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A.Hajnal

@A.Hajnal

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#231

Originally posted by: bashful_moon
I hate you... Like I H.A.T.E you for doing this to me...
You do not drive your readers to tears with such a gut- wrenching update... writer...

Right now I am an incoherent mess... I am just trying to gauge the depth of pain Manik has undergone all these years and I do not think my thoughts can ever match the intensity of your writing... .. His wounds, his angst, his pain, his helplessness but Nandini's omnipresence in all his actions and thoughts... Oh boy!!! How the mighty has fallen...Both figuratively and in love as well...

Sorry for the late comment writer... I wish I didn't have to be a Manan zealot, a fan of your writing and a student of Applied Mathematics all at the same time. I wish these were not the last couple of weeks before exams.. But if only wishes were horses!! Phew...

Keep writing my Coelho!!! May words be with you.

Love n God Bless!!
Yasna

Haha, Yasna, you do realize the post above yours ended with 'love you' for me and you one started with 'hate you'? 😆 Such diverse readers I have, you all have your own way to make me feel so special, so thank you for that! 🤗

But reader, that is the most satisfying thing for a sadist like me! 😈 lol

Oh, that is what is heartbreaking, isn't it? The one who has always been in so control is the one who has no control over anything around him. The truth is I too sometimes can't capture his pain with the intensity that he must have felt it. 🥺

Ah, Indeed the mighty one has fallen. But we know he is a survivor and a fighter, no one has a will more stronger than him. So he shall find a way, he shall stand back again on his own, take control of the things again, and he shall take back what is, has always been his!

There is no such thing as a 'late' comment here, reader...You, as everyone of you, are and always will be welcomed to express whatever and whenever you want, no pressure! 😳

And MATHS! Saab kuch maaf hai, I feel proud, reader ke, saab kuch maaf hai...And now I can show off that I have such well-educated readers!

All the very best for everything, Yasna...🤗

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A.Hajnal

@A.Hajnal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#232

Originally posted by: ershilpavyas
Yar it was really very emotional update...nd u described it really well. I really liked it but kya karu muje ye b chota update laga 😆

Haha, I know what you mean...The need to know more, the need to know everything...Have all questions answered and have the HEA that MaNan deserve soon...But what to do, I have to stop somewhere, the real world's demands and all...

But all in all, you feeling that is something good, as it shows that you still want to read the story and that makes me so glad! Thank you for sticking around! 🤗

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A.Hajnal

@A.Hajnal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#233

THIS IS A "MEMBERS ONLY" POST
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nita24

@nita24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#234

I loved ur story
emotional update
Beautifully written
Manik had gone through a lot yet he remember nandu
he is asking for her and same time warry for her
Waiting for next one
Pls continue soon
Thanks tc

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Cooldude101

@Cooldude101

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

#235

Now I think I'm getting the shit down.
That bas***d of a father doesn't want his son to be in contact with the only thing that he ever loved.
Okay I take it back, he may love the kid, but Mr. Malhotra is pure evil, just Nyonika's husband material. (Sorry being too harsh, only Harshad is Nyonika husband material😉)
why? I mean this guy should understand that what his kid feels isn't puppy love for god's sake. No one wakes up after half an year to ask about their girlfriend if he really didn't love her.
Manik is just spot on man! The guy has brains I have to give you that, but with scheming parents such as his he wouldn't have been able to survive without playing his game as well.
We didn't know much about Papa Malhotra, but you writing him down like this makes me believe that this guy had the balls to do what he did.
Along with Nandu and Manik's reunion❤️ I also want a Nyonika reaction, haaannn! Please?
this story is THE shit.
Don't know how I would react if you didn't continue it and try to finish it.

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A.Hajnal

@A.Hajnal

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#236

You guys are LOVE! ❤️

I was so sleepy last night and I had to force myself to post it, even though I slept on the laptop during posting two times, messed it all up...And now that I am awake, and wanted to send PMs, I found out that you guys have already read it, liked it and leave such lovely comments, THANK YOU! 🤗

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Jyoti

@bhagupur

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Posted: 9 years ago

#237

Thanks for pm.dear

This was very beautiful and emotional update. ..

Feels for manik...he remembered nandu...

Very . Very interesting chapter.

Thanks for sharing this.

Looking forward to seeing next. ..

Stay blessed. ..

Thanks.

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shreya31

@shreya31

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#238

Hi there...i read the chapter earlier but cudnt comment tht time so m bck😛

I want Nandini to slap this daddy malhotra atleast once in ur story😡no wonder he is nyonika's husband😡the control freak!! He is being so unfair to his own son whom he claims to love!!!😕

The anxiety which Manik feels on not having his Nandini around is soo beautifully portrayed👏

As always m glad the wait will end soon😳

Continue soon...thanks for the pm, most of the time i end up reading the chapter before it😛

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MSIKura

@MSIKura

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Posted: 9 years ago

#239

Nicely written Manik's anxiety. Your writting style is very different. I like it. This is still a mystery to me. Will see how Nandani and cabir will find Manik.

Please update soon n don't take too long.

Tks.

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Cooldude101

@Cooldude101

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#240

Where are you man?
The If world feels so suna suna (lonely) without you!
Just a friendly reminder that people here are dying for an update.
Anyway you take your time, and I'll just go down the older chapters again😳

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