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Tadibaaaz

@Tadibaaaz

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#211

Awesome update

Mr malhotra😡

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nita24

@nita24

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#212

Update was amazing
Beautifully written
So it was past
This is what happed with manik
Mr.malhotra did that n take him to landon
Eagerly waiting for story to proceed now
Pls continue soon
Thanks for the pm
Tc

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Jyoti

@bhagupur

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#213

Thanks for pm.dear

This is beautiful story. ..

Manik suffer a very bad accident ...

His father was right at his place. ..

The doctor was very strong ..at her point. .

Thanks for sharing this.

Stay blessed keep writing.

Thanks.

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ershilpavyas

@ershilpavyas

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#214

again a brilliant writing 👏 u r really a very gud writer...i hope u know that

mr. malhotra pov how i missed this in the show...they shud hav shown him for some scenes but i believe they did not do well with some tracks and left it in midway. 😡

but u r doing justice to the role. 😊

just one suggestion i feel story is going a little slow so so improvise it.

nd yes u wrote this chappy 6 months ago then why r u posting it so late 😭

update sooner next time plss 😳

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A.Hajnal

@A.Hajnal

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#215

@Sandhya:- Thank you...😳

Yes, now we do... Now we have entered in the section on the story where the story will be told from Manik's side. My Fav part of the story, that is...😃

@Shreya:- Haha, yes...As if you have to ask me for that...😆

Yes, he will...Manik always has and always will, so will Nandini...That's is our faith on them and they never do let us down, do they? 😳

I am glad you understand...Because to understand what and why things happened how they happened, we have to look at the past and find the answers...That's is what we are going to do now...😃

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A.Hajnal

@A.Hajnal

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#216

@Aishwa04:- Thank you! Ah, there is so much more to come, save a lil bit anger for that too, okay? 😆

@Nita:- Thank you...😳

Ah, that is just the start, aage aage dekho hota hai kiya...The coming chapters are going to show why it took 4 years for MaNan to reunite...

@Bhagupur:- You are always welcome! 😳

True that, that's why I choose the quote of this chapter about him and his actions... "If only we could see in advance all the harm that can come from the good we think we are doing."

Oh, I am glad you liked her, she is strong just as I know the one who has inspired me to write her is...😳

Thank you, so much! 😃

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A.Hajnal

@A.Hajnal

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#217

Originally posted by: Cooldude101
Please tell me where I can find you and kill you???
Why??Why??WHY?? why would you do this to me... The beast in me is shouting out for the story after they finally see each other.
The bas***d Malhotra, even his assistant knew that Manik and Nandu were so very dear to each other, no one better than us would know. But if he wakes up and starts hating her because she wasn't there for him even though she is working her ass off to find him, I will Find YOU and Kill YOU!
The Manan Fan ranting here ends...
Now coming to the plot,
Dude I love you. Such a genius mind.
I am totally digging this.
But make them meet man, I'm dying from inside.
This 12th chapter gave important insights and I don't know how long I can wait from shouting out and jumping for them to meet.
BTW, you are definitely becoming the official screenwriter for KY2 THE GREAT SEASON-2
Those dumbasses really didn't know how to use resources.
ARRRGHGHGGHGGHG!
Frustration is eating me up and I swera I'm going to burst.
But anyway, I can't hate GOD now can I?😉
WAITING WAITING

You are here! 🤗

Haha, when I didn't see your comment in the last 3 updates I was like 'where is she?' then I told myself it better that you are still in euphoria by the reunion wala chapter. Because till then I can write something that can hold you back and still keep you interested in the story even though I am going in the past...But hey, you are going to get Manik's POV here, so it can't be that bad, is it? 😉 lol

Wait, are you doubting Manik's faith and trust in her here? Or my understanding of Manik? Or my ability to write irrational things? I will be very offended by the first two ones, for the 3rd one, you have to wait...😆

But I will tell you only that what you are fearing is so out of Manik's character...No matter what, how and where he was/is, Manik has/is going to act, do what Manik has always done. So, ask yourself has Manik ever doubted her?

I think her love for him is the only thing he ever truly believed in. She is the only one he can and has always trusted with himself, hasn't he? So, you already know the answers, then why this fear? Baki all the what-s and why-s and how-s, that is for me to tell...😃

Haha, thank you, thank you, thank you...I am glad you are liking the plot even though I am making you wait so much...🤗

OH, dude, that is such an amazing compliment. Being a MaNan fan and that compliment coming from a MaNan fan, I know it's HUGE. Because we do NOT trust someone so easily with MaNan and their HEA...So, thank you, so much...🤗

Ah, tell me about that...I feel like hunting them down and making all of them suffer for what they have done to MaNan, to us...😡

Haha, I will never able to understand who is this God is that you love so much and can NOT hate...The God of the story, The God in the Story or the God we have out of the story? 😆

Welcome back, Dude...🤗

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A.Hajnal

@A.Hajnal

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#218

Originally posted by: ershilpavyas
again a brilliant writing 👏 u r really a very gud writer...i hope u know that
mr. malhotra pov how i missed this in the show...they shud hav shown him for some scenes but i believe they did not do well with some tracks and left it in midway. 😡
but u r doing justice to the role. 😊
just one suggestion i feel story is going a little slow so so improvise it.
nd yes u wrote this chappy 6 months ago then why r u posting it so late 😭
update sooner next time plss 😳

Thank you so much! 🤗

I KNOW, I was waiting for them to show Mr. Malhotra and there was so MUCH that they left hanging and never truly explore, his character was one of them...I so wanted them to show him and his relationship with Manik, but they didn't...😡

Thank you, I am glad you are liking it so far...😳

You mean the pace or the fact that I am always late in updating the chapters? If you mean the pace, then don't worry, we are going to move faster in the next chapters. The last 4 years of Manik's past is going to be covered very fast...

And if you mean about updating the chapter, that is because I can only update when the chapter is ready. With being busy with exams, University, and real life, I make sure I write the chapter as soon and I can. But the fact is that I am not alone, my Beta is a medical student, and you know what that means. Test and exams and so more tests. She is already being so kind and thoughtful, so I try to not make exaggerated demands and give her time to Beta the chapters...

About why I have written this chapter 6 months before but still I am updating it only now:- Because 6 months before the chapter from 3 to 9 were missing, I didn't even have any idea what is that I am going to write in those chapters, so I couldn't update the 12th chapter before all those chapters, could I? 😆

The truth is that the writing is a creative process, I don't know about others, but for me, it's triggered by emotions and is a reflection of the thoughts passing in my minds. Which means, the chapters that you are reading now have gone through many processes:- first the thought process, in which I decide the content of the chapter, then I write the structure, then think about the right words, look at the grammar + spelling. Proofread and re-check. 🥱

Only after that I can send it to my Beta who reads and makes sure it's readable, the grammar is good and the flow is right, etc...

In short, the chapters usually it takes me months to write a chapter, not weeks or days. I am slow, I know...But understanding the frustration and anticipation, as I am a reader myself, I always try my best to update as soon as possible. But things never work the way I want them to work...

So, even this time, I will try my best...But in any case, the next chapter is longer than the last one and the pace is good too, I think...After reading it, you have to tell me if and how much I have to move things faster...😳

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ershilpavyas

@ershilpavyas

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#219

its ok dear i know that writing is a creative process ( but i was always a lazy person to do that 😆 ) but u know the story reader inside me wants to read everything as soon as possible. thats why i trouble u 😳

but i understand ur problems too as m also a student and it takes a lot of efforts to take time in between ur studies.

all said nd done, Fir b m waiting for an early update 😳😳