New ishra ss-meri mannat tu,pt 5 on pg 126 updt on Jul 20

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kaa1202

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Nice Rakshu Sis..

I liked this very much yaar...

Do cont soon..

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raksha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

As I got a very good response,100+ likes in a day on the character sketch .many want its update asap,so I promise that I will update it asap.

Thanks for liking it so much.

Here is the prologue.

this pic is edited by prayosha. divan aka piyu.

PROLOGUE

Ishita was standing near the water cooler thinking how to drink water as her hands were dipped in chocolate.

Ishita look around for help and saw a boy going from the corridor.

She shouted- hello.

He turned listening her sweet voice.he saw a little girl looking at him and calling him .he went near her and saw her.he can see only her eyes coz chocolate was smudged all over her face making her look cute and adorable. She blink her eyes like a doll.he was looking at her without blinking his eyes.

Ishita- can u help me.can u please open the tap.

Raman- u can do it urself.

Ishita showed him her palms dipped in chocolate and giggled saying- if I will do it,nobody will drink from this dirty tap.

Raman smiled a little hearing her sweet giggle.he came forward and open the tap.

She started washing her hand and face.it was taking time as it got dried on her face.

Ishita- uff it got dry.why u took so long to come.she complained with a pout.

Raman- who told u to eat so many chocolates. Daant sadh jayenge.

Ishita- I didn't have much.only twenty five.she said very innocently.

Raman smiled wholeheartedly and said- twenty five is only.u r so cute.he said smiling.

Ishita too giggle with him .

That's all .will update soon.

Edited by cutieruhi - 9 years ago

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raksha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Updated prologue, have a look.

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--HANISA--

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

cute lovely start love it

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loveruhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Aww cute ishita

I didn't have much.only twenty five.
Cute prologue
Thanks for pm

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lonelyyyy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

aww so cute proglogue
ishu said right y he come so late to her n her school agar starting se hi ishu k sath hota toh abhi tak luv ho jata donon ko

luved d way ishu said only 25

plz update its part soon...

Edited by lonelyyyy - 9 years ago