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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update... Eagerly waiting for the next one.Thanks for the pm. Plz update soon...:-)
Edited by Mananaish - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
loved this update...
Manik has really changed but is still the same...
His brain doesn't remember the relation he shared with nandini in his past but his heart surely knows... n that's why even though he hardly knows nandini yet can't see her sad...
He did something today which he wouldn't have done 3 years back if he was facing the same situation.
But then that's what differentiates love from others.
The way he convinced nandini n the kids would hv been unimaginable until 3 years back.
He was neither aggressive nor angry. He handled everything so calmly.. loved this avtaar of manik...
Hope he gets his memory back soon n he finds out what nandini actually means to him
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Posted: 9 years ago

Chapter 44

How could he manage to do this, she watched in utter disbelief. What magic had he done behind the closed doors? This wasn't believable, the way he had turned the situation around despite not having a conscious connection with music.

But a tiny part of her knew, had always known, only he could have done this...for her and for music. No matter what his mind says, it would not be able to stifle the voice of his heart which was struggling to break free.

THIS! wasn't 15 days of friendship, it had to be an eternity of love, some of which she had witnessed in this life time and some that she believed they had carried over from the previous ones. Why else did their paths cross? Why else did he, The Manik Malhotra, who had every possible blessing that a man could ask for and every possible comfort that any person could dream of, have to go out of his comfort zone to protect her?

As their performance ended, amidst an ocean of claps ,cheers and smiles dampened by tears, the entire troupe of kids, all 17 of them came running down to Manik, who had returned to his VVIP seat and was proudly watching the performance from there.

'Shit, now the principal will create another scene' Nandini thought and quickly walked up to the VVIP zone to take her class away. But she had been a second too late. That cynic's wrath had already begun.

"What are you doing here, disturbing our esteemed guest? Where is your teacher Nandini, she isn't supposed to let you roam like this."

The children were hurt and confused. Wasn't this their Manik bhaiyaa, wasn't this the same guy who had made this performance possible? Why then was the principal shooing them away from him?

"Wooo sir main..." Nandini tried to say something before Manik cut her short.

"Well actually sir, with all due respect I am indeed representing my father. But to be honest, the reason I came here today was for my best friend." He glanced at Nandini and gave the principal one of his trademark drool worthy smirks. "And of course these army of friends here" he looked down at the children who had surrounded him from all sides and smiled. The You-Don't-Mess-With-Nandini-Or-These-Kids expression on his face was too obvious to be missed. "But I must say what talent you have in your school, simply mindblowing!! I keep telling Nandini to come and join our company. At the very least, she will get thrice of what she might be making here but her love for these kids...money can't even compete with that. She is a true teacher! Whatsay kids?"

So Manik had officially cut a lemon and smeared it all over the principal's face in broad day light in front of 50 dignitaries and all the poor man could do was to show his 30 odd betel stained teeth. But Manik was sure, the lemon must have started doing its work.

"Now if you could please excuse us, these kids, they need a treat after that performance." He smartly walked out, the pied piper followed by his jumping rats oops monkeys.

Nandini watched in silence. But that was only a faade she put up for the world. If someone could capture the image of her heart, she was dancing a fusion of ballet and Bharat Natyam. She wanted to blow a trail of whistles in true Bollywood style. Her hero was back and how. But till she had the kids around, she had to BEHAVE.

Even though Manik wanted to take all of them out, there was no way 19 people could fit in his posh BMW. The next best option was to order something. They all huddled together in the class room and started singing and dancing, waiting for the feast to arrive.

Nandini was a little quiet now. She was trying to swallow the scene like a girl gone hungry for days. This could be one of the happiest days in her life in a long long time. Where had he been, her knight in shining armour. Why did destiny take him away when she needed him the most? Why couldn't he be with her when one by one Nyonika destroyed them all. Aryaman was the first to go, she threw him out of space and forced him to return to New York, she cancelled all of Dhruv's solo contracts that he had achieved on his own merit & she had a show down with Mukti. What Nyonika did to her was worse, she didn't hit her directly, she targeted her unassuming simpleton chacha, planting a plot in his office to expose him as a thief and offender. It was to save her uncle's reputation and his entire career that she had to give in to Neel, that jerkbag who happened to be at the right place at the right time and the only one who had agreed to stand as a witness in favour of Nandini's chacha in the impending courtcase. Of course he had his terms and conditions. You don't expect people like 'Neel' to do things for free, do you? She was still fulfilling those terms and conditions, and no one had a clue about it except the devil himself and her best friend Navya. Her gullible chacha, who was at the center of the controversy

Didn't have a whiff about all this. Of course Nandini could have confessed everything. But then you know Nandini, this is so typical of her to put herself in a spot to help others around her.

But that was then, when she was alone and helpless. Now she wasn't alone and so she wouldn't let that scumbag puppet her around.

"Marry you? Neel Dixit? Not even in your dreams..." she muttered under her breath.

"Hey Nandu miss, kis duniya mein khoyi ho, we are damn hungry, jaldi aao" Oops, she had slipped away, from the bright present to the dark alleys of the past. As always, Manik's voice dragged her back.

"Haan aayi"

Since when did Manik become such a natural with kids? She remembered how little Abir had kicked the day lights out of him and the man who fought the whole world single handedly, had broken into a sweat just holding him in his arms. How did this transformation happen? Was it because he always carried the baggage of an abusive childhood? What his mother had done to him for years, had that made him apprehensive and insecure while handling children. He didn't want to hurt them because he himself was a broken child?

And now because he didn't remember any of it, his natural instincts had taken over. This, was the real Manik. She felt like crying, she felt like smothering him with a hundred kisses. She wished for a magic wand that could heal all the pain he had inside.

She couldn't control herself, not even with the thought of the kids watching her. She went ahead and hugged him, infront of 17 dumbstruck kids who suddenly went silent. Even Manik was caught by surprise. And would you believe, he blushed!!!

Edited by rk21 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shoana

hey roh...what an interview dear
you never miss a chance to impress me
hats off to your dedication👏
how could you do this...waking up at 3 a.m😲 and write the story
i,m very sad about this,,,pls don't do like this don't let your work take a troll on your health
we readers too are humans...if you will be late for update or if you take a break we won't kill you
pls don't do like this next time
and felt sad about your mom...and tbh no one can take her place
but the way you are... shows that you are a strong girl
and i'm happy to be your reader😃

coming to the update
as expected you left me speechless
never thought that manik would manofy the children so easily
and about the performance i loved it
and now one more person is added in my hate list😉 i.e nandini's princi would love to kill her too😡


thanks for pm dear
and sorry i wanted to write more but this mobile sucks...
don't know which idiot made it..😡
this is the 5th time i'm typing whole comment
now i don't have much energy to write
all i wanna say is...take care
and stay blessed
keep writing...without getting stressed out😉


Aww love, i understand the irritation u have because of your dabba phone. yesterday i too had to type one message 4 times. lol.

listen, y do u take everything on ur head? u ill kill neel and then Amms and Nandini's principal too? Do u want to render Manik jobless? leave something for that poor guy.. ROFL.

on a serious note, I am humbled to read your kind words. U guys r making me sound like a hero. Well i m not. I mean, not a special hero, I am as much a hero as u r . Yes there have been really hard times, which I havent mentioned in the interview and anyone can break down in those circumstances. But perhaps it was my mothers blessings and later on her spirit that had held me together. Anyone could hv turned bitter, I am blessed to not have travelled that road to destruction.

Never mind, all i wanna say is thank you. n yes it does take a toll on me sometimes, but I will manage. Its an addition, even for me. just like u wait to know what happens next, i too wanna know what happens next because most of the times the story emerges only on the writing table LOL

me n my crazy world. but i love u to bits...
keep reading and keep loving... muah
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Posted: 9 years ago
Aww lovely dear,
itni khushi, mera toh dil bhar aaya.😃

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: thamannamanan1

national anthem ...

that video was really amazing ...


thr was an issue
nandini n kids song was stolen

manik solved it


but when manik will think about it later
he himself will be confused about it

first he told nandini to trust him
then he took the kids with him n locked that room

for those kids he was a stranger {other than chirag} plus they all were in a shocked state

he convinced those tinytots to sing national anthem

he made them practice
he gave them confidence

he was talking to them about music

then he took them out n told nandini that they r ready for the performance

finally they performed

😛

when MANik MALHothrA is thr nothing to worry 😛



hi my sunshine girl, please dont think I m miffed with u if ever u see me replying to everyone except u. this site is wierd, sometimes i cant keep track of the comments :)
I m waiting eagerly on your comments on the next chapter... especially the lemon :):)
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Posted: 9 years ago
So Nandini's heart was doing ballet and bharat natyam 😆😆 so did ours. Monster Manik made an appearance to put the principal in his place 😃.Can't wait for him to remember his past and learn about Neel's trapping Nandini ☢️ 😆. Update soon. Take care. ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
As usual superb update...
Read a quote a few days back, " Love doesn't need to be perfect , it needs to be true"... Seems like tailor made for Manan...

And your writing here is one similar tribute to their saga. ..

I wish to say more, but sometimes the words ditch you... So excuse me till we meet next...

Love n God Bless
Anura
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update...

manik protected nandu frm princi's scolding..in fact he gave brilliant ans to shut him up...

nandu hugging manik..
soo cute...
wanna know manik's reaction..
would he get glimpse of his past through this like music n nandini's hug...

loved it
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey RK21,

What a wonderful writer you are, I am lost for words to appreciate your talent. Though I love reading, but the last story that I might have read on this forum must have been some six years ago. I just read a few lines and that is enough for me to decide whether to go further or not. I am so happy to find this story.

keep writing.
M-M

PS: Actually I watched KY2 season one last month for the first time. Saw bits and pieces of season 2 and left it, you can guess the reason why? Enjoying season 3 like anything. God bless you.

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