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daydreamers

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

@lakshmi thank you... 😳 I wish they show smthn like this *greedy me* 😆

@gowri thank you so much dear 😳

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sshirley

@sshirley

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

DD - this was awesome, simply awesome!

Matured, poised and graceful writing.. use of perfect words at the perfect place.. ur diction too has improved i feel😃

The best part was i could imagine SiRa in the scenes.. if a writer can do that, i will call them an ace writer..

Could feel every emotion - be it pain, helplessness, determination of guilt - in all its poignancy..

Do keep writing OS and do try ur hand at a long FF too..

Any other OS u have written?

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daydreamers

@daydreamers

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: sshirley
DD - this was awesome, simply awesome!
Matured, poised and graceful writing.. use of perfect words at the perfect place.. ur diction too has improved i feel😃

The best part was i could imagine SiRa in the scenes.. if a writer can do that, i will call them an ace writer..

Could feel every emotion - be it pain, helplessness, determination of guilt - in all its poignancy..

Do keep writing OS and do try ur hand at a long FF too..

Any other OS u have written?

I'll pm u wait.. 😆

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daydreamers

@daydreamers

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: sshirley
DD - this was awesome, simply awesome!
Matured, poised and graceful writing.. use of perfect words at the perfect place.. ur diction too has improved i feel😃

The best part was i could imagine SiRa in the scenes.. if a writer can do that, i will call them an ace writer..

Could feel every emotion - be it pain, helplessness, determination of guilt - in all its poignancy..

Do keep writing OS and do try ur hand at a long FF too..

Any other OS u have written?

🥳 and my ❤️ does dhinkachika dhinkachika

As I always say writing is a process and I write to improve.. Maybe this is the one-fourth step towards the same..

The previous wala was written long back... And then I lost interest. So left it 😆 but I'll continue that soon after improvising. So that the ppl who didn't watch the show can also relate to it.. 😃

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Pooja

@moviefan-pooja

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

very beautiful piece of writing

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daydreamers

@daydreamers

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: muviefan
very beautiful piece of writing

Thank you... 😃

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rajshrip

@rajshrip

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Lovely writing👏👏👏. Please pm me for your next part.😊

Edited by rajshrip - 9 years ago

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daydreamers

@daydreamers

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: rajshrip
Lovely writing👏👏👏. Please pm me for your next part.😊

Thank you.. 😳

But this is one shot. So no new part. But I'll pm u other works for sure 😃

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attubaby

@attubaby

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#39

aww...b'ful..a good take.

Sita's second exile is something that can put anybody off...no matter how many explanatns b given for the situatn in their life that occurred and abt righteousness or wrongness of Ram's decsn, but only thing that is left behind is watever happened to them was just not right.

ur last line- ULTIMATE.

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