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Aastha and Shlok were sitting on the bench and she rested her head on his shoulder and he rested on her head. They lost themselves they were in a verge of sleeping. Aastha had her hand in his. Shlok slowly rubbed her hand. Aastha sensed something weird in his hold and opened her eyes and looked at him. He was staring at sky. Aastha slowly it was most like whispering "Kya baat hain Shlok kya soch raha hain wait wait let me think hmm aap aayi ki bare main soch rahe hain na aap chinta mat kijiye Shlok aayi jaha bhi hain hame dekhkar bohut khush hi honge" unknown to her a small tear escaped her eye but she wiped it b4 he noticed it.


Shlok "nahi Aatsha main tumhari bare main soch raha hoon hamari first meeting ki bare main. Aastha smiled and said "achcha aapko abi bhi yaad hain wo pal aap jaante hain aap sach main raakhshas ki tarah tha tab." Shlok "haan Aastha pata hain mujhe its 26th august at 6pm tumse pehli baar mila aur mere jindagi badal diya wo pal aur uss din se hi tumhari bure din shuru hua na."


Aastha now shocked and yelled at him "Shlok aisa sochna bhi mat aap aise kaise soch sakte mujhe sabse best pati mila hain pls aap apni aapko iss tarah mat samjiye aur haan uske baad aapki akdu kam the kya train main bhi main ek taraf aap hi keliye madad karna chaha lekin aap hain ki itna akdu kya hain guru and they both smiled.


Shlok "aur uske baad yaad hain tumhe kitni bevakoof ki tarah main tumpe kitna gussa hua jab baba ki insult hui tho and he looked thoughtful pata nahi main kya soch raha tha tab." Aastha "Shlok aap ko aisa sochna pada chodiye na Shlok bure vakt hogaya hain." Shlok "nahi Aastha tab main bohut gussa tha aur jo bhi karke tumhe harana chaha isiliye tumhari har khadam pe nazar rakha har ek cheez ko pata laga lekin sach kahu kai na kai main tumhari tarah sochne lagi tab tum jaante ho main jab tumse pyaar karte hue naatak kiya tab kuch pal main sach main tumhari pyar main kho gaya Aastha kasam se."


Aastha "jaanti hoon Shlok ham Kolhapur gaye the na tab aapko sach se mujhe pyaar hogyaya na jhoot mat boliye" and she smiled. Shlok too smiled and said "tum hamesha mujhe itni achchi se kaise samajte hoo haan kaha se aayi ye talent haan." Aastha "wo chodiye Shlok aap batayiye aur kya socha."


Shlok "aur hmm haan uske baad jab main tumse sabke saamne kaha hain tum mere biwi ban sakte hain tumhari chehra dekhne jaisa tha kitni embarrassed hain na tum." Aastha suddenly "aur nahi to kya ek dam tum mujhse shahdi karna chaha mujhe bhi nahi bataya aap jaante hain main kitni tensed hoon tab." Shlok smiled "aur uske baad tumhari aayi ki chahra dekhna tha hmm k k ye chodiye aur kya maara tum to sach main wo tappat ab tak mujhe yaad hain."


Aastha "lekin Shlok mujhe ek baat batayiye jab shaadi hone ke baad hamari SR main jis tarah aapne kiya kya sach main aapko sukun mila aise karne se haan kitni dukh mahsoos kiya aap jaante ho." Shlok "han Aastha I know and I m really sorry for that aur tumne sahi kaha main khush nahi tha tab mere muh se shabd nikala lekin mere mann kuch aur kaha aur tum jaan gaya mere dil ki baat jab main jaanne main haar gaya Aastha main apni jindagi main koi kaam achcha nahi kiya sirf tumse shadi karne ke halava." Aastha emotionally saw him and wiped his tears and noded no. He jus kissed her forehead and hugged her tightly assuring 7 births love granted to her.


Shlok again went to his past "aur pata nahi kya hua mujhe har din tumse ladna chaha socho ki mere pyaar tumse ladne se hi dikhaya agar main tumsen ek din bhi nahi lada to thoda ajeeb laga kai na kai tumse ladna chaha aur tum jaante ho dheere dheere tumse pyaar hogaya Aastha tum maano ya na maano jab tumhe jungle main kaanta laga my heart beat raised I didn't ever witnessed such thing in my life bohut dar laga tha jab tumhe wo zehrila kanta laga job hi karke tumhe bachna chaha aur kya kahu tab bhi main nahi samja ki main tuse pyaar karta hoon nafrat nahi lekin kya karu jab main vaisa soch raha tha tumhari Baba jail main gaye the."


Aastha "haan Shlok pata nahi kismet hamare saath kya khel khela tha lekin jo bhi hua achchi keliye hua Shlok main jaanti thi aap achche insaan hain aur Baba ko bhi aisa nahi karenge lekin mujhe divorce nahi karni chahiye thi Shlok main tumhe divorce ki paers nahi bhejna chahiye thi I m sorry." Shlok "nahi Aastha jo kuch main ne tumhare saath kiya wo galat tha wo hona hi tha mujhe aur main samja ki har ladki ek jaise hi hain tum bhi Swati ki tarah mujhe chodke jaogi bohut gussa hogaya tha tab pata nahi main kya soch raha tha jo bhikarke tumhe ghar wapas lana chaha uskeliye bohut neeche gir gaya tha Aastha bohut neeche akhir tumhari aayi aur ajju se bhi bohut buri tarah peshaya kitni bewakoof hoo main." Aastha "Shlok chodiye na." Shlok "nahi Aastha mujhe kahne do aur jab tum ghar wapas aaya wo hearing ke baad socha ki tumhe jindagi bhar mere ghar main hi rahne deta hoon lekin tab nahi jaan gaya ki tum mere dil ki ghar main rahenge aur har din tumhari shakal dekhna chaha pata nahi kyun tab main socha ki main tumse nafrat karta hoon to isko to kuch na kuch karna har din lekin tumhari shakal to dekhke bina aaramse neend bhi nahi so sakta tha main to kya kahu main pyaar ya nafrat."


Aastha was now holding tightly to decrease his guilt. Shlok continued. Shlok "Aastha." Aastha "hmmm." Shlok "tum sun rahe ho na." She smiled and hugged him even tighter "hmmm" he too smiled. Shlok "aur tum holi ke din main I love u kaha sach main main to pagal hogaya tum mujhse pyaar kar rahi thi tab jab main tumhe takleef dena chaha tum mujhse pyar karne lagi aur kya chahiye mujhe aur haan uske baad tum kya kar rahi thi I will raise in love and u were hahahaha acting jus like a small kid." Aastha broke the hug "achcha aisa kya kiya main ne." Shlok "chodo wo sab main tho kabhi nahi bhool sakta hoon u know ur innocence and childishness is the reason I fell for u I m ashamed of myself for behaving with u such."


Aastha "Shlok.." Shlok "shshsh." And he placed finger on her lips. Shlok "hmm kaha the ham hmm tumhe yaad hain uske baad tum Aditi pe jealous hogaya lekin tab bhi tumhari pyaar ko nahi dekh paya ya phir dekhke bhi nazarandaz kiya kitni badi bevakoof hoon ek taraf Varad Dada mujhe samja rahe ho ki tum mujhse kitna pyaar karte ho lekin main mere ego ki andhi main bohut kuch boldiya." Aastha wanted him to stop but she knows he is relieving himself so she let him continued. Shlok "aur jab Aditi ne tumhe har baar maarna chaha tabi mere pyaar mujhe nazar aaya lekin main apne aapse bohut gussa tha ki main tumse nafrat karna chaha tho pyaar kyun kiya lekin jis tarah maine socha ki nafrat karne se achcha pyaar se sukun mila mujhe aur tum ne saabit kiya ki pyaar hamesha nafrat ko khatam karte hain aur uske baad Swati mar gayi mere aankho ke saamne tab mere saath koi nahi sirf tumhe sirf tum mere dard ko mahsoos kiya sirf tum mujhe sambhalliya sirf tum hi hogaya mere sab I love u Aastha I love u so much."


Aastha looked up and saw his eyes closed. She jus looked up and kissed him on cheek. Shlok opened his eyes and saw her adoringly. He took away the strand of hair and gave a peck on her lips and hugged her tightly. Shlok "aur haan uske baad tum jaanti ho tum mujhse I love u kahne keliye kis tarah maangti ho." Aastha smiled. Shlok "really I couldn't forget that at all mujhe to maza aagaya jis tarah tum mere piche I love u I love u kahke ghoom rahe the."


Aastha slowly "lekin aap hain ki bohut jidd pakad kar baitha kya jaata hain I love u kahne se haan akhir ruladiya mujhe uske baad I love u kaha sab ke saamne lekin mujhe bohut achcha laga." Shlok kissed on her head.


Aastha "lekin aap jaanta nahi Shlok us din kya hua svikruti samara rasam main maine Baba aai ko maarte hue dekha mujhe bohut dar laga Shlok bohut dar laga tujhse kahna chaha lekin aai kisi ko nahi batane diya I m sorry Shlok agar main tabi boldiya to aaj shayad Aayi jinda rahegi." They both had tears then.


Shlok "kitni bevakoof tha main ghar main kya kya ho raha hain ye bhi nahi dekh paya maine aankhomain patti banaya Baba ne pata nahi aayi kitni takleef jelha sirf hamari khushi keliye lekin iss baat ki dukh ho raha hain ki main aayi ko achchi tarike se nahi dekh paya sach jaanne ke baad bhi kaise aadmi hoon main." Aastha slowly wiped his tears "nahi Shlok aisa mat kahiye aap to sach main anjan the aap bhool gaye kya uske baad aap mere peeche bhaag rahe the." Shlok smiled "achcha to kis baat keliye bolo main bhool gaye thoda yaad dilao na ya fir main karke dikhao tumhe." Aastha "Shlok chi aapna sach main bohut badmaash hain." Shlok smiled and gave a peck on her lips.


Aastha "aap nahi jaante hain aapki Baba kitni takleef di aayi ko aur kuch din ke baad ham dono ko alag karna chaha Baba ne pata nahi aayi kaise sahpaya wo sab tai ki shaadi bhi baba ko pasand nahi tha aur deere deere Baba tumhari aankhoo main mujhe girane ki khoshish ki hain aur..." Shlok "aur main pagal ki tarah tumhe ghar se nikalna chaha pata nahi kya socha uss vakt lekin tum to maharani ban gayi mujhe firse pyaar ka matlab samjaya aur tumhe yaad hain uss din tum kaise piker nachliya uss din mera to hosh hi ut gaya."


Aastha confusingly "kab." Shlok "wo pagal tumhe kaisa pata hoga peeche pic post kiya dekh."


Shlok "aur uske baad maine tumse lada Bab ke bare main aur baba tumhe maarna chaha aur tum jaante ho jis din tum mujhe sambhal liya ki main jab suicide karne jaa raha tha tab tum kitni achchi baato se mujhe badal diya sahi kaha thi tumne jindagi me girna utna padta hain ham problems se ladna hain na ki bhaagna hain mujhe to iss baat ki khushi hain ki main tumse shaadi ki aur kam se kam tab to aayi ki pyaar dekh paya wo sab tumhari vaje se Aastha agar tum nahi hain to shayad uss vakt nahi dekh paoga aayi ki pyar thank u so much mere jindagi me aane keliye."


Aastha "bas bas bohut hogaya aur tum jaante ho uske baad ham Mumbai chele gaye vaha chowksi bai kitni funny tha." They both laughed remembering him. Aastha "jis tarah wo nanki nanki kahke bulata hain mujhe bohut achcha lagta bohut miss ho rahi hain un logo ko bhi aur Sachin and haan Apsara usko to kaise bhool sakti hoon main kitni tang kiya aur uske baad bohut madad bhi kiya dheere dheere se ham food truck khola yaad hain aapko."


Shlok "kyun nahi yaad hoga jisme ham romance kiya bhool gayi tum haan. " Aastha bet on his chest "Shlok aap bhi na." Shlok "lekin manna padega ye Raghbhai to hain hi itni funny pagal hain wo ham dono ko alag karna chaha which bappa himself cant separate us." Aastha "lekin Shlok aap kya jaante hain main kitna dar gayi thi haan." Shlok "meri rothlu main tumhe chodkar kai nahi jaogi teek hain."


Aastha kissed him and continued "achcha to teek hain hmm kaha the ham haan uske baad aayi aagaayi hamare paas." Shlok "haan baba bhi aagaye thodi der ke baad lekin mera gussa tab tak nahi nikli jisne tumhe maarna chaha itni aasani se firse viswaas nahi karnachahiye tha uski vaje se Indrajeet hamare jindagi main aaya uski vaje se hamare haath se poora nikal gaye jis ki vaje se hamare ghar main hi ham kaam karne gaye the."


Aastha "aur tumhe yaad hain poornima kitni funny the uski baato ka matlab hi nahi hote I really pity her aur shaantanu aur mishti ko kaise bhool sakte hain ham pata nahi un logo kaise iss tarah baap mil gaya aur Shlok jab hame power of attorney mila tabi ham sach kuch kho gaya ham aayi ko kho chuke hain main apni yaaddash kho chuke hain aur aap 6 mahine coma main tha main tumhare saath bhi nahi the."


And she cried a lot again. Shlok "Aastha Aastha chup chup ho ja." Aastha "nahi Shlok kam se kam main tumhare saath hona chahiye thi pata nahi main aapki pyaar ko kaise bhool gayi pata nahi..." Shlok "Aastha shshshs don't cry jo hua wo hogaya meri galti hain aap logo ko galat samjaya Baba pe viswaas rakha wo mere galti hain I m sorry agar Baba pe viswaas nahi ki to aaj aayi jinda hogi aur kam se kam ham ek saath honge lekin uss Inrajeet aake sab badla diya mera man kahe to main use vahi maardenge." Aastha "lekin Shlok jab main tumhare saath nahi thi mujhe kuch bhi achcha nahi lagi sirf dikhane keliye haste hue hua sirf main hi samajsakti hoon ki main kitni takleef mahsoos kiya jab raat hota hain mujhe neend nahi aate hain 6 mahine hogaye mera man hazar baar kaha kisi ko mere madad chahiye mere ghar wo nahi tha main kuch galat kar rahi thi lekin pata nahi kya hogaya kuch bhi samaj nahi paya Indrajeet ne mere aankho main pattti lagaya kya sahi hain kya galat hain nahi dekhpaya aur jis din tum mujhe Aastha kahke mandir main apni gale pe lagaya tabi mujhe laga ki main aapko kabhi mile the aapki bau main main kabhi the mera man bohut dilemma main thi tab main apne aapko nahi sambhal sakti thi pata nahi mere dimaag kha rahi thi koi baat lekin main tumhe bohut takleef di na Shlok." And she cried even more. Shlok "Aastha tumhari galti nahi hain tum patient ho tab aur dekho jis tarah tum mere bare main sochne lagi tab lekin main jaanta tha Aastha tum sirf mere ho sirf mere ho kisi aur ka nahi tumhi mere paas aaogi aur aagayi bhi." Aastha "haan Shlok aapne sahi kaha ham dono nahi hain ham ek hain Shlok bas mujhe aayi ki kam hogyae aaj aai hain to..."


Shlok "Aastha tumne hi kaha na Aayi jaha bhi hain hame dekhke khushi hi honge bas ab koi drama nahi nahi mere liye tum hain aur tumhari liye sirf main bas koi aur nahi." And he hugged her tightly and rested his head on her head. Aastha slowly closed her eyes. Shlok too closed his eyes. Sai said "cut cut cut." Everyone relaxed but they both were still in that position. Sai thought how can I miss them and slowly went to them. Shlok slowly opened his eyes. Sai assured perfect and shown thumbs up symbol. Shlok slowly "Aastha Aastha." She slowly woke up from his hold and saw Sai. Sai was with lot of emotion. Sai "thanks a lot Ashlok u ppl rocked it shot to bohut achcha aaya bohut saare memories diya aap logo ne thank u so much pata nahi main kaise aap logo ko bhool sakte ho lekin u ppl made me to hook to u u rocked it Ashlok bas ab main jaa raha hoon aap logo ko jitna bhi thanks kahu mere liye kam hain thanks for being a part of my time thanks a lot." And he shook hand with them and went away but not from their memories the memories they gave to him were not erasable. Shlok "Aastha sirf kahne keliye shoot hogaya lekin uska dimaag main to ham honge na." Aastha "Shlok aapne nahi dekha wo IF main kis tarah hame itni achchi se apni dil main rakha aur aapne sahi kaha Sai sirf kahne keliye gaya yaha se lekin I think he wont be forgetting us so easily aur jin jin logo IF main the wo sab hamko kabhi nahi bhool payenge ham bohut lucky hain Shlok itni achchi fans mila hain hamko chahe wo log ye sab chodke hi gaye lekin un logo ki dimaag main to ham honge hamesha pata nahi is pyaar ko kya naam doon." And she slept in his hold. Shlok too rested there. They were bound each other for eternity chahe jo kuch bhi hojaye unlogo ki jindagi main Shlok aur Aastha hamesha ek hi hain aur ek hi rahegi kisi ki nazar na lage. (BGM music)


Chupke se aahista
Ho rahan hoo la patha
Vulja sawalon mein
Ab teri hi khayalon mein
Kaisi yeh chaahat hain
Roke Ya Na Ruke
Ek pal bhi rahat hain
Dhadkan Gawa chuke

Iss Pyar Ko Kya Naam Doon
Khoye hai kuch alfaaz kyoon
Iss Pyar ko kya naam doon
Kya naam doon kya naam doon

Iss Pyar Ko Kya Naam Doon
Iss marz ko kaise sahoon
Iss pyar ko kya naam doon
kya naam doon

Saiya ve ab raasta dikha de thu
Thujko hai vaasta ab dua de thu
Saiya ve ab raasta dikha de thu
Thujko hai vaasta ab dua de thu


Man Ke munder pe
Baita hai gher ke
Mujhko Ghoore hain ye ehsaas...
Khwahishoke lehro mein
Roshan huyi sehro mein
Dikhne laga hain ab thu khaas
Kaisi hain ye khadi
Jo Tute hi nahi
Thumse hi jaa judi
ishaaron mein kahin

Iss Pyar Ko Kya Naam Doon
Khoye hai kuch alfaaz kyoon
Iss Pyar ko kya naam doon
Kya naam doon kya naam doon

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh Sai... It is so emotional...
Ashlok memories are never going to end...
They are live in our memories...

Don't go away from forum... We are expecting new story from you... Sai...
reliving the ashlok moments is a wonderful experience...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow bhai..
it was so beautiful..
loved it..
ashlok.. ashlok.. ashlok...
love them for eternity...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow...
No words to describe...
It is so beautiful with the pictures and all😳😳
Ashlok rocks forever
Thank you👍🏼👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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You bring back those wonderful memories in one writing. It was so wonderful and emotional. I loved it totally, keep writing like this.. .waiting for your next story!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#6
Without you no point to come to the forum
Please write something atleast weekly
Send me the PM when ever you write
Thank you
Miss you lots
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hai buddhu...
first of all a very big thanks for ur amazing,fabulous OS which will not forget forever...
my two eyes were not enough to see the pics of ashlok fantastic collection n suitable pic which suited to the situation...
u gave wonderful review of ebp...
really awesome n potrayed their feelings n emotions so nicely...n u cleared the doubts of viewers sometimes may not understand wat their mind was thinking which doesnot shows through their actions...
well written when wat they thought about eachother at each moment n how how they brought together n forever...
wat u said is true sai they r really magic which stays forever with us...
ashlok made all of us mad...n hooked to them forever...
its not simple thing to make us like but yes wat u said is right just it was not a simple show, something which cannot express with our words but we feel happy...n enjoy the ashlok forever even in seconds thought thats the way created us...
it causes wonderful things in our life too giving so many wonderful frnds...wonderful writings...all of us shared journey with u n ur writings... n as well as ashlok without them it cant be possible to us...
especially i shared a lot time with u my boy...so amazing cant believe myself how come i am in this but all that credit goes to ashlok only which gives me a good frnd n sweet brother too...
even it was ur last OS in ur journey of forum but u gave everlastlonging...writing n refreshened the beauty of ashlok memories as we feel to watch again n again...

no words sai to say about u just as fabulous as our ashlok...
i neverever forget u as cant forget ashlok in my life...
how ashlok stays in my heart like u have space in my heart bro...
godbless u n wish u had a great future coming a head...
thank u soo much for beautiful OS i cant tell how much i like it want to read it many more times...
all the best my sweet buddhuuu
Edited by syvalini - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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superb sai,,, u r a very good writer
between why are you leaving the forum dear
u r the only hope...

i like this OS very much,,because i expected this kind of a rewind from slok or astha
we didn't get from the show

very nice dear

please stay back here
post some os and ff's

u r such a talented writer
best wishes

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