Manan Lovestories ...Fs Sanam Ray.. Note on pg 143 - Page 70

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Posted: 9 years ago

awesome update
fab5 is on mission to find nandini
nandini's past is really mysterious
she was kidnapped...
she always helped manik
but manik never saw her

though she loves him ...but she never told manik

though there were no manan moments ...but loved chachi's and manik convo
chachi is the new cupid
eagerly waiting to read nandini's diary

thanks for pm

take care

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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow awesome update...
Finally Nandu identity came out...
Manik was soo shocked...
Luved chachi as usual...
Nandu was kidnapped but by whom...
Manik got her diary...
Can't wait for next update..,
Luved it to the core..
Thnx for pm...
Update soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nandini ne kitna suffer kiya.. 😲 poor girl... she love him very much...
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb... Awesome... Mind blowing..

Loved the update so much.
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Posted: 9 years ago




sorry in advance for mistakes

Part 4(a)

In Malhotra Mansion.


Manik came back with his friends and after entering locked his room.

He thought

Chachi ne bola Nandini ka kidnap hoa? Kabbb... kahein os time harshad ne to nahi...?


Then he remembered their collage time... and started connecting all dots together.


He picked Nandini's tab and tried to open it but its was locked with some password.


Manik: Oh God how can I forget this point... Tab to le aya but password...ab is ka kya karon...(taking deep breath) Relax... relax Manik... soch... Password kya ho sakta hai...


Manik tried nandini's name as password but failed then he thought for a sec and then write his own name as password... but same result...


Manik POV


Soch Manik beta... Nandini is ka password kya rakh sakti hai... Soch...Date of birth...naaa ...then...think ...think... Suddenly some idea struck in his mind and he paused for a sec...



Manik: hmmm ho sakta hai... Now a days couple name aise hi to bante haan na... (self talk) Manik ka Ma nad Nandini ka Nan... Manan ... kya karon try karon isey...ya nahi... .


He closed his eyes and Nandini's face appeared before his eyes and he felt like she was saying : Manik jaldi karo na...


Manik at once opened his eyes and then typed Manan as password and tab screen appeared successfully ...


A smile came on Manik's face and he thought: really mein Jhalli hai...


Now he checked the pic folder 1st ... in which she saved more than 1000 pics and mostly of his...

Manik was very surprised to see the collection of his pics...and this collection refreshed his old memories...Almost all happy and sad incidents, nok jhok ,teasing sessions with his friends came infront of his eyes like a movie...


On some pics she edited some captions like "Love you Hamesha", "My Sohna Munda ( wink emo)", " Love of my Life",

"My Karwa Karela"(Manik laugh on this caption with his angry young man type pic)e.t.c


After seeing that folder he slide the screen and then click on Notes folder.

In that folder he observed that she sub divided this folder in Professional and personal notes and on personal notes again there was a lock .


Manik blabber in frustration :Ufff phir se lock...God knows is larki ne kaha kaha lock laga k rakha hoga.


He again tried the same password " Manan" here but on next moment his face fell with disappointment.


Manik in tension started threading his hairs and thought: Now what?... Ab kya karon...kya ho sakta hai ab is ka password.


In frustration he slides back the screen and came back to the main manu.He opened that photos option once again and started seeing all those pics again...


While sliding the screen his finger stopped on 1 pic and he with austonished expression thought: How can I miss this pic.( he knew that the pic was the good example of Manipulation editing coz Manan didn't see each other in college time)


The pic was like Manik was hugging Nandini whole heartedly .and a caption was there on this pic "Manan Hamesha".


Manik speak this caption with sweetest voice: ...Manan Hamesha... and his frustrated face changed into the smiling one like he found some kind of treasure.


He again slides back the screen and again clicked on Notes option , then he clicked on personal notes and write this " Manan Hamesha as password".


And he was right... his inner soul started doing bhangra on this success...He himself didn't knew that Y he was this much eager to know all about them and specially Nandini...

He very anxiously moved his finger on screen and came on starting of those notes ...


And on next moment he started reading them.


Nandini's Personal notes on different days and times


Amma Appa why u left me in this world...U know na yahan mujh se koi pyaar nahi karta... Sub kahte haan main bht unlucky hoon...

Appa u know ajj amms ne mujhe app ki life ki story batae... I am very proud of you appa... App ne apney hard time ko kitne acha se face kiya na... and Appa I am your daughter na so I ll also face the difficulties of my life like u...


Amma u know kal mera college mein 1st day hai... your nandu's 1st day at college...(hehehe)I miss u amma... I know app hoti na to ajj mujhe itnaaa bara sa leacture milta... like " Nandu beta college main apna khyal rakha, larae to bilkul kisi se nahi karna, acha acha friends banana, aur khooob parhna" so Amma don't worry main yeh sub karon gi" Ok.


Amma u don't know ajj 1st day pe kya hoa...he said I am his GF... can u believe it...jab se college me enter hoi all girls were sighing on his name...all the notice boards of our colg were full with his pic ... Manik Malhotra yeh... Manik Malhotra wooo...and in canteen when that villan of our college was misbehaving with me ... he came from no where and said... Yes She is my GF so leave her... yipeee Amma his GF... Amma u know he is so handsome... wo app kya kahti thi... Haan... My prince charming types...heehehe... Oh No Ayiappa how can I forget... Mujhe to os k name k ilwaya kuch pata hi nahi... ab kya?


O Amma I am sooo sooo sooo happy today... U know I clicked his pic secretly... app dekh rahe ho na k wo kitna cute lag raha tha...today I got this new info about him that... he has 4 friends in his life... and they are famous as FAB 5 and they are just like his 2nd family...they also live with him in his house.


Ayiyooo ayiappa yeh hamare colg k villan ki problem kya hai... kyo har time mere hero k peechey para rahta hai... fight karne ka kitna shoq hai na osey ... ayiappa I think isi ki wajha se mera hero na... karwa karela ban gya... ( sigh) app dekh rahe ho na... kitna gusa karta hai... ab is angry Mnaik Malhotra ka main kya karon ayiappa.


Amma today I am in so much tension plz meri help karo na...U know about My Manik and his friends na... U also know about that Harshad hamare college ka villan...Amma I have a feeling like k yeh villan kuch ghalat karne ki soch raha hai... Manik k sath... U know main ne osey phone pe baat karte suna... K Manik, oski family and friends ki daily ki report osey di jae... Amma I am worried about him... app batao na main kya karon os k liye...


Thank you ayiappa... Ajj app ne meri time pe help kar di... nahi to mera Manik...Thank you thank you thankyou so much ayiappa... ...Amma u know ajj ayiappa ne meri kitni help ki... U know ajj jab mein class k liye ja rahe thi to again main ne os villan ko dekha kisi ko paise dete hoe... and that smile... his devilish smile told me k yeh zaror phir se kuch game plan kar raha hai... and Amma I was right...In half time... in parking lot he attacked on Manik and his friends...wo to acha hoa mujhe princi time pe mil gaye aur main ne unhe sub kuch bata k parking lot me bhej diya... Nahi to...


Manik's facial expression change from surprise to shock... He thought...yeh... isey sub pata tha...is ne... Nandini ne os din princi ko wahan bheja... I cant believe it... Then he read further



Appa today I saw that purity in him which I saw and heard about your personality and u know appa ... he is such a pure soul... Appa u know he sold his fav car and from that money he purchased some shares on his friends name...for their future ... For their band... and no one knows about it except...me


Amma see Mera prince charming ajj gaate hoe kitna hot and sexy lag raha tha...I really love him Amma ( shy)... Mera Manik... Muahhh.(blush)


Manik's expression again changed ... He blushed after reading it like she really kissed him... he takes a deep breath , closed his eyes and rested his head on headboard while his mind started imaginng such scene.


Nandini with his usual smiling face and a lil blush came near him... with shy eyes she gazed in his eyes deep... And very slowly she cover the distance between their face...he felt her hot breath fanning his skin ...she again looked in his eyes and on next moment she tilted her head and kissed him on his lips...


He with a jerk came back to reality... after imagining this with...Nandini...


In confused state of mind he thought

How... How can I imagine this ... A kiss with Doc...I mean Nandini... What is happening with me...


NEXT

Pyaar ka imtehaan



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Edited by cute-aly - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow awesome update...
Manik is reading her diary...
All the password r Manan aww...
Nandu has a sad past..
Manik was soo shocked after reading her diary...
And he imagined her aww...
Luved it..
Waiting for next...
Update soon ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awww
U knw I loved Nandu's cute cute passwords the most
Loving this a lottt
Sooo happy that Manik is slowly knowing all about Nandu
Waiting for them to be together
Awesomeee update
😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
beautiful update
please continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing
manik is genius
nandus note these are awesome
poor soul have so much of love
for manik
loved it totally
thanks for pm
waiting for next
update fast

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