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Hi Friends,
I have been a silent member on IF since many years now may be around 13 years. I have been watching many shows since i was in school and college. But I couldn't keep myself up to date because of my marriage, moving overseas and then my wonderful kids.
But I have always been on IF using various accounts over the years, I used to pop in once in a while to see the popular shows in Indian TV.
I used to read many stories and FF on and was always inspired to write one myself. The first time was when i used to watch kahiin to hoga in engineering college. i used to fight with my siblings at 11 in the night just to watch Rajeev and Shabbir. I liked their relationship as Big B and Rishi in the serial as much as the lead couple Sujal-Kashish. Inspite of being inspired so many times, i never took the courage to actually write something.
But I couldn't resist myself this time and made up mind to write something on Abhigya. I have never written a story in all my life not even during english classes in school. So please forgive me if you don't like what i wrote or if there any mistakes.
I think enough of my bak-bak...
I just watched yesterday's episode after coming back from work today and thought of continuing the story how i imaging from this point. I have written this in one to one and half hour but i m not posting everything i have written. Most of what i posted below is from yesterday's episode and the precap. Please read and let me know if I should continue. Thanks
Part - 1:
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In the morning, Pragya, Purab, Akash, Rachna and Dadi had a small celebration in Dadi's room to enjoy their successful plan in stopping Tanu and Abhi's wedding. After their celebration, they started to plan on what to do next.
Pragya was feeling happy thinking about last night moments with Abhi. She was happy that Abhi and herself were coming closer and that gave her the motivation to expose Tanu as soon as possible so that she can be forever with Abhi soon.
She made his favorite cinnamon coffee and took it to their room. Abhi was still sleeping like a child. She put the coffee on the night stand. She went close to him and looked at him with love. She remembered all their previous moments together, the moments when they danced together, when he hugged her, when he confessed his love for her, when he carried her in Bulbul-Purab's sangeet to make her dance. She started caressing his forehead and front hair with her hand. Abhi could feel her close and was enjoying her touch. He was smiling in his sleep. Pragya couldn't control herself seeing him smile like a child and kissed his forehead. She got up and started to leave when Abhi caught hold of her wrist.
As soon as he held her hand, Pragya froze and realized that Abhi was actually not sleeping all the while. She didn't know how to avoid him from seeing the love for him in her eyes. She made up her mind and turned towards him.
Abhi: Kahaan jaa rahi ho ? Thodi der mere saath baith jao..
Pragya: Nahi. Mujhe bahot kaam hai. Jaldi se fresh hokar aa jaayiye, aap ki coffee thandi ho rahi hai.
Abhi turned to the night stand and saw the coffee over there. He knew that Pragya must have made the coffee for him but she doesn't want to show it.
Abhi: Coffee tum ne banayi ?
Pragya: Nahi tho. Main kyun aap ke liye coffee banaungi? Ghar mein itne saare naukar hain. Aap aise kyun pooch rahe hai ?
Abhi: abhee pata chal jayega ki coffee tune banayi ya kisi aur ne..
Pragya: Matlab ?
Abhi got up from the Sofa and went to the night stand where the coffee was. He was looking at her and took the coffee in his hands. Pragya was tensed as she knew he would recognize the coffee taste that she made for him. He was watching her expression and slowly took a sip of the coffee. He was right. Pragya herself made the coffee. He became more determined to make her confess her love and accept that Fuggy and Mogambo were the same.
He started walking towards her. He put the coffee aside and started running his finger over her hands.
Abhi: Tum jhoot bol rahi ho. Main apni fuggy ke baare mein sab kuch jaantha hoon. Uski har ek ehsaas mujhe yaad hain. maine use kabhi apne se alag nahin kiya.
Pragya didn't know what to say. She was feeling happy hearing Abhi talk about her but was also sad that she can't go close to him to tell him the truth why she is staying away from him. She was just staring into his eyes shivering with the havoc his fingers were creating inside her.
Abhi: Ye coffee sirf mere fuggy hi bana sakti hain. yeh coffee usi ne banayi hai. Iska matlab hain ki tum meri fuggy ho or mogambo ban ne ki acting kar rahi ho.
Tho batao, yeh coffee tum mere liye kisliye laayi ho ? ya actually mujhe tho ye poochna chahiye ki ye coffee mere liye kaun lekar aaya hai, mogambo ? ya meri fuggy ?
Pragya is lost and doesn't say anything
Abhi remembers her conversation with Tanu at the temple after stopping the marriage yesterday.
Flashback:
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Pragya: kya kaha tha maine tumse ? Mera pati sirf mera hain, aur hameshaa mera hi rahega.
Present:
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Abhi: Actually, much pata hai, ye coffee mere liye na fuggy lekar aayi hai, na mogambo. yeh coffee ek patni apni pati ke liye lekar aayi hai.
Pragya came back to her senses and started to walk out of the door when Abhi reached the door and closed it before she could go out of the room. He blocked her way so that she doesn't go out. He was determined to get the answers to all the questions and confusion in his mind. And also wanted to make her confess her love which was very clear in her eyes.
To be continued...
Thanks for reading. I am eagerly waiting for your thoughts and comments.
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