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Posted: 9 years ago
hai nice updates...
wat sai ur sending new characters one by one but not revealing anything a bit...still mystery...
whole agni family also confuesd like us wat was happening...
it was like keeping food infront n not allowing to eat...
anyway ashlok were going away...atleast have some peace in their lives...
story keeps the readers to hook it...
nice going...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: nadeeka1200

Hi sai I am first to comment today

They suppos to Mumbai
Don't let them suffer more
Nice update thank you
Waiting for next update

yayyy
i m happy that u r happy to be first
thank u so much
i wont let them suffer dont worry i know wat u ppl want
will update soon

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: rd0309

So Agnihotri family deciding a counter plan for Indrajeet... Good. And I like this over possessive side of Aastha. Ashlok going away for few days... Chalo issi bahane unka honeymoon bhi ho jayega!!

hmm counter plan direct plan think watever u want
hmm Aastha hain hi itni dramebaaz aur Shlok pe itna jyaada pyaar karte hain to itna bhi drama to bante hain na
yes Honeymoon samajte hain
thanks for commenting
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: vaishux

Nice update...

Poor jyoti...feeling sad for her😒
Loved shlok Aastha and varad interaction😳
Thank you!

thank u

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

awesome update...
well written...
agni's planning for teaching indrajeet a lesson...
ashlok to go mumbai..
hope they wont suffer more...
continue soon...
thnks 4 d pm...
may b i wont b able to read ur next update for 2-3 days..
as i wil b busy with my shows 500 epis celebration..
i hv taken lots of work for it...
so dont b disappointed if m not commenting...
but i wil comment after that...

thank u diduuu
hmmm not a plan first they wanted to be safe
they wont i assure u
k i wont disappoint
hope u rock ur prof
all the best diduuu
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: syvalini

hai nice updates...

wat sai u r sending new characters one by one but not revealing anything a bit...still mystery...
whole agni family also confuesd like us wat was happening...
it was like keeping food infront n not allowing to eat...
anyway ashlok were going away...atleast have some peace in their lives...
story keeps the readers to hook it...
nice going...

thank u
hmm wait wait u will know everything by last update
sabar rakhiye na
😆 😆 u want to eat na itna bhoogi hain kya aap kya chahiye aapkoo chicken biryani ya mutton kurma
hmm k k


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Posted: 9 years ago

Episode 46


Anjali "Jyoti yaha aake baitho." Jyoti "aai I m sorry main sach kah rahi hoon I don't know he does like that I m sorry." Anjali "jyoti mat ro mere bachchi mat ro bhool jao use bhool jao Jyoti tumhare liye hi teek hain dekho mrei taraf dekho main ne kuch nahi kaha na don't cry ab main usse jyaada achchi insaan se shaadi karoongi teri tum fikar mat kar."


Jyoti cried even hard and hugged her mother tightly "but I loved him I loved him so much I m sorry I should have said u earlier ab aap jaisa kahe vaisa hi hoga I m sorry aai." Anjali "chup ho ja Jyoti mat ro k." Siddharth tried a lot but he didn't find her. Aastha slowly went to Shlok and placed a hand on him. Shlok saw her with lot of love in his eyes.


He held her face in her palms and brought her to him and kissed her on forehead and hugged her "thanks Aastha thanks a lot for coming into my life and trusting me a lot tum ho to main hoon tum nahi tho kuch bhi nahi Aastha main ek vaada karna chahti hoon tumse." Aastha "kaunsa vaada." Shlok "aaj se main tumhe kabhi nahi chodunga ham ek hain Aastha koi hamko alag nahi kar sakte."


Aastha "hmm ye baat ab aap kah rahe hain ab tak kya hua haan main hamesha aapke saath hi honge teek hain aur aap bhi mujhe kal ki tarah akele mat chodke jaana hain aap jaanta hain main kitna dar gayi thi." Shlok "Aastha main sirf saaman lene gaya tha." Aastha "fir bhi aap jab bhi baahar jayenge na mujhe batayenge teek hain lekin Shlok main aapse ek sawal poochna chahti hoon."


Shlok "Kya" Aastha "ye poornima kaun hain wo log iss tarah galat inzaaam lagane se kya aata mujhe kuch samaj main nahi aa raha hain kya tumne kabhi nahi suna hain kya uska naam." Shlok thoughtfully looked at her "nahi Aastha main bhi first time sun raha hain uska naam pata nahi wo kaun hain mujhse kya lena dena hain aur tum in sab main mat pad main ye sab dekhloonga k tumhara kaam sirf ye ki mujhe khush rahna." And he brought her closer and blew air at her lips.


Aastha shivered and suddenly came forward to kiss him. Shlok backed and ran to the door. Aastha saw at him angrily and took the remote and threw at him. He ran out suddenly laughing. Niranjan saw him and smiled. Shlok was embarrassed. Aastha thought akdu kahin ka.


Barkha came to Indrajeet who looked thoughtfully. Barkha "kya hua Indrajeet aap itni silent kyun hain aaj tho bohut khushi hone ki baat hain na aapko." Indrajeet "nahi Barkha pata nahi mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hain ki Shlok aisa kiya hain tumne dekha wo kis tarah peshaya." Barkha "matlab aap kya kah rahe hain aap uski baate kaise maante hain u know u r the best hubby in the world u can know wat is right and wat is wrong but u know poornima loves Shlok so much she also said u that she loved him so much tho ye sab sahi hi hain na Shlok hi ushe dhokha diya ya fir aap hi sochlijiye agar Shlok aisa nahi kiya tho aapne galat kiya hain na."


Indrajeet "haan tum jo kah raha hain teek hi hain but something is wrong I cant understand it they behaved as if they don't know anything and if Niranjan wanted this property then y didn't he oppose me I don't understand this at all ye sab kya ho raha hain aur I saw them I saw their eyes they looked happier wen they saw me aur Anjali aai tho bohut khush hua is it acting or is it real I cant understand Barkha pls tum mujhe akela chodo kuch der keliye."


Ahilya "Indrajeet beta tum iss tarah pareshan mat ho ham tumko iss tarah nahi dekh sakte tum kuch bhi kiya wo sab sahi hain uss Niranjan aur Shlok ko hona hi hain tum jaante ho tumko kiss tarah chod ke chali gaye bachpan main u don't know Indrajeet wo sab bohut achchi acting kar rahe hain tum tension mat le ye sab hona hi tha ye sab tumhara hi hain Indrajeet usne bhi aisa hi kaha tum nahi suna hain kya."


Indrajeet "haan thakurma aap sahi kaha lekin I was confused for that sake only y did he accept that this is all mine I don't understand it doesn't make any sense at all. Y did he accept so easily I felt they r happier indeed. I cant join the dots thakurma mujhe pls kuch der keliye akele chodiye pls."


Ahilya "teek hain Indrajeet but don't take strain ab sab hogaya jo hua achcha keliye hua aur jo tumhara tha ab tumhara hi hua ab tum rest lijiye k." Indrajeet "Ji thakurma." Ahilya smiled and patted his arm and left. Barkha too left.


Shlok and Aastha both went to her home and said everything to him. Everyone were shocked. Kalindi cried with Aastha again. Kalindi took Aastha into her room and embraced her and cried out loudly. Kalindi "Aastha tumhe yakin hain ki Shlok aisa nahi hain." Aastha was shocked and got angry "aai aainda aisa mat kahiye mere pati ke bare samji aap Shlok aisa kabhi nahi kar sakte sapne main bhi nahi samje aap aayinda mere saamne Shlok ki bare main aisa mat khiya teek hain main nahi sahongi aur ek baar."


Kalindi shouted "Aastha main teri aai hoon mujhe tumhari fikar hain." Aastha "agar hain tho mere bharosa pe bharosa rakh samje aap Shlok meri bina nahi rah sakte aai aur main bhi uske bina nahi rah sakte pls aai ham yaha sirf aapko batane aayi ki ham yaha se Mumbai jaa raha hain Shlok mujhe promise kiya ki kuch din yaha se door jayenge ham pata nahi ye sab kyun ho raha hain kya ho raha hain lekin mujhe sirf ye pata hain ki aaj main sirf Shlok ki vaje se hi khush aaj agar wo nahi hain tho main bhi nahi aai aap nahi jaante uski bare main kis tarah mujhe sambhal liya jab aap log mera saath nahi tha agar Shlok aisa hain tho aasani se mujhe bhi dhokha de sakte lekin aisa nahi hain aai I know him very well pls u too understand and he was feeling very grief inside I know him aai he doesn't want to express it he was dying inside I saw him at night he was recalling his past aai Swati aise kaise kar sakte hain uske saath main soch bhi nahi sakta hoon jo bhi hain aai ye sab galat hain aur main Shlok ke saath hi rahoongi kisi bhi haal main samje aap."


Kalindi "achcha teek hain Aastha lekin mujhe teri chinta ho rahi hain ab kaha jaogi kaise rahogi." Aastha "haan aai wo tho main bhool hi gayi aai ham Ankush bhai ka ghar main jayenge vahi ham safe rah sakte. Kya bolu aai." Kalindi "teek hain Aastha lekin aap log akele vaha.." Aastha "aai kuch nahi hoga hame ham kuch der keliye yaha se jaana hain aai Shlok ka mood bhi teek hojayega aur wo Indrajeet bhi shaant hoga tabhi ham kuch kar sakte hain."


Kalindi "lekin aap log vaha kya karoge kuch kaam nahi hain aur paise." Aastha looked thoughtful and said "aai aap chinta mat kijiye ham kuch na kuch dekhlenge no problem aai..." Kalindi "nahi Aastha bina kaam aap log kaisa jihpaogi Aastha tum samajte kyun nahi."


Shlok "aai aap chinta mat kijiye vaha mera friend hain wo sab kuch dekhlenge aur usko ek company bhi hain wo jaroor madad karega mujhe.." Aastha looked doubtful "kaun hain Shlok." Shlok "wo Rahul hain na us din tumne bachane ki madad ki." Aastha looked doubtful and nodded without remembering him actually.


Shlok "aai aur aap bilkul chinta mat kijiye I think about Aastha b4 I think about myself mujhpe bharosa rakh Aastha ab tak us ghar main kaisa hain ab bhi vaisa hi hoga ap chinta mat kijiye." Aastha "haan aayi ye pehle hi meri bodyguard ho chuke hain aap chinta mat kijiye." And she smiled. Shlok nodded his head and thought to himself nautanki kahin ke.


Kalindi "teek hain beta Aastha ka dyaan rakhna aur tum bhi khush rahna aap log ko aisa dekh ke bohut sukun milta hain mujhe." Shlok took her blessing. Shlok sighed Ankush. Ankush nodded then Shlok left. He also took blessings of Avdoot. Shlok and Aastha went to their home and everyone were silent again. Shlok too lost in his thoughts. Aastha too was silent. Everything was running infront of their eyes again.


Slowly a tear dropped from Anjali. Shlok slowly "aai aap mat royiye ye sirf kuch hi pal ka don't worry sab teek hoga main teek karoonga aap log chinta mat kijiye." Anjali "nahi beta main uskeliye nahi ro rahi hoon tum jaa raha hain na isiliye pata nahi aur kab aaoge pls beta har roj phone karna." Aastha "oho aai aap kyun tension le rahi hain main hoon na har vakt aapko phone karke tang karoongi."


Anjali smiled "pata nahi Shlok tumhare saath akela kaisa rahega bichara pls Aastha use tang mat karna." Aastha "haaan main tang karoongi use aap log na sirf uska hi fikar kar rahe hain mera kya main mar bhi jaoo aap logo ko koi farak hi nahi padta." Anjali yelled "Aastha aisa marne ki baat mat karna samajte nahi hain kya tumhe."


Aastha "haan tho jab bhi aap log sirf uski hi bare main pooch rahe hain ek baar bhi mujhe sambhal ke rakhna Aastha nahi kaha bohut bure hain aap log." And she sobbed and went into the room. Everyone nodded their heads thinking of her nautanki. Varad "Shlok" Shlok "kya karu dada ab main kya karu bol ab tu hi bol main kya karu iska." Jyoti smiled.


Anjali too smiled and slowly went to her room. Varad "Shlok I know wat u might be going through but u have to be happy atleast for Aastha sake she really doesn't want to see u sad and I m happy u married Aastha Shlok." Shlok smiled. Anjali went in and sat beside her. Aastha turned away "aap kyun aayi aap log tho bohut khushi ho raha hain main jaa rahi hoon na." Anjali "Aastha dekho meri taraf kya ham sach main khushi honge tumhara bina dekho meri taraf."

Episode 47

Edited by Saibhargav - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update...now waiting there Mumbai adventure...I have a question r u planning to write another story after this one????
I really love to read ur writing...hope you'll write...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Great update sai thank you
I like astha this way
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
A very enjoyable update. Waiting for Ashlok's Mumbai adventure!!

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