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GOODLUCKANGEL

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Posted: 9 years ago

#81

Amazing.Loved it to bits.madz is a joker. Plz upd.asap.

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ananya2010

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Posted: 9 years ago

#82

Poorva congrats on the new story.

Loved every bit of the story, its fantastic, Madhu is one jhalli and R.K got stuck up with her and now she is going to be his Scretary.

Curious to know what happens next.

Continue soon, waiting for the next update.

Thanks for the PM dear.

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Sneh lata

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Posted: 9 years ago

#83

🤣

Super

Lovely

You remeber me dd first show

Waiting for next update

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Zoya2

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Posted: 9 years ago

#84

Please Update soon

Eagerly waiting to know what happens next

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sss333

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Posted: 9 years ago

#85

Nice update

madhu is outspoken village girl, runaway bride.accidentally got married to rk.

Dipali is rk"s girlfriend

rk planning to divorce, but only after 6 months.

will see how are they going to fall each other.update soon dear

interesting.

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sneha lokwani

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Posted: 9 years ago

#86

7AMZING UPDATE

LOVED IT

SORRY FOR LATE REPLY BUST THIS DAYS

UPDATE SOON

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Poorva

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Posted: 9 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: RagingBlaze

Poorva🤣Superb start . Harman ki language mein bolu toh ye Madz poori Mirchi Powder hai🤣🤣Infact ye Madz laal mirchi , hari mirchi , radio mirchi sab hai🤣🤣Hmm so she is a punjabi😎and plus she is also bhaag milkha bhaag🤣🤣Poorva ye scene tuney sakek dekhne k baad likha tha kya ?? Just like vd as harman even she is so cool in running🤣🤣🤣Madz roz Bournvita peeti hai kya ??😆😆

Baap re baap Madz has indeed done PHD in slangs and hurling abuses🤣🤣Ohk so she's a runaway bride and to be on the safer side she tied the rakhi also🤣🤣🤣Smart chick she is😈😈

🤣🤣🤣LMAO RK you are screwed for no reason . Poor boy😆 But at the end RK and Madz will be greatful to Ballu that he married them😳😳😳Its so hard to see Ballu as Madz grandfather🤣🤣🤣

Oh my Madz knows punching and boxing also😆😆😆She is a rebel😆😆😆Loved Madz and RK's scene at the dhaba and in the car . Poor Bittuji just freaked out on seeing his chief like bro in such a pityful situation😆😆😆But soon he will like Madz and will be concerned for her as a brother😳😳

Ohk so Dips is also here in the story😆😆😆Make sure Poorva ki jab dips ko bula liya hai toh uske BF/future husband ko bhi bula lena taaki sab apne spouse k saath rahe - Rishbala and dips with sullu , sikky whoever it is🤣

Superb start . Make sure that this TS doesn't reaches CBFC else Pahlaj Nihlani will just bann this TS or censor it or maybe give 89 to 100 cuts🤣🤣🤣

I am worried for that.. Maybe I should change the title from IIk Kudi to Soo Galiyaa.. 🤣

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Shaun

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Posted: 9 years ago

#88

Fantastic Start Loved it

I love Madhu's attitude beauty with brains and lots of humour too

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namita25

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Posted: 9 years ago

#89

moi loving this TS...

Madz is such a sample...🤣By God She just goes on and on...n kya bolti hai...n Both RK and Madhu are stuck together...they got married in such a dramatic way...n Madhu is such a tease...I love the way everytime she mispronounces Bittuji's name...🤣🤣I wish I had seen something similar in the show as well...So Dipali is RK's girlfriend...ahaaannn...I am sure Madhu uski bhi band bajayegi...😆can't wait to read next part...

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Poorva

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Posted: 9 years ago

#90

First HAPPY BIRTHDAY SUDHA.. I hope you enjoyed you Day... Dedicated this Update to her..
Okay now without wasting anymore time.. Here is your update.

Part 2.

"Dipali, she don't know that your my Girlfriend." Rk tells Dipali.
"What! She don't know me.. How can you hire such a stupid girl who don't know who is Rk's girlfriend and wait. Look the way she is dressed up in this Kurtha and bangels.. Ewww." Dipali says in Disgust. "Rk, Look the way she talked with me.. Throw her out from this job.." Dipali replies furiously.
"Oye.. I know him and that's enough.. It's not my fault that I know you.. Understand and first look at yourself.. Don't you have money to buy clothes? Look at her.. Bhikari!" Madhu replies arrogantly.
"Rk! What did you saw in her? Is that is the way to talk to superstar Rk's girlfriend!!" Dipali tells Rk in anger. "And you out now.. I don't want to see your face.. Leave!" Dipali says pointing her fingers toward Madhu.
"Teri Toh! How dare you talked me like this.. Mere Batinda me toh Kisi Ki himmat bhi nahi thi mujhe aise baat karne Ki!! (In my city Bhatinda.. No one dare to speak infront of me like this!!!)" Madhu replies turning red in anger.
"Bhatinda! A small town.. I can clearly see you like a Village Uneducated girl! This people don't even have manners to talk.. Stupid!" Dipali says laughing victoriously. "Rk! I want you to throw her out Right now!! Gawar kahi Ki.. Don't have any common sense.." Dipali Screams. Hearing her Madhu's anger. Reached her highest point. Her fingers cured up into a fist reading to punch Dipali in any second.

"Teri Maa Ki.."
"You B***h"

"CHUP!!!!" Rk screams making everyone jump in fear obviously except Madhu.

Rk realizing Madhu intentions Gasp and quickly pulls Dipali to corner. "Dipali.. I should have told you about this before.. But I forget.."
"What baby!" Dipali ask caressing Rk's face.
"Vo.. Vo.. She is my wi.. She is my old friend... She Is staying here for few months.. She don't have any jog so I gave her my Secretary job.." Rk lies realizing Dipali will create huge fuse over this little issue. "Trust me.." Rk says removing Dipali hands from his face.
"Rk! You know na this middle class girls.. Always running behind Money and fame.. They are so selfish.. What if she tries to snatch you away from me.." Dipali ask worriedly.
"No she will never do that.." Rk replies and they both head where everyone was standing.

"No! Say so sorry to me.." Dipali says attitudly as soon as Madhu came into her view.
"Oye.. Tere baap Ki nauker (You papa's servant?)" Madhu ask placing her hands on her hips. "Don't you Dare to speak infront of me like this."
"You Shutup!"
"Abe Chup!"
"Rk baby!"
"Oye Rk!!!"
"Ahhh!!! I am going mad now!" Rk cries pulling his hairs madly.
"Baby! Fire her."
"Teri toh!" Madhu shouts coming closer to Dipali to kill her.

"ENOUGH! Dipali you please leave now and Madhu you.. Just do you work." Rk says folding his hands on his chest.
"Rk baby.. I came here to meet you.. But you.. You are asking me to leave.. For this girl." Dipali says pointing at Madhu in disgust.
"DIPALI!" Rk warns her in no nonsense tone.
"Fine!" Dipali mutters and leaves glaring Madhu.

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"I am feeling Thirsty.. Bring something to Drink..." Madhu shouts sitting on Rk's Armchair authoritively playing on his Tab and ordering her commands to everyone including Rk.

"See.. Look at her.. How athoritively she is asking this and that.. She is Rk sir secretary Right? She is behaving as if She is Rk!"
"Hmm.. Something Is fishy.. I think Rk and She share some relation.. Is Rk is having affair with her?"
"No.. Rk sir is in relationship with model Dipali right.."
"This celebrities have so many Dark secrets..." He says and suddenly feels someone gripping her shoulders tightly. He turns and gasp seeing Rk standing there ready to kill him.
"Out Now.. Fire!" Rk shouts. They both nods their head as they know there is no use of begging infront of Rk.
Rk looks at them and realizes Madhu is his Secretary but she is behaving as if she owns this Place.. Hell! He turns toward Madhu and find her Sitting on his armchair and suddenly he notice His lead actress and junior artist were discussing something while looking at Madhu. He needs to talk Madhu about this before everyone Starts blabbering about them.

"Madhu I need to talk with you." Rk says looking at Madhu.
"Hmm.. Tell me." Madhu says still her eyes glued on her Tab screen playing Candy Crush.

*SUGER CRUSH!!*

"Madhu, I need to talk with in private." Rk replies snatching his tab.
"oye.. My Tab."
"I want to talk in private. Come to my vanity." Rk says.
"Oye-Hoye.. What do you want to talk in private.. Naughty boy!" Madhu ask with a naughty glint.
"Shut up.. And come."
"Same to you.. Back to you." Madhu mutters walking behind Rk toward vanity.

"Oh Teri.. Such a beautiful and big Vanity!.. I sometimes think who got a idea to create a house in vanity.. Anyway.. Oye.. There is Shower too.. I didn't thought there will be big shower too in bathroom.. There is fridge and Microwave too.. Seeing this I am feeling very hungry.. Oh teri Motujii is too here.." Madhu says looking at everywhere.
"my name is not Motu, I am bittuji.. How many times should I have to tell you about this.. Sometimes Motu sometimes Chotu.. Bhah. Bhah.. Tell me do I look motu and chotu?" Bittuji ask swith food stuffed inside his mouth.
"Shut up bittuji. Madhu I need to talk something with you." Rk ask irritated.
"Bak (Spill out)" Madhu says sitting on Sofa.

"Hey Motuji what are you eating?" Madhu ask curiously feeling very hungry.
"Ahh.. Bittu! And I am eating this Paratha and Tomato cutni but look at This Paratha they are so thin and I didn't get any taste of aloo in Paratha.. See" Bittuji says Sadly showing his Paratha.
"Oji.. This Paratha is in diet I think.. Yuck." Madhu says tasting paratha. "Motuji.. I know how to make Paratha and they are not like these yuck parathas.. They are dipped in Butter.. Yummm.." Madhu says imaging Paratha.
"Yumm.. Will you make paratha for me?" Bittuji ask excitedly.

"shut up you Both.. Madhu! Can I have permission to speck.." Rk ask on top of his voice.
"Yeah you have permission to express your feelings Jii.." Madhu says and burst out laughing.
"Shut up!"
"Tu chup!"
"Enough.. Now listen.. I appointed you as my Secretary but you.. You are behaving as if you are owner of this place.. Behave like a Secretary! Understand!" Rk tells her.
"Abe Teri toh.. You are ordering me.." Madhu ask angrily.
"Yeah I am.. And I can! I am your Chief." Rk replies furiously.
"No one can order me!"
"I will.. And I can throw you out from your job.. Understand!"

"Will you??" Bittuji ask impatiently.
"Shut up bittuji.."

"Oyee.. I can throw you out from your house.. I am your wife!" Madhu shouts on top of her lungs.
"No you are not.. I don't consider you as my wife.." Rk screams.
"Same pinch!" Madhu replies in same tone.
"I am your wife?" Rk ask shocked.
"Pagal.. Hey Bagwan!!!" Madhu cries.

"God! Why the hell this vanity Is shaking." Bittuji says feeling Vanity shaking due to Chief and Madhubala earthquake.

"Abe tu chup..
"Shut up!"

"I don't want to talk with you.. Get.. Wait.. I should leave now.. There is no use of talking with you.." Rk says irritated.
"Tata bye-bye"

Rk glares her and picking up his mobile phone his walks out but stop in shock seeing everyone standing outside his vanity. From his Director to his lead actress to his spotboys every was present there.
"What you all are doing here?" Rk ask completely shocked.
"WO.. WO.. Everyone! Back to work!" Director shouts and run fast before Rk could caught him.

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"Oji.. So many days since I didn't had my Patiala Peg.. Today in any condition I want it. I can't control it anymore.. Thank God Babaji! Rk has his own bar otherwise I have to go outside.." Madhu says running down from stairs.

"Abe Teri. You also here." Madhu says spoting Rk filling his glass with Wine.
"What are you doing here?" Rk ask curiously.
"I wanna drink my Desi Patiala." Madhu says talking a bottle of wine in her hand.
"Desi darru? Do you think me Rk the Superstar. The king of Bollywood and 100 crore club is gonna drink a Desi?" Rk ask attitudly.
"But I like my Daru more.." Madhu says sadly.
"take a few shots..I am sure you will enjoy this.." Rk says as he feels a glass.

"Bakwas!! Just because this are precious and High priced wine but I didn't gave that Nasha that you found in your Desi shots!" Madhu says seeing her half filled glass.
"I don't think so.."
"Come na.. Please let's go to some bar.. I wanna have my Patiala!" Madhu cribes.
"Not interested."
"Please.. Plesh.. Plesah!!!!!!!"
"God! This women but wait.. Don't forget I am Rk.. Don't you think everyone will jump on me.."
"Abe.. Teri toh.. Don't you have any brains.. Were moustache and goggles and come fast." Madhu orders taking his glass.
"Idiot women!" Rk says rolling his eyes.

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"Please drive slow.. I am sure you will knock someone off.." Rk is worried seeing Madhu driving fast so that they could reach faster at bar. He was going to drive but Madhu jump inside driver seat. And he decided not to kill his ears germs by hearing her blabbering.

"Don't worry.. We will reach in 5 minutes." Madhu says.
"I think we reach in heaven before that." Rk says gripping his belt.

Suddenly Their Car knokes off a bike which Madhu judicially ignored as she wanted to reach bar at any coast. "F***k You knock off Police Bike.. Gaye Kam se!" Rk says seeing a traffic police running behind their car.

"Are yaar.. Give them some money.." Madhu was still not stoping the Car.
"That I can.. But I have knocked off three cars before that.. Ab toh jail me Jana padega (Now I have to go to jail.)" Rk says pissed off.
"I want to have my drink.. But I am sure they will take me to Police station and will make me Sit there! I have an experience before too.." Madhu says crying.
"Shut up."
"Idea! Give me coat!" Madhu says with a smile.

Traffic Police Abhay stops and thanks his God for stoping this stupid car.
He came and knocks the glass. Glass window slowly pulls down and he hears a loud cry of women.

"Ahhh..." Madhu cries touching her protruding stomach.
"What happened?" Abhay ask curiously.
"Abe Andha he tu (Are you a blind?) I am having labour pain stupid." Madhu says screaming loudly.
"Please baby don't cry.. We will reach hospital soon.. Sir please let us leave.. Otherwise our child will come out here only.."
"AHhh.." Madhu screams in a tune.
"Okay but why she is driving?" Abhay ask shocked.
"Ahhh.."
"Bcoz my wife feels I am a obedient and responsible citizen.. I always obey traffic rules but today when she in labour she decided to drive as from our way to hospital there are so many Traffic signals.. And as a responsible citizen as I always stops at Red.. She is in labour can we go.. My wife and child is in danger!" Rk says worriedly.
"Okay.. But which hospital.." Abhay again ask.
"Champa Madhushala." Madhu replies and pulls up car's window.
"Hope your baby will be fine." Abhay screams and Runs toward his Half dead bike. Rk and rmadhu brust out laughing hearing his wishes.
"Wait.. MadhuShala.. Which hospital is this? Maybe some new one..."

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Okay I know there is nothing interesting in this part.. But I wrote this in so hurry for Sudha!
Again Happy birthday to you.

Edited by .Poorva. - 9 years ago

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