rimjhim_rims

@rimjhim_rims

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Posted: 9 years ago

Thanks.

Yes Anish, Anik and Ashni all are Ashutosh and Nidhi's children. in show we Shaw Ashutosh's yearning for his own family own kid so think to give them 3 kids to dot and cherish.

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Babita

@babita..

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Posted: 9 years ago

Nice beginning though we get to see old age of our Ashni !

Thanks Rimjhim for this story U have presented to us and help us in reviving the forum in your ways. 👏👏

Mallika's version is her own but never liked by even her fans if she has spoiled Ashu's life for two times. She knows her flaws and mistakes and even then is waiting for a miracle that the angry Ashu will come back to her. I am happy that he is happily married to Nidhi and have children and taking care of Arman's girl too. I liked the aura he creates for everyone around. Be it Mallika, Dean, teachers and even us 😉

Loved to see the cousins bond but they are not in good and proper behavior with teachers and other students. It was tough for me to believe that Ashu is behind their habits 😛 He gave them such politeness, where is Heartstone ?? 😉

Nidhi is not yet shown and U have told anything about her except that she has been there with him all this time. Would like to know more about her and Ashu scenes, so that we come to know how and when they got married when Mallika almost took away him from her life !

Mallika at Dean's cabin and Ashu did not address her as if he knows her. I just loved this part, whatever she did to him and Nidhi -- how he will ever forgive her ??

Now the time has come that Ashu might talk to Mallika in personal. Time to talk to his kids to scold and taking their class. And time to see a lovely bond of Nidhi and Ashu that's our AshNi.

Thanks Rimjhim for this beautiful yet a different story from all others till now ⭐️

Will wait for more, thanks and loves ❤️