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Aastha: Shlok Shlok Shlok yaha aayiye na kaha hain aap.

Shlok: Aastha jaldi karo ghar chelte mujhe kaam hain hmmm kya hua kuch select kiya kya

Aastha: Shlok ye dekhiye ye achchi hain na aapko kaise laga ye pink aur blue haan.

Shlok: Aastha tumko to koi bhi color suit hoga dekho aadha ghante hogaye ab tak ek bhi nahi select kiya kya kar rahe hain tum. And he thought to wait outside

Aastha: Shlok bohut saare pasand aaya lekin kuch na kuch defect hain rukhiye na thodi der ham chelenge abi to aayi and she went for searching few more sarees. Shlok uffed and followed her without any options.

Aastha made him roam all over the mall. She too roamed roamed and searched lot of sarees and atlast she liked a saree. She smiled while exploring the saree. Shlok eyes sparkled.

Shlok: haan Aastha ye tho bohut achchi hain jao jao trial room main jaake pahanke aao jaldi.

Aastha: haan Shlok ye tho bohut achchi hainand she explord totally and made a sad face. Shlok thought ab kya hua Bappa.

Aastha: Shlok ye dekho and she shown a small design which is in green color ye green color yaha nahi aana chahiye pchchch and she kept saree there. Shlok was shocked again

Shlok: kya isko kya hua haan achchi hain na.

Aastha: nahi Shlok tumhe nahi pata ye sab rukhiye aur aayiye yaha kuch aur achchi ye dekho Shlok kaisi hain and she showed yellow and border green color saree.

Shlok: wow Aastha ye to superb hain pack karo ye chale ab saree hogaya na ab ham gowns dekhte hian chalo. Aastha was still exploring the saree and he was to drag her away from sarees section. Aastha suddenly shouted.

Aastha: Shlok.

Shlok suddenly saw at her: haan ab kya hua.

Aastha: Shlok ye dekho ye nakli hain isme ek stone miss hua dekho dekho aap hi rukhiye tum chalo mere saath. Shlok was not surprised but went with her without any option, he doesn't know where she was taking him.

Aastha went to counter section: Heyyy hello kaha hain aapki Manager haan bolo ab kaha hain wo ye lo iss saree main ek stone miss hogaya agay aise cheeje rakhna hain tho apni ghar main rakhna hain yaha shopping malls main sales keliye nahi rakhna hain samje aap bulao abi apni Manager ko. Shlok was shocked

Shlok: Aastha kya kar rahi hain tum isme Manager ko bulane ki kya jaroorat hain ham kuch aur le sakte hain na chodiye I m sorry ham kuch aur dhoondlenge

Aastha: nahi Shlok aise kaise chod sakte hain ham dekho aap hi dekhlo kaise hain ye bina wo stone haan.

Shlok: Aastha pls yaha scene mat karo ham kuch aur dhoodlenge ye chodiye pls unko kyun pareshan karna hain bohut saare aate hain na stock main tho ek do stone keliye tum itna scene kar rahi hain pls chodo inhe pls mere liye.

Aastha saw him agrily but accepted him: teek hain aap aayiye mere saath.

Shlok: arey Aastha mujhe abi ek kaam yaad aagaya main abi aata hoon tum tab tak try karo k.

Aastha made a puppy face: kya tum mujhe akele chodoge kya.

Shlok melted to her words: chaloo teek hain chalo lekin thoda jaldi karo yaar kitna time lete hain tu.

Aastha: teek hain chalo and they went to sarees section gain

After half an hour of selection Aastha liked a sarree a lot and tried it too within milliseconds Shlok said he liked it and awwwed at her. Aastha: chalo Shlok now we have to check colors in this type of saree. Shlok was shocked.

Shlok: Aastha isko kya hua ye achchi hain na dekho kitni khoobsorat hain.

Aastha: haan Shlok ye achchi hain lekin aapne ek baar bataya na aapko aisa border brown main achcha nahi lagta chalo ham isme color dhoondenge aur vaise bhi mere pati ko jo jo pasand hain main vahi hi pahenti hon. Shlok jus saw at her blankly words stuck in his mouth jus tears were less at that time he really regretted saying like that he was like an alien there. With heavy heart and tiredness he went on with her but she didn't like other colors.

Shlok took phone and started mailing Suresh.

Aastha was saying: hmm Shlok ye achchi hian na.

Shlok without looking at them: hmm

Aastha: aur ye bhi achchi hain na Shlok.

Shlok: hmm

Aastha: Shlok aap... and she turned to him saw him working in phone. Aastha angrily took away.

Shlok: Aastha kya kar rahi hain tum sadee karidne keliye aaye hain na ek bhi nahi kharida ab taka b de phone de

Aastha: aur aap mujhe help karne aaye hain phone main kaam karne liye nahi samje aap

Shlok cant take it anymore he is tired of it his legs were paining, he face was fallen but still Aastha looks fresh really how do this ladies go on shopping for hours yaar he thought.

Shlok: lekin tum tho ek bhi nahi liya ab dekho time kitna hua yaar Aastha tum bhi na.

Aastha: lekin Shlok rukhiye na aap aisa baat kar rahe hain ki koi tsunami ya bhookamp aa rahi hain aap kya karte hain ghar jaake hmm achcha teek hain Shlok ham koi aur mall ko jayenge yaha poora old stock hain.

Shlok: Aastha..

Aastha: Shlok vaha pucca kharidenge pls pls pls..

As she requested they went to other mall and there too she repeated the same atlast finally she accepted one saree. Shlok then came alive and smiled at her. Aastha bought it. While coming out of the mall it was already 4pm. Shlok was worn out totally. He was thinking to go home and have a sound sleep.

Aastha: Shlok hmm iski matching sandals, matching earrings, matching bindi sab kharridna hain. Shlok was blank.

Shlok: nahi meri maa pls hogaya ab mujhme sahne ki kshamata hogaya main tumhe tang kiya na to ye sab badla hain na I m sorry agar baat aise hain to tum jeet gaye I never ever hurt u k lekin ye tho bohut badi saza hain aaj se I wont ever come to shopping with u pucca promise ab mujhe ghar jaana hain pata nahi agar ek aur second shopping ki to main tho mar jaonga.

Aastha: Shlok aap aisa kyun kaha rahe hain kya main aapko takleef main dekh sakti hain kya nahi na main jo bhi pahnoo sirf aap keliye hain na aapko pasand hona hain isiliye aapko yaha laayi lekin aap hain ki and she went away. Shlok uffed and went near her.

Shlok: k meri maa ab mujhse nahi hoga ye saare bindi, earrings tum aayi se aake kharidlo mujhe kaam hain abi aao main tumhe ghar pe chodke office jaata hoon.

Aastha: teek hain haan ye bhi sahi hain lekin Shlok main jo bhi karti hoon sirf aapkeliye samje aap.

Shlok irritatingly: hmm teek hain teek hain badi badi baate karti hain tu sirf ek sadee kharidne keliye poora din hogaya kya karu tera chalo abi

They were going to home but Aastha saw aside and suddenly shouted: Shlok rukhiye rukhiye.

He suddenly applied brake. Aastha quickly got down and rushed to bangle store. Shlok was thinking ye ladki kya kar rahi hian.

Aastha was shouting from store: Shlok aayiye aayiye.

Shlok was thinking oh no not again and jus collapsed his head to the steering wheel.

Aastha was shouting: Shlok aayiye na.

Shlok in that position irritatingly: haan aa raha hoon main nautanki kahin ke ye mere jaan legi aaj and he went to that store.

Aastha was exploring many bangles.

He came aside to her and asked irritatingly: Kya hain

Aastha observed it and disappointed: chodiye dada hame kuch nahi chahiye aap rakhlijiye ye sab ham jaa rahe hain and she was leaving

Shlok: Aastha bachpana chodo aao I will wait here come and buy urself.

Aastha too said in the same tone: nahi mujhe kuch nahi chahiye main jaa rahi hoon and she went and sat in the car.

Shlok thought hmm ye ladki ko kya hua aaj and he thought to buy bangles to her and bought them and went into the car.

He went to his side and shown her the bangles.

Aastha was surprised: Shlokkk aapne mere liye kharida wow bohut achchi hain kitne ki hain.

Shlok: kuch bhi tumhareliye sirf 600 rupees.

Aastha: kya!!! Itna kyun hain ye itna nahi hota hain Shlok chaliye aap baahar aayiye.

Shlok: Kya kyun lekin kya hua.

Aastha: Shlok chalo aap mere saath ye itni aasani se khrida aapne and she dragged him to the store. There she fought with him, she bargained him and atlast she bought it for 300.

Shlok was like awww oh my god wat is she isse shopping aane se achcha jindagi bar jail main padooo.

Shlok in car: Aastha ye sab karne ki kya jaroorat hain haan

Aastha: Shlok aap jaante nahi hain ye log aise hi hote hain chalo ab mujhe bohut bhoog lagi stop stop stop Shlok

Shlok was thinking oh god not again: Aastha ab kya hua main nahi aane wala hoon jo karna hain karlo

Aastha: Shlok aap gussa kyun kar rahe hain pani puri khane keliye aap bhi aayiye na plsss

Uff Shlok calmed not for shopping and came out to eat pani puri with her.

Aastha and Shlok ate pani puri and was leaving and something got her attention. She was staring at that side. Shlok saw her seeing into the store he ran away to the car and shouted: Aastha Aastha.

Aastha didn't notice and was going into the store and turned around and signalled him to come inside and she went in he banged his head to the steering wheel and felt pain ouch but he saw Aastha still signing him to come in.

Without any option he went in it was to buy teddy to her and also to Kavya. Shlok had enough he really regretted the moment he accepted to shop with her there was full rush in that shop. Everyone is moving here and there rubbing him. Aastha directly went into the crowd. She was disappeared within seconds. Shlok cant even step aside at all he was stuck in the crowd. He was weak he cant anymore but Aastha took less time and bought 2 teddies and came out. He wondered how she went in and came out whereas he cant even make a step from where he is standing.

Atlast they reached home finally. Aastha and Shlok came in and saw Anjali, Sojal and with lot of girly stuff sarees, jhumkaas, bangles and also teddy for kavya.

Aastha confused and asked: Aayi itne saare aap logo keliye.

Anjali: kya!! Sirf hamare liye nahi dekho tumhare liye bhi laaya dekho ye tumhari saree ye achchi rahegi vinayak chachu ki beti ki shaadi keliye.

Shlok was shocked matlab poora din bekar main gaye. Aastha: aayi ye tho bohut achchi hain lekin aapne kaha hain ki mere liye saree aap nahi khareedenge mujhe Shlok ke paas jake select karlijiye aisa hi kaha na aap ab aap poora saman mere liye bhi lekar aaye kyun.

Sojal: haan Aastha hamne hi kaha lekin main fir message kiya na tumko tumhara phone kaha hain I said we will buy for u too and also said u to come to shopping mall directly but u didn't come and I called u lot of times but u didn't lift the call so we bought for u too.

Aastha: mera phone to yahi bhool gayi thi and she slowly turned towards Shlok looking at him through the corner of the eye.

Shlok was fuming with anger and strode away to room. Aastha thought ab isse manana hoga and she slowly went to room and saw him pacing here and there and took car keys.

Aastha: Shlok aap kahi jaa rahe hain.

He didn't answer her and went to office haan iskeliye main poora din office nahi gaye hmm Aastha ye kya kiya tumne and he saddened a bit but he always thought how she got into that huge crowd I know she is tiny but is she that tiny.

Aastha sensed he is angry and messaged him sorry. He saw it and didn't reply but kept on working. Seeing he didn't reply Aastha thought main bhi na saare din isko shopping main pasaya sach main bohut gussa hain wo ab kya karu and she got the idea and went out.

Shlok worked until late night 12 she didn't even call him after that he saw time and then thought to go to home but he didn't see any calls nor msgs from her and felt strange and went to home and stepped into the room.

He smelled something relaxing perfume and dim lights. Aastha closed the doors and came infront of him with wearing gown which he offered her to buy in that store. She looked breath taking to him.

He jus didn't think anything but automatically his hand went to her cheek and lifted her face to him.

Aastha: Shlok aapko main bohut tang kiya na...

Shlok placed finger at her mouth: shshshshhh and he jus lifted her and kissed her on forehead.

She gave a shy look to him and was removing buttons of his shirt but didn't find a button. She suddenly shouted: Shlok.

Shlok suddenly brought her down Shlok: kya hua Aastha

Aastha: Shlok ye button kaha chali gayi chalo kapde utariye main button laga deti hoon

Shlok then saw his shirt contained one less button and then smiled himself then laughed out loudly seeing him Aastha too laughed out they were laughing loudly.

Shlok jus pulled her ang hugged her tightly: I love u Aastha I love u so much

Aastha broke the hug: I love u 2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 100.. 1 lakh 10 crores

Shlok: achcha bas bas nautanki kahin ke and then hugged her and rest is ahem ahem..

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sudhamadhu thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hai Sai gud evening yaar. Thanks for your birthday treat yaar. I enjoyed it. One full day shlok was astha in shopping hall. He was loving her soo much. Nice thought yaar. Continue yaar. For one saree full day waw astha . Hahaha.continue yaar

. Happy birthday yaar.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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A very cute OS after a long time... I loved it !
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I am laughing Sai...
Astha is too much...
Ending is superup...
Cute one...

Ps: We girls need to ensure everything perfect that we take lot of time to choose something...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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aha... this was refreshing..
finally mera bhai funny os likhna sikh aya it seems... ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
ya apna experience likha isme.. ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

loved it to d core..
astha & her drama ...
well itne nooks ho hum sab nikal te h.. but shopping kisi perfect chij ki hi karenge na.. koi default ki kyun karega...
nice one astha..
but d best was d popat... ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
sab time waste.. ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
thnks 4 d pm...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Haha... Very sweet OS Sai ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜ณ
Aastha taking badla with shopping ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜› Poor Shlok exhausted by the end of it... And relieved to reach home... But in the end it was all waste of time ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜†
Haha... And then Aastha's special treat to Shlok ๐Ÿ˜‰ Itna tang karne ke badle mein... Haaye...
Nice one Sai... Keep writing


Is it your birthday today?
A very happy birthday!!! ๐Ÿฅณ You should have told yaar... Koi gift ka intezaam toh karti main ๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..optimist..

Haha... Very sweet OS Sai ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜ณ

Aastha taking badla with shopping ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜› Poor Shlok exhausted by the end of it... And relieved to reach home... But in the end it was all waste of time ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜†
Haha... And then Aastha's special treat to Shlok ๐Ÿ˜‰ Itna tang karne ke badle mein... Haaye...
Nice one Sai... Keep writing


Is it your birthday today?
A very happy birthday!!! ๐Ÿฅณ You should have told yaar... Koi gift ka intezaam toh karti main ๐Ÿ˜‰

thank u so much sissy
u liked it na yes
Aastha badla liya Shlok ki ๐Ÿ˜†
arey thank u sissy aap kyun strain karna hain gift keliye isiliye nahi bataya ๐Ÿ˜†
anyway thanks a lot
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey...such sweet and funny OS
Poor shlok...๐Ÿ˜‰
I am sorry did know about your birthday...Belated happy birthday๐Ÿฅณ
Thank you
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Posted: 9 years ago
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first HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO MY DEAR BRO...
have a long life n wonderful future with full of happiness...,
may all ur dreams should come true...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿค—๐Ÿฅณ

coming to the OS...
arey waw sai u make me continuously laughing...
wat a piece of writing sai... unbelievable u wrote comic,
u dont no throughout reading laughing,laughing,laughing...๐Ÿ˜Š

kya kamal kardiya sai tumne...
shopping,shopping,shopping...pura din
asthu tum bhi na... bade shopping wali thi๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
kitna tang kar di tum shlok ko unknowingly with ur innocence,๐Ÿ˜‰
oh god i love shlok today because with such a patiency acompanied our cute doll,
kya shlok tumko itna time milgaya biwi ke sath shopping karnekeliye,
i know i know ur intention, u want to spend with ur asthu hey na so u spared all her nautankies...๐Ÿ˜ณ.

love u asthu u gave him very good punishment for making u always cry...but it was not intentionally, u loved him very much na so for selection of his choice tumko bahut pasand hey na.๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

u no wat astha these boys na dont no anything we girls r taking time to ready is to impress them but wat they will think it was wasting their time...so guys by reading this OS u can know y girls r fond of these things...๐Ÿ˜‰.
see shlok ur doll saved ur money also by bargaining... so take girls with u wen want to buy anything.

poor asthu itne mehanat ki tum buying all those but wasted atlast n make angry ur shlok

no worries asthu shlok na never ignore u by seeing ur smile n blush god to irresistable nautankies...โญ๏ธ

sai it was amazing sai wat wrote simply superb n real actually,
so much maturity u showed in ur writing...
u did it bro i told u na one day u will become a great writer... with all types which was liked by all ur readers...๐Ÿ‘
i really enjoyed it sai... concept on our lovable ashlok new thing...โญ๏ธ
keep doing... write more n more like this.

note: i think this was the best punishment for those who makes girls cry hey na wat u guys say...
shopping!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!๐Ÿ‘

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