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..optimist..

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hello all 🤗

Here's another OS... Again a different one compared to my previous ones... Posting the teaser right now... Will post the complete story soon...

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THE LAST PAGE OF THE DIARY

Teaser

"No...!! I can't do it!!" she cried as tears welled up in her eyes.

It was past midnight. She was in a room with five people, three men and two ladies, standing around her.

"You must do it Khushi!! You have no other choice...!!" Voices of the five people were echoing through the room.

Man 1 : Don't you want to see him live?

Man 2 : You have to do it!!

"I can't...!!!" Khushi was crying. "I can't see him in pain..." she sobbed, "I can't see him suffer...!!"

Man 3 : If you don't want him to suffer, you must follow our instructions...!!

"I won't be able to do it...!! I know I won't succeed...!! Please don't force me... Please let him live...!!" she was crying loudly.

"Someone please convince this girl and make her ready...!!!" said Man 1 and he left the room. The other two men left too.

Lady 1 : His life is in your hands now...!!

Lady 2 : Be sure you make the right decision...!!

The ladies too went away leaving Khushi alone in the room. Khushi fell down on her knees crying her heart out. She was breathless. She felt helpless. She had to make a decision, a very tough one. Afterall, it was going to affect the life of a person she loved so much...

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Edited by ..optimist.. - 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago

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And there goes this brilliant writer exploring yet another genre, setting another benchmark... Take a bow!
Hmmm... I donno why but I do feel that its gonna be angst with a roller-coaster of emotional tumult. It seems as if people are trying to separate Khushi and her near and dear one, maybe Arnav... But then teasers can be mis-leading as well. So I'm waiting for the entire One Shot with crossed-fingers.
Do update this one soonish please for this teaser is certainly teasing my sanity!

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innocentflower

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Posted: 9 years ago

intresting teaser

plz pm me for next chappy

continue soon 😊

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..optimist..

@..optimist..

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -Kryptic.Keya-
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And there goes this brilliant writer exploring yet another genre, setting another benchmark... Take a bow!
Hmmm... I donno why but I do feel that its gonna be angst with a roller-coaster of emotional tumult. It seems as if people are trying to separate Khushi and her near and dear one, maybe Arnav... But then teasers can be mis-leading as well. So I'm waiting for the entire One Shot with crossed-fingers.
Do update this one soonish please for this teaser is certainly teasing my sanity!

So quick you are... Love to read your detailed comment. Thank you for that!

Well, actually I am not used to such praise 😆 And honestly, I don't consider myself a good writer yet... 😛

This teaser is actually the beginning of the OS... Will post the entire story soon.. Won't make you wait for long...

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..optimist..

@..optimist..

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shah10
lovely..

Thank you 😳

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..optimist..

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: innocentflower
intresting teaser
plz pm me for next chappy
continue soon 😊

Thanks dear... Sure 👍🏼

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deblina

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Posted: 9 years ago

Interesting😊update soon😊

I hope it is not tragic plz😕

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1029751

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Posted: 9 years ago

What the! Now this was scary! Who are those 5 devils? What are they forcing her for? Where is Arnav? Whose life is in danger? Is it Arnav or someone else? There are sooo many questions buzzing around in my mind and I want answers soon... So please update soon