ArShi OS : THE LAST PAGE OF THE DIARY - Updated!!! (29th April)

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Kiddo_Star
What the! Now this was scary! Who are those 5 devils? What are they forcing her for? Where is Arnav? Whose life is in danger? Is it Arnav or someone else? There are sooo many questions buzzing around in my mind and I want answers soon... So please update soon

All the questions will be answered... Will update very soon... 😊

Thank you so much for reading 😳

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Originally posted by: Junglebee
sounds good

Thank you 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

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So, I was right on my part that this One Shot will be of Angst genre.
I'm glad, nonetheless, that you've even penned this down brilliantly and beautifully.
I'm amazed how every time you weave a magic of words and get us, the readers, tangled in it.
I thoroughly enjoyed reading the entire One Shot, but my favourite part is the last ArShi conversation, specifically the part where Arnav vocalises the contents of the last page of the diary. It was an awe-inspiring moment for me.
You already know but still I again say do write more 'cause we readers are waiting for more.
And thanks a tonn for making up time and sending me the PM.

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Beautiful😊thanks for pm😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: MysticRiver
well written..

Thank you 😳

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Originally posted by: maitydeblina
Beautiful😊thanks for pm😊

Thanks dear 😳

My pleasure 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Wow! This was such an amazing OS. Please keep writing such OS-s.

But can u clear my doubt? Who were those 5 people? It seemed as if they were torturing Arnav

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Originally posted by: Kiddo_Star
Wow! This was such an amazing OS. Please keep writing such OS-s.
But can u clear my doubt? Who were those 5 people? It seemed as if they were torturing Arnav

Thank you so much Shreya 🤗

Sorry for the confusion 😛 As I have mentioned in the story, one of them was the doctor and the others were Arnav's family members... You can say Nani, di, Akash and Payal...

They were't torturing him actually, they were just making sure that Arnav did not strain himself and his mind and body got rest from time to time... If you look back now after reading, their dialogues with Khushi or Arnav were never really rude... 😊

May be I couldn't convey it correctly 😆😛

I am still learning to write you see 😛😳

Edited by ..optimist.. - 9 years ago