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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello people... This is shweta here..
I'm not quite experienced in writing stories but I keep trying it on and off...
This is my first OS for this forum...
Hope you guys enjoy it...

Dev Sonakshi OS- Realisation

Sona was anxiously walking back and forth as today was the day she was loosing her first and last love. Today was the day she knew he'll become someone else's love and she will never be able to move on or forget him.
Suddenly her trail of thoughts is broken when her phone starts to ring
*DEV CALLING*
Her heart just skipped a beat.
Sona: Hello *choking up*
Dev: Sona, I mean Dr. Bose... Where are you, aap ab tak aayi nahi, na apne mujhe call kiya, it's my wedding today and how come you aren't here, i tght we were friends
Sona: Congratulations Mr. Dixit. Hum shayad aaj ke baad kabhi nahi milengi. Good luck with your life. Bye.
*sona disconnected the call*
Dev: hello hello... Sonaaa
Sona breaks down completely and starts to cry uncontrollably.
On the other hand Dev din know why but he wasn't happy with the wedding, in his head he knew he wasn't doing the right thing. He knew this is happening according to what he had planned in his head, but his heart is rejecting it all today.
Dev din know why but he wanted this wedding to be cancelled, he wanted some miracle to happen, he wanted to just talk to Sona.
That's when he sits down on a chair and closes his eyes.
Dev starts to get flashes
Seeing Sonakshi for the first time
Their fights
They being friends
Sonakshis accident
The thought of almost loosing her
Her talks
Her confession

Dev gets up and that's when he realises that he loves Sonakshi ..
Dev to himself " kitna Bada duffer hai Tu.. Dil hi Dil me sona se pyaar karta hai aur aaj Natasha se shaadi karega... Oh my god mai teen zindagi barabar karne jaa raha hu.. Aab mai kya karu..
Now that I know my feelings I can't let Natasha get married to me as I will never be able to love her... Aaarrrggghhh... "
And turns behind he finds Natasha standing there
Dev: Natasha *shocked*
Natasha: finally you realised your love has
Dev: I'm really sorry Natasha I din know
Natasha: hey it's completely fine.. I understand... Now you should go and talk to Sonakshi before its too late there.
Dev: but shaadi
Natasha: don't you worry I'll take care of it
Dev hugs Natasha and runs out of the house..
Dev driving the car...
Dev to himself " oh my god...miss Bose... Pagal kar ke rakha tha apne...
I din know I could love someone so much... Koi mujhe bhi itna pyaar karega"
Reaches destination

Dev starts to ring the bell at sonakshis place and starts to become really impatient.
Sonakshi opens the door, as no one else is there at home.
As soon as she opens the door, she sees Dev standing there and she has a mixed feelings of being shocked and surprised..
Sonakshi: aap Yaha kya kar rahe hai...* getting choked* as she was crying
Dev: tumse baat Karni hai
Sonakshi: why aren't you at your wedding?
Dev: I din have my girl with me whom I should be getting married too
Sonakshi: huh??
Dev: aaj hi realise kiya, tumse pyaar karta hu. See I don't know how to say and propose. So I'm just saying
I love you.
Sonakshi is completely stunned, she thought this was a black day of her life and here her man of dreams is proposing to her..
Dev: main...
Sonakshi just jumps on him and hugs him really tightly... And Dev immediately responds to the hug...
Sonakshi: I love you!
Dev: I love you too Sona...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awww..the confession is so cuteee ❤️
Edited by RTme0w - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hope you enjoyed it!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: RTme0w

Awww..the confession is so cuteee❤️

Glad you liked it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Its wonderful. Keep it up.
Please keep posting stories in here 👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: RTme0w


Its wonderful. Keep it up.
Please keep posting stories in here👍🏼

most definitely. Thanks for the encouragement 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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So adorable, and that confession
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome dear. do more os😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Short but Sweet
Love it.
:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awww what a confession...loved it...keep writing more stories 😳

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