Manan Lovestories ...Fs Sanam Ray.. Note on pg 143 - Page 74

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Posted: 9 years ago
Excellent update...
Nandini did so much 4 manik & his frnds...
Manik came 2 know bout nandini's past completely...
Manik told everything 2 fab4 & navbhi...
All d emotions r written beautifully...
Luved it...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
It was so emotional one
And superbly written
Nandu is so amazing...
She saved manik n his friends each n every tym without thinking abt herself
Does manik feel smthng for her??
Will he go to her?
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update..
Maniks reaction..
Fab 4 s reaction..
Nandus luv 4 manikz unconditional..
Luvd it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Long time no see..
Missing it 😭
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Posted: 9 years ago


sorry in advance for mistakes


Part 4(C)

Navya came with a glass of milk and while placing it on side table she said: Manik tum ne kuch kahaya nahi so milk pe lena waise bhi tum abhi puri tarhan se recover nahi hoe... she tuned to leave from there but stooped in mid and said without turning...

Navya: Manik koi bhi decision lete hoe apney dil ki baat aik baar zaror sunna... main mata rani se pray karon gi k tumhe tumhare har question ka answer mil jae...

And after that she left from there...

Manik opened his eyes , tilted his head and saw the glass of milk and remembered his time with Nandini... when she brought that glass of milk of him and he showed tantrams to her... and she the angle of his life... Very elegantly accepted all his tantrams and handled him without showing her true self...

Manik again said to himself: Why Doc ... Why... mujhe aik baar batati to... aik baar trust kar k to dekhti...

His soul image appeared before him and asked: Trust to tum pe kar leti Manik... but then kya hota... Kya tum osey waisa hi pyaar kar pate jaisa wo tum se karti hai... pure and selfless... Bolo Manik... ab jab tumhe sub pata hai to kya tum ose pasand karne lage ho...kya os se pyaar karne lage hooo...

Bolooo.

Manik in frustration closed his ears and thought about all the time which he spent with her... how she treated him... How she fight back with him for his health... her cute blackmailing session... Her cute pouts and blabbering session...

All this felt right but still there was a confusion in his mind... But yeh sub janne k baad kya mujhe os k pass jana chahaye... aur agar jo navya ne kaha wo bhi aisa hi sochti ho to...I know I like her ... she is smart, beautiful and hot as well...and more than that she love me so much...But kya... meri yeh feelings utni pure haan jitna os ka pyaar?

In frustration he picked his car keys and left his house in search of solace...He was driving on a less crowdy road without concentration and suddenly Nandini's face came infront of his eyes...the helpless look on her face and her hopefull eye... like they were calling him ...

And on next moment he saw a girl infront of his car... he felt like Nandini is infront of his car and he was about to hit her . he felt like it is the last chance for him to save her... to save his angle, his Doc, His Nandini... he applied brakes immediately and car stopped with a loud voice... he immediately ran out and shouted: Nandiniii

and then without thinking anyother thing he pulled that girl in hug and said... I am sorry... I am sorry Nandini... Now I know... Main tumhe ab kabhi kuch hone nahi doon ga... plz plz don't leave me...

That girl pushed him back and said: I am not Nandini...

Manik when looked at her he startled on his position and with shocked face and big saucer like eyes blabber sorry to her

Then after coming back to reality he asked : app ko kahen lagi to nahi na... sorry...haan...

Girl: no its ok... main thek hoon...and left from there...

Manik threaded his hair and came back to his car... he sat on driving seat and banged his head on streeing wheel , he told himself: Now I know ... yeh koi favor return game nahi hai... yeh mere likness bhi nahi hai... yeh... yeh...(pause) I... love her... Yes... I love my angle... and now main osey khud se dor hone nahi doon ga... kabhi nahi... Bohat hide and seek game ho chuki... ab aur nahi doc...tumhe apni luck... aur is love ko aik chance dena ho ga... main tumhe aise khud se dor rahne nahi doon ga... never... ( and after this realization a smile came on Manik's face... and he immediately dialed Chachi's number with determination and told him his answer... chachi happily said that she is with him in this mission... as she wants her nandu to be happy in her life...

she told him: Manik hum yahan abhi manglore mein haan aur kal yahan se niklen gey...hamari bus ****** place pe stay kare gi... So kya tum kal wahan a sakte ho...

Manik with his charming smile replied: Why not Chachi ... apni Doc cum angle se milne k liye to main kuch bhi karon ga...

Chachi with laugh: Arey wah mera sohna munda to aik dum action mein lag raha hai...

Manik corrected her: Chachi app ka nahi ... apni Doc... apni angle... apni Nandini ka sohna munda...

Chachi with a laugh: wah wah... Nandu ka sohna munda... Kya baat hai... bus ab to main ayiappa se pray karon gi k tum dono ko hamesha khush rakhe...

Manik: chachi wo sub to thek hai but app se aik request thi...

Chachi: Bol na bachey.

Manik: Chachi app Nandini ko kuch nahi batao gey abhi...

Chachi: Arey don't worry Shahrukh ki fan hoon yeh romance mein cupid ka role kaise play karna hai mujhe ache se ata hai...

Manik laugh whole heartedly and said: Chachi u know u r great... So kal milte haan...

Chachi : haan haan kal main tujhe msg kar doon gi jab hum yahan se nikalen gey to...

Manik: Thank you chachi ... thank you sooo much...

Chachi with her motherly love: Acha ab apna khyal rakhna...(she teased him ) meri Nandu k liye...

Manik blushed on this tease and said: I will chachi... I will...

Manik with happy face returned back and all friends got shock on seeing his relaxed condition.

Cabir came towards Manik and said: Arey wah... Manik lagta hai tera tou hriday privartan ho gya wo bhi 1 hi gantey main... Aisa kya hoa...

Manik laughed on his joke and then sat on 1 sofa ... he rested his head back...and while closing his eyes smiled.

Navya when saw this she laughed in her heart and thanked her Mata rani coz now after seeing Manik's smile she understands that all is well... whereas others were still confused on Manik's condition.

Manik with his closed eyes said to others: Arey aise ghorna band karo tum sub... band ankhon se bhi mujhe tumhari itni bari bari ankein nazar a rahe haan...

Mukti : Manik ab to hamein batae ga k hoa kya hai... chal jaldi se bata...

Manik: Guys 1st tell me kya pyaar aise hi suddenly hota hai kya?

Mukti and Cabir with shock looked at him and then Mukti checked his temperature and said: Manik tujhe kya ho gya hai... tu aur pyaar ki batein... Tu thek to hai na...

Cabir: oye tera koi accident to nahi hoa na... ya sar pe koi chout lagi ho... Tu aur aisi batein...

Navya shut them up and said: Shutp up guys... And Manik... haan Manik... Pyaar aise hi kabhi bhi kisi k sath bhi ho jata hai... Jaise mujhe tumhare is pagal dost k sath ho gya...

Aliya came forwards and added aur Mujhe is cute innocent se Dhruv k sath...

Abhi also came forward and while holding mukti in his arms said: Aur yeh jo tumhe abhi lecture de rahe hai isey bhi to mujh se pyaar hoa na... aur wo bhi aise hi achanak se...

Manik smiled coz due to Abhi's talk he reminds their love story...

Navya said again: Manik pyaar to bus aisa hi hai... Na ho to is pe yaqeen karna mushkil hota hai... Aur agar ho jae to is k bina raha nahi jata...Aur tumhari in baton ko sun k mujhe aisa lag raha hai k tumhe bhi is feeling ka ehsas ho gya hai... Hai na?

Others with austonished looked at him and he with his dreamy smile looked at ceiling of that room...

Mukti came out of shock and shouted in excitement: Oh My God ... O my God... O My God... Manik... U are in love... she jumped on him and hugged him in excitement.

Dhruv asked: Really Buddy... kya waqae tujhe pyar ho gya hai...

Cabir: Haan dhruv is ki shakl dekh k hi pata chal raha hai k is k sar pe pyaar ka fever affect kar gya hai...

Abhi: Manik wo Nandini hi hai na?

Manik on listening her name smiled like never before... he stand from his seat and accepts his love in a loud dreamy voice...

Yes guys... I am in love... in love with my Nandini, My Angle,,,,,, My savior,,,,,,, infact our savior...I love her selfless and pure love... I love her innocent face,her pure soul,her helping nature...I love her...I truly love her... and I'll not let her go anywhere now... Never ever again...

And his confession brings smile on all face present in that room.

They all hugged him at once in happiness...and congratulate him...


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Edited by cute-aly - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Me first
Me first


Yeahhh

Omggg
Such a beautiful story yr

Afyer sooo long wait was worth it yr

Hopefully manik proposes nandu in a very different n grander way
Cozzz after watever she did for all
She totally desrve it sweetheart
Right

Ufff
Love chachi n manik ki jodi
Bonding yr

Keep writing

Love you loads😊
vidhi 😛
Edited by Vidhiarora1 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ohh wow. after so long you update.. I'm so eager to read it . wow.. finally like finally. manik realizes that he loves nandini.. yipeee.. Aakhir uske frndz ki help se hi shi buddhu me dimag to aaya... Manik n chachi ka bond.. aww so beautiful na. I really loved it.. ab finally nandini ko bhi dikhaa do.. or manan confession. awww m waiting for it. waiting for next update eagerly. !! Stay blessed !! !! keep smiling !!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awww Manik is sooo cute
Can imagine his face thinking about his love Nandini
Cant wait for the next one
Superbbb updateee
❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow! So excited for next part...manan face off...can't wait...

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