ViDha FF: Wait! Chapter 1 pg-5 updated - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow a new ViDha FF... plz do continue it dear.. prologue certainly looks promising. . 😳 wud wait fr ur pm..😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sura123

Interesting!!!!

pls continue

😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: NusiSg

Wow a new ViDha FF... plz do continue it dear.. prologue certainly looks promising. . 😳 wud wait fr ur pm..😳

Thanks will update the first part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER- 1
YEAR 1996

A six year old boy was playing cricket in the local ground of Benaras. And when his turn came to bat hemissed the hit but luckily not got out. Seeing this a girl of nearly 5 years laughed and shouted

Girl: khelna nahi aata toh pehele seekho phir kisi ko kehena!

actually before sometime he was scolding his friend for playing so now she said that to him. But listening to this the boy got angry and went towards her.

Boy: dekho zada mat bolo warna isi bat se tumhara sar phod dunga
Girl: accha phod ke toh dikhao usse pehele mai tumhara muh noch lungi
Boy: jungli ho tum
Girl: tum konse sudhre hue ho bandar kahi ke

He was about to beat her when his friend came and took him back to the game

NEXT DAY

The same girl was passing through the shool ground wearing a school uniform when a ball got hit into her head...no viplav didnt hit her..someone else did and unintentionaly but she started crying loudly as the blood was oozing out of her . She was taken to the medical room and since her mother was ill so viplav decided to drop her home

V: mam aap chinta mat kijiye i will drop her
Girl: nahi mujhe nahi jana is bandar ke saath
V: arey mai chod dunga na.

She stopoed crying seeing his assuring face and got ready to go with him. And that day they became friends

YEAR 1998

Both viplav and the girl got frind and he got to know her name i.e. Dhaani

V: arey dhaani bhi khelegi hamare saath
Aaryan: nahi yaar woh ladki hai
V: toh kya hua woh meri dost hai aur agar woh nahi khelegi toh mai bhi nahi khelunga
Aaryan: theek hai ja

Viplav left throwing the bat and a seven year old dhaani went towards him

D: arey team kyu chod di
V: kyuki woh tumhe nahi khila rahe
D: arey par
V: chodo na waise bhi mujhe padai karni hai aur ek ay officer banna hai apne dad ki tarah
D: aacha ok lekin usse pehele thoda smile kardo

He smiled and she smiled too The things were perfect for the two years until she left

PRESENT

Now viplav is a college student and was now playing truth and dare with his friends and the bottle stopped on him

Raj: so viplav truth ya dare!
V: truth
Samir: darpok!
V: nahi mujhe embarrass hone ka mood nahi hai isliye
R: umm tujhe pyaar hua hai kabhi
V : ummm...haan shayad
Vansh: kisse hua ?
V: thi ek dost bachpan mei but fir woh chali gay but i am still searching for her tumhe mile toh batana

All smiled and continued to play totally unaware of the fact that a girl entered to the same college
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So now will viplav find that girl and what if he fells in love.

Precap: some more memories and viplav's encounter with Dhaani.


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow...👏👏👏 !!!!!!
Childhood frnds n luv...n even unka bachpan bhi cute tha...
Now waiting with eagerness...to know wat ll b viplavs reaction wen he ll meet her after so many years!! Ll der recognize each other...????
😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: revathirk

Wow...👏👏👏 !!!!!!

Childhood frnds n luv...n even unka bachpan bhi cute tha...
Now waiting with eagerness...to know wat ll b viplavs reaction wen he ll meet her after so many years!! Ll der recognize each other...????

Thankyou
Ab milne par kya hoga yeh toh waqt hi batayega
Since this is a ff itni jaldi toh happy ending nahi hogi!
😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kapillian_girl

Thankyou
Ab milne par kya hoga yeh toh waqt hi batayega
Since this is a ff itni jaldi toh happy ending nahi hogi!
😊

hi kapillian girl
nice one..liked the childwood start
where is your remaining chapters??
where are you??

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