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Part 6-10

Geet falling for him is naturally, I'm falling for him lol that too for a fictional character just by reading about him. SO GEET HAS TO FALL FOR HIM and his charm, gosh his too much for my over-exercised-now-ready-to-relax brain. I loved how he just diffused the situation after catching Geet in her sofa-act (prt 6), perfect guy material. Can I order some of that, not for me but my sister lol, she needs a husband like him. She's forever falling and needs some stability in her life lol.

Geet's jealous of Maan's sweety eureka. Finally the girls grown some brain cells, Anushka and Maan's bonding is sooo cute. I'm liking Anushka already. The college trip was amazing, her collection of friends, you have that don't you a weird mix of people from the quite ones to the loud mouth ones. Her confused forgetting professor is, I don't even know what to say his just plain confused. But loved how he put Geet and Maan on the spot and then don't even get me started on the fee's lady, a jealous Geet's right up my street lol. Gosh she didn't even like a flying kiss, all that for the man she wants to divorce. Ah ha ha not going to happen, she's so not going to let go of Maan.

I'm liking it, nah scratch that I'm loving it. They so meant for one another, why can't she see it clearly like me. Their bonding is so natural, he cares like hell for her and she's growing jealous. Dadima's finally getting to action. I was wondering when they will shift to the mansion lol.

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Part 11-15

Maan being wonderman wanted to nip the problem right at the bud, silly man or sorry it should be silly Maan. His update of who's who was awesome, didn't expect him to restore to name calling, poor Mrs Bhootni hahaha. Aww Maan trying hard not to fall for his wife all over again, which we cant have happening, now can we. Nah ah! Never but Geet's not responding, yeah her feeling jealous is one thing but she needs to acknowledge those feelings and dig a little deeper. Maan deserves a change, I demand it lol.

OMG did they just get wasted, shoot I've not said that in ages but anyway Dadima is so devious, I LOVE HER, man she's so cool. These tow seriously need their heads banging, cant they see the sparks flying especially Geet. And I thought she was studying medicine how can she pass when she can't understand the simple chemistry between the two lol.

Maan I understand, he promised to not to bind her down. Love is so complicated! The entrance of the family lawyer was much needed, finally someone knocked in some sense into Maan. Never leave the woman you love not without trying at least. I'm loving the flow, seriously well written. Mein doop ki marjaoon thinking what I subjected you too lol, you write so well but you stuck around reading my fambles thank you for that. Lawyer uncle and Maan's connection was sweet, see that why I lve this guy. He related to everyone so well, even his brother sorry can't remember his name, let me just look. Yes Arjun, sorry haven't yet connected with him although his sweet. Simply because I haven't seen (read) him as much yet. So now Maan's gonna work on his marriage, thank you lawyer uncle

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Part 16-20

Anushka found out, is that a good thing or bad. She seems like the type to have insane ideas that'll probably do more bad than good but ultimately good. She's going to help Maan win over his wife, ahhh so far I think she can do the job since it was her who made Geet jealous in the first place. Cracking wife is harder than they had anticipated, Geed overheard Maan and Anushka rubbing off on her ego, big time. This is just getting funner lol that's not even a word. Excuse my language I tend to make up words that don't even exist lol.

The game between them is intact within the chapters, Maan's goals and Geet's aim seem to have wavered a little but nothing significant. So they're going to a wedding as honeymoon how ro-maan-tic lol at least its somewhere thanks to Anuskha or else if it was up to Geet and Maan they would have stayed within the four walls lol. Maan hitting Geet's psych is the best, she never accepts the right road so he had to make her agree by other means. Arjun's crazy wanting to ride with his brother, when clearly Maan and Geet need as much time as possible lol. But she still has demands, why would she want that?

She's already jealous of her friends then how can she accept strangers flirting with her husband. Bechari will be at the receiving end, tch tch tch. For a soon to graduate doctor she needs to learn physics too, two opposites always attract lol. I'm loving maan and geet here, their equations so new and untouched. She's already jealous, hoping the wedding helps bring them closer.

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Chapters 21-25

There was this group called New kids on the block, naturally you'd assume that they were young but no they're old lol. But yeah your title reminded me of them lol.


I loved the jealously game, the only game that truly excites me hahaha. This Charan guy seems like a harmless flirt, something about him makes it sweet, although I'm sure Maan feels otherwise. The whole Chitra thing scared me, what kind of lover forces his beloved eww. But supergirl came to the rescue who in the end needed rescuing herself. I LOVED her attitude, no mess types. But I suppose the attack lead to one good thing, Maaneet getting closer.


O yes she has feelings, finally somewhere were Geet shows her true feelings. And the J game intensifies, feel for their poor partners who don't have an iota of what's happening lol. Their so confused, Maan and Geet why can't they just say it out loud. Dancing around each other rather than dancing with each other sign' when would they listen and act accordingly to their hearts. And they did when she's drunk, but that least there's some movement lol.

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Chapters 26-30

Maan seems to have reached melting point, yippee. Finally amidst all the confusion they have danced with one another, but Geet's drunk, poor her couldn't differentiate between water and alcohol but in her defence it was an health problem lol well hiccupping is, like sneezing is with me lol. Finally Maan makes a move when she's drunk, I knew for 100% she'll not remember and she didn't lol.

Classic Geet, I so love them together. Everything between these chapters was great, Anushka should seriously take relationship counselling to main stream lol, although most of her plans worked by default lol. The pretend wedding was the last nail, thank gosh for that. Now after that Geet turned mental, and so it should be. His married even if people dint know, he knew like she put it so even pretend marriage is against the marriage act lol. I loved her explanation, and its after effects. Her spilling the beans in anger was the best thing that happened, finally I can expect a happy dappy couple.


I don't remember if I've mentioned the chit episode, but that was one hell of a ride lol, confusion at its heights but simple awesome. loved as in LOVED that segment, i remember there was such a scene in Chennai Express, i love confusion and comedy rammed into one 😆

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@khwaishfan: So sorry hun, I was on vacation all week and I came back to a lot of work on my bench :( Will upload this weeked
@Sophie: Uff woman! I am floored with your analysis!! It's going to take me some time to reply to all that.
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Originally posted by: Maaneet099

@khwaishfan: So sorry hun, I was on vacation all week and I came back to a lot of work on my bench :( Will upload this weeked

@Sophie: Uff woman! I am floored with your analysis!! It's going to take me some time to reply to all that.

thanks dear, will b waiting! thanks
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And finally here I am! I'll keep the senti-mental speech for the last... here is the chapter 😃
Chapter 52:
Maan pulled his car in front of Khurana mansion and got down to open the door for his love. Geet was helped to step out of the car only to be surprised to be lifted off from the ground into his arms in bridal style and started walking towards the outhouse where their journey began.
"Maan!" she gasped. "Ghar uss taraf hai aap kahaan chal rahe ho?"
"Those people in there will never let me in peace once I bring you back there. I want my wife all to myself," he declared with a wink.
"Uff Maan what will they think?" she asked biting her lips nervously. The thought of Anushka and Arjun teasing her was enough to make her shudder.
Maan was about to walk into the outhouse when he heard someone clear his throat. He turned to see Pavan standing with his hands in his pockets while sporting a somber look. "Yeh accha hai, tere love story complete karne ke liye you need us. But the moment your love is in your arms, hum ho gaye paray."
"Exactly babai, this is totally not cool," Anushka jumped in walking to stand near Pavan.
"You know isme sirf Maan jeeju ko kyun blame kar rahe ho. Geet, you are equally at fault," Meera piqued in shaking her head ruefully.
"Maan neeche utariye na," she begged not wanting to be embarrassed more in front of her family.
"Arre rehne do Geet. Hume kuch problem nahi," Shekar laughed heartily causing Geet to turn beet red.
"Maan please," she pleaded making Maan give in to her request.
Just then daadima brought aarti plate along with Susheela and asked Maan and Geet to stand near the door so she could perform aarti to the both of them. Finishing the aarti, she gave the plate to Nakul. "Badmash!" Daadima held Maan's ear and pulled it slightly making Maan wince in pain. "You think you can fool us and sneak in here?"
"Aww daadima it hurts," daadima mimicked him. "Daadima ke bacche!" she scolded. "Now stand still mujhe aap logon ko nazar utaarni hai." She circled the aarti thali around a few times before applying the sacred vermillion on both Geet and Maan's forehead. "Geet welcome to your home beta," she declared lovingly calling Geet to come forward and push the pot filled with rice.
Geet's eyes teared up seeing the love showered upon her in spite of her insecurities and doubts. Maan came to stand beside her and slid his hands around her waist bringing her closer. His lips held a content smile while his eyes twinkled with joy.
"Oh ho Maan leave her for a few moments for all the rituals aur phir we won't disturb you guys the whole night!" Shekar teased causing everyone to laugh.
"Arre no way Papa, iss ladki ka koi bharosa nahi. Who knows, she may run away again! So be it night or day she is going to stay by my side," Maan replied shaking his head.
Geet turned her head to the side to avert her gaze, but the sudden rosiness of her cheeks gaver her away.
"Maan usse tang mat karo," daadima warned.
Geet slightly kicked the sacred pot filled with rice with her right foot before stepping into the house along with Maan beside her. The minute she was inside Arjun ran to hug her almost knocking her down.
"Welcome home bhabhi!" He hugged her tightly almost choking her and shook her side to side. It had been a few minutes and Arjun showed no signs of leaving when Maan cleared his throat. Not taking his cue Arjun still held Geet in his embrace.
"Umm Arjun," Maan patted his shoulder but no response. "Arjun!" Maan smacked his brother bringing him out of his stupor. "Can you please let my wife go?" he glared with his hands on his hips while others laughed heartily.
"Arre haan, sorry!" Arjun replied cheekily before letting go of Geet.
Maan was about to take Geet away when she went to stand in front of Anushka. Anu smiled slightly but the next instant was surprised to find Geet hugging her. "Thank you Anu," she sobbed lightly. "Thank you," she said finding no words to say.
Anushka brought Geet out of the hug and smiled. "Pagal, friends never say thank you," she said cupping her cheeks and wiping away her tears. "And now please take care of my friend. Mujhse aur nahi hota," she declared pulling Maan forward.
Maan took both Geet and Anushka in a hug. He was overwhelmed that two among the most important women in his life.
"How long do plan on hugging me Maan? I think you have better things to do upstairs with your wife," Anushka smirked coming out of the hug.
"Of course, bahut kuch! But not just upstairs I plan to start from here," he replied shamelessly. "So if you will please excuse us."
The hall seemed to echo with laughter except for Geet who didn't know where to look. Everyone began to clear away before wishing Maan and Geet for a beautiful future ahead.
With everyone out, Maan locked the entrance of the main door and walked towards his nervous and shy wife who was twisting her dupatta around her fingers. He smiled as he reached the middle of the hall and clasped her fingers within his. Now that things had finally settled, he wished to never let go of her. He softly held her chin and lifted to look into her beautiful eyes which now held nothing but deep, abiding love, before bending down to kiss her forehead.
He then went around to sit on the divan next to them and put out a hand to her. "Come here."
She took his hand and sat down on his lap, leaning into his shoulder, her head resting near his. He rubbed her arm gently, his nostril filling with her scent. She filled his arms, his world. He wanted to never let go. The sat like that for a while both safe with each other.
"I was afraid..." Geet said abruptly.
"You were afraid? That I wouldn't take you back into my life?" Maan asked perturbed.
Geet nodded hesitantly causing him to chuckle. He took a deep breath before continuing, "Main tumhe kabhi nahi keh pavoonga ki main tumhe kitna pyaar karta hoon Geet, mere paas lavz bhi nahi hai. Magar tum mujhe chod ke jaogi toh main zaroor toot javunga I learnt the meaning of dream seeing u. I started dreaming after seeing u. The "I love you" is incomplete without you. My life is incomplete without you. Haan Geet?" He stared into her eyes that had brimmed with happy tears. She nodded vigoursly letting the tears slip out and run through her cheeks.
At last. At last he had gracefully accepted her back into his life. This was what she had waited for yet her heart thundered in her chest. She drew closer to him, "Make me yours Maan. I don't want to remember anything except you and your love." She had not known she would say the words. They seemed to rise of their own accord to her lips, to have been waiting inside her, well rehearsed, for countless days, perhaps months, years, even all her life.
They half-lay, half-sat on the divan, close to each other, breathing the same air, their faces so close that their lips almost touched. When Maan hesitated, Geet reach up and put her cool arms around his neck.
"Do you remember our first kiss in the rain after the sangeet?"
"Every single instant," Maan said, pulling her tighter into his embrace. "What of it?"
Geet shook her head. "Never mind; it was long time ago." Then as a puzzled frown drew lines on his forehead, she covered his lips with hers. A raging consuming fire flowed through them, scorching out every thought. She could smell him, taste him, feel the smoothness of his skin as she slid her fingers through the collar of his shirt. She clung to Maan, pressing against him, wanting to never let go. They parted at last breathing harshly.
Maan gathered her in his arms and walked towards their room. He knew a long and maybe not so perfect lay ahead of him. His love would be tested time and again. It was marriage by force for her, but a marriage by love for him. A journey of two lives apart yet their actions proved otherwise. Forever was a long time yet every second with her would be beautifully etched in the sands of time.

Epilogue below
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Epilogue:
"Maan!" she screamed across the room while scattering things on the dressing table. "Maan uthiye na, mera magalsutr nahi mil raha hai!" She hurried across the room towards the bed and tossed the comforters again. "Maan!" She shook him awake causing him to stir in his sleep. "Maan please help keejiye na," she whined pulling open the drawers and ruffling through all the items while trying to find the black-beaded chain.
Maan reluctantly turned to the other side groaning. "Kya Geet, tu bhi na," he muttered, his voice heavy with sleep. "Subah subah tujhe koi aur nahi mila tang karne ke liye," he complained covering his head with the comforter.
Geet stopped her search to look at her in shock. She stomped to the bed as anger bubbled inside her. Forgetting the main task at hand, she jumped on the bed and sat on him causing him to yelp in pain. "Main, tang karti hoon aapko?" she screamed angrily pushing away the comforter over his head. "Main?"
He squirmed under her not expecting her sudden onslaught. "Haan tum!" he shot back with irritation. "Aur tum yeh savaal udhar se pooch nahi sakti. Did you have to break my hip for this?"
"Maan, main ek doctor hoon. I very well know how to break your hip for real if you don't help me find my mangalsutr," she threatened holding his cheeks and forcing him to look at her.
"Yaheen kahin hoga. Look around properly," he replied nonchalantly. "Aur mujhe sone do. You never let me sleep a wink last night," he complained like a kid.
"Haww! Don't you dare lie Maan!" she said leaning onto him, her curves pressing into his shoulder. "Aap ne hi kal raat usko nikala tha. Kaha ki chubhta hai."
Maan smiled at her innocent declaration. Only his Geet would blurt out something this intimate without realizing what it did to him. She was the best thing that happened in his life. Of course, he had been stubborn to accept it but she had fought for him, for them. She had been adamant on gaining her place in his life. He had never fallen out of love yet her presence back in his life had scared him. Since his adolescence, anger had become his best friend. It was the best solution he could find to keep anyone from breaking him. Only a few had managed to break the walls of his anger and make a place in his heart. The moment he had accepted to trust her with his heart, there was no looking back.
"Haww," he imitated her. "Yeh toh na insaafi hai Geet. Aur mere khyaal se yeh apshagun hai. Agar muhje kuch hua toh, you are responsible," he said ruefully.
"Maan!" She looked distraught, "stop scaring me!"
She had always been the reason for him to live after his parents passed away. Yet there are moments in life when one starts questioning the very existence of life. And it was the same thing that happened to him. He had fought to keep her in his life, but the moment she stepped out, he fought to keep her out of his life. Life was always filled with surprises. His life was definitely filled with ups and downs but at no point would he change anything.
She got off him and ruffled through the pile of laundry in the corner of the room hoping it was stuck to her clothes. A smile tugged his lips as he watched her run around trying to find that small piece of jewelry. She looked ethereal with her hair tied with a towel. Strings of wet hair that escaped from the towel brushed her face causing her to continuously trying to clip it back. She wore his plain white kurta that reached up to her knees. The oversized kurta was quite a loose fit for her yet every bit of her looked appealing to him.
"Vaise on second thoughts tumhaari suhaag ki nishaani main hoon. Usse rehne do and wrap me around your neck instead." He remarked shamelessly, hugging her from behind.
"Nahi! Mujhe aap nahi chahiye, mujhe mangalsutr hi chahiye," she complained like a child pushing him away before flipping more things out of the laundry basket.
Maan walked to stand in front of the dressing table mirror, hung the piece of jewelry she was searching for, adjusted his hair and replied nonchanlantly, "Fine, usse dhoondo or use hi gale laga lo." Adjusting his track pants, he turned to look at her. "By the way, I'm going to the gym, would you care to join?"
"Maan, yeh joke tha?" Her voice was dangerously serious.
"Tha toh?" he asked unperturbed.
"I don't like jokes."
"But, I love you!" he smirked.
Geet scrunched her eyebrows in confusion at his answer. Seeing him wink at her and walk out, she huffed in anger and turned to the bathroom to change into her white salwar and see if she left the chain over there.
Few moments passed as Geet searched through the nooks and corners only to not find it anywhere. Just as she was about to search in the bathtub when she heard someone familiar call out to her. She paused what she was doing and came out of the bathroom to find a very familiar figure grinning back at her.
"Charan!" she screamed in excitement. "Tum yahaan?"
"Of course! How could I miss a chance to see you guys after giving us such a huge surprise?" he said while giving her a tight hug. "Congratulations! But bechara Maan he has to deal with your heightened mood swings," he joked.
"Oh shut up Charan. You are supposed to be on my side not against." She whacked him slightly.
"How are you beautiful?" he asked cupping her cheeks.
"Good, very good." She smiled contentedly.
"Uff aise mat muskurao, main mar hi jaaunga," he said holding his heart dramatically.
"You haven't changed at all," she laughed shaking her head. "So any progress with you?"
"Yes, I have a new hindi movie releasing. My cousin Arjun is going to be married soon. Dad's political venture is going good. My sis""
"Wait wait I'm not asking for news updates. Voh sab news channels mein kehte hai. Tell me if I get to meet your special someone anytime soon," she interrupted looking eagerly at him.
"You wanna see her?" he asked with a calm smile causing her to nod excitedly. He brought her in front of the mirror only to look shocked. "Hey bhagvan yeh kya zamana aa agaya?!" he exclaimed much to Geet's surprise. "Agar mujhe pata hota tumhaari shaadi naatak hai, I would have married you the next instant."
"What?!"
"Voh dekho," he said pointing the dangling chain causing Geet to gasp.
"Maan!" she hollered before running to take out the black beaded chain and screwing it around her neck. "I swear I am going to kill him today!"
Charan laughed heartily as he watched Geet flip out before running out of the room to find Maan. Boy, was it fun watching these two fight!
The man had the guts to mess with her! She stomped her way into the outhouse where Maan's gym was located. He would get a piece of her mind today. His antics were getting way out of hand. Right after the confession night, daadima decided to have a family picnic at the farmhouse since everyone was already present. They had hired a minivan to the place so everyone could enjoy the ride. Maan had eyed her to sit in the back with him in spite of her denial. Having no choice she sat beside him in the last seat much to his glee. She hoped he wouldn't pull any monkey stunts on her but she was certainly wrong. He had asked Nakul to pack jalebis separately for him. She distributed snacks to everyone mind-journey and came to sit beside him. And the devil decided to play his tricks. Right when everyone was chatting and eating she felt him forcefully kiss her before shoving a piece of jalebi he was chewing. And an exact moment later Anu saw her to ask where did the jalebi she was eating come from only to see the only other person chewing jalebi was Maan. She wanted the earth to swallow her as Anu shamelessly spread the news much to everyone's glee while Maan smirked at his act. She wished he had stopped with that incident but he dared to have his way the other day while she got ready to leave for hospital. He walked out of their bedroom with a huge lipstick mark on his lips. Thanks to his cute puppy dog eyes for a morning kiss. She missed wiping them off in a hurry but he walked out proudly showing it off to everyone at breakfast table. Now everytime Nakul looked at her, he didn't leave without giggling. Just last week he had barged into her hospital ward causing a ruckus in in the hospital much to her embarrassment. He barged in announcing she had dared to cross her work time into baby making time right in front of her seniors. She refused to go back to work for a few days so she wasn't subject to mockery. Who would have thought the rough and tough Maan Singh Khurana who terrorized the world of construction business had such a streak of naughtiness? She huffed determined to put an end to this monkey business.
Geet barged into the outhouse and walked directly to the main hall where he practiced his tai-chi. He stood with his back towards her as he stood stiff while his hands stretched away from him.
"Maan!" she barked breaking his concentration. Even before he could react, she took long strides to reach him and pulled him along with her.
Maan didn't expect her to haule him away like that and her sudden onslaught had slightly caused him imbalance making him almost fall on her. Not wanting her to fall, he secured her tightly as he leaning on the pillar before looking down to see if she was okay.
Geet had her eyes closed tightly as she clung to him. Tense lines creased her beautiful face as she expected a bad fall. Her cheeks were slightly tinged the color of freshly bloomed rose. Just the thought of her lips against his sent his heart reeling in intoxication. He smiled as he observed her glowing face while she looked like an angel in white chudidar. She was the reason he woke up every day morning and now she was carrying a part of him within her. He sighed deeply allowing another one of these moments to absorb into his memory.
Geet opened her eyes realizing there was no fall while Maan stared at her lovingly. She was about to be carried into the moment when she realized the purpose of her visit.
"Kyun pareshan kar rahe ho mujhe? Bada maza aa raha hai na aapko mujhe aise halat mein phasa kar?" she asked pouting her her lips. "Maine aapko kitne acche se kal rat surprise di aur aap," she paused sternly looking at him, "forget appreciation, you just put me in that embarrassing situation in front of Charan!" she cried. "Not only that, pata hai every single person I know makes fun of me. Before it was just giggling behind my back but now they openly snigger when I am around them! And you seem to never stop! Jab dekh""
"Geet." She stopped her banter only to see him calmly look at her. She fronwned at his calm reaction. "Itna pass aaogi toh kuch kuch hone lagta hai." She was bound speechless at his sudden declaration out of the blue and stared blankly at him. "Haan Geet?" he smiled indulgently slightly rubbing his thumb against her bottom lip.
Geet opened her mouth to reply only to let out gasp of air. Only then she realized that he stood half-naked wearing nothing but his tai-chi pants. Suddenly the air seemed to grow hotter rendering her breathless. He placed a kiss near the corner of her lips causing her to close her eyes while her hands automatically curled around his shoulders. "Maan," she croaked almost inaudibly. She didn't know if it was her early pregnancy hormones or his warm breath on her nape, or rather she didn't want to know. She held him firmly as she reached to kiss him that when he is around her, bahut kuch hone lagta hai.
"Wow Mrs. Khurana," he rasped breathlessly few moments later. "I think I'm going to have to get you pregnant more often. I'm loving this side of you!"
"Ah you speak too soon Mr. Raja, let's see if you keep your words end of this pregnancy," she said smiling mischievously.
"Maan Singh Khurana is scared of nothing darling," he smirked undaunted by her warning.
"Well there is always a first," she shrugged.
And she was right! The following months were almost close to a nightmare for Maan with Geet's weird cravings and unprecedented anger. He really hoped his baby girls didn't inherit her anger. He thought people feared only him but this lady was worse than him! But all that was worth it when he saw her forward their babies to him. The world had stopped as he held them close to him. At that moment, something changed in him. He sat beside her adoring them when he felt her wiping away the tears he didn't know were flowing all along.
"I love you," she whispered leaning on to him.
Love. A simple four-letter word yet the world revolved around its complexities. It wasn't something that came easy yet never left without fight. It wasn't a fairytale yet its what everyone wanted. It was an easy word to spell yet so hard to define. It kept one always vulnerable yet could move mountains. It changed everyone around it yet remained unchaged. It was an emotion yet defined by its actions. And he was eternally bound by those actions, actions of love...

A NEW BEGINNING.
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Final Note:
It's not that I have been counting but it has been 6 years, 3 weeks, 6 days, 23 hours 30 minutes, and 55 seconds since I began this fateful FF wanting to torture people of GF 😆. I guess I was even successful in torturing them as many ran away never to look back here but few of them stayed. Stayed to patiently read what this fool had to write 😳. Thank you wouldn't suffice for all the support each one of you have given me through different phases of this story. I have been honored to keep you guys entertained for this long. I mean I am the poor man's ekta kapoor of FF writing I guess 😆 I have enjoyed every single bit of this journey!

Please please take a chance to drop by with comments if possible. I know every writer who ends a story writes the same thing. I myself have read through so many stories yet failed to comment on the last one so I have no reason to blame you guys if you didn't


I have purposefully left some loose ends as I plan on a sequel. Don't worry it would be very very short. probably 10 parts or so. And no that's not coming out any time soon. I have to work on the plot for it and right now I have no time to think about anything bigger than 2 pages. My job and personal life is literally sucking blood out of me so to even think of writing puts me to sleep instantly! 😲 So bear with me. I hope to see you guys soon in some other thread with a new piece of mine.

I think saying too many things would only bore and also I forgot half the stuff I wanted to write 😆
For now CIAO!!! XOXO ❤️

PS: I am still an avid reader on this forum so I would be still hanging in here even if I don't write anything 😃
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Posted by: tammana.m

3 years ago

Mg FF Destined to love you Part 55 on 97 Page 24/6/25

Prologue London.It’s a hot day and Geet, in white wedding dress, watched her dear fiance kissing with her sister whose mother had already...

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Posted by: WaveTeal

1 years ago

My Impossible Love *Maaneet SS* 🔺UPDATED CH 24,25@PG 89 || 20th April

Author's note : Hi Addicted is completed so here I am presenting another NEW story. I will post the first one or two chapters and then based on...

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Posted by: Mahimaan

4 months ago

Mg ff Ishq Wala love (bandishye) Ristriction

hi sorry last wala link block o gaya hai

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