Her Rhythm Is His Rhyme - An Omkara Os

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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey guys this is your teju here and as requested by amreen an i really owe her an apology so this os is not only dedicated to her but the name of the girl here is also amreen

no bashing and offence

do leave your commnets



Her Rhythm Is His Rhyme

A Musical Os

She tuned down his favourite song...

His mind drifted to the first time he witnessed her ...

Flashback

It began as a whispering in the air. The day had been beautiful and the sky was like a dome of plasma-blue. The clouds had looked like airy anvils drifting under the gleaming disc of sun.
The moon seemed to turn the leaves into a flaming patchwork of colours: scorching-yellows, lava-reds and burnished-browns. It added an alien glamour to a perfect scene. He heard a greedy thrush, snail a-tapping on rock. But something else too A huffing wind rose up then, stirring the flaps of his hair. A tinkling sound came to his ears as the first pearls of rain dropped onto the leaves. The sound was like the glassy clinking of a champagne flute, lilting and clear. A sheet of rain passed over him and the sound intensified.

Ye moh moh ke dhaage
Teri ungliyon se jaa uljhe
Ye moh moh ke dhaage
Teri ungliyon se jaa uljhe

Her hair was a rich shade of mahogany. It flowed in waves to adorn her glowing, porcelain-like skin. Her eyes, framed by long lashes, were a bright, emerald-green and seemed to brighten the world. A straight nose, full lips - she seemed the picture of perfection. Had she smiled, the world would sigh with contentment. Had she laughed, the world would laugh with her. And had she wept, the whole world would want to comfort her. The girl was stunningly gorgeous, like a painting of a goddess brought to life.her eyes sparkling like stars flaunted on the night sky.


Koi toah toah na laage
Kis tarah girha ye suljhe


Hai rom rom iktaara..,
Hai rom rom iktaara
Jo baadalon mein se guzre

Engaging herself in her kathak she found no solace than dancing peacefully in rain .

Nothing could stop her . yes may be she would had stopped if she knew a pair of eyes glancing her fully drenched in her white anarkali suit with a border of blue and brown .

She looked mystic with the heavy kohl in her eyes . everything was perfect out her gestures and mudras went well

Ye moh moh ke dhaage
Teri ungliyon se jaa uljhe
Koi toah toah na laage
Kis tarah girha ye suljhe

Tu hoga zara pagal,
Tune mujhko hai chuna

Yes om had a sudden urge to touch her face take her hands in his . he went forward but he hesitated more to move even a inch further

What will she think damn om control yourself

she had just placed her ghungruu down on a rock

didi chalo abbu ghar pohanch gaye honge "!! Screamed a kid about a 7-8 years younger to her . she rushed back without even picking them up..

"chalo sahir" she replied

Ye moh moh ke dhaage
Teri ungliyon se jaa uljhe
Koi toah toah na laage
Kis tarah girha ye suljhe

He picked that thing that she left

"Kya kehte hai isse?" he questioned himself

"ghungru " came a reply from his mind

" nahi pyaar om pyaar " the heart was at its place

Tu hoga zara pagal,
Tune mujhko hai chuna
Tu hoga zara pagal,
Tune mujhko hai chuna

Kaise tune ankaha, tune ankaha sab suna
Tu hoga zara pagal,
Tune mujhko hai chuna
Tu din sa hai, main raat aana
Dono mill aaye shaamon ki tarah

he followed her just to return her ghungru back ... no wait the heart stopped him right back ... return it tomorrow ... you can meet her than

Ye moh moh ke dhaage
Teri ungliyon se jaa uljhe
Koi toah toah na laage
Kis tarah girha ye suljhe

Khaki raahein, hum ankh moonde jaayein
Pahunche kahin toh be-wajah

that night omkara had a sleepless night ...

what could be her name?

should he ask her ?

ohh god I am so poor in all this things

Ye moh moh ke dhaage
Teri ungliyon se jaa uljhe
Koi toah toah na laage
Kis tarah girha ye suljhe

Flashback ends

"Amreen plz kk" ... om ran behind her

"Aapko chahiye yeh" she paced front with his spatula

" kab sudrogi ?"

" nahi sudarna chahti " she stopped just infront of the wall

" jaogi kaha abb"? he smirked evily marking his victory

" yeh ligiye aapka ! isike saath shaddhi karlena " she handed over his spatula in anger

" ohh sacchi ? " he inched forward cornering her with his arms on both sides

"mein jau"?

"haan agar ja sakti ho toh jau" he inched more forward

"om yeh time hai yeh sab karne ka?"

" tumne hi toh disturb kiya nha mujhe ... now you get disturbed " he inched more forward almost touching their noses

She closed her eyes knowing what was going to come next

Watching her situation om took a piece of clay and rubbed it against her cheeks

She opened her eyes suprisingly

" shaddi ke teen saal hogaye amreen abhi bhi yahi haal hai tumhara like that first time "? He smiled

She smiled even brighter

Ye moh moh ke dhaage
Teri ungliyon se jaa uljhe
Koi toah toah na laage
Kis tarah girha ye suljhe

"I actually have to be going, now." she hesitantly said, not wanting to leave one bit but knowing their baby would be up by now.

"Do you?" He raised an eyebrow, curving his palms around her waist and moving in. her heart beating increased and breathing faltered.

"Yes." she barely breathed out before his warm lips met hers. It only lasted for a moment before a gush of cold air greeted their lips again, causing her frown.


"Why did you stop?" she asked impatiently.

"I thought you had to go. But since you insist--" His lips returned to hers, but this time with more force. He managed to separate her lips and elongate the kiss.
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sorry if not up to your expectations😊

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KRITII thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#2
Oh my God
It's amazing ☺️
Shut up , don't even say it's not up to our expectations... I loved it:)
Keep writing more n more
And yaa do pm me ;)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh my god this was lovely 👏 Moh Moh ke dhaage was so apt. 😳 I wish There was an S before amreen it would have become samreen 😆 My fragile heart, I would have died then and there 😆 Keep writing would be waiting for more 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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aww.. so gushy and mushy...
lovely..
especially Flashback ke baad wala scene..
haaye..
amreen kitthe hai? usse toh sharam se laal hojana hai.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#5
OMG! So so beautiful ❤️
I was able to virtually imagine whole thing! Perfect!
and the song was like cherry on cake... added more beauty to your OS!

Keep writing more! I am eagerly waiting for Om ka love story in the show ❤️
...tejaswi... thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: KRITII

Oh my God

It's amazing ☺️
Shut up , don't even say it's not up to our expectations... I loved it:)
Keep writing more n more
And yaa do pm me ;)


hey kirti glad u loved it
welcome to the forum sweetheart
yeah for sure will pm the next writings
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: crushcrushed

Oh my god this was lovely 👏 Moh Moh ke dhaage was so apt. 😳 I wish There was an S before amreen it would have become samreen 😆 My fragile heart, I would have died then and there 😆 Keep writing would be waiting for more 😳


hey hi samreen is that your name ?
ohh dear you can automatically imagine the s present before amreen😃

thanks for sharing your comment
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: VidyutKiDeewani

aww.. so gushy and mushy...
lovely..
especially Flashback ke baad wala scene..
haaye..
amreen kitthe hai? usse toh sharam se laal hojana hai.



hey anika glad u liked it
amreen is not online yet maybe
busy with eid celebrations
poor girl wanted to comment frst
better luck next time 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...Mastani...

OMG! So so beautiful ❤️

I was able to virtually imagine whole thing! Perfect!
and the song was like cherry on cake... added more beauty to your OS!

Keep writing more! I am eagerly waiting for Om ka love story in the show ❤️


tere ungliyon se jha uljhe was like i got the idea from his hair
moh moh ke dhage almost everyone likes that song so that to include

thanks for your appreciation dear

thanks mastani 😃😆😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...tejaswi...



hey hi samreen is that your name ?
ohh dear you can automatically imagine the s present before amreen😃

thanks for sharing your comment


Yes my name is samreen 😆 Keep writing loved your OS and that song made it extra special

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