New OS: Tu Kitni Achchhi Hai (08.05.2016)

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Hi guys... I m here with an OS on account of MOTHER'S DAY!!

(No time to proof read so excuse the mistakes)

Dedicating this story to all the mother's in this world.

OS: Tu Kitni Achchhi Hai

"Daddy! Daddy! Papa!" Three loud voices disturbed the perfect silence of the shooting set.
"Cut!" Director shouts over the mic & sighs inwardly as a nice romantic scene got spoiled by the three munchkins entry. But he can't say a word against those three little kids because they are the kids of the superstar Rk/ Rishab kundra.
"Let's take a break." Rk says & walks straight to his kids & took them to his vanity.
"Hey! Babies. What are you doing here? Where is your momma?" Rk asks them as he took Maya in his arms & places her on his lap as she is the youngest among the three. She is only three years old. Arjun is the eldest, a replica of Rk. Everyone calls him as future superstar & he is 9 yrs old. Vibha the middle one of 7 years old. Both Vibha & Maya are so like their mother Madhubala but all the three are naughtiest kids just like their naughty father.
"We came straight from school. Momma doesn't know we are here." Arjun informs him in a whisper so that know one hears their secret.
"Oh! Okay! Are u here to see my movie shoot?" Rk asks them curiously.
"No, daddy." Vibha shakes her head in negative.
"We are here to make a plan." Arjun informs him.
"What plan?" He asks with a smile. "What plan baby?" Rk asks Maya who is sitting silently on his lap.
"I don't know, Papa." Maya only calls her father as 'Papa' & mother as 'Momma' while the other two kids call them Daddy & Mommy. School going kids nah! So they prefer the modern way of addressing their parents. May be Maya will also change her way of calling them like her brother & sister once she joins school too. "I was sleeping at home & when I woke up I was in car with Arjun bhaiya, Vibha didu & Bittu chachamama was driving us here... When we came here you were busy shooting & it was never ending... My leg started paining so we called for you... Then you..." Maya cutely explains.
"God! Maya... How slowly you will talk? You will take all our time. Just keep quiet." Arjun scolds his little sister upseting her. "We should have better left her at home." Arjun says irately to Vibha. Vibha looks at her little sister sympathetically.
"Arjun! That's not the way to talk with your little sister. She is a baby. Don't forget that." Rk scolds his son. He can't stand anyone scolding his daughters. Not even their brother scolding them.
"Sorry, daddy."
"It's okay, bhaiya." Maya smiles forgiving her brother. Arjun quickly kisses his little sister's chubby cheek. He easily loose his patient so like his dad but he loves his sisters so much.
"Well, dad... We asked bittu uncle to bring Maya to our school so that we three can directly come here to meet u."
"Oh okay! So what's the matter?"
"Tomorrow is Mother's Day... & we three are going to do something special for Mommy & we need your help in that." Arjun explains
"There are only 7 days in a week nah bhaiya? What is this 8 day? Mother's day?" Maya asks her bro curiously. Rk laughs hearing his baby girl's innocent question & soundly kisses on her cheek & she kisses her Papa back. "Its a special day for Mother's Mayu..." Arjun calmly tells her.
"Papa? There is no special day for u?" Maya asks feeling sad that her papa is not as special as her momma. "We have baby. There is father's day."
"Oh! When it is?" Maya asks curiously.
"Every year 19th of June we celebrate as father's day."
"Why we dontt celebrate mother's day & father's day on the same day? When both are equals why we celebrate father's day a month late?"
"Mothers are more special, baby" Rk reasons her.
"No, Papa is also more special." Maya is one Papa's princess always supporting him & favouring him. "Mayu... Lets first celebrate mother's day & then we will celebrate Father's day when it comes okay?" Vibha tries to cut her off. "We will do something big for Papa. We will ask momma to make a big cake for Papa, okay?" Maya asks making Rk chuckle. She is not going to make any secret plans for Father's day as she is letting out everything now itself. "Oh yeah... That reminds me... Daddy, we should order for a cake." Arjun says. "Hmm... 32 kgs cake with mommy 's miniature on top of the cake."
"Why 32 kgs?"
"Thats mommy's age."
"But she is a mother to you only for 10 yrs right? Then why not 10 kgs cake?"
"She will be mother to us for the next 100 yrs so are you okay with 100 kgs cake?" Arjun retorts. He is really getting impatient. He has lot to prepare but his little sister & father are constantly disturbing him with their silly questions.
"Okay!" Rk raises his hands up as if surrendering.
"On a second thought why don't we make cake for mommy?" Arjun wonders.
"Thats a great idea." Vibha joins her brother.
"You both know to make cake?" Rk asks shooting his brow up.
"No!" They shrug & share a look of what to do.
"No problem, bhaiya. Papa is there nah? He will help us in baking a cake." Maya says proudly.
Rk looks down at her & pouts cutely. "Why, baby?"
"Don't be lazy, Papa. You only said nah? Mother's are more special then we will do it really special."
"But..."
"No, buts daddy. For Mommy's last birthday you make fruit cake on your own for her right? This time too you do that for us..." Vibha orders him & without a word Rk obliges to her order.
"Oh, daddy, mainly you need to cancel all your shooting for tomorrow." Vibha orders her father again. Only Rk's wife & his kids can order him in this entire world.
"Okay, darling." Rk nods & takes his phone to inform his P.A bittuji to cancel his shooting schedule for tomorrow.
"Then... We need to take mommy to a surprise place... But where we can go?" Arjun asks an idea to his dad. Rk goes completely blank & simply shrugs.
"Shall we bring momma here? This set is pretty nah bhaiya?" Maya asks her brother. When they reached this place first thing they did before meeting their father was look around the beautiful set. Arjun smiles at his cute little sister for coming up with this brilliant idea. He thought of leaving her at home but here she is helping them though she has no much idea about anything.
"I thought we were in Switzerland when we came in." Vibha says in wonder.
"Daddy, can we give our surprise to mommy here? You can make arrangements for that?" Arjun asks.
"C'mon, Arjun.. Daddy is this films producer & hero too so he can do whatever with this set." Vibha says with an attitude familiar to Rk. Arjun nods.
Rk hears his phone ringing & quickly answers it because he cant keep his wife waiting.
"Rk..." Madhu says, panicking.
"What's wrong, Madhu? You okay?" Rk asks in concern.
"Maya is missing. She was sleeping in our room & I was watering the plants in our garden & when I came back to check on her she was not there. Even Arjun & Vibha didnt reach home from school yet. Its way past their usual time. I am so worried Rk. Can you please come home soon?"
"Madhu, they are with me." Rk replies softly
"What?" Madhu shouts from the other end. "When did you came home? Where you all are now? Whats going on? Dont u know to inform me before taking them with you? You have any idea how worried I was? How could you..."
"Biwi! Biwi... Listen to me. I was in shoot. They came here with bittuji."
"Oh why?" Madhu asks suspiciously. "No daddy. Dont tell her anything." Arjun & Vibha mouths at him. Rk nods & says "just to see the shooting."
"Oh. Is Maya with you?" Madhu asks.
"Yes."
"Give the phone to her." Madhu always makes her inquiry with Maya as she always blurts out the truth.
Rk closes his eyes in dread & passes the phone to Maya.
"Momma... I miss you. Bittu chachamama brought me here. I was sleeping at home nah? Then suddenly when I woke up I was in car with Arjun Bhaiya & Vibha didu..."
"Dont tell the reason why we are here baby." Vibha pleads Maya in a whisper so her mother could not hear her from the other end.
"Momma, wait. Vibha didu is saying something, I couldnt hear her properly when you talk. Wait a minute. What didu?" She says to her momma & without muting it she asks loudly so that her momma could hear her.
"Nothing. You just tell momma what all we saw in today's shoot." Arjun instructs her so that she will tell his mother about the shoot & forget about their secret plan.
"Momma, we saw Papa's shoot today."
"What all you saw in that?" Madhu probes.
"There is this heroine aunty... She was clinging to Papa... It felt so Eewww!" Maya makes a face showing her disgust. Rk closes his eyes in dread. Today he is gonna sleep on couch. Thats for sure!
"Oh! Now you three come home soon & give the phone back to papa" Madhu says to Maya.
"Okay, momma." Maya says & passes the phone to her Papa.
"Hello, biwi?"
"Dont you have sense Rk? How could you shoot for such romantic scenes in front of our kids?"
"I dont know, biwi that they were coming here. I was in the middle of the shoot when they came here."
"What's this secrecy going with you people?" Madhu asks susiciously.
"Nothing. I will bring them home shortly." Rk says & hangs up.
"Kids, we are leaving now. Rest we will discuss on our way." Rk tells them & takes them to his car. "Daddy, we will get momma a dress for her to wear tomorrow?" Vibha suggests.
"Okay, darling." Rk agrees with a smile & first took his kids to a designer saree shop. There his three kids started fighting as they wanted their father to finalize their choice & in the end Rk bought all the three sarees chosen by his three kids. If he selects one among them then the other two will feel bad for rejecting their saree choice so he got all the three plus he got one more saree for his beautiful wife which he wanted to gift her separately.

--0--

"Daddy, dont sleep, you have to help us in baking cake." Vibha softly reminds Rk when they all sit for dinner. Madhu serves them first & for Maya she feeds her from her plate as she takes too long to eat on her own. She cant even hold the food properly with her fingers so she prefers either her Papa or Momma feeding her.
"Okay, I wont. But you guys dont sleep & leave me alone in the kitchen, okay?" Rk whispers back.
"We have work to do like desining a greeting card for mommy & packing gifts so we wont sleep." Arjun whispers to Rk. "And daddy, midnight we will come to your room once mommy has slept so dont lock your room door & make us knock then mommy will wake up & all our plan will go waste."
"Okay!" Rk slyly nods.
"What you guys are whispering?" Madhu asks with a frown.
"Nothing." Rk, Arjun & Vibha shakes their heads & looks down at their plate.
"Momma... Iss... Iss.. Its spicy. Water!" Maya acts to distract her mother.
"Here, baby." Madhu helps Maya drink the water then continues feeding her forgetting to question the strange behaviour of the three sitting opposite to her.

--0--

"Did you find our kids behaviour strange today, Rk?" Madhu asks as she settles on the bed next to him.
"Why? I didnt find anything strange. They were so normal only." Rk says & pulls Madhu in his arms & makes her head rest on his chest so that she wont see his face & find his lies.
"How will you? Because you were behaving strange too." Madhu says.
"Me? Nah, biwi."
"Well, what scene was that which made my kids feel disgusted."
"Come on, biwi... They are cartoon watching kids so they dont like romantic scene. But you know I have chocolate boy image in this industry so romance is must in my movies"
"Chocolate boy? Don't forget you are father of three kids." Madhu reminds him with a smirk.
"Still I look hot & handsome."
"That you are, my superstar" Madhu grins & leans closer to kiss him but stops midway.
"Was it too romantic? Any kiss scenes?" Madhu asks with a frown.
"Just one camera angle kiss." Rk says honestly.
"Hmm... Okay, Maya told that heroine was clinging to you... Is she irking you with her closeness? You want me to set her straight?"
"Oh biwi. She wont eat your husband & I dont need you protecting me like a mother hen." Rk says with a laugh.
"If you say so... Okay!" Madhu sighs & rests her head back on his chest.
"Hey! Where is my kiss? You are going to sleep without kissing me?" Rk accuses her & pulls her hair gently so that she lifts her head up & face him.
"Oh I forgot."
"Nowadays, all you have in mind is our kids & my heroines." Rk makes a sad face.
"Drama bandh karo, Rk." Madhu scolds him & kisses his lips soundly.
"Now happy?" Madhu asks grinning.
"Very!" Rk grins back licking his lips.
Then Madhu goes to sleep while Rk stays wide awake waiting for his kids to come to his room to take him for their help.
Rk waited for nearly an hour but his kids didnt turn up so he makes Madhu lie on her back on the bed & went to his kids room to find them sleeping in different positions. All the three are lying on the floor with their charts, painting colors, crayons & sketch pens.
Rk smiles seeing the effort taken by them to make their momma happy on a special day. Then he went to bake a special fruit cake as asked by his kids for their mother. Rk didnt wake them up for help as he didnt have the heart to disturb his three sleeping pies.

--0--

Next day morning, Madhu gets surprised seeing breakfast ready on the table & her husband & kids silently sitting on the chairs with their hands folded.
"Who made all this?" Madhu asks.
"We!"
"But why?" Madhu asks smiling.
"Daily you cook for us so today we did this for you. Even daddy will cook lunch for you today as he has no shoot today & we will help him in the preparation."
"Really?" Madhu asks with a smile looking at Rk. Rk nods smiling back.
"Aww.. Thats so sweet. But babies you dont have to do all that. Momma will do everything."
"Mommy, you do everything for us through out the year so just for a day you take rest & let us pamper you." Arjun tells her.
"Mommy, evening dinner we will have from outside & for that we will get you ready." Vibha orders.
"We are going out?" Madhu asks excitedly.
"Yep!" Maya nods equally excited.
After breakfast, Rk & Arjun went to prepare lunch while Maya & Vibha took their momma to rest for a while. When Madhu wanted to water her garden, Vibha & Maya volunteered to do that for her. The whole day they didnt let Madhu do anything. Madhu feels so happy seeing her hubby & babies pampering her. She always loved to look after them but now they are looking after her which makes her feel strange. Her world is her husband & her kids. She will give her life for them. She will do anything & everything to keep them happy. Madhu never fails to thank the almighty for giving her this wonderful family.

--0--

Evening, Madhu gets dressed in a black saree which was a gift from her darling husband. She even got three more saree gifts from her kids but they decided among themselves & to avoid dispute on whose saree their momma will wear, they decided to go with their dad's selection which made Rk jump in joy.
Then they take Madhu to Rk's studio.
"Rk? We are here to your studio? Are we not going to any restaurant for dinner?"
"Come you will see." Rk winks at her & leads her in as their kids walks ahead.
"Surprise!!!" Arjun, Vibha & Maya shrieks as the lights came on & the snow drizzled on them.
"Its cold." Madhu says & moves closer to Rk.
"Come, momma, we will sit & have our dinner first." Maya says & drags her momma to the dining table set on the middle with five seats.
"Momma, you don't feed me. Today I will feed you." Maya says in her sweet baby voice & struggles to tear the roti. Then Rk helps her in making it into small pieces so that she can feed her momma. Madhu smiles happily with tears brimming her eyes.
"Aww... My baby." Madhu lifts Maya & places her on her lap & kisses her hand & then eats the food she feeds her.
After having their dinner, suddenly the light go off & madhu wonders whats happening and a minute later, a spot light falls on top of a piano & next to it she finds her son sitting ready to play. "Mom! This song is specially for you." Vibha says as another spot light falls on her as she holds a mic. And finally yet another spot light falls on Maya who is ready to dance.
Arjun is good in playing piano, keyboard & guitar. Vibha is good in singing & painting. Maya is an excellent dancer. She starts dancing just by hearing some random songs go on tv.
"Aww..." Madhu looks at her kids & blinks her eyes to clear her vision.
Rk wraps his arms around Madhu & pulls her closer to him as he knows how emotional she feels seeing the unconditional love showered by their kids.
Then the music slowly starts, followed by the song lyrics & dancing.

## Tu Kitni Achchhi Hai, Tu Kitni Bholi Hai
Pyaari Pyaari Hai O Maa Aa Aa O Maa
O Maa Aa Aa O Maa

Vibha sings sweetly looking straight at her mother & Madhu has her eyes wavering from Arjun to vibha to Maya. She don't know on whom to concentrate.

Ke Yeh Jo Duniya Hai, Yeh Ban Hai Kaanto Ka
Tu Phulwaari Hai O Maa Aa Aa O Maa
O Maa Aa Aa O Maa

Maya swirls round & round & dances showing facial expressions. She will become one fine heroine in the future just like her mother. Yes, Madhubala Rishab kundra was also a heroine. She acted only one movie "Ishq ek Junoon" with her husband & that was a block buster hit. Soon after the success of the movie she fell pregnant with her first child Arjun & she became a full fledged house wife devoting her life for her family. Though Rk wanted his wife to resume her acting Madhu didn't agree with him as she was never desired of becoming a heroine. She only wanted to be his wife & be the mother of his children & she got what she wished for.

Dukhan Laagi Hai Maa Teri Akhiya
Dukhan Laagi Hai Maa Teri Akhiya
Mere Liye Jaagi Hai Tu Saari Saari Ratiya
O Meri Nindiya Pe Apni Nindiya Bhi Tune Waari Hai
O Maa Aa Aa O Maa
O Maa Aa Aa O Maa

Arjun plays the piano adding effect to Vibha's song & he has magic in his hands as he perfectly presses the keys without missing a note. Their children are really gifted with in born talents & Rk & Madhu are so proud of them.

Tu Kitni Achchhi Hai, Tu Kitni Bholi Hai
Pyaari Pyaari Hai O Maa Aa Aa O Maa
O Maa Aa Aa O Maa

Apna Nahi Tujhe Sukh Dukh Koyi
Apna Nahi Tujhe Sukh Dukh Koyi
Main Muskaaya Tu Muskaayi, Main Roya Tu Royi
Mere Hasane Pe, Mere Rone Pe Tu Balihaari Hai
O Maa Aa Aa O Maa
O Maa Aa Aa O Maa

Maya comes running to her mother & takes her with her to the dance floor, then they both start swaying. Rk watches them with a content smile on his face. He never thought his life would be this perfect. If he should thank anyone for this then he will thank his wife who brought his life to its head & gave him all the happiness of this world. She gave him three most precious gifts to him & that is his kids.

Maa Bachcho Ki Jaan Hoti Hai
Maa Bachcho Ki Jaan Hoti Hai
Woh Hote Hai Kismatwale Jinake Maa Hoti Hai
Kitni Sundar Hai, Kitni Shital Hai
Nyaari Nyaari Hai O Maa Aa Aa O Maa
O Maa Aa Aa O Maa

Tu Kitni Achchhi Hai, Tu Kitni Bholi Hai
Pyaari Pyaari Hai O Maa Aa Aa O Maa
O Maa Aa Aa O Maa.

Finally, the song ends & the three munchkins hugs their mother & Madhu showers them with kisses.
"Hey! Kiddos, can Papa dance with your momma for one song? Please?" Rk pleads them. He couldnt sit anymore silently looking at his beautiful wife in black saree pouring all her love only to his kids.
"Of course, Papa." Maya agrees. She can never say no to her papa.
"Thank you, darling" then Rk pulls Madhu in his arms. "Arjun, Music." Rk nods at him. "Whenever I see him sitting at the piano & playing... He reminds me of you, Rk" Madhu whispers to him. Rk smiles remembering their first meet was when he was playing guitar & saw Madhu standing in the bridge.
Arjun smiles & plays the tune of "Bahon ki darmiya" song tune.
"Rk, this song reminds me of our first karva chaut" Madhu says feeling nostalgic. They danced for the same song in the same studio ten years back & now they are dancing in front of their three kids.
"I remember, biwi. Rk's style karvachaut. You looked so beautiful then & you look so beautiful now, mother of my children." Rk whispers near her ear making her blush profusely. Nothing has changed in their life. They still love each other like crazies. Their ishq is like melting ice and junoon is like brazing fire. A deadly combination of love & passion.
"Shall we cut the cake? Kiddos?" Rk asks once the song got over.
Kids nod their heads excitedly. Then Rk snaps his finger & bittuji brings the fruit cake Rk specially make for Madhu.
"Happy Mother's Day, Momma" Arjun, Vibha, Maya, even Rk & bittuji shouts with the kids making Madhu laugh in joy.
Then Madhu cuts the cake & fed her husband first, then Arjun, then Vibha, the Maya & finally feeds bittuji, a person who was always with her & supported her like a true brother.
After cake cutting gets over, Arjun gives a greeting card made by him & his sisters. Though Maya doesn't know to write she helped him in coloring the greeting card.
Madhu reads out loud what he has written in it.

"Dear Momma,
For the world you are our momma but for us you are our world... And we know, for you we are your world... Your day begins by seeing our smiles & your day ends after we give you our good night kisses... When we are happy we see the joy in your eyes... When we cry we see the pain in your eyes... When we achieve something then we see the pride in your eyes... When we trouble you we see anger in your eyes... When we play we see the fun in your eyes... Your eyes... Its pretty special. Daddy loves your eyes so much becauses its always watching us... Your eyes are meant to see the good & bad we do & guide us & guard us.
Momma, every mother is special in this world but you are more special to us because you are OUR momma. * wink *
Love u,
Arjun
Vibha
Maya

Madhu looks up at them with tears eyes.
"Love you, babies." Madhu says & hugs them. She couldnt bring her voice to express her feelings in words.
Then the kids start playing with their bittu uncle. Madhu watches them happily playing with him, after making her heart swell with unbound happiness.
Suddenly Rk disappears & Madhu's eyes search for him & a moment later he comes riding a bike.
"Wanna go for a drive?" Rk asked winking. Madhu blushes remembering yet another special memory, they shared in this studio, their bike drive.
"To where?" Madhu asks.
"Switzerland" Rk grins. Madhu laughs & sits at the back, then Rk takes a little away from the eye shot of their kids so that he can have some cozy time with his biwi.
Rk stops the bike but they still didnt get off of the bike & in the back ground a moving screen is placed & a gaint fan placed at a distance so that it gives them a feel as if they are moving.
"HAPPY MOTHER'S DAY, biwi."
"Thank you, Rk." Madhu smiles happily. "You all made this day so special to me. I am so happy. I love you & our kids so much. And haan thanks for your fruit cake" Madhu says & hugs him tightly.
"Madhu, I have never told you this before... I am telling you this now..."
"What?"
"They say wife is like a second mother... I don't know whether its true or not... But in my case its so true. Not even my mother loved me like the way you love me. You see me just like how you see our kids. Tu kitni achchhi hai, maa!!" Hearing Rk say that madhu burst out into happy tears.
"You are my first baby, Rk. Our kids will grow up but I dont think you will ever." Madhu says & ruffles his hair lovingly. Rk laughs hearing that.
"I love you, biwi."
"I love you, Rk."
"How you feel now?" Rk asks with a smile as Madhu hugs him tightly resting her head on his shoulder
"Feeling blissful." She says & closes her eyes. "Ten years back!" Madhu says with a huge sigh.
"We dreamed of having ek ladka & doh ladkiyon. We traveled to our future & talked about our kids, Arjun, Vibha & Maya."
"now we are having them & talking about our past. Everything is perfect as we dreamed."
"Yeah. You are still crazily in love with me."
"So are you, Rk."
"You are still my jungli billi." Rk says with a chuckle.
"You are still my right kameena" Madhu says & presses a kiss on the side of his cheek.
"We are still watching Mr. India movie. Our favorite movie."
"Haha... Oh my god, Rk... We have come a long way..."
"We still have a long way to go, biwi."
"Yes. There is no end to our prem kahani, right?" Madhu asks.
"Rishbala's love is forever!!!" Rk declares & Rk tilts his head back & Madhu leans forward as they kiss each other.

@@@@@ THE NEVER ENDING LOVE STORY @@@@@

Hope you all liked this one shot & relished our Rishbala's cute sweet moments with their kids Arjun, Vibha & Maya.

HAPPY MOTHER'S DAY!!!

Please do hit the like button & comment your views.

I should be studying now but used a little of that time to write something for your all... So please consider that leave a few words about the story.

Thanks
Love,
Sudha

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Posted: 9 years ago
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First! Sorry for late comments. Oh wow.. So cute! Story is so beautiful... I really like the title Tu kitni Achchhi hai.. Thanks for such a great story in worlds best day.
Edited by .Poorva. - 9 years ago
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Res
Unres
Nice OS
As always love u so much 😛 😉
Umm for writing DS beautiful OS..
Happy mother's y u too
Edited by pirl18 - 9 years ago
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Aww this story is super awesome ❤️ Loved all the surprises they did for Madhu. Well, moms are always special 😳 I think everyday should be a mother's day for all the things they do for us since the day we are born ❤️
Beautiful piece of writing ❤️ Truly heart touching.

Glad to read such a sweet story from you after a long time ❤️ Yeah I've been inactive on Madhubala forum 😕😆 Loads to catch up.

PS- Best of luck for your exams Sudha 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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So cute and sweet os
Happy Mother's Day
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unres!
First time you gave ur story a Hindi title, no??
super cute was this OS. Loved all the kiddos..they are so sweet & truly love their parents. ❤️ Madhu n RK are proud parents.
thanks for pm..
Edited by ..BlackSwan.. - 9 years ago
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It is so so so ...
I am just speechless
Wonderful update
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res... Res... Res...!!!!!!!
Unress..!!
I want to say to you... "Tu kitni acchi" hai..
Wonderfull os on moothers day..!!
Aww.. Baby maya.. She got kidnapped by her own bro & sis.. & when see opened her eyes she was in car... Lol.
Hmmm.. Arjun is cool boy just like his dad... & vibha is lovely.. In her one rk's quality is dictating everyone..
Hehee.. Baby maya.. Distract her mom very well...
Trio promised to help rk but slept off
But when rk is here what else need dear...!!
The letter brings tears to my eyes but before they left my eyes.. I dabbed them back..

Very beautifulll ... & last part senti updt..
And wah what a family time...
Thanks for pm... 😃
Edited by --Evil_Angel-- - 9 years ago
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a beautiful story!

I loved how you mixed the past scenes with the present. It linked the characters for me perfectly.

I felt like this was the journey that we never got a chance to see on the show.

Perfect past, present and a positive future.

Oh and I do love Maya!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful OS,
amazingly written
kids are so cute loved their surprises
thanks for writing this lovely story

Edited by harini_ - 9 years ago

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