[FF] #YKAGH... pyaar ki iss rah par CH 74 PG-98 - Page 51

Originally posted by: SelahJoy

Bichara Rahul FF ma b saas sasur ke liye kre or drame me b or return me kia mile thaper

mere FF mein no slaps for rahul

Originally posted by: sweetcathy29

mere FF mein no slaps for rahul

he is lovable and so is maanvi that's for sure

don't want annoying characters in my FF... not from protagonists or antagonists

😆

plzzz yr drama ke writer ko kidnap kr ke us ko sara drama dhikao us ko kch idea ho ke wo kia bakwass likh raha
or ap se writing classes le

Originally posted by: SelahJoy

plzzz yr drama ke writer ko kidnap kr ke us ko sara drama dhikao us ko kch idea ho ke wo kia bakwass likh raha
or ap se writing classes le

I m not a professional just writing for fun

one update due for today

Chapter 36

Upamanyu~ "Yeh sab kya hal kar diya tum mere sangeet ka! Kisi ko kadar nahi hai. Hum kuch din hospital kya gaya har jagah dhool ho gaya hai. Sab saaf karna padega. Aise mein hum riyaaz kaise karega? Agar maanobi hota to..." his eyes spots maanvi and rahul at the doorstep. "Arre maanobi... dekho tumhara maa ko humare sangeet ka bilkul bhi kadar nahi hai. Sab tanpura, sitar... sab par kitna dhool ikhatta ho gaya hai. Aisa koi karta hai kya?"
[*upu using his Bengali touch on and after every sentence ... sorry I don't know Bengali language. Please bear with me.]

Maanvi tries to calm him down "Baba... iss mein maa ki koi galti nahi hai. Dada ko apne kaam ko bhi sambhalna tha aur maa pure din to aapke saath thi, phir ghar ko kaise sambhalti? Ab main aa gayi hoon to main abhi sab dhool saaf kar deti hoon. Theek hai?"

Upamanyu~ "Nahi, tum dhool saaf nahi karega. Tumko allergy ho gaya to? Tumko aaram karna chahiye. Hum aur tumhara dada milkar sab saaf karlega. Hum jab tak sab saaf karta hai, tum humko jaldi se ek raag gaa kar sunao. Hum jaanna chahta hai ki tum shaadi ke baad riyaaz kiya ki nahi?"

Maanvi~ "Maine riyaaz kiya baba."

Upamanyu~ "To jaldi se humko ek raag gaa kar sunao."

Maanvi sings tumi sandhyaro meghomala which upamanyu enjoys but rahul could barely make out the meaning, but he still loved the way she sings.

Upumanyu~ "Khoob bhalo! Very good! Humko pata tha tum apna riyaaz nahi chodega. Akir tum beti kiska hai." Then he resumes his dust cleaning while humming the same song.

Rahul pulls maanvi close and whispers to her "Tum acha gaati ho. Par ab zara gaane ka matlab bhi bataogi?"

Maanvi smiles and shakes her head lightly in a no'. Rahul continues "Sochlo... agar maine khud se pata lagaya to baad mein main kya karunga?"

Maanvi~ "Acha ji? Aur aap khud pata kaise lagayenge?"

Rahul smiled "Tum kya baba adam ke zamane se ho?"

Maanvi~ "Kya?" she didn't understood what rahul was trying to hint.

Rahul took out his phone and indicated to it by his eyes "Iss se... Tum shayad baba adam ke zamane se ho isliye bhool jati ho ki internet par easily information mil jati hai. Tumhare gaane ka translation bhi mil jayega."

Maanvi wanted to reply to his taunt but harsh returned from his work so she stayed quite. Shilpa brought some hot pakoras with pudina chutney and tea for everyone. They all enjoyed the evening snacks with light conversations.

Raj and Shaleen had been discussing about his album promotion ever since producers proposed the small changes. Shaleen was happy that he will have his lime-light all to himself and not shadowed by maanvi like it did during the first-look party. Also now that raj has been giving more of his time to promote his album, Shaleen could barely believe his stars working in his favour.

Shaleen~ "Dad... since you are helping me with promotion of my album, who will take care of rahul's album?"

Raj~ "Don't worry about him, he has got my team working for him. So, its better that I give my time to build your career like I did when rahul was entering the musical industry. After-all you are my son just like rahul."

They decided to do a new launch party where they can do a press release about the changes in his album. Shaleen can have his first taste of lime-light in front of all the media and world where raj will announce his place as both the teacher and as the manager. Adding raj's name behind Shaleen would provide him enough boost that will make it easy for Shaleen to establish himself in the musical industry.

Nisha couldn't believe that raj was finally taking interest in shaleen's career. To her it seemed all too fake and forged rather than a choice made on his own. She was not wrong to suspect raj because he never had been so forthcoming towards shaleen's singing career. Anyone in her place would suspect this sudden change. Nisha remembered her spat with Shaleen so she decided not to talk about this with him as of yet but wait for the right moment.

Nisha~ "First I need to find the reasons behind this sudden change, otherwise its not possible that dad would dedicate his time for anyone else besides rahul. Something big must have happened. But who could know about it for sure?"

Nisha was never a person who could resist digging for secrets even when there was none. So how could she ever stop herself when the certainty of finding secrets was this high.

Nisha~ "Mom...mom might know about it but even if she knew, she no longer tells me anything that could become a gossip treasury for me. Dadi dada ji never cares enough about these matters so chances of them knowing something is close to nil. Who else is left? Payal... she is way too smart knowing what happened between her and Avanti. If I say one wrong word in front of her, it will tip her off and I don't want anyone after me, especially payal. Rahul wouldn't tell me either as he knows I m not one to take interest in things like this and when I do, it's always something that I m more interested about than what it seems. Maanvi... guess maanvi it is then. She and rahul have been spending lot fo time together so I m sure she knows something and she is the only one I can use to find what is actually going on between dad and rahul."

Nisha not very welcoming of the thought to play goodie but that was her only way to get maanvi to open up to her about any small development that was taking place between raj and rahul. Hence she was off to go play her nice act for the sake of her curiosity.

Rahul maanvi returned back to sabarwal mansion and as they were passing through the hallway, Sonali and dadi ji called them to discuss about the Pooja tomorrow.

Sonali~ "Rahul beta... tumhe yaad hai na ki kal kya hai?"

Rahul thought for a moment then remembered "Kal to mom ki barsi hai. I m so sorry I almost forgot."

Dadi ji~ "Koi gal nahi puttar, hume maloom hai ki apni nayi zimmedari aur apne kaam ke beech kabhi kabhi insaan bhool jata hai. Tu fikar na kar, maine aur Sonali ne saari taiyari karwa li hai. Humesha ki tarah kal hum sab mandir ja kar ye Pooja karenge."

Maanvi was little confused but then she remembered her incident from masquerade party when rahul got stuck in lift and he mentioned about losing his mom at very young age. This made maanvi realize how less she knows about rahul.

Sonali~ "Maanvi... main aur dadi ji soch rahe the ki kal tum humare saath chalna chahogi ya nahi. Tum rahul ki mom se kabhi mil nahi payi par agar tum dono milte, to ek dusare ko zaroor pasand karte. Tum ab rahul ki biwi ho, iss ghar ki bahu ho... to main aur dadi ji yahi chahenge ki kal tum bhi iss Pooja mein humare saath chalo."

Maanvi~ "Mommy ji, aap mujhse ye sawal karke mujhe sharminda kar rahi hain. Ye bhi koi poochne wali baat hai kya? Main zaroor saath chalungi."

Maanvi said yes as she should but the fact that she never took any interest in finding more about the person she is in love with and will spend her rest of the life with, haunted her. Though she didn't say anything, but rahul read her face that something was bothering her. Sonali and dadi ji told them of the schedule planned for tomorrow and then went back to their work. Rahul and maanvi headed to their room.

Once inside the room, rahul closed the door behind him and looked at maanvi deep in her thoughts. He hoped for her to speak up on her own what bothered her, but soon understood that he will need to ask.

Rahul~ "Maanvi..."

Maanvi pulled herself out of her thoughts and looked at him.

Rahul~ "Something is bothering you. You want to talk about it?"

Maanvi sat down on bed looking into empty space.

Rahul walked up to her, sat on his knees and took her hands in his hands. They looked into each other eyes then rahul continued "You know you can share anything with me, ask me anything. You don't have to go through it on your own."

Maanvi~ "Rahul..." she paused for a moment before continuing. "...Ever since we married, no matter the situations, we have come so far in our relationship. Yet I never tried to know anything about your life or your past. As your wife I should know things like this... how could I be so ignorant?"

Rahul~ "It is not ignorant, at least not in my view. I brought you in my life, so I m also responsible to share my life with you including my past, present and future. We had a rough time due to the misunderstandings and ever since they cleared, we were busy with other things in our life. So it is normal that we missed to share part of our past. But it's nothing that cannot be fixed. If you like to... from now on... every night... we can share stories from our past. That way we get to spend more time with each other as well as know more about each other."

Maanvi could only stare at the understanding and caring rahul whom she had misjudged for so long just because the hatred her father had for his.

Looking at the way she was staring at him, Rahul taunted "Maanvi ji... ab kya mujhe aise hi ghoorti rahogi ya kuch bologi bhi?"

Maanvi snapped out of her thoughts and replied "Ab... wo... main to... main to bas yahi dekh rahi thi tum sirf acha gaane ke alawa, achi achi baatein banana bhi jaante ho. Lagta hai kahani ke bahane hi sahi, apne pati ko jaanne ka acha mauka milega mujhe."

Rahul~ "O Hello! Sirf main hi apni kahani nahi sunane wala... tumko bhi apni kahani sunani padegi. Akhir mujhe bhi to apni biwi ke bare mein jaanne ka haq hai."

Maanvi~ "Ab mere pass to jyada kuch hai hi nahi batane ko. Par tum to rockstar ho, tumhari life meri life ki tarah seedhi saadhi aur simple to ho nahi sakti."

Rahul got up and sat on bed next to her "Kyun nahi ho sakti? Rockstar hoon to kya, hoon to main bhi ek insaan hi. Aur main apni life plain and simple hi pasand karta hoon."

Maanvi~ "Pasand karne aur hone mein farak hota hai rahul. Yeh baat ek bar tumne hi mujhse kahi thi."

They remembered the conversation they had after maanvi informed him about getting engaged to sujoy. Rahul's words from that moment brought back some old feelings "...pyaar karti ho uss se?... Jis se mangani karne jaa rahi ho, uss se pyaar karti ho ya nahi?... Kisi ko chahne mein, pyaar karne mein aur kisi se mangani karne mein farak hota hai... Agar tum kisi aur ko chahti ho, aur uss se dur bhagne ke liye tum ye stupid mangani kar rahi ho, to yeh tumhari zindagi ki sabse badi galti hogi..."

Certainly that moment reverberated their old feelings, though they never had the chance to accept them before. Now they can, as things are much simpler between them.

Maanvi~ "Agar main tumse poochun ki uss waqt tum kya jaanna chahte the, to kya kahoge?"

Rahul could still feel what he felt that time. The thought of losing her still makes him shiver only difference is that now he knows that he loves her while at that time he was unaware of the love slowly making its place in his heart.

Rahul~ "Aur agar yahi sawal main tumse karoon... ki uss waqt tum kya mehsoos kar rahi thi jab maine wo sawal kiya tha? Kyun mere sawal tumko pareshan kar rahe the?

The answer for both of them were same. Only need was for them to give their feelings... the words that were so eager to be expressed.

Originally posted by: sweetcathy29

I m not a professional just writing for fun

so don't think I m right person to give writing tips to anyone

but its a good feeling that people like my FF

😳🤗

your writing skill r too gud and better then the professional

its 6:45
where r u cathy ?

Originally posted by: SelahJoy

its 6:45
where r u cathy ?

sorry I was caught up and need to run out again

where r u cathy... please update on time❓🤔

Chapter 37

Rahul~ "Bolo na maanvi, kya ehsaas the jo tumhe mere sawal se pareshan hone par majboor kar rahe the?" he stared deep in her eyes keeping her bound in a way that she cannot avoid answering the question.

Maanvi~ "Rahul..." it was certainly difficult as she herself didn't know what was it that pulled her towards him, tied her to him at that time. She felt it but couldn't put her finger on what it was.

Rahul~ "Bolo maanvi..."

Maanvi~ "Main... main wo... mujhe..."

There was a knock on the door. Rahul answered the door; Dadi ji had sent Chotu with some fruits for maanvi. Chotu placed the tray on the table and asked if they would like dinner in their room or at the dinner table. To that rahul replied that they will join with everyone for dinner. Once Chotu left, maanvi started to unfold then fold her cloths in her wardrobe to avoid answering his question.

Rahul closed the door then slowly walked up and stood behind her. Maanvi could feel that he wasn't going to let go of the conversation.

Rahul grabbed her arm and made her turn to face him. The eye lock formed again leaving maanvi breathless. Rahul took a step forward and maanvi took a step back but her path was blocked by the very wardrobe she was using to avoid rahul's question. Rahul carefully took another step closer to her, caught the dress she just folded and had in her hands. At his touch, maanvi almost dropped that dress. Rahul placed that dress in the wardrobe where she had picked it from, then keeping his arms on shelves in a way that he blocked her way to escape. Their heartbeats raced knowing what will come next.

Rahul spoke softly "Maanvi... iss baat se... na to tum aur na to main... inkaar kar sakte hain... ki uss pal mein bhi... ek unjaana undekha sa ehsaas tha jo hum dono ko dheere dheere bandh raha tha. Hum maane ya na maane... par hum dono uss sawal ke peeche chupi wajah ko samajhte the... Aur aaj iss sawal ke peeche chupe kaaran ko bhi samajhte hai."

His each word was unveiling the hidden truth and that started to form tears in maanvi's eyes.

Rahul continued "Uss din mera sawal... hum dono ko pareshan isliye kar raha tha... kyunki uski wajah se humare dil mein ubharte... ye naye ehsaas... zahir ho jate. NGO wale incident ke baad jo hua... mujhe yeh laga tha ki humare beech ek nayi dosti, ya naya rishta shuru hoga... Par tumhari engagement ki baat se mujhe wo rishta banne se pehle hi toot-ta sa laga. Tum bhi to unjaane hi sahi... mere liye uthte naye ehsaas ko dabaane ke liye wo stupid mangani kar rahi thi. Isliye mere sawal ne tumhe bhi baichain kar diya tha. Bolo... yahi sach hai na? Bolo maanvi."

Rahul stared right in her eyes, trying to read what she feels. A tear rolled down her cheek as the eye lock held her standing there, unable to avoid the question.

Maanvi replied "Haan... main uss unjaane ehsaas ko samajna nahi chahti thi. Main yahi maanti thi ki tum galat insaan ho. Par tumse milne ke baad... main badalne lagi... lakh koshishoon ke baad bhi, mujhe kushi ke mauke par... ek ajeeb sa khalipan mehsoos hota tha. Main apne aap se sirf yahi sawal karti thi; ki kyun bar bar hum kareeb aate hai?... Kyun tumhari baate mujhe itna asar karti hai?..."

Rahul~ "Kyunki tumhare dil mein bhi wahi ehsaas jagah bana rahe the jo mere dil mein jagah bana rahe the. Na chah kar bhi hum ek dusare ko pasand karne lage... chahne lage..."

Another tear rolled down her cheek as they came closer. Hearts beats raced as they slowly gave into their feelings and submitted into a passionate kiss.

Their old conversations, which never reached to the point of confession before... now, had the tendency to find its way into their conversations again. Since their relation has grown stronger, these conversations easily make it to their goal of expressing the deep hidden thoughts and feelings.

Sonali and raj were in their room. Raj was checking up on some business stuff on his laptop when Sonali came to him.

Sonali~ "Raj, aapko yaad hai kal kya hai?"

Raj~ "Sonali ji, aap jaanti hain ki mujhe apne kaam se fursat nahi hoti hai. Aur agar kuch important hota hai to aap hain na mujhe yaad dilane ke liye. To paheli poochna band kijiye aur seedhe seedhe bata dijiye ki kal kya hai."

Sonali~ "Kal Pooja hai... gayatri ki barsi ki."

Raj's face suddenly turned grim at the mention of that name. He resumed his work on the laptop and without looking up, replied "Sonali tum jaanti ho ki main Shaleen ki album ke promotion ki planning mein busy hoon. Jab se Shaleen ko yeh album ka contract mila hai, tab se saare kaam mujeh akele karne padte hai. Pehle to Shaleen meri help karta tha par ab to mujhe sab personally karna padta hai."

Sonali~ "Raj, aapne ek bar bhi pooja mein thodi der ke liye bhi aane ki koshish nahi ki. Humesha sirf mommy ji, papa ji, rahul aur main hi iss pooja main baithe hai. Kya aap iss bar thoda samay nikal kar pooja mein nahi aa sakte?"

Raj~ "Agar mera kaam karne ke liye koi aur mil jaye, to main jaroor chalunga. Par tum jaanti ho ki mere liye mera kaam zyada zaroori hai."

Sonali~ "Duniya mein aap hi akele nahi hai raj jo kaam karta hai. Thodi der ke liye aa jayenge to aapka kaam kahin bhag nahi jayega."

Raj~ "Maine kaha na main busy hoon. Tum apni ladli bahu ko kyun nahi le jati?"

Sonali~ "Maanvi se maine aur mommy ji ne pehle hi keh diya hai aur wo aa rahi hai."

Raj~ "To phir meri kya zaroorat hai. Tum log aaram se pooja karke ghar aa jana."

Sonali~ "Par raj..."

Raj interrupting her "Sonali ji main busy hoon. Please mujhe mera kaam karne dijiye. Aur chotu se keh kar mera khana kamre mein hi bhijwa dijiye. Main khana yahi khaunga."

Sonali rolled her eyes and left room to join rest of the sabarwals for dinner.

Once Sonali closed the door behind her, raj closed the lid of his laptop and went to his desk at the corner of the room. He took out a key from his pocket and unlocked the drawer. The drawer revealed some old papers and other stuff. Among the papers were few photos of his wedding anniversary, rahul's first birthday and apparently a vacation trip.

He closed his eyes and recalled those old memories. Few moments later he suddenly opened his eyes and shoved all the photos back inside with anger. He closed the drawer again and locked it, pocketing the key. He paced in the room all restless and irritated.

Everyone arrived at the dinner table except raj. Sonali called chotu to tell him to serve raj's dinner in the room itself. On that, maanvi offered that she will take the tray as chotu is busy serving rest of the family.

Sonali~ "Maanvi, you should stay here. Raj is already in bad mood and who knows what he might scold you for this time if you go in front of him. You can take care of everyone here at the table; I will take the tray of food myself."

Sonali took the tray of food from chotu and went back to their room.

Maanvi served the food to dada ji, dadi ji and then to rahul. She couldn't stop thinking that maybe raj is upset because of rahul's mom's death anniversary.

Nisha was staring at maanvi most the time. To her it seemed that raj was upset due to whatever has happened between him and rahul. And maanvi might be the key for her to unlock this mystery.

Shaleen noticed Nisha staring at maanvi and he thought that Nisha is still holding onto her feelings of hate for rahul maanvi and that she might be cooking more ways to get them off from the good books of everyone in the family.

Payal on the other hand was still playing over the conversation she had with herself about the memories from the vikas's success party.

Dadi ji~ "Payal puttar... aaj tum badi gumsum si kyun baithi ho? Tum to aise nahi rehti ho."

Payal~ "Kuch nahi dadi ji, wo producers aur sponsorers ke saath jo meeting hui thi uske bare mein soch rahi thi. Itni badi responsibility... kahin mujhse koi gadbad ho gayi to?"

Rahul~ "Relax payal. Tumhe akele preshan hone ki zaroorat nahi hai. Tumhari help ke liye dad ki team hogi. Aur main aur maanvi bhi to hain help karne ke liye."

Payal faked a smile to hide her real thoughts she had running in her mind. All her thoughts kept going back to vikas which were making her uneasy. She needed to talk to someone about it and for that she was voting on who she can trust to not let anyone else know about this and still provide her with healthy relationship advice.

By then, Sonali has also joined with them on the table and rest of the dinner went on smoothly. Everyone retired to their rooms but rahul stopped maanvi.

Rahul~ "Maanvi, mere saath moon-light walk par chalogi?"

Maanvi~ "Abhi?"

Rahul~ "Abhi nahi to kya morning mein? Moon-light walk to moon light mein hi hogi na. Din mein moon light walk kaise karogi?"

Maanvi~ "Mera matlab wo nahi tha..."

Rahul~ "To kya tha? Ab mere saath walk par nahi jaana to kehdo. Main phir akela chala jaunga."

Maanvi~ "Tum naraaz kyun ho rahe ho? Acha chalo, walk par chalte hain."

Rahul~ "Bina sawal kiye ek bar mein baat maana aata hi nahi hai na? Chalo."

So they went out on a moon light romantic walk.

A shady person had gift wrapped something. The gift was named to raj sabarwal.

Mr. K~ "Raj sabarwal, its time to bring this gift to you. You have been avoiding this part of your life for so long. Not any more. Now everyone will find out the truth and I will make you suffer for everything that you did."

The room echoed with evil laughter. As the person turns around, the photos of gayatri are in front of him.

Mr. K~ "I will get you justice gayatri. I will take my revenge on this raj sabarwal. He will lose the one thing that is dearest to him, that is his son rahul. Then you will know the taste of loss. How I felt for past 35 years ever since his one prank made me go away from your life gayatri. All that I ever wanted to tell you is how much I loved you. Now I never can."

Nisha and shallen were in their room. Shaleen wanted to talk to Nisha about the whole staring thing she was doing at dinner table.

Shaleen~ "Nisha, I saw how you were staring at maanvi during dinner. I must remind you that you must not do anything that can put me and my album into any type of cross-hairs. Your plans always tend to backfire on both of us no matter whether I m a part of it or not."

Nisha~ "Why the hell you are always thinking that I m plotting something? For once could you ever think that I might be trying to get better for both our sakes?"

Shaleen~ "Trying to get better? How is that gonna happen by staring at maanvi? You plan to copy her ways? Cause that is something you cannot as that's not your type."

Nisha~ "No, I don't plan to copy her. But I can learn something from her like how to be a nice daughter-in-law. She seems to be everyone's type."

Shaleen~ "You... learning to be a nice daughter-in-law? You can't even learn to be a nice wife, how would you manage to learn to be a nice daughter-in-law?"

Nisha~ "Sure you would say that. But ask yourself one thing... who has always stood by you? Me! I have always been there for you and I will be there always. So instead of judging me, it would be nice of you to let me prove it to you."

Shaleen~ "By all means Mrs. Nisha Sabarwal."