Yagz am.tired of appreciating you darling.. you are too good.that words can never do.justice to your works...
Outstanding and purely lovable.. Oh yaara you are the youngest yet the best writer I have come across.. and am extremely glad that I did found you.. I discovered the most precious gem!This story was beyond anything..totally new and different.. how do you come up with such New concepts despite your busy schedule.. ? Tell me.please even I will use it..Overall truly exceptional jaane man.. you rock and rock!
WOW! I didn't expect you here Bhabhi! Thank you so much!Originally posted by: Radhikerani
The prologue was pretty nice! Now that's new concept- Khushi losing her memory and Arnav doing all the compromises.
The way you introduced Khushi's accident leading to her losing here memory was very well handled.
So, Arnav broke his engagement with Lavanya to take care of Khushi. Good. ππΌ
And, Lavanya gone all revenge-ish. Okay.
So unknowingly hi sahi, Khushi went and performed all the post-marriage rituals! Great it is!
Loved how you brought out Arnav's inner turmoil!
Ohho! Now Khushi is suspicious of Arnav, given all the poisoning from Lavanya!
Oh, that Karan! He couldn't a marry a girl, so he's off spiking her drinks!
Ouch! What a time to regain her memory! God save Arnav now.
Oh! So Arnav called Khushi to the farmhouse to get married!
Such a lovely end to this story! Very nice! So finally, everything is fine, and it's happily ever after!
GOOD!