Rewriting Yhm: Living for each other:pt-14;pg-129;15/11/16 - Page 55

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Omg this is a teaser like...,...???????????
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Its indeed a teasing teaser Yaar
Update soon
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What was that. How did this happened and all of a sudden. And more importantly what happened
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Oh such a teasing teaser Shreya...
Waiting to read the update..
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omg

teasing teaser dear

its about ishra talking or someone else

if it is ishra means what ishu did that make him broke down dear

please continue soon dear
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omg..its so teasing
update soon na
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kaun baat kar raha hai ? aur kisse ?
please yaar itna suspence is not good 😡
update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
@Shreya
Amazing storyline
Loving it totally
Loved the ishra morning romance 😳
And all the teasing stuff 😳
Beautifully written
And I am liking the part that adi is more sensible here
The teaser is very teasing
I am not getting exactly among whom the conversation is taken place
Can you please send me a pm when update
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Yaar this is so teasing 😭
Please continue soon can't wait to read the next part 😃
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Part-7

Raman opened his eyes only to fill them with the image of his beautiful wife who was almost sleeping on him. Her hand over his heart, her lips stretched into an enchanted smile which was tickling his skin of the chest and her naked form fused to his, she was deep in slumber feeling utmost contented. He acknowledged the morning as the best of his life to have his most valuable possession in his embrace.

Unusual to herself, ishitha woke up much later after the sunrise, all thanks to her passion driven husband. As soon as she came into the real world, last night memories looped back into her mind making every cell of hers to get excited and her skin adored goose bumps. Extremely shied, she buried her face into her husband's broad and warmth emanating chest. Understanding that her husband was wide awake and she was being the object of his piercing gaze indicated by his accelerating heartbeats she further burrowed her face into his chest which made him grin widely.

Gently elevating her head by cupping her face he gazed lovingly into her down casted eyes which were seldom rising owing to curiousness of his activity. Wanting to shrug off her shyness, she wished smiling,

"Good morning raman!!"

"I love you...madrasan!!" he replied pecking her lips and running his hands on her bare back which recoiled her back into her earlier stage of shyness and tried get out of his hold.

"I love you...madrasan!!" he repeated with a husky whisper which made her eyes mirror the passion of his eyes. He sunk his teeth on her bare shoulder making her part her lips slightly owing to the ecstasy she was feeling. Rolling off her and getting on top of her by weighing himself on his knees which were placed on either sides of her waist, his eyes reflected his immense passion and love towards her.

Tightly pulling the white sheet around his waist, the only cloth that was concealing their bodies to the whole world but them, she bought him closer and hugged him skin tight as his gaze over her already sore body was not doing to her senses which lead to another passionate rendezvous.

Those two days were completely bliss to them. They felt as him they were reborn. They shared their pasts and cried with each other. They consoled each other and comforted with their love. Their days filled with a new chirpiness which was lost long ago and passionate moments.

Ishitha noticed that raman was extremely romantic and passionate lover. His did ordinary things like cooking for her all the days and helping her in favourite hobby of gardening which definitely make her feel that she is extraordinary.

Raman observed how patient and caring ishitha was. He already knew her selfless character but he understood the depth of it as he was the only one she had to care here. This thought even left him wanting to a world in which it was only them. He also found a companion and friend with whom he can share anything he needed and wanted. Being in the corporate world, he had limited truthful friends whom he met rarely due to the time issues and sharing his feelings was out of it. They were friends earlier but now he found her as his soul mate and best friend.

On the Sunday morning, they were at the door of their home. Even though they had to come the next day, they reached earlier due to the sudden meeting as told by him disappointingly and ishitha comforting him.

As soon as the door opened, romi almost pounced onto ishitha which made her lean back onto raman. Raman held her tightly and shouted on romi only to be ignored because his brother was too busy exclaiming how much he missed his bhabhi. Ishitha was soon snatched from romi's arms as she was pulled by his sister then followed by his mother and father. Everybody was telling how bad they felt without her presence around him. His mother even teared up a bit but was consoled by her.

He gave a glare to his ex who was standing there fuming as if proving ishitha's position in their lives. But after seeing his wife sandwiched between his brother and sister he knew he had to take some action and pulled her to him.

"pagal ho gaya ho?? chodo mere biwi ko..!!" he shouted at them side hugging her.

"stop it!! Bhai!! Itne din se humne bhabhi se nahi mila!! Aapka time hogaya ab humare hai!!! I missed u bhabhi!!" his brother said hugging her once again.

"bhabhi!!! Mein ne.." his brother was cut by simmi who started telling about her shopping the previous day where she had bought a beautiful suit for her.

"tu chup kar!! Ishitha puttar!! Bolo breakfast ke liye kya kaogi??" his mother asked her.

"maa!! Bas kejiye!! Itna pareshan kyun kar rahe ho!! mein bhi hoon yahan!! Waise bhi sirf dho din hua he hamare jana se itna kya miss viss bhol rahe ho??" he asked irritated by the distance between him and his wife which was new to him after the delightfull last two days.

His family dismissed him saying he was jealous of her which made her grin and enjoy their pampering. Even her family joined for the breakfast and where busy exclaiming how a day had not passed without her thoughts. The family was chanting how much they have missed her and his brother even told her he would even accompany her to her next honeymoon which earned a glare from him and a blushing smile from his wife.

He felt extremely happy as his mission got succeeded in more than one ways. He thought of letting her know his love but now he knows that she had even acknowledged depth of her importance and love of their family which was reflected in her smile. Her absence definitely made everyone realise her importance. His thoughts were disturbed by the banging of his main door with the shout followed by his sister-in-law,

"mihir!! Chodo mujhe!! How dare you??" she yelled only for mihir to ignore her protests and pull her into the living room which was now occupied by his whole family.

She felt her voice choking as she had seen her family after long time but she tried to act firm and shouted,

"mihir!!how dare you?? I'm Mrs.khanna now!!! Leave me!!" she said only to get his hold tighten. Ishitha tried to interrupt only to be silenced by raman.

"it's ok!! Mrs.khanna!! i just want to see for the last time in my home!! That's all!! You can leave within an hour or so!!" mihir said dangerously calm.

"what do you mean by last time??" asked mihika shocked.

"nothing important for you!! I told you that u r my life and if i don't have u in my life, im going to kill myself!!" he answered calmly once again only to get slapped by mihika.

"i'll kill u if u do something like that!! How dare you??" she said angrily.

"why does it bother you Mrs.khanna?? you r jst my ex!! I'll decide for me!!" he replied equally furious.

"why does it bother me?? Are u out of ur mind mihit!!?? I love you!! I love.." her voice ceased as everyone looked at her shocked.

"u love me miku!! Then y did u do dis?? Y??" he asked his voice lowering in order to control his sob and finally letting it out.

After knowing that she was cheated and fooled by ashok only to possess her she felt she needed the support of her family and disclosed her truth to everyone only to face a heartbroken mihir.

"kyun kiya tumne isa?? kyun kiya!!??" he said falling onto the ground weeping ceaselessly. The whole family tried to control their tears unsuccessfully.

"i did this for you!!! meine tumhare liye yeh sab kiya!!! i want you to be happy and safe!!" she said kneeling facing him and tears flowing uncontrollably.

"but u did a huge mistake!! U shud hav talked to us!!" mihir said still crying.

"i'm sorry!!" she said only to be hugged tight by him. She reciprocated the hug consoling and apologizing continuously.

While everybody where happy, there came ashok's voice shuddering,

"mihika!! What is this?? Maine bahuth kuch kiya tumhare liye!! But u... u r my wife dammit!!" he exclaimed loudly.

When mihir was about to answer him, raman came in between and asked arrogantly,

" kiss shadhi ke bhaare mein baat kar rahe ho askok!?"

"raman!! Acha rahega agar tum iss bhaat se door raho!! For ur information, Mihika mera legally wedded wife hain!! "

"hello che foot dho inch!! Shaadi karne keliye ek mahine pehale hi register karwana padega jho tumne nahi kiya!! Jiss registar kho tumne bribr kiya, uss ke mooh se hi sach nikalwa diya aur tumhare so-called shaadhi kho register nahi karwayi!! So ur marriage hasn't happened", he smirked looking the tensed face of ashok.

"lekin i hav the papers..." he trailed off worried even though maintaining a tough face.

"jho tumhare pass he who illegal hai as u hav not registered so ur marriage is invalid and mihika is free now!!" he announced.


Next part


Sry for d blunt endind guys!! i like mimi alot!! so thought of including their part also!! hope u like it!! But im in a hurry now!!ignore the typos or other mistakes!!! So left it so!! I have not even given english subtitles!! Sry lakshmi aka madhuragymhasium !! im busy!! So i didn't add subttles!! I used less hindi sentences so that it may b easy for ur review!! Will give them from next update!! And next update will be too much ishralious!!! I may end this ss within 3 more parts!! Do like and give ur views!!

Edited by shreya303 - 9 years ago

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