IshRa SS ~ Tu Hi Safar Hai Akhri ~ Chap 1-page 11 ~ 26/06

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Hey friends, after 'Yeh Hai Mohabbatein' I thought to write a new story on IshRa. I hope I will get the same response.

Tu Hi Safar Hai Akhri

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~ Teaser - Below ~

~ Chapter 1 ~

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Tu Hi Safar Hai Akhri

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Ishita walked in her house along with Raman when she found huge crowd near to her house, "What's going on here?" Raman asked curiously when she shook her head in no and walked in pushing the crowd aside, everyone was staring at them. Ishita approached near to her house and found her mother was sitting there and crying vigorously. "Amma?" As soon as Ishita called her, Mrs Iyer looked up at her and ran to her and within a moment, she slapped her making Ishita shocked. "Amma?" Ishita's voice choked, "Did.. Did I teach you this? To.. To spend night with unknown person chee..!!" She made disgust face looking at Raman whereas both Raman and Ishita were shocked. "No. Amma.. You are mistaken. Actually..." Ishita tried to explain but some of villagers said, "Please Ishita.. Now don't make stories.. We could be uneducated but we aren't fool here. We can see the truth." Meanwhile Raman was silently hearing them, he was shocked to the core, he never faced such situation before. "Tell me Ishita, why did you do this? Why you broke our trust?" Mrs Iyer shook her when Ishita continue crying as it's very shameful thing that her own family didn't trust her. Raman saw Ishita didn't saying anything and the villagers were continue their accusations so he yelled, "Enough..!!" Everyone shockingly looked at him when Raman walked to Ishita and politely said, "Ishita why are you keep silent? They are accusing you. Tell them the truth. We had nothing between us." "Arey Raman babu..!! What truth? She is silent and that means.. Aapka kya?? Aap toh bade log hai, what will you know about girl's respect?" That arise Raman's temper, "Arey shut up yaar. So what I belongs from rich family, so what I belongs from city but that doesn't mean I don't respect women. I do respect them. And Ishita.." He forcefully made her stand in the middle and yelled, "You were talking about them no..!! What you said.. They are honest, they trust me.. Is it their trust?? And you people.. If an unmarried girl spend night somewhere else then it doesn't mean that she had lost her self respect." As Raman paused he heard a clap, he turned at the direction and found a young guy near to his age was standing there, "Wow Mr Bhalla.. Amazing..!! You are protecting her as if she meant something to you." Ishita recognized his voice, she uttered, "Subhu?" "Don't Ishita.. Don't you take my name in your filthy mouth." and he then turned at Raman saying, "So Mr Bhalla.. What magic she did on you within a night that you can even see her getting insulted." Subhu said in such disgust manner that Raman couldn't hold himself, he held him by his collar, "I don't believe.. Ishita loves someone like you. I feel so pity on her." Subhu shrugged his hand off saying, "If you feel so much pity, then take this characterless girl away from me because I am not going to marry such girl who already have herself to other guy." Ishita couldn't take it anymore, she was getting insulted in front of everyone, without anyone's notice she ran away from there. Everyone was gossiping over the thing when Mrs Iyer noticed Ishita missing. "Ishita?? Ishu.. Where is she??" Mr Iyer, Raman looked around when some villagers said, "After doing such scandal, she should die.. She has no right to live." That was audible by Raman, he got worried and ran away to find her, he was finding him every possible place anxiously when Raman saw her standing her on a bridge, "Ishita??" He shouted but she didn't bother to look back. Raman ran towards her before she took any step but before he approached to her, he saw her jumping from there, Raman shockingly looked on.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice Prologue
The base is in a village
Subbu disgusting
Ishra r fruends
Sad that even her mother did not trust her

Continue soon

It's very interesting


Pls if u could update "Yeh hai Mohabbatein"

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Looking forward to read more... Update soon.. Very interesting update
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Such a happening teaser.
Subbu is disgusting.
How IshRa know each other, Mrs. Iyer didn't listened a single word
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Originally posted by: lalibhaskar

Nice Prologue

The base is in a village
Subbu disgusting
Ishra r fruends
Sad that even her mother did not trust her

Continue soon

It's very interesting


Pls if u could update "Yeh hai Mohabbatein"

Thank u dear and yes I will try to update today..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ishra2015

Looking forward to read more... Update soon.. Very interesting update

Thank u dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sririt

Such a happening teaser.

Subbu is disgusting.
How IshRa know each other, Mrs. Iyer didn't listened a single word

Yes.. Typical villagers..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting teaser
Waiting for update
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Intriguing teaser Tulika...
hope u cont this soon...

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