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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: TINAMONI

Wow after such a long time...u gave a beautiful update..while reading it gone back to my crazy ebi days..

Loved it..
Please update soon..

Sorry for late I was having my final exams😳

Glad to know I was able to take u back to crazy EBI days😃
Thanks for loving it😃
Updating this weekend😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: kumari27

Nice update!!!

Now mj understands what Tara meant to him.

Yup, 😃

Nainital pics ko dekh dill ko behla raha hai...

Kisi kaam me dill nai lag raha...

Propose karne ka tareeka itna direct poochega...kamaal kar diya hai Tara ke pyaar ne...
Hahaha pyar mein pagal ho gaya hai😆

Yug bhi kya idea diya hai...

Waiting for next...
How mj propose to her life...tara
Let's see how it goes😃 😉


Thanks for reading😃
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Posted: 8 years ago


Next morning Mrityunjay got up late as he had slept very late last night thinking what to do and what not to do. After one hour Tara's train would arrive and Mrityunjay was still at home. It was a thirty minute drive from the mansion to the station. Mrityunjay got ready soon and again gave a thought to Yug's idea.

"Ok let's follow it." Saying this, he was about to start the car when he remembered he doesn't know what flower Tara likes.

"Oh...God...What will I do now? She knows me so well and I don't know what she likes. Now what??? Yug... Your idea is very difficult to follow..." After thinking for a while, he took his phone and dialed Vasu.


Vasu was surprised seeing Mrityunjay's call on her phone,

"He never called me since our return from Nainital and today he is calling..."

She signalled her friends that Mrityunjay Bhai was calling. All gathered around her, she put her phone on speaker.

"Hello."

"Hello Vasu."

"Yes Bhai."

"I called you to congratulate you. Yesterday you won the competition... " He stopped.

"Thank you Bhai."

"Vasu I would like to know what colour flowers you like, I was thinking of gifting you." He said hesitatingly.

"Vasu , he is asking this not for you, it's for Ma'am to execute Yug's plan." Meethi murmured in Vasu's ear.

"Bhai to gift to your loved ones or to propose or to say sorry, one should bring red roses."

"Ok." He said thoughtfully and cut the call.

She then moved near where Tara was sitting and asked loudly, "Bhai are you coming to the station to meet us?" and acted as if Mrityunjay was there on the other side of the phone.

"Mrityunjay is coming to the station, oh...it will be a pleasure to see him after a gap of two days. I was thinking I would be able to see him tonight but he is coming at the station ...I don't need to wait till night." Tara was excited thinking about Mrityunjay coming at the station.


As soon as the train arrived, Tara stood on the compartment's gate to get a glimpse of Mrityunjay. Her eyes were searching him in the crowd of people on the platform, trying to get a glimpse of him. But she was not able to see him. She got down from the train and started walking towards the waiting room. There was a tea stall near the waiting room playing songs. Ten minutes passed but there was no sign of Mrityunjay at the station. Tara was losing hope of seeing him now.


~Teri khata hai mere jiya unpe bharosa kyun tune kiya

Sab jhoote jhoote waade the unke chal peeche peeche aaya tu jinke

Woh piya aaye na, Woh piya aaye na ~

Hearing this song Tara's eyes were filled with tears. "Yes why did I think he would come to receive me at the station when he thinks I am not a perfect match for him? Every time I have a hope and he breaks it every time." But still her eyes were fixed on the station's entry gate in the hope that he might come.


Mrityunjay, after buying a bouquet of red roses, reached the station but was sitting in the car thinking how he would say his feelings to Tara, what he would say when Yug called.

"Where are you Bhai?"

He immediately got down from the car and took the bouquet with him.


Tears from Tara's eyes were about to fall when she saw in the crowd of people her Mrityunjay entering the station.

~Tum ko dekh ke yun lagta hai koi bichda khwab aaya hai~

Tears that were bound in her eyes flowed out of it with his arrival.

~Barso lambi raat se guzre subaha ka jhonka laut aaya hai~

Her wait for Mrityunjay was over, although he was late but he arrived and that was of more importance.

~Bahut der jaagi bahut door aayi khwab ne chhodi na meri kalai~

She was ready to wait for him forever but his arrival shortened it to a few steps.

~Kab se meri saans ruki thi mujhe saans aayi mujhe saans aayi ~

Seeing Tara, Mrityunjay quickly walked to her.

Tara cleaned her face and stood there as if nothing had happened.

They were seeing each other and satisfying their eyes that see my love is here with me. The students were watching them from a distance. Seeing them immersed in each other, they left for their homes.

Mrityunjay and Tara were quietly standing and looking at each other, neither of them was able to say a word. Their hearts were beating loud and fast. In the crowd of people, their heartbeat was louder than the noise of the people at the station. For them there was no one except each other at the station.

Mrityunjay got a jerk from the man standing behind him and it broke their trance. They moved their eyes away from each other. Mrityunjay gave the bouquet to Tara and wanted to tell her about his feelings when his phone rang.

He rolled his eyes and said in his mind, "Uff...secretary you found this time appropriate to call me when I was just going to tell her about my feelings." He took that call and then turned to Tara.

She was waiting eagerly to hear something from Mrityunjay, because the way he had given the bouquet it was clear he wanted to say something. There was a spark in her eyes, thirst in her ears to hear it and get her most awaited wish to hear it fulfilled.

"Tara..." He took a deep breath and said, "I have to go to the office after dropping you home."

Her eyes were open wide in complete shock at what she heard just now. "That was all that you wanted to say Mrityunjay?" her eyes questioned him.

"Did you give her the bouquet to say this? You idiot Mrityunjay. " He yelled at himself for saying this. Mrityunjay took Tara's bag and Tara followed him.

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Thanks for reading 😊
Thanks Shaina_b for making it read worthy 😃

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Edited by Archi21 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Fabulous chapter👏
So in this chapter tara's wait will be over..😉

Mj bhi kamaal hai...ideas toh poochh liye bt execution me problem..😆

So he want to propose bt don't know abt favourite flower..bad😆

Now train arrived ...tara is waiting & confused at same time...that her prince charming will come or not😳

So mj called vasu ..chalo itni akal hai bande me...😛

Bouquet lene me itna der karega toh propose kaise karega...😉

Thank God he arrived b4 tara cry...😉

Great song selection...the way u putted between line just awesome... feeling quotient ko high kar diya👏

So he come & give her flowers but next he got confused how to start...

Tumhien ghar chhod deta hoon...bechari tara...


Overall it was great chapter 👏
Edited by kumari27 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
wow!!! superb just awesome 👏

finally have read all the parts & i just loved it
a great storyline beautifully written & amazing updates
all songs you have used are so beautifull & all are my favourites
every line of each song perfectly suits the situation & describes miara's emotions their feelings wery well


thank you very much shai for pm!!! ❤️ 😛
this is the 1st time when i have read a long fanfiction having so many parts rather then RK/RN/LRL stories, not only read but enjoyed too & shai!! you are absolutely right dear!!! I truly liked every bit of it 😛

i have not watched EBI so i have no idea about miara but after reading this story i realised that miara as a couple are just the perfect & in this story i love & respect tara's character
shai i completly agree with you they are just like our beloved rajveer-naina in some manners 😳
now i'm egerly waiting for their confession & next update

Archi!!! dear you are an amazing & fabulous writer thanks for such a lovely story!!!
plz do pm me whenever you update
Edited by npksk8495 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
It was a nice update eager to know why mrityunjay wants to kill himself
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Posted: 8 years ago
Really nice introductory the way you introduce
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Posted: 8 years ago
Oh so mrityunjay and Tara goanna meet and rudra he is as cunning as show lolzzz the way he said lgta hai iski band bjne vaali hai
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Posted: 8 years ago
Really loved the way you intact the character of mrityunjay like serial helping nature yet wouldn't let anyone know
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Posted: 8 years ago
Really a nice updates and story love the way you described lolzzz Secretary ko toh maar hi daalna chaahiye I mean kya timing hai... Lolzz...

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