ArHi Fan Fic | Saving Grace [COMPLETED]

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Arshi2503

@Arshi2503

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Posted: 9 years ago

#81

Loved the chapter.
Some body watching them
Oh God! lovemaking also?
Anxiously waiting for the next update.

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Breath-Mark

@Breath-Mark

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Posted: 9 years ago

#82

Woo you write romance well.

This khushi is pretty gutsy and there is a sensuous air in her.

No seduction needed! 😆

Who is the kabab mein haddi!

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gprs

@gprs

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Posted: 9 years ago

#83

Yes..really it's a treat filled with arshi..you write it beautifully..cheers..

their moments filled with love and unexplained passion between them...superb ..I loved it how you mentioned about his smile..indeed it's a amazing feeling to see your loved one's smile,especially when you're the reason..

who was that??? was it sheetal or some other? ?

Enjoy your sunday dear:)

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Sugi

@Arshi.Sugi.IPK

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Posted: 9 years ago

#84

Awesome update itz Sheetal na😡

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sunitikapoor

@sunitikapoor

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Posted: 9 years ago

#85

You write romance as beautiful as you do angst. This Khushi has some guts...dear. Who was it and why???

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sankadevi25

@sankadevi25

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Posted: 9 years ago

#86

Great story! It's so gripping! Anticipating the next chapter.

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mrin0709

@mrin0709

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Posted: 9 years ago

#87

it is such an unusual story and so beautifully written..

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Arshi67

@Arshi67

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Ocean of Happiness

Posted: 9 years ago

#88

"Sheetal preyed on someone's weakness, Khushi would be attracted to it. She would nurse them."

A great way to show the inherent difference between the two. I love the way you have etched the characters, seamlessly shifting between the past and the present, unveiling aspects of them slowly. The snippets you weave in the narrative have so often made me go "Ah, that's why ...".

There's so much that appears to have happened which made the confident, determined Khushi of the past into this shattered version of today. I'm eager to know more. And to know what will ultimately be the "saving grace" in their life.

Your interesting user name and title made me click on your story. And am I glad I did :)

PS - Boyce Avenue's cover version of U2's classic With or Without you, is good. I hadn't heard it before.