KaYa OS: Surprise

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Before starting the story...first lets know about the main leads of this story...as it is about RajeevKhandelwal andKritikaKamra...
Rajeev Khandelwal:unmarried and a film + tvactor...nowhere connected tomanjiri...lovekritika and she is his gf.
KritikaKamra:gf ofrajeev and a popular tvactress...and was heart broken after breakup withkarankundra...
Note: this is after reporters ended...

Kritika was sad as tomorrow was her bithday and rajeev cant come due to his film shoot...she slept with an upset mood but woke up when some sounds she heard...and was shocked to see him and her family...
Everyone: happy birthday kritika!
All shouted with rajeev holding the cake she got surprised and went towards them and hugged rajeev...
K:wow what a surprise! But raj tum toh Malaysia mei the na toh yaha kaise??
R: nahi ana chahiye tha mujhe ...ek toh mai aaya toh madam mujhe suna rahi hai...wapas chala mai...
K: nahi na...
He just smiled..and she cut the cake..
K:ab mera gift...
R: bolo kya chahiye...
K: i just want ki aaj tumhari nazrei sirf mujhpar ho...nothing else..
R: done...lekin meri nazrein tumse hatti kab hai...bas kaam ek majburi hai...
Later in morning she gave an interview...and then Rajeev gifted her an Audi...
K:wow raj...thankyou...
R: welcome...chalo...ek long drive par chalte hai
K: ofcourse...
They both sat and left...she was driving and he was sitting in the passenger seat...
R:kriti thoda slow drive karo...warna accident hojayega..
K: don't worry raj...u just enjoy
R: woh toh theek hai...lekin...
She den glared and he became quite...
K: raj...
R:haan kriti bolo...
K: do u like kabir..??
R: no i hate him...
K: i know because..he looks older than u
R:shutup..
K: no i won't... mere moo meri marzi
R: fine mai jata hu tum apni marzi chalati raho..
K: accha sorry dont get angry...
R: apne birthday ke din bhi gussa dilaati ho mujhe...
K:arey kaha na sorry...
She then looked at him...and then there was a bang to be heard...The car got crashed on a nearby tree..

Both were fine thankfully but the car's bonnet was damaged...he then came out to see the damage and got angry...she too came out...
R: perfect...just perfect...today only i gave u this car and u damaged it..who said to drive on a high speed and top of all u kept on looking at me and not on road... u fool answer me...

He said looking at her and she got tears as he shouted on her like hell...and she moved away...seeing her in tears he felt bad and went to pacify her(so sweet bf he is...kaashkikimujhebhiaisa hikoimiljaye.)
R: kriti ..i am sorry jaan...
He said holding her from behind...she tried pushing him but his hold was strong...
K: chod do raj...
R: never in my life i will leave u...and whats my mistake huh...just becoz i scolded u on ur carelessness...u got angry...
K: no i got angry becoz u shouted on me for the car...
R: really u think that...then let me clear kriti..that becoz of ur carelessness something bad could have happened and i care for u a lot that u know na...
She didn't replied..
R: how can u think that i am so selfish that i won't care about u...huh tell me?
K: sorry...
She said holding her ears...and turning around...
R: its ok...baby...
K: u are world's bestest boyfriend ever...
She said hugging him...
R:that i know...accha chalo mai apne driver ko call karta hu phir chalte hai..
He said breaking the hug and then called the driver...after call
R:accha kriti ek baat puchu...
K: pucho...u dont need any permission
R: did i came in between u and karan
K: who said that??
R: u know when we were doing reporters...on a promotional event media asked...
K: no raj..there was nothing at that time...aur media ka toh kaam hai story cook karne ka...
R: hmmm...
Then he started thinking...
K: Dont think too much...
R: i know...
K:accha raj...
R:haan...
K:u know i read an online fanfiction of kabir and ananya...
R: naam kya tha??
K: reporters*a new love story*...and it was amazing...
R: really story kya thi...
K: usme kabir aur ananya ki shaadi hogayi thi...and both lived happily...
R: hmmm...if i got time i will read it too...
K: so raj can we...
R:what??
K: act as kabir and ananya as a married couple...
R:what..no way...waise bhi kal meri flight hai..
K: jab tum aaoge tab...
R: kriti...
K: plzzz... today is my birthday na...
R: bithday na bhi hota toh bhi tum apni baat manva leti...
K: woh toh hai...but plz...
R: fine...kar lenge...
Then they went and in evening both enjoyed the birthday party organised by him...
The end..
So hope u enjoyed...

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Zannat18 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Rajiv and Kritika ..They are just
Now please Manjiri
Lastly Dishi darling
writer👏⭐️

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Zannat.

Rajiv and Kritika ..They are just

Now please Manjiri
Lastly Dishi darling
writer👏⭐️

Thanks for your wonderful comment
RamAayeHain thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Dishi that was awesome
Raj and Kriti are adorable
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: vssdp

Dishi that was awesome

Raj and Kriti are adorable

Thanks and yes aj kriti are awesome

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