KaSum TS: Valentine's Day! (last part on pg 2) - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey...M really loving it!
Dialogues...reason for d break up...emotions from both d ends felt genuine.
Dying to know what happens next!
( One suggestion : Unn donon ko na thoda aur tadpao! Esp. Kapil ko!
Duriyaan bhi hai jaroori...!! )
Plz update d next part soon.
Ur imagination z wonderful, must say!
:))
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Posted: 9 years ago
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LAST PART
She was standing alone when a familiar voice disturbed her chain of thoughts.
K: mujhe pata tha tum yahi milogi
He said in a cool voice but she didnt turned and still watched the waves. When he got no response he went towards her and put a file infront of her face
S: kapil kya kar rahe ho?? Hatao ise
She said all irritated and looked at him
K: yeh tumhare liye hai. Padho ise!!
She looked confused and he handed her the file
S: tum hi batao isme kya hai?
K: isme yeh likha hai ki you are not allowed to break up with me until you hate me
S: kapil mazaak band karo
She said when she found him smiling
K: accha ok ab lagta hai maafi maange bina tum nahi maanogi.
S: toh yeh kya hai?
she said showing the file
K: woh toh aise hi. I thought tum maan jaogi
He then sighed and knelt down and held his ears
K: i am sorry sumona. Now i wont say anything again
She gave a glance at him then looked away because insided her heart melted but she dont want to admit that.
K: sumona plz yaar i am sorry. Bina kisi galti ke maafi maang raha hu aur kya chahiye.?
S: kapil plz jao yaha se
K: no pehele maaf karo
S: tum jao plz
K: accha ok toh tum maaf nahi karogi
He stood up
K: mai marna pasand karunga agar tum mujhse baat nahi karogi
S: jao jo karna hai karlo
She turned away and then he slowly went near the infinite sea. She for few minutes heard some voices but when she heard no voices she turned to sea at the sea and found no one. She got shocked and ran towards water
S: kapil!!
she shouted a few times and tears started flowing again from her eyes again.
S: kapil maine tumhe maaf kiya pkz wapas aajao
And as she said those words he came out of water and held her from behind and when she felt him she turned and hugged him tightly
K: dekho apni baat se mukar mat jana
But as she realised he is perfectly fine she broke the hug and started hitting him
K: ouch yaar lag rahi hai
S: hiw dare you. Mere saath mazaakkyu kiya
K: arey yaar tumhe mannaane ke liye
He said finally grabbing her rebellious hands and held her close
K: you know what tumhare bina rehna mushkil hai isliye i thought ego chod ke maafi mangne mei hi bhalaayi hai but tum toh usse bhi nahi maani toh yeh karna pada. I am sorry i know it hurts badly
He said removing her tears and hugged her and she too hugged
S: plz dubaara aisa kabhi mat karna
K: nahi karunga i promise and you too promise aaj ke baad mujhse dur jaane ki socho gi bhi nahi
S: ok i promise
He smiled at her cutenesss and after a few minutes he said
K: pura valentines day yahi manaane ka iraada hai kya ya phir kahi ghumne chale
She listening this broke the hug
S: you planned something??
K: naa mai toh bas puch raha tha
S: fine chalo
And then they both headed towards her car
S: tumhari car kaha hai??
K: nahi laya became i knew mai tumhari car mei jaaunga
she smiled making him smile and both sat in her car, he on driver seat and she on passenger seat
K: so i will drop you in your home and after an hour i will pick you ready rehna.
S: lekin ham jaayenge kaha
K: dekhte hai
He started the car and they left for her home and after dropping her home he went his own
Sumona's house
S: kya pehnu mai
She sid looking at the wardrobe and then finally took ou the a white till knee strapoed dress which she bought a week ago only to wear it on this occassion.. After an hour he was standing near her house sitting on the bonnet of her car and looking tremendously handsome in a white shirt and black coat with jeans. And in a few minutes she came out and he instantly stood straight after looking at her. She was lookin beautiful in a white dress and mtching accessories and minimal makeup
K: you are beautiful as always
S: you too looking very handsome
Both smiled and went off in his house where he plannned a surprise for her with an exotic dinner, romantic dance and much more!!


Edited by Kapillian_girl - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: FanOfCreativity

Hey...M really loving it!
Dialogues...reason for d break up...emotions from both d ends felt genuine.
Dying to know what happens next!
( One suggestion : Unn donon ko na thoda aur tadpao! Esp. Kapil ko!
Duriyaan bhi hai jaroori...!! )
Plz update d next part soon.
Ur imagination z wonderful, must say!
:))

Thankyou so much dear. Your encouragement means a lot to me 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
Aw! Its so cute. He loves her so much and the cutest part was "File mein yeh likha hai ke tum mujhse break uo nahi kar sakti " I was going all Awww there.

Big big big thumbs up to u sweetie :) keep up the good work of entertaining us !!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kappumyfav

Aw! Its so cute. He loves her so much and the cutest part was "File mein yeh likha hai ke tum mujhse break uo nahi kar sakti " I was going all Awww there.

Big big big thumbs up to u sweetie :) keep up the good work of entertaining us !!!!!

thanks buddy even i enjoy writing on KaSum
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Chit15

Fabulous and wonderful update

Thanks for liking my work 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
Wow..it was very sweet and Romantic.. I loved it! Superb.. Keep up Ur delightful writing 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Naturegirl99

Wow..it was very sweet and Romantic.. I loved it! Superb.. Keep up Ur delightful writing 😊

Thankyou so much dear😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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lovely ,you write really well.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: tvluvr

lovely ,you write really well.

thankyou so much dear 😳😳

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