Rewriting Yhm: Living for each other:pt-14;pg-129;15/11/16 - Page 48

Originally posted by: akriti154

super sweet update
luvd d way ishra care 4 each other
raman wants to change d equations of ishita n adi
carom scene was superb
raman is being naughty n ishita taking revenge by posing sexily when he can't do anything
aww poor puttar
cont soon
thnxx 4 pm
take care😊

Originally posted by: maduragymhasium

fabulous update dear

love it so so much dear

just love how raman thinking about her in office and ishra misses each other so cute

just love the ishra povs ( what can i sense is they are deeply madly in love each other ) superb dear

raman determine to make adi and ishu bond is too good dear

ruman teamwork and raman planned too cute dear

i just enjoy the game so much ( ishra cute fight and ruhi in between cheer them and raman intentionally make her lose by touching her ) everything is fabulous dear

just love romi and simmi pulling raman and teasing dear

raman said to romi he will do anything to her because she is his wife was cute dear

raman tease her and ask her to change dress continuously

ishu determine to give him punishment by posing sexily then raman cleaned bowled ( love that part so much dear )

love raman plan to take ishu lonely for farmhouse

hope and wish we get ishra romantic scenes with love confrontation dear

while reading i am smiling throughout dear

thank you so much for making me happy dear

all the best for your exams dear

give best dear

don't stress yourself dear

please take care of your health properly dear

when you come back you can update

we are going to miss your story badly but more than that your health and studies are important

so take rest dear

continue soon dear ( after all your work )

Originally posted by: vaishnavi28

fantastic update dear

u are writing this track so beautifully

really loved it

plz continue soon

thanka for pm

and all the best for your exams😊

Originally posted by: traveller_girl

Awesome update

Loved it

Carrom game was lovely

Continue soon

Originally posted by: 9900

Awesome update shreya😃

Loved it loads😃

Please continue soon can't wait to read the next part 😃

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Part 6A

"kaha jaa rahe hum raman? Bachon.." she was cut off by shagun.

[where are we going raman? Kids...]

"Yes raman!!! Ishitha is right!! How can you leave adi.." supported shagun for which raman shot a disgustful look towards her.

"Yeh baat me aur mera biwi decide karenge ki hame kab kya karna chahiye !! acha rahega agar tum iss se door raho!!" raman said stressing the words my wife which clearly annoyed her and shagun left from there stomping her heel and muttering a how mean?' to her ex.

[ the decision regarding what and when to do will be deciding by me and my wife!! It will be well if others don't nose into it!!]

"ishitha!! Dekho pls ek baar ke liye don't argue!! Mei ne jaise kaha waisa maan jao!!" he said dramatically folding his hands as if asking for his dear life which made everyone surprised at his sudden mood change.

[ishitha!!! Please for once, obey me without any arguement!! Please!!]

As he had seen her apprehension still, he told her about the repairs of the farmhouse and after a numerous promises by his family to care of their children finally she agreed and went to pack her bag.

He then excused himself from the family and went towards his son's room. There was his son who was irritated at the continuous rambling of his mom. He could clearly see that his son is uncomfortable hearing bad about him or ishitha. He guessed that adi was able to see ishitha's goodness and love and was unable to believe it. He understood that his son was caught up and thus was disturbed. He knew that believing and accepting someone's love was not a piece of cake for him considering his past. So he would help his son. He would give the much needed push for the attaining the peace of mind his son was depriving of. Determining, he strode to his son asking his ex to get out politely.

After shagun leaving room, raman sat at the edge of the bed placing an arm lovingly on his son, he gently asked him,

"adi!! Do you trust ruhi's love?" not getting any clue of what was going to be adi nodded his head.

"why adi? You were never with her. Koon se rishtha hone se pyaar nahi hotha hai adi!!! Pyaar jab hotha hai tab uss aadmi ke sath time spend karthe hai, uss ko dekhte hai ,uss se pasand karthe hai aur uss se pyaar karthe hai!!"

[why adi? You were never with her. Having blood relation doesn't result in being in love with the person. We spend time with them, we observe them, we like them then we will love them.]

"But you were never with ruhi then how come she loves you? Okay!! Me maantha hoon kuch din se aap dono aapas me rehthe hai aur aapne unka pyaar dekha hai!! Lekin kaisa maanthe ho ki she truly loves you? Tell me?"

[but you were never with ruhi then how come she loves you? Okay! I agree that you people were together for last few days and you have seen her love for you!! But how do know that she truly loves you? Tell me?]

He was shocked, adi was shocked that it was his father who was asking whether ruhi's love is true or not. How could a child, six years old can pretend love, he thought but didn't utter a word.

"you are right adi!! How can a child, six years old can pretend love?" he exactly told what was going on his son's mind which surprised adi at the understanding level of his father.

"you are right adi!! It doesn't take much time for an innocent soul to love someone!! Ruhi definitely loves you and the bed shows how much she loves you!!" raman said chuckling indicating the colour of bed sheet which was blue ,his son's favourite, which made adi smile.

Raman suddenly became serious and said," ishitha is also same as ruhi!!"

Picking up the photo frame of his wife and daughter who were laughing throwing their head backs sitting in each other's embrace which bought a smile on the men who were looking at it with one of them smiling truly after many days of inner turmoil.

"ishitha is same as ruhi, she is as innocent as ruhi, she is as loving as ruhi. If not, ruhi won't love her that much!! Trust me for once and think of it!! bye!!" he said leaving, making adi sigh pondering over his dad's words.

As soon as he was out of his son's room, he saw shagun rolling her eyes and getting into her room. He quickly asked ishitha to make it fast and observed the teasing looks and smiling faces of his family.

"ab kya??" he asked exasperated making himself ready to face the teasing of his crazy family once again.

[what now??]

"bhai!! Romi ka kuch doubt tha ki agar farmhouse jaa rahe ho wahan repairs karwane tho ishitha ko hot i mean pretty lagne ko kyun kah rahe ho??" simmi said mischievously using his words.

[bro!!! Romi has a doubt!! He is asking why are you asking ishitha look hot i mean pretty if its only repairing the farmhouse?]

He was tongue tied and retorted using his expert way "tum jab padayi kar rahe tha tab tho koyi doubt nayi aaya!! Ab tho kuch jyada hi aa rahe hai!!

[you had no doubts when you were studying but now you are using your brain too much!!]

Not giving a chance for anyone to talk ishitha descended the stairs with a trolley in her tow which was quickly taken by raman. Both of them took the blessings and greetings of everyone and went to their daughter who was more excited than them knowing that her parents were going to spend time together. After the guidance of how to and how not to behave by her mom, followed by numerous kisses and infinite miss-you hugs, they left to their car.

Escorting the driver raman drove the car with a silence between passengers in it. Even though ishitha was a bit apprehensive about their kids, she brushed it off and started enjoying the time with raman. By now raman turned on the radio and was humming care freely along with the tunes. Ishitha smiled and initiated the conversation. Both of them spoke of their likes and dislikes. Both felt it exciting as it was the first time they were openly talking about themselves. It's not that they didn't know each other but this was like having someone with whom they can share anything and everything without any second thoughts. They were taunting, teasing, laughing. They were enjoying and were thankful to each other for their togetherness without any fuss or tensions around.

An hour later raman gently woke up ishitha from her half slumber. She rubbing her eyes apologised him for dozing off for which he told it was okay and understands how much she is exhausted. She smiled at him and turned her face away to look where they were.

She was pleasantly surprised at the view in front of her eyes. It was not an amazing scenic beauty, but it was a lushly region with fresh flowers and their amazing scent within the banks of river Yamuna making the entire place peaceful and serene which warmed up her heart. It was his proximity which snapped her of surroundings. He smiled unclasping the seat belt and lingered his fingers on her waist for more than required time. She blushed and looked away from his burning gaze. It was when raman came around and gently tugged her hnd to come out of the car had she raised her eyes to look around.

There was a small round table with two chairs and already served plates on it just along the pond. She had even observed her favourite lily flowers in a purple vase on it which made her see the efforts of her husband to make everything perfect for her. She slowly turned to him absorbing the beauty around and flashed a smile blinking her eyelids as if thanking him. He returned a grin showing off his dimples and took her hand into his only to sway for the romantic number from the radio of his car.

Dancing slowly he had definitely aroused her desires for him which was reflected in her dark brown orbs making him get lost in them. As the music had been lowering its beat indicating its end, raman turned ishitha around and pulled her onto his chest. Ishitha closing her eyes, rested her head onto his heart listening to his heartbeats.

"hmm...", he brought her out of her trance while she just opened her eyes and raised her eyebrow quizzically without getting out of the embrace which made him chuckle and gently pull her out of him by her shoulders.

"ishitha!! I know ki hum dono ko ki patha hai ki humare equation kya hai!! Jab pyaar karthe tho ek dooosre se tho dare kyuun?? Kare ikraar??" he asked as if preparing her to hear him out but in reality he was making himself convinced.

[ishitha!! Both of us know about the changed equation of ours!! So why to fear if we love each other? So let's express.]

Surprised would be understatement for ishitha. Even though she knew that their time together would be romantic and lovely, she hadn't expected his love confession. She felt her stomach knotting with anticipation and had a smile covering her cerise face.

"madrasan!! Tum meri jaroorat ho yaar!!mujhe aapna har baat tumse kehna hai!! Aur apna saare kushiyan tumhare sath celebrate karna hai!! I want u to be my wife first and then ishima!! In short i love you madrasan; i fell in love with ur heart and beauty!!" he confessed with a kiss on her heart with his lips curling up against her chest listening to the drumming of her heart which captivated him.

[madrasan!! You are my need!! I want to share everything with you!! I want to celebrate my every success with you! I want you to be my wife first and then ishima!! In short i love you madrasan; i fell in love with your heart and beauty!!]

With moistened eyes and choking voice ishitha said," i will always be there for you raman!! I want you in the same way you want me!! I love you too raman!! More than anyone!! I love you!!" crushing herself in his arms.

Both of them, hugging each other, felt the heaven on the earth. It was difficult for them to come out of the shells their past had created around them. But they did it successfully with the love and support from each other.

After what felt an eternity they parted only for ishitha to downcast her long eye lashes. He smiled at her and teased her saying,

"acha!! More than anyone!! Agar ruhi ko patha chal gaya tho ki unka ishima us se jyada unke papa se pyaar kartha tho kyaa hoga!??"

[oh!! More than anyone!! What if ruhi knows this??]

Showing her tongue childlike she told him coming near to him,"patha hain ruhi ko aur ruhi ki ishima dono ka fav person ravan hai!! Aur yeh hamara biggest secret hai which is not anymore!!"

[do you know that ruhi and ruhi's ishima love ravan the most??it is our biggest secret, which is not anymore!!!]

Grinning he side hugged her making her sit on the chair and placed the chair opposite to her as he was hardly able to maintain the distances between them. Quickly discarding the foils over the plate he fed her favourite Chinese cuisine sculpting a never fading smile on her lips. When she was about to feed him from the same plate he excused himself to fetch something. He went to the car and returned with a box which caught her attention. He without saying a word kept the box on the table while she took it immediately to see what was in it.

She was surprised; it was the dish she had prepared in the evening for him which he hadn't been able to eat due to the game and this journey. When he informed her that he wanted to have the food made by her and had asked neelu to pack it for him, she fell in love with her husband all over again. She unable to control her emotions kissed him tightly on his cheek making them yummier by rubbing against her sauce coated lips. Then hid her in his chest feeling extremely shy for what she has done.

He was aroused at her innocent action and unable to control his hormones lifted her chin and immediately sucked the remaining sauce from her lower lip and appreciated its taste by nibbling it gently.

Ishitha even though surprised earlier parted her lips to breathe in. Feeling his heart content he moved to her upper lip and placed a feathery kiss there. It was when she moaned he ran his tongue over her lip and the groove just above it making her clasp his shoulders tightly to stop herself from melting under his sweet torture. He then took her whole mouth into his consuming her completely and taking them into the ultimate land of bliss. Inexperience of ishitha hadn't been shown as her innocent touches and moans were adding fuel to raman's already uncontrollable passion.

It was when he felt ishitha struggling for air, he had left her. But gazing her closed eyes, flushed cheeks and swollen petals he couldn't help but take her lips into his again.

Next part

Thats for now!!! Hope it's good enough!! Next part will be ishra's consummation which may be a bit mature!! I may update it 2moro itself if i get good response. So do comment and like!! When i get 50+ likes i wud update immediately!!!!

Res..
Unres

Wow... wat a nice start...
Starting with a nose cut for shagun.. 👏

(the decision regarding what and when to do will be deciding by me and my wife!! It will be well if others don't nose into it!!)

Raman some how compeled ishu to go leaving the kids..
I totally loved raman & adi's convo..
How much he know about his son...
He know wat he thinks...
Y he behave like this...

& finally some how he dicided to propose his madarasan. ..

ishitha!! Both of us know about the changed equation of ours!! So why to fear if we love each other? So let's express...

& he proposed her . . .
😳

madrasan!! You are my need!! I want to share everything with you!! I want to celebrate my every success with you! I want you to be my wife first and then ishima!! In short i love you madrasan; i fell in love with your heart and beauty!!

& his madarasan also proposed him...

will always be there for you raman!! I want you in the same way you want me!! I love you too raman!! More than anyone!! I love you! 😳

The 1st kiss they shared it was heavenly.. 😳
Aweaome update dr.. 👏

Res

Loved it. It's more realistic than the show.
Please show Shagun's antics & plans to stop them and falling flat on her face😆 Cunning me😉
Please don't make her snow white like the show.
Update soon. Can't wait

Nice..