Awakening -- Vrushan Story - Page 2

Amazing...so loved shantanu's frusration
Looking forwrd ti the next chapter..

wow this was awesome
so much realistic
loved vrushan convo
update soon

Good try Varsh. I would say it was okay. Don't mean to dishearten you though. Hope you take it in a good spirit. I think you took nervousness over you and maybe also since you haven't wrote a lot for sometime. I missed your style here. One very important thing, you made VruShan very formal. Be it their fight or banter, its supposed to have a different feel. Part 1 was good. I really liked how you set the plot. And the VruShan anniversary segments thing. That was a good catch there. But their convo was so plain in terms of VruShan. I couldn't feel the ease there. Keep the IVs in mind when you write next time. Have a overdose of them. :P Next Shantanu's outburst. I wish you could have placed a more better buildup. Vrushika's left out feeling was a good one for him to do that. But still. I kinda couldn't connect to so many things said by him at once. Make them easy. You will be good to go then. A good try nevertheless.

Wow yaar you wrote superbly..

Great writing, and I love your previous works too on swaron/vrushan. I really like the first chapter, it conveyed her missing d3 gang well.

Wow. .amaizing.. .very touching...update the nxt part. .waiting

it was an amazing one...
loved it

update soon...
can't wait

u have really good skill i writing but i kinda disagree with the character sketch of bot vrushy and shan in 2nd chapter .. the situations are really realistic so , will mostly compare with the real personality of vrushan and this doesnt match .. but in a fiction point of view ..very well written :)

WOW
Awesome amazing
superb written
thnx 4 pm

Hellooo... new here going through the forum I find this vrushan ff both chapter are amazing eager to know what will happen next pls update soon this ff plsss...