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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow awesome update...
Finally Manik realised his love..
He was soo happy...
Fab5 were soo happy to see Manik soo happy,..
Luved it...
Waiting for next...
Thnx for pm..
Update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
beautiful update
manik realised his love for his angel wow
he is so possessive
he can be called only's his angel's manik
loved how everyone shared how they fell in love
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Sooo cute
Manik ko finally realise hua that he loves nandu wohhooo
Aww chachi is amazing... She's ready to be their cupid
Very well written
Thnkz 4 the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Yooo! Alena diii!!!
Finally I took out time and read the whole story! App meko bail Gaye but mein apni promise nhi bhuliii!!!!!!!!!
All characters so well justified and finallyyy Manik realised his love for Nandini!!!
Huraaayyy!!!
Muah!! ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
1st of all a big SORRY...4 cmmntng dis late...
Now cumng 2 d update...it's excellent...
Manya's convo was nice...
Wow!!!manik realized his love 4 nandini...
& is planning sumthng 4 her wid d help of chachi...
He told his feelings 2 his frnds...
Luved it...
Thnx 4 d pm...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ridzs1991

Awesome one dear just love ur story


😊 thank you
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mishshergill

Yooo! Alena diii!!!

Finally I took out time and read the whole story! App meko bail Gaye but mein apni promise nhi bhuliii!!!!!!!!!
All characters so well justified and finallyyy Manik realised his love for Nandini!!!
Huraaayyy!!!
Muah!! ❤️




Mish ... how are you yaar... yeh ajj chand kahan se nikal aya... tum aur is thread pe...

thank you for visiting this thread
aur main kisi ko nahi bhuli yaar but sub itney busy rahte haan so mujhe tang karna cha nahi lagta...



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Posted: 9 years ago


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sorry in advance for mistakes

Part 4(d)


Manik with a cute smile hugged them back ... after sometime he broke that hug and said: But guys we havealot to do to bring her back.

Cabir: arey yaar tu tension nahi le...hum hai na...ab jab tujhe finally pyaar ho hi gya hai to hum osey (Manik didn't like his addressing style for Nandini so gave a hard glare to him and Cabir after receiving his galre change his words in fear) I mean Nandini bhabi ko jane nahi dein gey.

Manik gave a satisfied smile on hearing this Nandini bhabhi from Cabir's mouth...

Navya and other also smile on this change in Manik...

Aliya then asked: But Manik Nandini to abhi yahan nahi hai...aur wo kab aye gi hamein kaise pata chale ga...what can we do till then...

Manik with his famous killer smirk: aliya o ski tension nahi lo... Meri Chachi se baat ho chuki hai wo log kal wahan se nikal rahe haan... so ...

Cabir teasingly: Ooo so Manik Malhotra ne yeh sub info pahle se hi ikathi kar rakhi hai huh?

Manik replied in soft voice: Ya ... coz is time ... Main koi bhi risk nahi lena chata cabir... Bohat kuch saha hai Nandini ne meri wajha se, hamari wajha se... but ab aur nahi... os ne apney is pyar ko bhol jane ka faisla bhi kar liya lykin main ab aisa nahi hone doon ga...main osey wapis laon ga... apney pass... meri life mein... hum... hum sub ki life mein...

Abhi placed his hand on his shoulder in brotherly manner and said: Hmmm aur is sub me hum sub tumhare sath haan Manik...

Manik looked at all and said in a lil emotional voice: Thank you... Thank you guys...

Mukti said mockingly: Manik yeh cabir wali nautanki band kar aur bata karna kya hai...

Manik thought a plan and shared that with them and said at end: So guys be ready tomorrow we will leave...

All others said in union : yes Boss...

Manik called his Mom and informed her about his new found love and his future plan... His parents assured him that they are with him ... and after getting their ashirwad he is feeling more determined to bring Nandini in his life...


Next Day Fab 5 gang reached on same dhabba about which chachi told them...


Manik was getting impatient ... he wanted to see his princess , his life ,his love as soon as possible... but that bus got late...


Cabir looked at Manik's face and teased him while singing a song: Intehaaa ho gayiii intzar kiii


Other gave a surprised look to him on this sudden song but when they saw cabir's expression then they got what he is upto...

Cabir: Ayiii kuch khabar... Nandini Doc kiii...

Manik gave a threatening look to him and said: Will u plzzz shut up... and stop this song huh...bus kuch time me pohanchne hi wali hai...


Cabir: haan to main ne kab kaha k bus ne apna route change kar liya...

Navya wacked cabir on his arm and stopped his teasing session...


On same time Manik received a msg and after seeing that msg a smile came on his lips...


Cabir s tongue again sliped: Lagta hai Manik Malhotra k intezar ki ghariyan khatam ho gayi haaan... and ladies and gentleman (he turned his head a saw a bus stopped near that dhabba...


Mukti: thank God bus a gayi...


Inside that bus


Chachi: Nandu mujhe to bohat bhook lag rahe hai... chal neeche utar ...khane k liye kuch letey haan.

Nandini nodded in agreement.

Both Chachi and Nandini came out of that bus and Chachi spotted Manik there... Nandini was busy in looking around ... So chachi shows a thumbs up to Manik...


Both Chachi and Nandini moved towards dhabba...

When Chachi said: Arey Nandu yeh... Manik hai kya wahan...(she acted like she was very surprised)itna Bara star aur is dhabe pe...


Nandini without watching in that direction said: Chachi Manik yahan kya kare ga... aur waise bhi he is not fully recovered till now ...so yahan no ways ... app ne kisi aur ko dekha hoga...

Chachi with puppy face: Arey dekh to... wohi hai... wo dekh os k friends bhi haan... dekh dekh... main ne osey hi dekha aur kisi ko nahi...


Now Nandini got a shock on hearing this that Manik and his friends are there... She instantly moved her face and started searching for them ...

She saw them sitting on 1 side of that dhabba...


Nandini's anger started rising after thinking: Yeh pagal ho gya hai... Abhi sehat thek hoe nahi k ye yahan aur yeh yeh... kya pi raha hai...

That when she heard cabir's voice: O paa g 2 glass thandi lassi aur...


Nandini's eyes grew wide on this: Lassiii... Wo bhi thandi... (making a frustrated face) Ahhh ayiappa isey... khud ki zara bhi chinta nahi hai... phir se bemar par gya to...

Chachi interrupted her thinking session and said: Arey nandu to ruk kyo gayi chal na...


Nandini thought again: jo karna hai karne do isey mujhe kya... aur waise bhi is k sath is k friends haan ab is ka khyal rakh lain gey...

And after this she started following chachi inside the dhabba...

Manik was closely watching her every emotion from behind his shedes and when he saw her leave he smiled while looking in her direction.


Nandini turned her face back and looked in Manik's direction and other side Manik started acting like now he is not feeling well...

He stands from his seat to bring something but on next moment while holding his head he fell down on that cot...others with worry shouted: Manikkk...


All friends with their worried faces ran to him and holds him... Here on other side Nandini when saw this she felt like someone caught her heart in his hands... She also shouted from her place and ran towards him...

Mukti: Cabirrr dekh kya raha hai Doc ko phone kar na...


Cabir: haan main abhi doc aushutosh ko phone karta hoon... He dialed his number and told him that Manik was again not feeling well...

He was talking to Dr aushutosh according to their plan when they heard Nandini's voice...


Nandini: Manikkk ...(Manik heard hi s name from her mouth and his inner soul started doing bhangra on this moment while saying...wo a gayi... wo a gayi) get a side plzzz... let me see... plzzz hato...

She came to Manik and while holding his hand checked his pulse... While others hide their smile when they saw Nandini there...


Nandini checked his pulse and murmured: Pulse to low hai... Aur temperature bhi hai... Then she looked at his friends with anger and without considering that fact that may be they will recognize her... started shouting on them


Nandini: Pagal ho tum sub kya... kaise dost ho is k... tumhe pata hai na k he is not well from last few days... phir bhi... phir bhi os ko le k yahan a gaye... Huh?... aur yeh...(yeh pointed towards that lassi's glass) lassi wo bhi cold... tumhe apney friend ki zara bhi parwa nahi hai... Huh?


Mukti replied back showing that she didn't know who is she: hay you... kon ho tum... jo hamein aise lecture de rahe ho huh? Aur tumhe kya pata hamein apney friend ki kitni parwa hai...


Nandini retorted back: ya I can see this... kitni parwa , kitni care kar rahe ho tum is ki...?


Navya: dekhiye... yeh lecture na app apney pass rakhein ... Hum nahi jante k app kon hai ... aur app dekh rahe haan na k hamara dost behosh ho gya hai aur plz hamein osey doc k pass le k jana hai...so plzzz apna yeh lecture de k hamara time waste nahi kare...leave him plzzz...

Nandini had enough of this nonsense so she again shouted: itni hi fiqar thi to osey yahan lae hi kyo... huh? And for your kind information I am his doc... suna tum sub ne...


Other side Doc aushutosh heard all this and said to cabir to give this phone to Nandini...


Cabir gave his phone to Nandini ... who gave a confused look to him...

Cabir pointed towards Manik : is k family doc ... Doc Aushutosh app se baat karna chah rahe haan...

Nandini grab that phone and said : Hi sir...


Dr Aushutosh: Thank God Nandini k tum wahan ho... mujhe jab cabir ne bataya k Manik behosh ho gya hai... I was very worried... but now... I knew meri brilliant student k hote Manik ko kuch nahi ho ga... Nandini beta plz be with Manik... He has a concert within 4 days which is very important for him... Nandini tum ne pahle bhi isey treat kiya hai... U know his history...so plzzz be with him and treat him...consider it as my orders...

Nandini who was 1st worried on seeing Manik in this condition ,now started panic... and all others (Fab 5 and partners and Chachi) noticed this change in her... she in her panic state said: ut sir main hi kyo... U know na mujhe wapis a k wo...(she thought for an excuse) haan...wo... Medical conference k liye jana hai... App yahan kisi aur doc ko bhej dejiye na...tab tak k liye main Mr Malhotra ko medicine de deti hoon...


Manik's heart missed a beat on her words and he understands that she want an escape... an escape from this...from being with me...

Dr Aushutosh: Nandiniii for God sake dear... filhal mere liye Manik zyada zarori hai...u know na his mother requested me... So plzzz for my sake... take this case again...medical conference pe yahan se aur koi doc chala jae ga... Plzzz.


Nandini again tried: But sir...


Dr aushutosh cut her words and now in a lil loud voice said to make it clear to her: Its my order Dr Nandini Murty... and he ended that call


Nandini after hearing his words closed her eyes tightly to control her nerves...and thought: now I have to do this...

She turned her face and looked towards Chachi... Chachi walked towards her and then by grabing her arm drag her at side...


Chachi while calming her down: Nandu tu tension nahi le... dekh is time Manik ki health zyada zarori hai na...aur tu pahle bhi to yeh kar chuki hai...

Nandini: huh but chachi pahle os k friends nahi thay yahan ab haan...

Chachi: tou? Nandu tere liye Manik ki health zyada zarori hai ya os k friends k sath hone ki tension...

Nandini in a baby voice: Manik ki health...


Chachi: tou phir? Aur os k friends ka kya... to ne dekha nahi un mein se koi bhi tujhe nahi janta... agar aisa hota to ab tak tujhe kuch na kuch poch hi lete...

Nandini thought on point and then gave a look to Fab 5 and gang...after this she felt a lil relax... she again looked at chachi and said: But chachi app?


Chachi: arey tension nahi le main dekh loon gi aur 2 din k baad Murty g bhi to wapis a rahe haan... tu bus Manik ka khyal rakh...


Nandini nodded on this with a sad smile... And chachi patted her back with love...

After this they both moved towards gang members and then Nandini asked in pure professional manner: Mr Malhotra ka bag kaha hai? Kya wo medicines laye haan sath...?

Abhi immediately checked his bag and found some medicines there... He handed over that to Nandini

Nandini gave a look to them and then picked one of them at that time...


She came near Manik who was listeing and observing all her moves with his closed eyes... she by placing her hand under her shoulder made him sit and Dhruv also helped her in this process...

She called his name while patting his face lightly: Mr Malhotra... Mr Malhotra... (then in worry she called his name) Manikkk... Manik open your eyes... she also sprinkle some water on his face ...


Manik very slowly open his eyes and after seeing this Nandini takes the breath of relief...


She then made him gluped his medicine...

A constant smile was there on all friends faces on this care and concern but they all hide it when Nandini looked at them...

She then turned towards others and asked: Concert kab aur kahan hai?

Mukti replied to her: At this weekend on Goa...


Nandini with surprise asked: To tum log yahan kya kar rahe ho?

Other fumbled with words on her question and then Cabir said: Arey yaar ab itne dino k baad enjoy karne nikle they to thori ithar uthar ghomna to banta hao... Aur tum ...(he tried to change the topic) tum Doc ho ya jasoos... Itney question to hamri official CID mukti bhi nahi pochti...

Nandini with sheepish look turned her face...

On same moment they heard the voice of bus conductor and instantly Nandini looked at Chachi...


Chachi: Nandu main chalti hoon tuje to waise hi terey Aushutosh sir ne duty de di ... to tu apna dehan rakhna...

Nandini was reluctant to send chachi alone like this so she said: But Chachi app aise akele...


Abhi said instantly : Arey akele kahan ... Ab agar app hamare friend k liye itna kar rahe ho to humen bhi to kuch karna chayeye na... so you don't worry doc ... main chachi k sath ja k un ko ghar tak chor k aon ga... and if I am not wrong to app ka kuch saman bhi to lana hoga...

Nandini with gratitude smiled on him... And said: Thanks...


After this Abhi and Chachi left from there...


After sometime... Cabir turned his face and notice Manik's eyes on Nandini... he said to control him: Arey chalo chalo hum bhi nikalte haan... is se pahle k yeh janab(pointed towards Manik) phir se apney hosh kho de...

Other: Ya lets go...


Dhruv and Cabir helped Manik while others followed them...

Nandini was the last one in them ... as she was busy in her complaining session with her ayiappa...

Nandini Blabbers:

Ayiappa... Yeh kya hai... app ko merey liye aisi tough situations hi milti haan... Huh? Phir se... phir se kyo ayiappa... Kyo app Manik ko merey samne latey ho... app jante ho na main nahi chahti os k samne ana... to phir kyo...

Others when reached near car they turned and looked towards her and an amased site welcomed them...

They including Manik saw Nandini's cute pouty faces while she was talking to herself...


Cabir whispered in Manik's eye mockingly: U sure nay eh Doc hai...


Manik nudged him with his elbow...while others smile on this...

Then Mukti asked hurriedly : But Manik yeh temperature ...(surprised eyes) I mean How...?


Manik with a lopsided smile replied: Onion.( and after looking their shocked faces he winked at them)...


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