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Posted: 9 years ago
Part c:

Nice chapter!!!

Actually Tara ko itna takleef dene ke baad mj ko yakleef me dekhna thoda achcha lag raha!!!

He has to realize Tara's pain!!!!

BT Tara is also in pain !!!!

Mj apni dill or dimaag ke conflict me Tara ko na kho de !!!

Had ho gaya dill ki baat nai sunta !!!

Itna Jo tadap raha hai behtar hota jaa ke Tara se milta!!!

Pata nai Tara ka intezaar kab khatm hoga


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Posted: 9 years ago
It was Fab chapter!!!
Ray of hope I can find now in their relationship !!!

Great that dadaji talked to mj !!!

It was very much indeed action by dadaji!!!

Abhi bhi mj khud confess nai kar raha dost ki baat kar raha hai!!!
BT now he realised that his life with Tara not without her!!!

Ab inhien har jagah Tara nazar aa rahi pehle door bhagta that!!!
Kya game plan kiya or sach nikalwa liya Tara se !!!

Haye kitni dukhi hai Tara !!!

Aaja mj jaldi aaja...

Next update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Khadeja

Wonderful Update ⭐️⭐️⭐️

Title is superb 😛
Thank you😃
Dadaji did understand MJ well 👍🏼
This was good that Dadaji had gone to him 😊
MJ said his problem as his friend 😛
But Dadaji knew very well, it was him 😉
And Dadaji trying to find out what is the problem between them 😛

Wow !!! Dadaji explained so beautifully what a woman wants 👏
Indirectly he also said MJ to not let his and Tara's life to be ruined 😊
He is a wise man who knows how to handle kids😉
This conversation is great 👏
You write it so well 👏 👏 👏
Thank you😳
Poor MJ forgot Tara was not at home 😒
He was missing her so much
Her all things remind their moments 😔
But he returned their room and now wanted her by his side 😃

Again song selection is my fab 😃 👏
Great to know that😃
Tara was also sad 😒
And this was noticed by her students 😊
They were trying to find out what's the problem, that's sweet 😊
Now these kids are adults and adults are kids😉
Wow !! what a game 👍🏼
Dil ki baat zubaan pe aajati hai 😃
O ho !!! Finally that's came in Tara's mouth that she was missing MJ 😛

MJ could sleep peacefully because now his heart knows what he wants...
Tara also had a hope 😊
Yes😊
Update is great 👏 👏 👏

Eagerly waiting to see or visualize them together 😃


Happy to know you loved this update😃

I know i have taken too long in updating fiction, but now as my exams are over i can finish it soon😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kumari27

Part b : the drift :



I was crying after reading all lines .!!!!!
Awww. ...
It was emotional chapter !!!!

Kitna akdoo hai ye mj ek baar bhi Tara se baat nai kiya!!!

Kitna apt song tha ispe bhi mj nai pighala!!!!
Bairi piya

Bechari Tara husband aisa mila hai ki bs isi ka band bajata rahta hai!!!

Finally Tara ne paintings dekh liya !!!
Phir bhi mj bhaag raha hai jhooth bol raha hai!!

Tara ne sahi kaha life me pyar ko kitna na intezaar karwao ki life hi khatm ho jaye!!!!

Usne bhi mj ko cigarette ka box de diya aur karte bhi toh kya yeh khadoos manta hi nai

Thank you for reading and loving it 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kumari27

Part c:

Nice chapter!!!

Actually Tara ko itna takleef dene ke baad mj ko yakleef me dekhna thoda achcha lag raha!!!

He has to realize Tara's pain!!!!

BT Tara is also in pain !!!!

Mj apni dill or dimaag ke conflict me Tara ko na kho de !!!

Had ho gaya dill ki baat nai sunta !!!

Itna Jo tadap raha hai behtar hota jaa ke Tara se milta!!!

Pata nai Tara ka intezaar kab khatm hoga


Mj ko ab samjh aaya hoga Tara ka dard
Dil jeet jayega
😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kumari27

It was Fab chapter!!!

Ray of hope I can find now in their relationship !!!
Yes, finally 😃

Great that dadaji talked to mj !!!

It was very much indeed action by dadaji!!!
MJ needed expert advice 😊

Abhi bhi mj khud confess nai kar raha dost ki baat kar raha hai!!!
BT now he realised that his life with Tara not without her!!!
Khadoos hai time too lega naa😉😉😉

Ab inhien har jagah Tara nazar aa rahi pehle door bhagta that!!!
Kya game plan kiya or sach nikalwa liya Tara se !!!
students for more intelligent then MriAra 😉😉

Haye kitni dukhi hai Tara !!!

Aaja mj jaldi aaja...

Next update soon

Thanks for loving it😃😃😃

Updating soon 😃😃😃
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Posted: 9 years ago


The Wait
Part a

Next morning, Mrityunjay got up and found himself happier remembering that the next day Tara was coming back. "Tara I am waiting for you to come. Once you are here I will never allow you to go anywhere leaving me alone. I have too many things to say to you and to hear from you...Tara please come fast ...your Mrityunjay is alone here."

Today Mrityunjay was finding each moment hard without Tara. He was looking at the clock again and again to check whether it's fine or not. He even called his secretary and asked him what time it was to verify that his wrist watch, laptop, phone and office watch all are working fine. He was getting bored in the office and so left for home early. On the other side, the students won their competition and were celebrating it.

After reaching home, he switched on the radio as it was time for Tara's favourite show on radio. He brought the sketch board to their room and started sketching Tara.

The radio played.

~Mujh mein tu, tu hi tu basa,

Naino mein, jaise khwaab saa

Jo tu na ho toh pani pani naina

Jo tu naa ho toh main bhi hunga main naa

Tujhi se mujhe sab ataa~


Listening to this, Mrityunjay stopped and started thinking about Tara, "How she would react when she would come to know her wait is over? Will she smile? Or she will cry? Or she will say nothing." Thinking this, he portrayed Tara's three emotions in one picture. He portrayed a blushing Tara, keeping her eyes lowered, smiling making curls at the end of her lips and tears like pearls on her cheeks. He was quietly adoring the sketch. Then he came near it and touched it lovingly as if it was Tara,

"Tara my love for you is till eternity. I was like a rock on the road; you came into my life like a fresh breeze of air. You snatched me from the darkness around me and brought me to light. Tara I was too rude to you, come my love, your Mrityunjay is incomplete without you. We will fulfil our dreams together."



Then he sat down to watch their Nainital trip pictures when he remembered that the next day it will complete five months when for the first time he saw Tara on the terrace. "Tomorrow my Tara is coming, and it will be five months since when I saw her for the first time. What should I do? Should I go and pick her from the station? What should I do to make it memorable?" Mrityunjay was nervous thinking what to do and how.


"Should I go and ask Dadaji for some suggestion?" He thought biting his nails. "No...it will be too embarrassing to ask him that."

He closed his eyes and started thinking whom to ask and how. He ruffled his hair and said excitedly, "Yug ... Yug will tell me how and what to do?"

"But how will I ask him about this?" After thinking for a while, a smile brought a spark to his face and he called Yug.

"Yug ... How are you?"

"Bhai I am fine and you know we won the competition." He shouted.


"Yug I want to ask you how you will propose to your girlfriend."

Hearing this, Yug checked his phone whether he was talking to Mrityunjay or it was someone else. Because he didn't congratulate him and was talking about proposing to his girlfriend!! Then he understood that may be he was asking this for himself, there might had been a small fight between Mrityunjay and Tara and now he wants to propose to her once again and mingle with her.


"Bhai...If I had to propose, I would like my girlfriend to arrive at the station. I would love to give her a bouquet and then propose to her at the station. After that, I would gift her a dress and take her out on a romantic dinner. " Yug suppressed his laughter thinking how Mrityunjay would do all this.


Mrityunjay cut the call saying "Bye" as soon as Yug completed his sentence.

Yug informed about this conversation to his friends. "Wow...Bhai is going to propose to Ma'am." exclaimed Vasu.

"Shh...Don't shout...It's a secret ...Ma'am should not come to know about this." said Yug.

All joined their hands and said, "Yes".

"Let me go and inform Ma'am about Bhai's call and see her reaction." Yug winked.

Yug came to Tara and informed her about Mrityunjay's call to him and said, "He called us to congratulate us on our victory." Saying this, Yug left that place.


"He has not talked to me since two days. He called Yug but even didn't ask about me." Tara was getting angry with Mrityunjay's silence.

Seeing Tara's cold reaction, he understood Ma'am was angry with Bhai. But once she would come to know what Bhai was going to do, she would be happy. "Should I go and inform her?" asked Yug seeing Tara sad. "No Yug...let Ma'am be angry tonight because when she will see Bhai tomorrow at the station, she will be the happiest person on Earth." Said Nandini, daydreaming how it would look like.

"See, who is talking sensibly." All laughed hearing Nandini's suggestion, but agreed on it as it was the best.


After talking to Yug, Mrityunjay was not getting what to do? Whether to follow Yug's advice or not? "Uff... Now I had asked him but should I follow this ...or not... Will she like this??? Or she will get angry with this..." And slept thinking about it.

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Thanks for reading 😊
Thanks Shaina_b for making it read worthy 😃

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Edited by Archi21 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow after such a long time...u gave a beautiful update..while reading it gone back to my crazy ebi days..
Loved it..
Please update soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update!!!
Now mj understands what Tara meant to him.

Nainital pics ko dekh dill ko behla raha hai...

Kisi kaam me dill nai lag raha...

Propose karne ka tareeka itna direct poochega...kamaal kar diya hai Tara ke pyaar ne...

Yug bhi kya idea diya hai...

Waiting for next...
How mj propose to her life...tara

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