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updating... actually typing. so you guys hve to hve patience!😃
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Amazing updates...
Maan is really possessive for geet...
Also he was very hurt with the fact someone took his place even if it was just for dropping geet home...
The feel of him not keeping his promise also has made him angry on himself too...
Also he couldnt tolerate when geet left his side to sit beside dev...

And geet she really loves ot when maan is do possessive for her...
And also she loves to pamper his possessiveness too...
Lets see what maan will ask from her and she would have to also fulfil his wish...

I just hope that you are not creating a love triangle between maan geet and dev...
I really dont want to see a angry maan and helpless geet..

will be waiting for the next..



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All credits to shruthe di😳


CHAPTER -7

The Sound of Music



Let's start at the very beginning
A very good place to start
When you read you begin with A B C


She clapped when her favourite song started, abated breath and a smile tugging on her lips. She, Naina and Dev were watching the Sound of Music in KM. It was dadima's birthday after all and they knew they'd be getting lots and loads of food and cakes and chocolates. And true to words, Dadima came in with tray full of all their favourite food.

"dinner time kids."


She had loved celebrating her birthday with the kids. Nothing extravagant but only the four kids. Naina, the little 5 year old raised her hand, "dadima you too watch na.."

The old lady took Naina in her lap and began feeding her dinner, simultaneously urging geet and dev to do so. But the only person missing was the hot headed Maan Singh Khurana who refused to watch The Sound of Music just because he felt it was for girls.

When you sing you begin with Do Re Me
Do Re Me, Do Re Me
The first three notes just happen to be
Do Re Me, Do Re Me
Do Re Me Fa So La Ti


"geet have your food beta...", dadima chided, "and where is Maan?"

She kept her eyes glued to the TV for she couldn't miss her favourite song.

"I don't know dadima. He hates this movie."

"Yes dadima he wanted to watch a horror movie and he got angry when we played this movie", dev said stuffing the chole bhature in his tiny mouth.

Dadima sighed, stubborn was her younger grandson who would never listen to anyone.

It was much later at night when dadima kissed the foreheads of all the four kids and went to sleep. the four kids slept in Dev and Maan's room together, cuddled up, telling each other stories.

Geet kissed dadima and closed her eyes, pulling the duvet on her head. The lights were off and there was a complete silence. Suddenly geet heard the door creaking and her heart stopped. She pulled away the duvet from her face and there was nothing but darkness. She looked here and there and found Dev and naina soundly asleep. She looked at Maan's side and he was also asleep, pulling the duvet over his head. She gulped and felt like taking a leak.


It was scary but she was one heck of a brave child. She decided to just get off the bed and turn on the night lamp. Dadima might have forgotten to put it on. She carefully, with trembling body got off the bed when she heard something fall on the floor. She jumped and trembled, looking around. She knew there were bad witches hiding in the dark corners of the room and that if anyone behaved bad, they would take them.

"da...dadima...", she could only squeak and her legs refused to move. She couldn't go ahead and she couldn't dare to turn back and get into her bed and sleep off.

Beads of sweat formed on her forehead, "Maan...", her lips trembled.


*Booo.*


A loud voice almost snatched the life out of her. she turned back with a start and saw a huge dark figure floating in the air making way towards her. she stood rooted at her spot and almost cried when the dark figure with giant flowing hands raised itself up in the air, almost towering over her.

"are you geet?", the booming voice made her cold with fear.

"ye...yes..."
, tears rolled down her eyes.

"I am the dark witch and I have come to take you with me. He ha ha ha..", the witch laughed dangerously.

"b...but why??"


"because you watched The Sound of Music..."

"I...I like it Ms Witch..."
, she managed to squeak out.

"Insolent fool!! I hate the movie but now that you watched it, I am going to punish you. He ha ha ha.."

The dangerous laughter almost made her cry.

"Come with me Geet... I will cut you into pieces and cook you with gingerbread. Come now."

As the dark silhouette moved towards her, she fell on her knees with her hands folded and she cried, " no Ms witch. Please don't take me with you. Please...I will never watch The Sound of Music again...I promise."

"And do you promise that you won't sing the song doe a deer' ever again?"

"no Ms witch...i would never... please let me go. I will be a good girl now. Please don't cook me. Please."

"Hmmm...
", the witch spoke a grave tone and receded back and the next moment the lights came up. Vision blurred with tears, kneeling on the ground, she dared to look up to check if the witch was gone and what she saw, shocked her to no ends.

There stood Maan with a wicked smile plastered on his face, pushing away the huge white sheet that he had covered himself with, disguised as the witch.

"ma...maan you.."

He showed her tongue, "hehehehe you are such a dumb geet...witches don't exist."

And laughed and laughed and laughed till his tummy ached,waking dev and Naina up. And the next moment the whole mansion came alive with geet wailing her lungs out. Dadima, and the rest rushed to her and avantika took her in her lap.

"shh beta..tell me what is it? was it a nightmare?"


It took her a good 15 minutes to calm down and tell them the entire witch fiasco. And thereafter, what happened to Maan was a very different story altogether.


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"hmmm hmmm...la la la..."

She walked in with a lilt in her steps, wearing a summer frock, reaching just below her knees and a smile playing on her lips. There was a certain enthusiasm in her walk, a glow on her face as she kissed badi maa and bade papa and walked straight into the kitchen.

He had seen her so gay and so fresh as he walked down the stairs, putting on his cufflinks as he were to head out to work. A smile spread on his lips seeing her so chirpy this morning. He munched his toast, talking about business to his father but his eyes were not where they should be. they moved repeatedly towards the kitchen, searching for her. once his father was done talking, he quickly store towards the kitchen and stood by the door, watching her sway to a song she sang, whisking something in the bowl and occasionally swaying her frills.

"Doe, a deer, a female deer
Ray, a drop of golden sun
Me, a name I call myself
Far, a long long way to run"


She hummed away doing her work and he could do nothing but adore her. she looked absolutely cute, dipping her finger into that molten dark chocolate and wiping it off with her tongue. He sighed and realized he didn't have the heart to disturb her. was something special today? she didn't have office?

"Sew, a needle pulling thread
La, a note to follow so
Tea, a drink with jam and bread
That will bring us back to Do, oh oh oh"



His phone rang and she realized he was close. Their eyes met and she gave a bright smile, making his day.

"Maan...try to come back home early. Today is..."


And he was gone, talking on the phone. She sighed. He was keeping too busy these days. Dev was to go London for a few weeks on the pretext of some work and Maan was busy with some project here. He came late at nights but somehow he manages to meet her under their tree. Her face heated up recalling those sweet memories of theirs. It happens so that you find a certain place around you where you could safe keep your world, where you are not scared to be yourself and be able to express your innermost self so freely. And that was perhaps their bakula tree, their safe haven!


"you wanted to say something Jasmine?"- 11:00am

She sighed seeing his text. He was gone for almost three hours and it was now that his majesty got time to text. But then he had actually heard her then.

"yes because i wanted to remind you of something..humph!"-11:02am

"and what is it jasmine? You are upset?"-11:26am.

"today is dadima's bday Maan, did you even wish her?"-11:35am

"OMG!!! It was completely out of my mind. I am just so engrossed with the project. I will call her right away!" - 11:40am.


"Mr Busy Bee. Get a life out of work. :P " - 12:00pm

"So, this is why I was hearing that heck of a stupid song this morning. Bleh!" - 12:09pm


A faint memory wafted in her mind as she poured the chocolate ganache on her chocolate cake and let the heavenly fluid drip down the rack oh so slowly, glazing the layer of her cake. She hummed the song again as she checked her text and frowned.

"you don't have a taste in music Mr Khurana! Huh!" - 12:22pm


"We'll talk about tastes later Jasmine. Called dadima and wished her. GTG. Meeting lined up. Bye." - 12:23pm

"Get home early today. we will celebrate."- 12:25pm

"Will try."-12:35pm
.


It was way after dinner time that he entered the silent home. He was late, all thanks to the clients who were too demanding. His father was slowly handing over the work to him and Dev and this consumed all his time. Dev was busy dealing with the London office and he'd leave soon. And worst, his project was at the other end of the city, far away form home. Travelling and traffic made it worse. Tired that he was, he decided to see dadima and apologize. Though he had wished her and told her that he'd make up to her, he was terribly late and horribly tired.
As he neared the old lady's room, he could hear some music and laughter. And the familiar music caught attention and the voice that he had heard this morning.


Doe, a deer, a female deer
Ray, a drop of golden sun
Me, a name I call myself
Far, a long long way to run
Sew, a needle pulling thread
La, a note to follow so
Tea, a drink with jam and bread
That will bring us back to Do

Do Re Mi Fa So La Ti Do
Do Ti La So Fa Me Re


Dadima laughed seeing her waltz with the music. She twirled and he watched her keenly, standing by the door, with his arms crossed over his chest. They were watching The Sound of Music and he sill didn't like that. But he enjoyed her dance, holding the frills of her frock. She bowed in front of dadima,

"so, what more do you wish to have on your birthday Fraulein Dadima?"

Dadima laughed and held her hands, "Nothing my child. You have actually made my day. Now come sit with us and tell us what gift do you want on your birthday?"

Maan smiled and went ahead to hug dadima and apologized for the forgetfulness. But dadima kissed his forehead and made her sit beside her.

"So, geet, tell us.
"

She thought for a while and her eyes glued to the dvd that ran on the tv.

"I want nothing dadima... but one day I will go to a country side in the British isles and live a good long weekend there!"

"Country side?", Maan cocked his head, "you do know dark witches are found there who cut you up and cook you in ginger bread, don't you?"

She frowned hearing that taunt, "Ohh I don't get scared now Mr Khurana. Keep your pathetic jokes to yourself."

"Not scared, eh?"

Dadima laughed seeing geet frown.

"dadima please ask him to recall the punishment he got then."

"Maan...stop teasing her. now, tell us geet, country side?"

"yes dadima... I really really wish to see places like Fraulein Maria took the kids to and the beauty of the hills and fields..."

"...and sing that horrible song all over again?", quipped Maan.

She could hear pure jest in his tone and threw the pillow on his face and curtly replied

"Good night Mr Khurana. Dadima and I are having a girls night out tonight. So if could please excuse us!"

He kissed dadima as he walked out

"Good night jasmine."


Geet twisted her lips, "good night."


She walked into the washroom to freshen up while dadima silently wondered at the new development in endearments she witnessed just now.



The breeze was soothing and it was a full moon night. The sweet scent of the flowers wafted in the air, waltzing to the rhythm of the wind and she sat there, under the tree, resting her back against the trunk.

"You are sleepy. Go home Maan." she said softly.

He didn't reply for a while as her hands weaved magic in his hair, softly caressing the scalp and her lap, a soft cushion that made him all the more drowsy. He had come late and he wanted to be with her. she had asked him to go home owing to the tiredness he carried around but he was adamant. And now that they were here, he had rested his head on her lap and her tender fingers had made him half asleep, a state where he was conscious yet not conscious...a land between dreams and reality.

"Maan...its getting late.",
she tried to wake him up. He groaned and turned into her stomach, making her giggle. She was ticklish.

"Maan please wake up."

"Stop troubling me jasmine. I wont be here tomorrow, so let me sleep."

She was surprised and quickly held his face and made him look at her.
"won't be here tomorrow? What does that mean?"

He rubbed his eyes and slowly opened them only to see her beautiful face, looking down at him, forehead crinkled with worry and her curious eyes peeping down at his. He raised his hand and softly caressed her cheek, feeling that softness. And she closed her eyes, letting the feel sink in. The actions and reactions came natural to them.

"I am shifting to an apartment near the site. Its taking up so much time of mine and its tough to handle stuffs with the distance and traffic and the client demands."



She somehow didn't like the sound of him going away, even if it was for a month. He project will be complete by then but then they won't be here, sitting under the baluka, talking their hearts away. He won't be here to start her day with the balcony visits or to tease her. but then she knew she won't be able to stop him as well.

"Is it necessary?"


"yes jasmine. I had a very bad day plus an argument with dad. Its stressing me out."

Her face fell but then somehow he could sense her discomfort.

"but hey... don't worry. I'll be here on weekends Jasmine. So just smile okay."

"ummm..."



He got up and watched her still lost in her thoughts. He made her stand, holding her hand and then scooped her up in his arms.

As he made her lie on her bed and pressed a kiss on her forehead, she realized she would miss him carrying her back to her room, almost every night.
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Edited by kawaii_geet - 9 years ago
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Awesome update
Loved maan prank on geet
Loved maaneet moments
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Beautiful update
maaneet moments were lovely
loved it
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Sweet update
Maan scared poor geet yet she bravely said she like the movie
Wow such a cute scene
Dadi was surprised with the names hmmm lot more to come
Waiting for next
Edited by SANJANA9167 - 9 years ago
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amazing update aww past is cute loved d update
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Superb update. Maaneet moments are always special.
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Poor little Geet maan scared her to the hell just because she saw the movie which he hates BTW what punishment he got for his kartoot on that time
He forgot about dadi birthday Geet reminded him...it seems dadi has sligjtese idea of what cooking between maaneet...
Maan moving to apartment which is near to site...Geet isn't happy with maan going away from her...interesting precap

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