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shruthiravi thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 34- Poornima Patel Sant Guru and the temple head priest were standing in the front hall of a house. A man sat on the leaning armchair. Another man quite younger stood by the side.
" Why Mahantji why do you remember Harkishore now. Well seems like you cannot protect traditions" the man laughed
" Kishoreji see I know, what happened to you and your daughter was not right. But when the child's father refused to accept the truth in front of everyone you know I cannot do anything"
" Really Mahantji you cannot do anything. Did you call the father of the child who was in my daughter's womb. You were the one who married my Anu to him secretly in temple. Spineless worm "
" But Harkishoreji you cant tell Mahantji didn't help you. Normally Anu would have been stoned to death, but we allowed you to leave the place quietly and I suppose the child's father did help you secretly with money "
" Money, we threw that in his face " shouted the young man. " Pratap is not spineless as the son of Rajasekhar Varma to take money from him. He is capable of working and has worked in a proper job to take care of his sister and her child. My sister, she was a Suhagan, but lived the life of the widow for the honor of the family in the new place we went. I have seen her withering away in the betrayal and she died when Poorni was just 5 years, while her so called husband married the girl of his parent's choice and is living a good life now"
" We had not come till now because my wife wanted peace and we owed her that " told Harkishore
" Now Maa is not there and my Poorni should get her right. She is not Poornima Patel, she is Poornima Varma. I want the honor of the Varma's to hit the dust" told Pratap
" See Harkishoreji after what happened in the community hall we also want to ensure the Varma family doesn't get away. A widow is wearing ghungroos and above all the youngest son has questioned Sant Guru on his predictions" told temple priest
" Mahantji so the youngest Varma son what is his name
" Sreedhar" told Sant Guru
" Haan Sreedhar he wants to know what karma made his sis-in-law who has a sowbhagya yoga a widow. He will know. He will know very soon of the karma done by his grandfather, father and his brother that has come back to bite them. He will know about tears of Anusree Patel a young girl of 17 who was out casted as a unwed pregnant lady, while she was a suhagan and had given herself only to her husband. His spineless brother who had married her in temple and enjoyed the Suhaagraat, then leaving her to the sharks of the society. Her caste didn't matter in bed, when it came to owning up it made a lot of difference" Harkishore Patel's eyes blazed.
" Harkishoreji we are with you. Now tell us what we have to do "
" First and the foremost I want humiliation for the family. And it has to come through that widow bahu of theirs. Their widow bahu has to come out "
" But how can we bring widow out" told Sant Guru
" We all know when a widow comes out Sant Guruji", he looked at Pratap
Pratap explained something to temple priest and Sant Guru.
" But they wont celebrate Navrathri festival this year. Murali Varma is dead only for 7 months by that time"
" Mahantji if your dream can allow widow to wear ghungroos, ensure with your dream this time one of the Jagratha of Navrathri is planned in Varma house"
" But the person who sent me negatives will know it is fake "
" He will know, but why do we care about him. He will not know what we want this time. Whoever it is I don't think he has any clue about Anusree Patel "
" And you know if everything go as planned there is only one way the widow can be protected and I don't think any of the varma boys have that kind of spine with them" both Harkishore and Pratap laughed, while Sant Guru and Temple priest nodded
Sreedhar had taken Aakash, Adwaith and Nami to weekend outing. As usual they were taking the ice candy from the roadside vendor. 1 girl walked in and asked for ice candy. The man made ice candy and the girl gave Rs 100.
" You don't have change " asked the candy man
" No, I had come to super market.my grand father gave me only this money. When I saw ice candy on the way, I wanted to buy" told the girl innocently
" If you have no change, no ice candy. I do not have that kind of change with me"
Girl looked crest fallen and she tried to walk away. " Beta please stop, Bhaiyya please give her ice candy. I will pay" told Sreedhar.
The girl gave a beautiful wide smile as she took ice candy " Thank you uncle "
" What is your name" asked Sreedhar
Before the girl could tell Aakash told " Poornima Patel Chachu, she is the new head prefect of our school this year "
The girl blushed as if she didn't wanted to know her credentials " Yes I am Poornima Patel. We came from Raipur to Jaipur this year and I am studying in Navmantha Public School in 10th std. I have been made head prefect as I was the assistant prefect in my previous school "
Sreedhar patted the girl's shoulder and " Nice meeting you young lady, will see you soon once again". The girl smiled and walked away with ice candy and Sreedhar looked at her not sure why he felt connected to the girl
Edited by shruthiravi - 8 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow another angle to the already complicated one.. but this harikoshore is going to know Sree does have spine and is more Maheshwari's son than Rajasekhar's son.. is Tilak the guy who cheated? Does Renuka and Maheshwari know? I'm liking Poornima sweet and humble. Aakash sounded like a proud brother but of course he doesn't know that she is his sister.
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Posted: 9 years ago
@Ria this is the real parallel track I have been talking about. The paths that will meet. The fire Sreedhar will have to walk. Society's rules, traditions, honor and lies on one side, love friendships and truth on other side
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Posted: 9 years ago
Shruthi, just read 4 parts together. I am really feeling bad for Runuka Bhabi as it can't be Sudhir to have a 15 year old daughter. How will Sreedhar ensure his family is not face the humiliation as well as justice to the child? I don't want to see Maheshwariji's head fall in front of the society because of her kids but still I can't really think any of her kids can do such blunder.
May be some MU. May be by the time he returned back, the girl would have moved away to another city and he had no clue about the child he fathered...
waiting for the next part Shruthi
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Posted: 9 years ago
@Jaya this is past, a time when Sree's grand father held the house with his customs. Whatever happened it has to do a lot with Sree's grand father, his strictness or to a great extend his patririachial mind set . I had explained earlier also Maheswari came from a family of freedom fighters, but her husband's family was not that liberal.
From a story point also Maheswari weilds the power after her in laws death that is somewhere from Sree's teenage years. Yes I will open up how it happened. We have seen how Suman was married willfully against her wishes, with this track I am opening up how the other side or a man is also an equal sufferer in the system when the sword of honor is kept dangling over his head by his elders without thinking about right or wrong or even the youngster's mental state.
And yes like you both guessed it is Tilak only. Tilak - Anusree the path crossing is with Sreedhar-Suman.
It will show the rebellion of Tilak and rebellion of Sreedhar. How the path back fired for Tilak as he couldn't keep Anu's honor when it mattered most and now it has come back , but how Sreedhar will walk the tough path not only for his love, but also for her honor and that path will ensure honor for his brother's mistake and justice for child also.
If you look Tilak married the girl and had relation with her. But couldn't stand up for her. Sreedhar too has done a symbolic marriage with Suman. But he wants to fight for her, to get her with honor in front of the society.
Anusree was a Suhagan who lived the life of a widow.In a way Suman is also a Suhagan on whom the marriage in front of society has forced a widowhood.
Edited by shruthiravi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wonderful updates shruthi โญ๏ธโญ๏ธ
Rajesekar varma beleiving in his wife's capability and leave the matter to her shows he is progressive yet he cant come out fully from the traditional traps
MAheshwari vindhya scene is nice .
watching DDLJ scene is cute and shree will succeed in anything in his way if he want to win.

u've showed the other face of the so called traditionalist thru the priest,,
Shree's way of dealing with the priest is a good decision to make things done than creating a drama
sudhir and vindhya resembles typical husband and wife and their nok jhok is fun to read

suman and sree celebrating his bday is cute and sweet romantic ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜ณ
Story behind his name is nice .

The way shree and suman communicating ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ . shree understand each and every move of suman.

Aww !! their dance part .. sooo sweet ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ.. the way suman and shree saying their feeling thru eyes is top notch..No words or touch needed to give assurance . Just have t omake the other one feel.
loved this part very much .. they feel each other and do what other one want within their limit ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ..
Finally shree was succedded in his first step for making her to accept her feeling for him. and they talk to eath other with ease..
Loved when suman giggled at him.. her naughtiness is coming out slowly .

Sorry for giving feedbacks rarely.. not visiting forum regularly

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Posted: 9 years ago
Loved the naughty shree sending msg to suman ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†.
hope we get such naughtiness then and there .

๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ what is this news story coming up..
but i feel they will end up in making sree and suman couples with their plans ..
and who is that guy cheated the girl . I hope there will be some situation for him to do that . as maheshwari's brought up wont went wrong .
looks like the brothers in experts to get marry in temple secretly ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks Hemaji for the detailed review and feedback. I know you will love dance part ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†. Don't worry, there is a story behind what happened. It will open up, but then we need some great planners to support Sree and Suman with what they wants ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†. Great master plans ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† with some great ideasVindhya and Sudhir yes they are the best couple of the story. Even I enjoy while writing them.
Yes Hemaji usually guys are good at doing covert operations. Only thing is that when it comes out in open you wont generally find them anywhere ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Edited by shruthiravi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Fantastic story and story telling as well. Read part 34 (got the link from SKR) and now will start from Part 1
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Posted: 9 years ago
DABH got an extension... pls kill me ๐Ÿคฃ

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