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IshqHaiWoEhsaas

@IshqHaiWoEhsaas

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

#171

Chapter 1 :

Ufff...the entry of my Jalal!!

And loved the way he said, " Don't worry, I'm married!", along with the smirk that followed...😆 Jalal will be Jalal...😆

The way he says Gharaali Sa...

Oho...toh Jodha has a heroine wali entry haan! 😆😳

Loved that handhold and their first talk..."Aap ki Adao ke kayal hain hum" 😳

OMG...These two na...so adorable! 😳

The AkDha BGM is so apt! ❤️

Loving the story dear...😳

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kartikaJA

@kartikaJA

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#172

awesome update
thanks for pm

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IshqHaiWoEhsaas

@IshqHaiWoEhsaas

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#173

Chapter 2

Awww...such a cute story it is yaar...loved the way Jalal said, " Ye do parinde aa dhamke!" 🤣

And Jodha's hitting Jalal...OMG...😲🤣..."Aah...aa gyi gharaali sa!" 😆

My God...Jo knows English...😲 Toh Jalal ko kyun nhi sikha di? 😡😆

BTW, These two are sooo cute...😳😳... I love the way you have written the story yaar, really very cute it is! 😳

But ye Krish...talking to Malika like this...😡...And he was afraid of Jalal...😆...Should be! 😉

Oh...toh paani bharne ka plan hai! 😉 Wow! 😆😳

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Avika444

@avika444

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#174

Have to read from chap one aishwarya

Will read soon and comment dear

Thanks for pm

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IshqHaiWoEhsaas

@IshqHaiWoEhsaas

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#175

Read the story in a go dearie, it's amazing! 👏

Will comment on each chapter very soon...😃

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eshalli

@eshalli

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#176

Superb chapter dear
Precap is interesting
Continue soon
Thxcc 4r pm

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Rahi

@Rahiramesh

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#177

Nice chappy, Krish and Khushi are slowly understanding depth of JoJa's love and concurrently their mistakes towards their own love..
Oh so it was Atifa track, I couldn't get when u asked when would she sing this painful song next time
Jo was going to kill herself but stopped as she was bearing twins at that time..

Great going buddy, post soon..