Rewriting Yhm: Living for each other:pt-14;pg-129;15/11/16 - Page 49

beautiful!!

Nice update Shreya..

Awsm update
Loved raman's reply to shagun..she knows poking nose everywhere
Loved raman adi convo .the way he tried to make him understand superb...
Ishra alone without haddis..they confessed..Aww
Cont soon

fabulous update dear

superb superb superb so amazing dear

outstandingly written dear 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

amazing effort ever dear

loved how raman answer to the shagun by stressing my wife not teach him what to do was fabulous dear

raman talk with adi was so cute amazing dear

just love raman understanding adi and his mind what is thinking just shown how much he love him dear

loved how raman initiate to him by mentioning ruhi love for him moreover make him clear what is true love was fabulous dear

what i love most is raman comparing ishu with ruhi tell him cutely how ishu is good was amazing dear

today update hero is none other that raman

dear you again make me love raman madly after reading your update dear

today he proved he is amazing father and lovely husband dear

like family tease them and raman answered them dear

private moments of ishra👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

omg omg i am flushed throughout moreover surprised by what a love wow wow dear

just love raman surprise ( flower arrangement and dancing together )to ishu dear

ice on the cake was raman initiate some steps to move on their past dear

just love proposing part of ishra so much dear ( simple words but every word shown how much he love her and how much she reciprocate her love dear ) no words just elegant dear 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

raman feed her her favorite was fabulous dear

while she ready to feed him and he went and bring box in that food made by ishu for him was excellent ever dear

ishu first kiss to raman omg i am more than surprised dear

i am unable to control himself he kiss her passionately again and again wow wow wow outstanding dear

continue soon dear

Amazing update
luvd dat raman gave a lecture to shagun n his convo with adi
he took her out
n both confessed
their kiss was magical
continue soon
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oh my god!!! 50+ likes !!! wow so as i promised will update by evening!!!

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Part 6B

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His lips slowly and sensuously knotted hers in his. His treacherous hands moving along and around her to fill his satiation which was proving to be impossible with each passing second .Almost when he felt her giddy due to lack of breathe and mind clouding passion, they parted.

Both of them held on to each other with their foreheads joined and the ruddy flesh of their lips curving into an enchanting smile.

"i love u ish..!!'" his voice trailed off as he bent down to kiss her heart as if proving the ownership on it. She holding his neck by her delicate palms bought him higher and hugged him tight.

When they felt their pulse back to normal rate they parted and headed for dinner. Ishitha lovingly fed him while his hands lay dedicated to her waist going around them and holding her surrendered both to his love and proximity. After completing the love fed dinner with raman stealing some feather like kisses they drove to their final destination.

When she had entered into the farmhouse she didn't miss to observe its well maintenance and quirked her eyebrow understanding his intentions while he winked in return . He showed her the whole farmhouse excitedly dragging her by her hand like a child. Pausing at room which was in the centre of the floor, he opened the gate for her and held her in. It was a beautiful room and the decor was outstandingly good.

"wow!! Raman it is amazing!!" she said turning around and trying to catch if she had missed anything while raman grinned widely.

"you know ishitha?? This is the first property i bought!! Maine hi select kiya!!" he said feeling proud of himself.

[you know ishitha?? This is the first property i bought!!! I have selected this!!]

Smiling at him, she pulled his cheeks saying," You are the best raman!!"

Her statement definitely left him blushing and he shooed her hands away. She laughed seeing him blush and that was when the power had gone off. Turning on the flash lights of their mobiles raman said that he would talk to the caretaker and get the generator switched on.

Mean while ishitha had thought of many ideas to impress her ravan. He really did a lot for her and this would be her token of gratitude and love. Shyly she took the blue saree which she had packed in and got freshen me. After a long and pleasant shower she got ready in the saree and grinned checking her mobile which had a message from him stating that he would be late and asking her to rest. She quickly got up and ran around the room with her wet hair sticking onto her face as she was hurriedly trying to arrange a romantic ambience.

After filling the room with the light and fragrance of candles she got herself ready in the way which he likes. As it was the month of December the weather was cool and she stood against a window to calm down her raging heartbeats. Thankfully, there was no heavy wind which would blow up candles and her effort but a slight breeze did caress her which made her bask in the pleasance around and inside her.

He was pleasantly shocked at the arrangements of his room. He definitely wanted to take their relation ahead owing to his desires but didn't open up as he felt that may make her uncomfortable which was against his heart. So he thought of waiting till the lucky day she was going to accept him. But his wait seemed to be too short, he thought.

Looking around the room and his wife ,he understood her intentions and also appreciated her aloud,

"you never fail to amaze me madrasan!!" for which she turned around and lowered her lashes feeling extremely shy under his appraisal gaze.

Shrugging her shyness, she came forward and kissed his cheek surprising him once again and confessed,

"i love you my ravan!! I ...love u!!"

Hearing her honey and love dripping voice shyly confess her love, he couldn't help but hug her tightly. He then stepped apart and bore his eyes into her twinkling ones.

"your beautiful ishitha!!!" he said pecking her forehead and rubbed his lips all over her face. Inching closer to her lips he feverishly kissed her jaw line. She closed her eyes completely forgetting the world. He nuzzled her bare neck and shoulders pushing away the pallu and dropping wet kisses there. Unable to bear the sweet torture she raged her nails into his scalp thus arousing him to a high extent. Lifting his head and placing it below hers, he kissed her throat softly which made her moan and arc back thus making their bodies fuse. He quickly undoing her loose pallu nuzzled her chest feverishly making her loose her senses. She was in a trance where she was unconscious of her state. He held her waist and kneaded it to control himself as she was melting as a puddle due to his assault.

Completely escorting her saree he bought her onto the bed and removed his shirt sitting at the head of the bed watching her without a blink. That was when she observed the state in which she was and turned to the other side to escape from his piercing gaze due to embarrassment. He smiled at her and laid beside her kissing her earlobe and nibbling it sensuously with his hand drawing patterns on her waist and squeezing it gently making her gasp. Running his other hand and lips over her milky back he felt her heart pounding and the next time she turned around and hugged him tight kissing his throat softly.

That surely undid his control and he parted only to pounce onto her lips. He kissed all her face, neck and shoulders sometimes marking with his teeth. Coming lower he kissed her heart lovingly which made her come out of her initial shyness and awkwardness. She pulling him closer to herself encouraged him to go on. He kissed her navel and elevating his head nuzzled her midriff playing with the knot of her blouse and quickly unclasped it. His eyes filled with passion seeing and feeling her bare body squeezing her thigh.

He felt a kind of pride to acknowledge the fact that he is the only one who did this to her. It is not that he would judge a woman by their virginity but he couldn't help but feel possessive regarding her. But on thinking further, he thought how ishitha would feel knowing the fact that he had already kids with shagun and loved her once. She may feel insecure. He knew she trusted him a lot but he doesn't want her to ponder over something negative so he wanted to erase all her insecurities by loving her immensely.

Thinking, he saw how contended she felt within his proximity and kissed her heart again and again in sync with her heartbeats. She responded by pulling him upwards and kissing his face so softly and gently. He let her take him to bliss and encouraged her by his touches on her body. When he felt himself rising he pulled off from her hands and kissed all over body, sinking his teeth forming a red hue.

She was pleased would be an understatement she was feeling all her muscles getting excited at the touch of his hands and lips. She felt him worshipping her body. She unable to bear the pleasure clawed his back and shoulders marking him.

When he felt both of them out of their control, he settled on top of her with a lip lock he gently entered into her and marked her as his forever. Panting hard due to the aftermath of their love making they only found their lips as subtle comfort which in turn turned into passionate one and lead to increase her experience and raman's desire as he felt himself getting more high than before as the night passed. It was the raising of sun which made him bestow some mercy on her and let her sleep in his arms.

Sry guys!! I have never written something like this and hope it has reached ur expectations. By d way this is my first ever ss so my inexperience may reflect!! So pls tell me if i need to improve in any aspect!!! Do like and cmnt both the parts separately!! i even held my promise so its ur time to tell how good i have been!!!

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It was hot & sensual. It was amazing.
It definitely doesn't look like your writing for the first time.
Please continue as I'm sure the drama is yet to start.😉
Waiting for your next update.

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