SHRAHAAN OS(CRAVING FOR MOM'S LOVE)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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If anyone thinking that it is a romantic one😆😆.I want to clear it right away.It is not.😆.It is a friendly Os.I am weird but I love shradha,the way she cried on that dhruv saying that he loves thapki and all.My heart melted.So I wrote this OS.

SHRAHAAN OS : CRAVING FOR MOM'S LOVE

Shradha is in her room ,folding dhruv's clothes and suddenly she sees picture of Dhruv and Bihaan .She goes to flashback.

FLASH BACK

Shradha after the pregnancy drama ,she is thrown out of the house and she is now doing work as a fashion designer. One day Dhruv comes to her boutique unknowingly..Shradha sees him and is happy..She runs towards him only to listen his harsh words..She is totally broken by the rude words of Dhruv.

Dhruv,the person whom she married irrespective of her bad nature loved only him and changed herself for him.Now he hates her so much.Shraddha wants to cry aloud,but as she is the owner of the boutique.She controlled her emotions and said Pallavi, her assistant.Pallavi,please take care of the boutique today .Shradhaa says I am not feeling well today,I will go to my home and take rest'.

Bihaan and thapki are best friends now,but still they have not confessed their love.Bihaan for some work went outside.Shraddha thinks of going to that beautiful fort which is in outskirts and she always goes there whenever her heart feels like crying..Bihaan sees Shraddha after so many days in traffic jam sobbing silently.Bihaan thinks she might be in trouble and follows her.They both finally reach that fort one after the other.Shraddha silently sitting their thinking of Dhruv's words and crying.Then suddenly Bihaan's words startled her 'So the girl who only makes other people cry is crying today Bihaan says..Shraddha is shocked as she never expected Bihaan to be there.She says how come you are here,is there anything you forgot to insult me? As she said she unknowingly cried out louder.My life my love Dhruv had left me in this plight..Bihaan heart melts as he had never seen Shradha cry so furiously..Bihaan sits calmly beside Shradha..Shradha says I think no one in this world likes me..That's why my mom left me when I was born,then my dad gave me all the freedom and I thot I can do anything in life.I have enjoyed parties,have many boyfriends..I am like a free bird.Then I got married to dhruv,who changed my life.Before I never cared for anyone,but now I love dhruv and can do anything for him .I thought I will lead a happy life with him.Then one night he told me that he still loves thapki and can never stop loving her.My life has shattered that day.But I thot dhruv will change with time.But he always craved for only thapki.So what I did was only to get my love back .I know I shouldn't have done that pregnancy drama,but dhruv has left me with no other choice.

Bihaan was carefully listening her words.Shradha said dhruv left me now and hates me and my dad is also not talking with me'.My loved ones left me.She cries like a small child covering her face with her hands.Bihaan tries to console Shradha..Bihaan says Shradha bhabhi,I know it is a hard time for you,this all happened because of me'.I should not have married thapki.Then all this you have faced would have never happened.

Bihaan says as you have lost your mother.I have also lost my parents.Then I got bauji's and this family love.But I craved for maa's love which I never got.Shradha bhabhi you know maa always loved dhruv more than me and it always used to make my heart think that I am an orphan.

Shradha seeing Bihaan said What a pity Bihaan ji'.I don't have maa and you have maa but she don't loves you.Bihaan says bhabhi whenever I miss my mother ,I see the stars and become satisfied that she is in between them.You ttoo do that and you will feel relieved.

Bihaan said Shradha bhabhi,I want to say only with affection,sacrifice and without any selfishness ,without any lies ,you can win love.You have thought of getting dhruv's love by destryoing thapki.But if you tried to get dhruv's love without any conditions.Dhruv heart might have melted towards you.You have thought of getting dhruv's love forcefully by lying and deceiving him but the result is infront of you today.

Bihaan says Shradha bhabhi,time will cure everything.If you love dhruv unconditionally,please be patient and he will be back to you again.Love can even change a rock.

Shraddha says Why my mom is not with me when I need her more now'.If she is with me now,I would have learnt about love from her and I would have cried on her lap'. Bihaan says just a minute bhabhiji,please wait for me.

He goes and after some time get lanterns.Shradha bhabhi Come let us leave this lantern in memory of our mother's as today is mothers day'.Shraddha sees Bihaan's concern and is touched.They both lit the lantern and together leave it.

Now shraddha is feeling relieved as she thought there is some one who is similar to her.Shradha sees Bihaan and says Bihaan'I never thought I would say this with you, but I am feeling better now because of you'.They both smile at each other.

FLASH BACK

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Shradha now back to present.She is happy as dhruv has forgiven her and accepted her.

She smiles thinking of Bihaan Today my biggest enemy is my best friend and like a younger brother to me.'

As it is puja time she goes to temple where everyone gathers at morning time.She lits the aarti ,then Bihaan comes there .Seeing Shradha ,he comes near to the temple and folds his hands,closes his eyes,starts singing dum maaro dum,mit jaaye hum..Bolo shubah shaam ,Hare krishna hare raam..Bihaan now opens his eyes slowly to see Shradha's reaction.Shradha fumes in anger and says Youuu , but seeing his child like witty smile,they both burst out laughing and they give a hi-fi to each other.Then Bihaan says Shradha bhabhiji and Shradha says Bihaan devarji in a funny tone.They again burst out laughing.

HAPPY MOTHER'S DAY TO EVERYONE

MOTHER IS SOME ONE GIVEN BY GOD TO TAKE CARE OF US IN THIS WORLD AND PROTECT US.SO LOVE YOUR MOTHER WHAT EVER THE CIRCUMSTANCES MAY BE.DON'T FORGET TO SAY HER THAT YOU LOVE HER.

I have written this OS as Bhabhi-devar Jodi is almost like a mother-child relationship.Hope you like it.It is some what lengthy.Sorry for that.Share your comments.

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manaan thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I love this, so so much. Actully I love shardha character. So does monica. And if this dever bhabie equations come in show it would be fun watching.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome OS Tabi 👍🏼
i love Monica's acting that's why i have always secretly wished that cv's turn her character positive so that she stays in Dhruv's life and PN forever.
even if she remains negative i really want ShraHaan to work as a team at least once...that would be too much fun 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb..never thought of something lime this...well scripted..well written..keep suprizing us with sone awesome out track ideas..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is so cute Tabi!! I love this duo so much be it their fights, their funny moments or their angry form i.e fire scene they are awesome together!!
Their Babhi-Devar rishta is beautifully portrayed in your os!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb yaar! I love Shraddha and here you presented my dream Shraddha! Thanks!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is soo cute 🤗 i loved this one, loved ur idea 👏
Beautifully written for our devar bhabhi shrahaan
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Posted: 9 years ago
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this is so cute nice idea... loved it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very beautiful..devar bhabi maa..3 cutest relationship in 1 shot..loved it..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I loved it.. For a change, the OS is so good to read.

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