SHE IS HIS LIFE (chapter 2- pg -3) 12 APRIL /16

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Glimpse

A guy is standing at the edge of terrace. of a huge mansion..closing his eyes and lost in his thought...
' i love u manik '
'I'll be there for u always hamesha'
'i trust u '
'be strong manik for me'
' hey open ur eyes'
manik open his eyes with a jerk taking name of her with all his love like a prayer
" NANDANI"
His eyes get moist and tears made its way ,then he look at the picture he was holding and said
' i love u too nandani ... i love u so so much u know right.. (he paused) why u left me .. u knew i can't live without u but fir bhi ...fir bhi u left me plz plz come back .plz.(he complaint like a child)... I try nandani i really try but i just can't ...can't (he said helplessly ..tears continuously wetting his already pale cheek ..)
But suddenly he wiped his tear and said in determined tone..
' Now i have decided yeah ..that I'm coming to u .. yes plz take me with u ... if u can't come .i can and i will yes (with that he take her picture close to his heart and take one step forward the edge of terrace when suddenly a loud shout made him stop )
MANNIKKK...

its a first time iam writing any story ..hope u like it .. plz do comment whether u like it or not.. and should i continue? . 😳
D.C.


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chapter 1 -2
chapter2 - pg 3
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow nice
Looking forward to read it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice continue n update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER 1


4 month ago

'Manik malhotra ,owner of malhotra industry and member of FAB5 couldn't balanced his professional and personal life because of which his company is suffering from loss and FAB5 hadn't complete their many album contract.'
hume apne sutro se pata chala hai ki FAB5 members ke bich sab kuch thik nahi hai ... unki pehele jaisi friendship nahi...
TRASH...
(T.V. is broken as manik throw vase toward it ..)

Cabir: Manik are u mad , kya kar raha hai ...( said a little loud)
Ma:Tu mujhe kyu bol raha hai .. can't u see what nonsense they are talking ..(said frustratedly)
Mu:They are saying truth only ..(she said sitting in a bar counter sipping her drink ) and Truth hurts ..(said in drunk state).
Alia:Mukti bas kar aur kitna piyegi? (stopping mukti from drinking)
Mu:oh please don't tell what i should do or not( she rudely said)
Ca:mukti kuch bhi bole ja rahi hai .. Dhruv tu kuch bolta kyu nahi mukti ko.. (said in frustratedly)
Al: jaise aj tak kuch bola hai isne ..( said in sarcastic way)
Dh:alia tum apn
but cut off by manik
Ma:shut up u all ( shouted with anger) mukti is tight they are saying true...see pehele jaisa kuch nahi hai hamare bich kuch bhi nahi(said in hurtful tone) u know what guys iam fed up I'm really fed of all this (said in anger and walk out)
Ca: Tum sab ka kuch nahi ho sakta ..(said looking toward Fab3 with disappoint and run behind manik)
outside the mansion manik start his car when suddenly cabir came and sit in passenger sit
Ma:what the hell cabir? get out of my right now.
Ca:ha ha jaise tu bolega aur me yes sir bolke utar jauga... (said jokingly)
Ma: Fine then (he start the car and drove off with full speed)
Ca: mare ga kya ...meri abhi tak shadi bhi nahi hui hai kuch toh rahem kar ( said in scared tone dramatically)
Ma: cabir ...(he said helplessly) iam tired yaar... .
Ca: Manik why u always have to so impulsive.. give them som time everything will sort out..
Ma: Nothing will sort out .. nothing ( he said frustratedly bit stop to pick the phone call) Hello ...(he become worried ) What ... where .. yeah we are coming..
Ca: what happened?(said giving questioning look)
Ma: mukti

if u like do comment plz...
D.C.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update...
Manbir's bond is gr8...
Luved it...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting luved the 1st chapter
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CHAPTER 2

CA- batayega bhi kya hua hai...
manik- woh mukti jis club me thi waha raid padi hai
aur police ne usse arrest kar liya hai. ( he was tensed for her)
cabir- What ? yeh mukti bhi... jaldi chal.

Manik drive car as fast as he could . both reach the police station .

manik(furiously)- where is mukti?
inspector afraid to see him like that.
inspector( stamerred badly ) - wo... woh sir ... raid...pa..padithi ..t..toh arr...rest karna pa...dha.
manik ( shouted)- what do u mean arrest karna padha ha? woh kya crimnal lagti hai tumko .kaha hai woh mujhe mil wao usse.
inspector ( sweating ) - without bail ...milne ...ki..per...rmission. na..hi hai.
manik- what . he shouted loudly. How dare u? he was about to grab his collar but voice stop him
voice- manik .
he turn to see who is the person.
manik- uncle app ..
( meet Ajay vardhan ufl mukti father)
ajay- inspector , mera lawyer apse baat karna chata hai.
he gestured his lawyer to go . then he turned toward manbir.
ajay - don't worry woh bail karwa dega. yeh mukti ko mein kaise samahalu... he said worriedly .
soon constable bring mukti . she was looking down . after completing all paper work they came out the police station. all media were already there they just start shooting question as soon as they saw them.
but they ignore and sit on the car and drive off.

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mukti- Dad ... ( she try to explain)
ajay (sternly)- No... chup bikul ... this is the limit of irresponsibility. drinking, clubing , late night parties.. and now this... u literally ruining ur future mukti.
she looked down . fab 4 was also there . ajay looked at them.

ajay- hua kya hai tum sabke bich ha ?? ur career is spoiling due to ur rift .. do u all even realised this?
agar aisa hi raha toh woh din dur nahi javmb tum Sab ... sab kuch kho do ge...
isliye meine kuch decide kiya hai tum sabke liye. agar meri respect karte ho toh meri baat manoge .

he said and looked at them. they didn't said anything but gave confused look.

ajay- tum sab Bangalore ja rahe ho for 1 month ... tab tak mein yaha sab stable karne ki kosis karunga.
manik- par uncle yaha sab pending hai .. albums..deals...
ajay- manik meine kaha na mein samalunga ...
tum sab packing kar lo kal subhe tum sabko nikal na hai.
as expected how can mukti be quite.
mukti(irritatedly)- no..dad I'm not going anywhere... wese bhi Bangalore me aisa kya hai...?
ajay shake his head and dial some no. in his phone and handed it to her.mukti look at him confusingly . he gestured her to take it . she pick it up and put it on her ear . after few second her eyes become teary and after few more second she was crying like baby.
fab 4 become confused and worried what happened to her suddenly.
without saying anything she disconnected the call.and looked at ajay.
cabir- mukti u okay? all looked tensed seeing her like this. she nodded sniffing.
ajay- now toh u will go na? ( smiling)
mukti nodded sniffing yet smiling. now all were hell confused.

*******

HELLO GUYS... SO HERE IS 2ND PART. NEXT PART WILL BE NANDANI ENTRY . SO IF U LIKE THIS STORY DO COMMENTS PLZ. OTHERWISE I WILL NOT CONTINUE .. SO IT'S HUMBLE REQUEST TO ALL PLZ ACHA BURA KUCH BHI CHALEGA BUT COMMENTS ZAROOR KARNA.OK.

THANK U
STAY BLESSED ,STAY HAPPY.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome yr i loved ur story do continue soon waiting eagerly.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing start 😛
Sound intresting just came across this story ⭐️
Want to read more do continue keep writing

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