Ashlok ff: Ye Dil Maange More updated Last Episode 50 - Page 78

very nice update..
finally read it..
continue soon..
thnks 4 d pm..

Superb update...

Originally posted by: chickyhoney

Nice update...now waiting there Mumbai adventure...I have a question r u planning to write another story after this one????

I really love to read ur writing...hope you'll write...

thank u

Originally posted by: nadeeka1200

Great update sai thank you

I like astha this way

Waiting for next update

thank u nadeeka1200
Aastha jaha ho vaha gadbad na ho vaise to hain hi nahi
will update now

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

very nice update..
finally read it..
continue soon..
thnks 4 d pm..

thank u diduuu
hmm main bohut pressure kiya na padne keliye
pleasure is mine
jus bear this ff for 3 more days
thanks a lot diduuu

Originally posted by: vaishux

Superb update...

Ashlok rocks as usual...😳

Eagerly waiting for the Mumbai track

Thank you

thank u yes Ashlok rocks
will update now

Aastha saw her and hugged her tightly "Aai main aapko bohut miss karoongi aai bohut miss karoongi." Anjali "Aastha main bhi tumhe bohut miss karoongi mat ro ab meri bachchi mat ro Shlok hoga na tumhare saath apna dyaan rakhega tumhe khush rakhega." Aastha "lekin aap log nahi honge na vaha." And she cried.

Anjali "Aastha kyun ro rahi hain bachcho ki tarah tum aisa kyun nahi samjte tum aur Shlok honeymoon pe jaa raha hain." And she smiled. Aastha "haan aayi aap bhi na kuch bhi bolte hoon lekin main aap logo ko bohut miss karoongi." Anjali "haan pagli main jaanti hoon ham se jyaada tum Kavya ko miss karoongi na." and she smiled. Aastha "haan aai wo meri bachchi jaisi hain pata nahi ham vaha kaise rahoongi."

Anjali "ab aao khana kag chuki hain." And she went out and had lunch in silence. They were leaving tomorrow. Aastha slept in his arms peacefully. But Shlok was awake and held her tightly. He doesn't know who is poornima who wants to screw him he cant get anything. Next day everything was set they took the blessings of elders and left to Mumbai.

Aastha cried a lot with them. Shlok cant see her like that. Varad also handed him some money. Shlok and Aastha left pune with that. In bus Aastha was silently crying placing her head against his shoulder. Shlok was wiping her tears and nodding a no. Aastha smiled and tightly hugged his shoulder and tried to sleep. Shlok held her shoulder for support and he too rested his head on her head and kissed her hair.

Kalindi was crying silently. Avdoot came and sat beside her. Kalindi "ye sab kya ho raha hain meri beti ke saath usne kya galat kiya mujhe samaj main nahi aa raha hain bappa kyun pariksha le rahe hain uski kya galat kiya Aastha ne." Avdoot "Kalindi tum mat ro Aastha bilkul theek hi honge tum chinta mat kar." Kalindi "kaise theek hoga."

Avdoot "ab kya hua theek matlab kya hain Shlok pe poora bharosa hain aur wo log vaha kaam kar sakte tum chinta mat kar aur ye sab sirf kuch hi din keliye." Ankush "haan aai aap chinta mat kijiye main pata karleta hoon ye sab kaun kiya aap chinta mat kijiye aap so jao thodi der aapko haram milegi." Kalindi wiped her tears and tried to take some rest. Here Siddharth trying to contact her but all in vain. He doesn't even know where she lives.

Jyoti ek baar phone uthao main tumse bohut pyaar karta hoon Jyoti pls ek baar. He also messaged her but no reply. Suddenly his phone beeped with messaged it was Jyoti he cheerfully opened it and read it and was shocked she doesn't want to hear anything from him and also it was gud bye msg forever. He was hell shocked.

Y y did she do this he already said wat he felt about her and also on that day on terrace too he said he cant live without her even though she was not forgiving him y Jyoti y cant u see love in me kya hua and a lone tear left his eye but he wiped his tears and got up with lot of determination and thought to find her and will talk to her but where to find her. No he will not back down but he also has another work he cant forget that too.

Jyoti too cried a lot after sending that message. But she wiped her tears and thought to forget him but it was bcoming very hard for her. Indrajeet too was in dilemma he doesn't know wat was happening to him he should be happy right but he cant somewhere he is feeling they were right he cant accept it whole heartedly he has proofs of them being wrong then y he is not happy haan poornima bhi hamesha yahi kaha ki wo Shlok se pyaar karti hain lekin kabhi ek baar bhii nahi kaha hain ki wo poornima se pyaar karte hain ye sab kya ho raha hain and he was roaming in the room and found a strange room and went into it. It was dark.

He switched on the light and saw here and there and he found all the unwanted things and went near and saw all of them of Shlok's love. It was all of his love on Swati and was shocked. Ye kaisa insaan hain poornima ke saath aisa kiya aur Swati se itna pyaar mujhe kuch samaj main nahi aa raha hain and he saw each and everything.

This was totally full of his love. Ye sab kya hain and he left them and came out thoughtfully. Does Aastha knows about all this if she knows y is she continuing with him did he go all the way with her too in the guest house itself is that the reason she is still with him after knowing everything about him or doesn't she believe that Shlok did all this hmm lucky man he thought.

Shlok and Aastha went into the house. There his friend Rahul is already waiting for them at the house. Shlok thanked him and also introduced Aastha he said he already saw her. Aastha too smiled at him. They all went in. Aastha just stared at house. It was a bit dusty. Shlok thanked Rahul again and set will meet him later as it is night there.

He brought food contents already. Both r tired Aastha thought to make something to eat and then take rest. Aastha took the contents and went into kitchen. Shlok just sat on the couch and leaned back and closed his eyes and recalled everything again. He was recalling each and everyword she said. How can she betray him y didn't she believe him atleast once didn't she try to trust me atleast once wat is the need to do all this.

Who the hell is poornima ye kya hain kaise karna hain pehle poornima ke bare main sochna. Aastha unintentionally looked at him once and felt heavy she was thinking wat he must be going through so she put an act. Aastha "aah Shlok Shlok aah jaldi aao." And she ran away from kitchen to him.

Shlok suddenly got up and saw at her confusingly ab kya kiya meri maa he thought. Shlok "Aastha kya hua kya hua." Aastha "Shlok cockroach hain kitchen main pls usse bhaga dijiye pls." Shlok "Kya!! Hmm Aastha kya hain yaar sirf cockroach se darti ho tum chalo kaha hain cockroach." And he was on his way to kitchen. Aastha smiled and followed him. Shlok "Aastha cockroach kaha hain."

Aastha "Shlok vaha table ke neeche." Shlok bent down and saw nothing. Shlok "Aastha yaha nahi hain." Aastha "Shlok vaha hi tha." Shlok "hmm o nautanki chup chap khana banao kuch nahi hain." Aastha "Shlok main sach kah rahi hoon ab tak vaha hi tha Shlok aap yahi rahna pls." and she turned around and removed her hair at back and put her total hair frontside.

She was smiling from front. Shlok saw here and there and finally he settled his gaze on her back. He saw his mark on her back and smiled to himself and slowly came forward and crossed his arm across her tummy and brought her back to him. Aastha "Shlok kya kar raha hain aap chodiye mujhe khana nahi khana hai kya chodiye mujhe."

Shlok smiled "achcha mujhe ek baat batayiye tum baal aage kyun rakha." Aastha was confused "kya!! Aapko garmi nahi lag raha hain kya aur mujhe garmi lag rahe hain aur bhoog bhi lagi aur aap mujhe chodiye mujhe kaam karne de." Shlok quickly turned her to him and pulled her to him.

Aastha "Shlok main thak gayi hoon pls mujhe bhoog lagi hain aur ab romance to bilkul nahi kar sakti hain pls." and she made puppy face. Shlok smiled at her and just gave a peck on her lips and left her. Aastha smiled and continued her cooking.

After dinner Shlok and Aastha were in bed. Aastha hugged him and said "Shlok aap tension mat le sab teek hoga Shlok sab teek hoga." Shlok "hmm jab tum mera saath ho mujhe kuch aur nahi chahiye tum bhi tension mat le mere liye main tumhare saath khush hoon bohut khush hoon teek hain."

Aastha smiled and kissed him on cheek and slept in his arms peacefully. This was like this for one month. Shlok tried a lot to find about Poornima since whole month. He also went to his college to find about her. He got about her. He just knew she is Indrajeets friend but he is so close he understood so he didn't back down.

After one month of efforts Siddharth took the bottle and went to AM. He looked like drunk to the full and he just stormed into the AM. Indrajeet saw him and was surprised. Ye iss vakt kya kar raha hain. Siddharth in drunken state. Siddharth "Mr Indrajeet Sarkar kya nahi kiya tumhare liye.. but I lost my love just bcoz of u Mr Indrajeet Sarkar I will remember u whole life I will not spare u Indrajeet galti un logo ne kiya tho saza mujhe kyun di sirf pyaar kiya tha usse lekin tum kisi se pyaaar kiya nahi hoga agar kiya ho tho mera pyaar ko tum iss tarah naash nahi kar sakte I will destroy u Indrajeet mark my words..." and then he fell over there and bottle fell and broke there.

Indrajeet felt sad for him he thought to destroy them he doesn't want to break him so he took him and made him sleep in the bed room. Ahilya "Indrajeet tum kya kar raha hain inko yaha kyun rakhdi." Indrajeet "thakurma hamare badlav poori ho chuke hain lekin hamare vaje inko ye haal hogaye mujhe aisa nahi chahiye thakurma hamare vaje kisi ka dil thode."

Ahilya caressed his face "isiliye main tumse itna jyaada pyaar karti hoon bete lekin tum kya karsakta ab." Indrajeet "mujhe kuch achcha nahi lag raha hain thakurma aap jo bhi kahe." And he stormed out. Ahilya saw at him leaving like that.

Episode 48

Hai Sai gud evening. Thanks for your update and pm. 👏
Hey Sai I didn't comment for 3 days because I was busy.
But I read your update daily. I didn't get time to write the comments yaar.
Really u r a great writer . Now ur updates reminds us our show back yaar.
The entry of Indrajit takkumma ahalya and poornima had made the updates same like our show but ur concept is really superb. V already know they r the villain teams. Hey really enjoyed it yaar. V r expecting some more twists in ur updates yaar. Try to bring more suspicious thing in ur update because that much v excepted yaar. V know u r making a great job. Really u r appreciatable. Hats of u Sai thanks for ur beautiful updates yaar 👏
Episode 45
Everyone pressured shlok to go away to some where . That time they can watch Indrajit and do something. But shlok is not agreeing he wants to know who is poornima. Sojal said to shlok about astha and think about her because she is afraid. Shlok said to his father he will talk their wealth back. Waw nice shlok really u r our hero don't get afraid of any one. If he didn't do anything that will get them to the right path. Yes shlok promised his dad . V know that shlok will take it back. Really that reminds our sapna and ballu. Sai u recreated the history and their chemistry once again thanks dear. V trusted u so u proved it truly waw.
Shlok went outside for something. Varad loved the way consoling his parents. Really u r son and a brother really liked ur every words yaar. Niranjan and Anjali now they're helpless parents. Anjali is getting emotional. Sojal u too r the real daughter in law of their house. U also consoling them and remembering her about astha. Anjali went to the room and saw asthu sleeping. Really like a small kid. She kissed her . That was bonding between asthu and Anjali. Really liked that part.
Astha woke up and saw shlok is not in the house. She is getting worried. She called him to his phone but he didn't pick the phone. She is going waw asthu wat r u asking to them it is quite serious but felt funny also. Shlok came and asthu u scold shlok in front of others waw very brave girl. Varad teasing astha it was awesome. Really I wished it to see this on the screen yaar. But her reply made me laugh yaar. I really just imagined like shernu Avinash and Sameer is doing this part. Liked and loved it so much yaar.
Jyothi was dying inside. She regrets that she loved siddarth. She didn't know y he did this to her family. Now she hate him but inside she loved him so much she trusted him so much but he betrayed her and her family. Really I felt it she is so poor girl. Arey astha really u r consoling her waw u know she loves him so much she saw the love in siddarth's eyes. She was trying to convince jyothi but our jyothi didn't accept she said she don't want anything. Everything has gone because of her love. Now she don't want him or anything. Really now Anjali u can decide ur daughter's life.
Episode 46
Jyothi was crying in Anjali's hand. She told to her mother that she was in deep love with siddarth. But ge betrayed them now wat will they decide she will accept this. Siddarth was calling jyothi but she didn't pick his phone. Now he doesn't know where is Jyoti living with her parents. Indrajit known about their love so he kiddnapped siddarth mother. So he wanted to do what Indrajit wants. But it betrayed his lfe his love. He was helpless he wanted her back. But where to find. Astha came to shlok . Waw shlok's word reminds once again the show. If astha is with him he have every thing. If astha is not with him he is a big zero. Waw..Then their small romantic moments was superb. I enjoyed yaar.
Shlok was talking to astha she asked about poornima. Shlok was also confused. He didn't know who is poornima. But now he wanted to know who is she. Really v also have a question yaar. What is the relation between shlok and poornima. I think there is someone r to introduce in ur ff Sai. Hey u wrote it superb. Really ur updates r quite interesting yaar. Really u r taking us somewhere else yaar. Really I don't have any words to say about ur writing yaar.
Bharka went to Indrajit and asked wat happened is it now he have the happy moments. But Indrajit answers was correct. I think Sai u gave Indrajit nice character because he is feeling also that shlok is not wrong. Same as niranjali was also nice. They r so happy when they saw him and said this is Indrajit properly. Takkumma is once again brain washing him. Anyway now he wants time to think about shlok and family.waw its nice yaar
Ashlok went to asthas house. They told everything to them. Arey asthu y r u shouting at ur mom. She just asked about shlok for that what u said yaar.Really our asthu trust shlok so much. They came house all their chatting was superb. But atlast astha got hurt and she went crying to their room. Sai u creation was superb
Episode 47
Astha was crying because she thought everyone is thinking only about shlok not for her. She told to Anjali that everyone will be happy because she is going away from them. But Anjali told that they love her very much waw. Next day ashlok went to Mumbai. Astha was crying so much on shlok's shoulder. He hugged her and kissed her hair. Waw they r alone from now henna. Superb Sai pls bring some nice mone yaar. V also waiting for this yaar.
Jyothi was crying so much . Truly she loved siddarth.Siddarth was too sad he was calling her but jyothi didn't take the phone really it was sad part. Siddarth wants her. Atlast she mgsd him she said gud bye that made him too sad m so he decided to search her. He went to AM and told wat they did to him. Because of them he lost his love. So he will not leave them. He fell down there . Poor siddarth wat to say
Shlok settled in Mumbai. He waas searching about poornima. It was nice shlok. Astha will always be with u. Avdoot and kalindhi wat to say avdoot is correct. Trust shlok . Indrajit finds shloks secret room in AM and see shlok's loves simbel to Swati. Indrajith was confused. Is shlok us telling liesor truth. If he didn't do that then wat is correct. He thought shlok us a nice guy. Indrajit waas feeling guilty because siddarth love has gone from him. It was really something yaar.
Anyway nice update yaar. I really enjoyed it Sai. Really I am happy u r taking the story to somewhere. I hope after this u will write next ff for us. V know our trust about u will not broken. Thanks yaar for the wonderful treat yaar. U r great talent writer. I am not praising u. Wat I thought I just wrote. Anyway keep rocking always like this. Ur efforts was truly nice. Keep it up continue dear... V r waiting

Hi sai nice update

Hmm Poornima's case is still a mystery... waiting to know more