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Posted: 17 years ago
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Long time ago there used to live in a village by a dense forest a young woodcutter called Jai Walia. He was married to a pretty village lass called Banidevi. She was very learned of all the Vedas and Shastras (which was not surprising since she came from the learned Brahmin Dixit clan) and had all virtues except that she was rather prone to snooping and poking her nose into matters which were none of her business. One day Banidevi insisted that her hubby take her out into the forest. JW strongly resisted as he feared that his wife with her jasoosi instinct may get both of them into trouble. However as she insisted JW reluctantly agreed on the condition that she would not go out investigating things on her own.

While in the wood, they came across a huge, dark and mysterious cave and naturally Banidevi's curiosity was triggerred off. "I want to explore the cave, Walia mahodaya" (Author's Note: Sadly this Banidevi too was rather disinclined to call her hubby by his Hindu name 😭😭😭) she said. JW demurred saying that there could be wild animals or evil spirits inside but Banidevi whose curiosity was too badly inflamed insisted on going in. JW finally gave in observing that as her husband it was his duty to accompany and protect his wife.

They had hardly gone in when Banidevi stepped upon a sleeping lion, who woke up with a roar and gave chase. JW and Banidevi ran for their lives. Then suddenly Banidevi remembered that she had read in one of the shastras that lions ran faster than men. She cried out "Walia Mahodaya stop!!! there is no point in running, the shastras tell us that men cannot outrun lions. Let us utilise these last few moments to thank our Creator for the life he gave us"

JW took a look back and said "I have not read the shastras but I do know that I cannot run faster than that lion. But I can run faster than you!!!" and saying that he took off. 😉😉😉

Rgds,

Priyanka

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Posted: 17 years ago
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😆

Nice one, Pri Di.

Lekin, ab to Bani ko chod do 😉 Woh ab jasoos kaha rahi, bechari Methalli 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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😆 😆 😆 Pri only you could have come up with Banidevi and Walia Mohodaya.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Priyanka Di,

too good,atleast Walia Mahodya is free from Banidevi's jaal.thanks for makin my day. 😆


preet 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hai, yeh Walia mahodaya bahut darpook nikala!! 😉 😉

And I thought he promised to stick by her side through thick and thin - I guess he is forgetting his saath pheras in his old age... 😉 😉

Pri, Good story though!! 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Good one as usual.

Too many short stories with morals floatign around.

At least KS did one thing - boost people's morale-gathering. I am cent per cent sure neither ZT nor BT had ever thought about it. 😉

Nevertheless, good one, anything favouring Walia mahodaya - the eternally bechara one!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Shoba/Sangs,

(Walia mahodaya bahut darpook nikala!! he promised to stick by her side through thick and thin - I guess he is forgetting his saath pheras in his old age...)

My short stories depict JW and BW as they are not as they ought to be.

😆

Rgds,

Pri
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Pri,

JB are anything but what we want them to be.

So ... sigh! 😕
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: majumdar

Shoba/Sangs,

(Walia mahodaya bahut darpook nikala!! he promised to stick by her side through thick and thin - I guess he is forgetting his saath pheras in his old age...)

My short stories depict JW and BW as they are not as they ought to be.

😆

Rgds,

Pri



I get it, Pri...(Tongue in Cheek, wink, wink) -

You just want Walia Mahoday to run away from Bani Devi....😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Well said Sho 😉 . Pri, we know you 😉

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