Hello fellow EDKVians...
I am not very regular in posting...but i do stalk...i stalk here a lot...😆 its my fav pass time this days...
Writing a SS based on the current track..ie Shraman romance and may be a confession during Preekar marraige...
Pre Script:
1. I am not a very good writer ( I attempted once, n i ditched mid way...*hides face n runs away*...but these scenes are playing in my mind so much, hence thought what's the harm in trying ...errr once again...
2. Scenes shall be super cliche and super bollywood style... so no originality what so ever...this is just prologue thou...
Prologue
The sequence starts from the office scene where Sumo returns the check and vows never to come in between son-dad relationship as she herself understands the pain of losing a parent... she after all had the first hand experience of seeing Shravan break down after he got the news of the Accident...She would not want to be the reason for his dilemma.
Ramnath Uncle, I can assure you, I never want to be the reason for the feud between Father and son...aapne sahi kaha tha...Haa Main Shravan se pyar karti hu... Mujhe yeh nahi pata ki Shravan bhi mujhse pyar karta hai ki nahi, But mujhe yeh pata hain ki agaar kabhi Shravan ko choose karna paade... hum dono ke bich main...woh kabhi aapko hurt karke kuch nahi karna chahega..."
Ramnath could smell victory already...he smirked saying Jaanta hu...
"I assure you, I will stay away from Shravan, and in return I only want smooth sailing of Preeti and Pushkar's wedding.
Thank you Uncle for your time...I will take your leave...Namaste"
Suman started to leave the office premises with a heavy heart wishing for a glimpse of his...
She chided herself and continued self talk...Sumo, tu kab sudhregi...aabhi tune kuch promise kiya hain..abhi tu firse use dekhna chahata hain...your focus should how fast you can arrange money...That is it...
While she was busy muttering to herself and starting the ignition of the ambassador, she didn't notice Shravan hurriedly coming out from his home calling her name...
Sumo, Sumo...Shit Yaar...chali gayi... wese to iska car ka clutch hamesha garbar karta hain...lekin arurat ke waqt fatak se start ho gaya...Sumo bahut pareshaan lag rahi hain...I am sure she is worried about Chachi's demands of destination wedding... aur madame aur job hi hain kissi se help to nahi mangegi... mujhse bhi nahi... I have to do something... bahut passive pyar kar liya...its time to take some active decisions.. Sumo we do need to talk... and if you won't come to me, I will.
To be continued...
Love
Shalini
PS: I am mighty nervous about posting this...pleej to refer PreScript #1. Joota na marna bas..😊
PPS: Please do let me know how u liked it...😳positive criticism is most welcome...n i will try to give acha cute wala romance in the chappies...😃
Not proof read...so please excuse spelling and grammatical mistakes...
INDEX
Prologue Page 1
Chapter 1 - Page 3
Chapter 2 - Page 7
Chapter 3 - Page 11
Chapter 4 - Page 17
Chapter 5A - Page 22
Chapter 5B-Page 29
Chapter 6A-Page 35
Chapter 6B-Page 35
CID
