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Posted: 9 years ago
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]Dev babu pe antacid nahi kaam kiya... but since he got it from Sona... he got faith in the medicine... thats LOVE... and that smile when he sees her getting all worried for him!! Aww!! Super cute!! 😆

Dev will soon realise his one solution to all problems is Sona and that is when the dream sequence will follow!! My guess!! 😆😃😳

"Iss dard ki wajah bhi tum ho aur dava bhi tum ho..."
⭐️😳❤️

Arz kiya hai... For the love of poetry..

This is from Dev's POV... hope you can connect with scenes and Dev's character..
PS: my humble creation... like .. comment ... review!!

Title: Ehsaas (Realisation)

"Yun toh kuch khaas nahi thi zindagi hamari,
Bas kaamyabi chahti thi zindagi hamari,
Socha ke akele kaat lenge isse
Pyar ki nahi thi zaroorat hamari,

Paakar tumhe socha, ek dost paaya hai...
Par iss dosti ne hume jeena sikhaya hai..
Har shaam hota tha bas kaam saath saath..
Tum mein humne ek raazdar paaya hai..

Jis dosti pe itaryein the hum...
Kyun uske aansun se sataye gye hum..

Kahte the sabhi ke dil bhi hota khass..
Lekin sirf tumne bataya ki hai ek mere bhi pass..

Kuch bayan karta nahi, ye shikayat thi sabki...
Ab tumse kuch chhupata nahi, ye aadat hui meri!!

Ek ehsaas jo jaga hai.. kuch andaaz hi naya hai..
Par sukoon iss ka hai.. mere yaar ko pata hai!!

~~~ EJF_FAN "Aman"~~~
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Posted: 9 years ago
#2

omg
gurl!!!
what a write up
just loved it
perfectly penned
loved it absolutely loved it
😳
waiting for ur mr humble creations
kudos to u...👏👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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its amazing 👏👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#4
Awesome...my friend.
Pyar ki ehsaas...
Thanks for the pm
With lots of love
Shamina
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Posted: 9 years ago
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oye hoye 👍🏼
waah ji waah👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#6
wow...👏👏 perfect lines for Dev...😳
your poetry is amazing..😳
do write more oka...😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you all!! Humbled and bowled over by the response... Will revert back to each one!! 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Waha waha ! !

Awesome post
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Posted: 9 years ago
#9
Just wow ❤️
Written beautifully 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: .FlyingClouds.

Kya baat hai!!!

Amazing!!


Thankyou for the Appreciation 😳

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