Storm | SuBul OS by mina

smala

@smala

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Loved it very much Mina.Please do continue .

Can't wait for the next update

Thank you for the translation , it did help me to understand your story better , since I do not speak and understand Hindi.

Really appreciate your effort.

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Mina

@-mina-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: smala
Loved it very much Mina.Please do continue .
Can't wait for the next update

Thank you! Really appreciate the comment. Will work on an update 😊

Edit: glad the translations helped you! thank you for following my stories :)

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Renukha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Bulbul was finally choosing him, but only as the next best alternative to death. 😭 😭

Loved this line!!! Uff, Mina this perfect just like your other stories. I can't believe the amounts of likes and comments you got??!! You deserve so much more!! But I guess that's the price you have to pay, writing shots of a less favored couple. I llke Suresh and Bulbul, and the way you began the story, so pleassseee continue!!!!😳

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Mina

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: renukha871
Bulbul was finally choosing him, but only as the next best alternative to death. 😭 😭
Loved this line!!! Uff, Mina this perfect just like your other stories. I can't believe the amounts of likes and comments you got??!! You deserve so much more!! But I guess that's the price you have to pay, writing shots of a less favored couple. I llke Suresh and Bulbul, and the way you began the story, so pleassseee continue!!!!😳

hahaha i thought that was the cheesiest most awful line when i was writing it BUT it was also utterly factual...i wanted to be like "don't worry suresh, it's not actually that dire, it's going to work out, she does like you in her own way"...and then i was like why am i talking to nonexistent characters 😆

anyway, thank you for pointing to that line, it is at the core of the emotional dynamic between them. and thank you SO MUCH for the rest of your comment omg! haha coming right out and saying about the number of comments. it's interesting, the page views to responses ratio on this fic feels particularly unbalanced. but that's ok na, i know that those who are interested will read and i really appreciate it 😊

hope to continue soon! ❤️s and hugs to you renukha! 😊

Originally posted by: Javeria3991
awesome start

thank you for reading and commenting, so glad you liked it!

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Mina

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Hi guys, I have written a sort-of followup to this, but I might still want to continue this so it's posted as a separate OS. Here it is, it's called "First Times" but it's not as spicy as you might think from the title 😛

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Mina

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

banner updated on page 1 :)

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