SwaSan SS : SERENE EMOTIONS {CH 4 PG 13} - Page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: harshitaloomba1

Nice update😊

Loved swasan😊
Ap aww she loved dp n that must be unconditional but y to do wrong with sanskaar...😭
Thank you for the PM😊
Waiting for more😃




Thank you harshita 😊 glad you're liking the story 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...

Sanskaar past left me with tear.. Soo mean ap.. Disgusting.. Using Sanskaar to inherit her wealth.. Soo bad.. I'm feeling very bad for him...

Last moment was cute...

Update soon..

With love..

Kam..



Lots in store sissy 😊 next update soon 😊 thank you for your appreciation 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: sarathy321

Hai di

It was a nice update. .
Ap is indifferent to swasan due to this...
Hope next time we get a longer update and swasan present story
Waiting for ur next update



Hey Arathy 😊 thank you 😊 I'll be making a longer update next time and surely it will be the present story 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Hello dear Esha di,😊
Awesome update.👏
Sanskar's past was very emotional.😭
AP...🤢 Evil lady...!!😡
Last moment between SwaSan was very cute..!!😳
Plzz update the next part soon.😳
And thanks for the pm.😃
With love,
Aheli.



Hi Aheli dear 😊 glad you liked the update very much 😊 the next part is on it's way 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: Sujayricky

Awesome update 👏
Sanskar past was really emotional 😭
I am hating ap 😡
But final part was ☺️
Update soon
Thanks for pm



Thank you sujay 😊 glad you're eager for the next update 😛 it's on it's way 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#86


Thanks 😊 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: muktai

Nice update...

You described Sanskar's past really well.

Sad to know tragedies in his life. He faced alot😭

Swasan moment nice👏



Thank you so much Mukta 😊 Glad you're liking the story 😊 Next part soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: raaz19

Loved the 26th you described sanskaar past so emotionally...wonder what the rift will be for the separation..update soon..

Raz



Thank you so much 😃 glad you're liking the concept 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: Kaveetha

Read the all parts in one go.. Awesome one. 👏Really enjoyed it.

Felt very sad about sanskaar.. 😭Ap is so mean...😡
Loved the swasan moments..😳
Update the next chap soon.



Hey Kaveetha 😉 Very happy to know that you found this story awesome 😉 next part is on it's way 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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A big thank you to people who are showering my SS with likes & comments..i am really happy :) Directly Updating The Next Part...As Usual Need Reviews ;)

CHAPTER 4

2 Weeks Later ~

Past 2 weeks were unusually calm for The Maheshwari Household..AP was busy with her friends who had lately arrived to celebrate the birthday of Adarsh and stayed back.

Due To this Swara & Sanskaar had got a enough time for themselves..They went for some music exhibitions and blissful dinners..everyone was happy...

One Morning

Sanskaar!" Please Na!" It's my day tomorrow..

No!" Swara no!" Don't you know how much i hate him..?

I know it sanskaar!" But you know we've been childhood friends..!

Don't forget whose son he is? Swara stop being a child!"

Sanskaar i know his father made my mother pregnant out of wedlock..but you see his father is somewhat my father too..! He's like my brother sansku!"

Does he treat you like his sister?" Does he?" I don't think so!" He's done enough to make you unhappy!" No means no!" Laksh will never ever enter this house ..even if it's your wish to invite him on your birthday!" Sanskaar was adamant

Flashback
Swara!" Swara!" I love you..Please Accept Me..I will die without you.! I'll love you more than sanskaar i promise..! please accept me..
laksh? like really? i am like you're sister..and..and you're proposing me..?..don't you remember what has your father did with my mother?..half of my life ..my mother was called a prostitute and i was regarded as an illegitimate child..your family has done enough to hurt my maa & dida..and now you're behind my life..we've always been friends and still will remain..moreover i am committed to sanskaar now..and we'll marry soon..forget me and marry you're father's choice "Sunanda"..go !

Present

See Sanskaar!" He's apologized to me and everything is sorted..he even married Sunanda..let's make the friendship better..! Call him..!

Ok!" As you say!" But I'll keep a strict eye in him..my wife needs protection.."

Possessive haan?" I like it Mr.Maheshwari..Swara Winked..

Accha?" Sirf like ..? Sanskaar raised his brows..

Sanskaar!" I have work..stop flirting..! Swara tried to control

Nahi aaj nahi!" And saying this sanskaar, relished some moments of afternoon lovemaking..😳

***

Hello laksh? This is Sanskaar!" Woh Actually Tomorrow is Swara's b...

Birthday right?..Laksh calmly asked

Umm yeah..She insisted on calling you..! So would you come?"

Oh yeah definitely!" Accha only she insisted? You didn't want me come?"

Arey No No !" I would love to Welcome you and your wife!" Please do Come!"

Oh sure then!" Meet you tomorrow!"

***

Sanskaar's Monologue "the most perfect draamebaaz is laksh!"

Swara then came and backhugged sanskaar "Invitation dediya?"

Haan!" He's coming!"

Oh good!" I can't wait to see Sunanda bhabhi!"

Sanskaar's Monologue -
"why is she so excited on laksh's arrival? is there something between them?" or does she really treats him like a brother?" No!" She is so eager to call him!" i have to find out swara's hidden motive!" what if she is double dating?" laksh is a worst personality..maybe he's convinced swara to accept him in my absence!"

Is this the beginning of an ugly storm?
The hate story begins from the next update
Stay tuned


IGNORE THE TYPOS 😊
Edited by _Esha_ - 9 years ago

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