Rewriting Yhm: Living for each other:pt-14;pg-129;15/11/16 - Page 45

Originally posted by: vaishnavi28

Awesome update

Loved it totally

Raman is being so naughty

Bechari ishita😆

Loved the family teasing

And shagun burning whither jealousy was a bliss

And Plz Plz continue this story

It's really awsm

Continue soon

Thanx for pm

Originally posted by: fSharm

Plz do continue yar..
Cz u r a good writter v dont like to miss u at any cost...
And update awesomem..
Raman z teasing ishu a lot infront of the whole family...
Its amazing dr...
Plz do pm me...

Originally posted by: sarayasriya

very nice updates 😊

Originally posted by: 9900

Awesome update😃

Loved it loads😃

Please do continue😃

Originally posted by: maduragymhasium

sorry for late reply dear

superb happiest update dear

love it so much dear

love the trio so much dear

raman is naughty tried his possible ways to stick to ishu was fabulous dear

simmi and romi is too good

feel bad for adi

ruhi is so cute

shagun is exceptional

ishra scenes are awesome more warm up dear

continue soon dear

don't think about show i am also hurt

i am moreover happy because of you and all writers wonderful writing beautiful story dear

please don't snatch this happiness also from me dear

Originally posted by: traveller_girl

Awesome update

Loved it

Don't think about the show

Keep writing like this...it is too good

Continue soon

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" madrasan!! Kaisa Sharma rahi thi?? Poora ka poora tamatar lag rahi thi!!", raman exclaimed loudly in the confines of his cabin hovering his left hand over his mouth which was unable to hide the laughter on his lips.

[madrasan!! How hard was she blushing?!! She was looking like a tomato!!]

"tooh bhi naa sher hai!! Aaj kal bohuth besharam ho ja rahi ho!! bachoon ki saamne??" he chuckled after praising himself for his antiques in the morning.

[you are a hunter!! By the way, you are turning shameless, infront of kids you were...]

"lekin ishitha kaise smile kar rahi hi??lagtha hei woh kush hai!!Bas aisa ho jaye ki ishitha hamesha aise hi rahe!!" he said before busying himself in his going-to-be unfocused office chores. All thanks to her, his Madrasan.

[but the way ishitha was smiling ,she seemed to be very happy!!i always want her to stay in the same way]

"yeh raman bhi naa!! Paitham!! Bachon ki saamne bhi... not that i'm complaining lekin..." she trailed off burying her cute face into her palms and then rubbing the goosebums on her hands.

[this raman!! He is gone case!! Infront of kids... not that i'm complaining...but]

"raman naa aaj kal kuch jyada hi kar rahe hai...um..pyaar...let it be!! But ishu what are you doing?? Kya hua tumhari resolves??raman tho apne pyaar dikha rahe he!! lekin tum?? Tum ne kuch nahi kiya!! bas unke romance ko enjoy kar rahi ho!! haha...romance...don't get distracted!! Tumhe bhi kuch karna hai!! Lekin kya karu??" she proved herself to be a lecture queen again. Her expressions changing vividly from shyness, anger on herself, shying away again and finally thinking with high determination.

[this raman nah!! He is doing it alot now-a-days...um...love...let it be!! But what about you?? What about your resolutions?? Raman is showering his love!!! But what about you?!! You are doing nothing besides basking in his romantic ministrations!! Haha..romance..don't get distracted!! You also need to do something!! But what should i do??]

This was the beauty and depth of their relation. They wanted nothing but the true smile of their soul mates. Yes, they are soul mates in the true sense.

Having the personified form of betrayal and painful past was not which pained raman, it was his wife's discomfort which mattered him the most. He forgot that he must also grieve and show anger towards his fate regarding himself. He forgot all his sorrows. How much does he love her??

Having her husband's once wife with him, her and their family under same roof was unbearable for any woman but ishitha. She loves her husband to that extent that she would forget all her grieves and would stand as strong as a mountain beside him. She forgot that she must feel discomfort with his ex's presence around them and was in turn trying to make him happy. How much does she love him??

Two weeks passed, thankfully with no major drama of his nosy ex. He has seen how she was trying to tempt him as she had done once. Once bitten, twice shy. He could only think of how low she could fall for herself.

But on the brighter side was his adorable wife who was not leaving a stone unturned to show her love. She would care him all the while managing other chores. He chuckled at his multi-tasking wife who was now trying some new Italian dish for him. She was reading the recipe from her tab which he had gifted, tucking hair strands behind her ear. He admired her cute but desirable form.

That was when he saw adi entering into the premises of kitchen which made her body stiff and saw her asking him whether he needs anything in a very formal way. This is definitely not what he wants to see. He wants to see her in the same way she reacts to others freely, without any apprehension. He also knew the reason behind her worry which was nothing other than his mother's words of asking her to stay away from adi as it is better for both of them. She had instantly agreed to it because she knew that his mother was only trying to solve the problems between them. But he knew the real reason that his mother doesn't want ishitha to suffer more than she was as he had accidently listened her conversation with simmi. She has seen how adi rudely snaps ishitha which he had also observed. But this is not the solution. Ishitha staying away from adi was not the solution. Adi must change. He must change for good.

Raman was observing adi, which confused him. There was no hatred for anyone in his son's eyes. It was confusion which also confused him. He expected an ocean of hatred from his son as he knew shagun was provoking and filling his ears against ishitha. But the poor soul was confused and was disturbed which made react violently in presence of ishitha. He promised himself to help both his son and wife to cope up this problem as she would do all his.

He also wanted to pace up the rate of their changing relationship. He wanted to openly declare his exploding love and desires to her. He wanted her to take a break from all this as he had seen how exhausted she was both psychologically and physiologically. He had quickly planned something and called his daughter for help. He asked her to ask her ishima to play caroms as it had been long time they played it last time which was happily obliged by her as she thought that her papa was also bored like her. He kissed her and told her not to reveal that it was he who asked for the game.

Ruhi as expected made ishitha join the game which was still unknown to adi who had happily come forward for the first time to play his favourite game. Ishitha saw this and stated a lame excuse of arranging lunch to all of family. But whom was she going to lie? The Raman Kumar Bhalla?? No! no! She can't spoil his plans, at least now. He quickly called ruhi to join them and in the process winking at her. Ruhi being her ishima's favourite however convinced her.

"pata hain ruhi!? Iss baar bhi mai hi jitney wala hoon!! Tum na mere team me ajav!!" he said smirking at ishitha.

[do you know ruhi? i'm going to win this time also!! Its better if you join me]

"acha ravan kumar!! Haraa ke dikaavu,kya?? Joh hua thaw oh jst fluke me hua tha!! Ab jeeth ke bathav!!, she said throwing daggers at him.

[oh ravan kumar!! Shall i defeat and show you? What happened was just a fluke!! This time it's me who is going to win!!]

"acha toh mujhse challenge kar rahi ho?" he asked further provoking her.

[so are you challenging me?]

"of course!! Mr.raman kumar bhalla!!" she retorted making the whole family grin with excitement dripping their eyes. Jhansi ki rani vs ravan kumar is always entertaining. isn't it??

"teek hai!! Challenge toh purana wala hi hai!! Agar me jeethunga tho tumhe 24 hours meri har baath manana padega!!" raman wisely implemented his plan.

[ok!! It's the same old challenge. You have to listen to me for whole 24 hours if i win!!]

"then be ready to accompany me for shopping tomorrow!!",she said confidently.

"let's see that!!!",he finished their argument with a smirk.

Yeah!! This was what he needed. This was what everyone needed. Isn't it?? Everyone except adi and his fuming mom who had by seen the father-daughter's whispers and by now understood their plan.

The game started with raman, adi and ishitha, ruhi in groups and group present there as eager audience. The game started with ruhi who had just pushed the striker with almost all her fingers and hadn't potted any of the coins. She was cheered by her mom and passed the striker to her father pecking his cheek. Raman smiled at her and potted a coin. Everyone shouted for him including ishitha and ruhi confusing everyone and themselves whether they were playing for or against raman. Now, it was ishitha's chance which resulted the same loud cheering. Adi who was uncomfortable earlier with her presence had now started enjoying the game and bustle around.

The game was about to end with a single coin to pot which adi had missed and now it was ishitha's chance. But she was unable to win despite of her amazing skills. All the credit goes to her husband who had pretended a call and while returning had intentionally dropped his mobile just behind the couch ishitha was sitting on. He bend down and expertly ran his fingers on her neck and back at that instant when she was about to strike which made it impossible for her to hold herself up. Raman, marking his victory with a smirk with a wink followed for ishitha who was now glaring him potted the coin and was declared as the winner. Ishitha immediately got up shouting,

"ravan kumar!! Cheating kiya aapne!!!"

[ravan kumar!! You cheated!!]

"maine kya kiya ishitha?" he asked innocently which made his wife open and close her mouth like a fish.

[what did i do ishitha?]

His brother who had seen his naughty antics winked and congratulated him making ishitha blush. Soon everybody understood but stood in mute conscious of the kids present around.

It was when the kids dispersed raman reminded ishitha of their challenge which she accepted angrily.

"okay!! Ishitha !! ab se 24 hours tum wahi karogi jho mein kahunga!! So go change your saree!! And pls ha kuch acha pehno hum bahar jaa rahe hain!" said raman with a naughty tone.

[okay!!ishitha!!! so you will do what i ask you to for next 24 hours. First of all, go and change your saree!! Please wear something pretty we are going out!!]

"mei nahi change karungi!! By d way mei hamesha acha pehanta hoon!!!" she said in an uninterested tone.

[i'll not change!! By the way i always wear pretty things!!]

"no!!no!! baby!! U can't reject me!! Go change into something pretty!! " he huskily uttered by side-hugging her. She shoved his hands off her and went into their room to change.

"bhai!! Aap bhi na!! Kitna tang karthe ho bhabhi ko!!" said romi laughing.

[bro!! Why do you tease my sister in law always?]

"oye!! Bhabhi ka chamcha!! Mera biwi hai!!kuch bhi karunga uske sath!!" he retorted which invited the teasing looks of his family. He became the laughing stock for the next 10 minutes which ended when ishitha had descended the staircase.

[you!! She is my wife. I'll do whatever i intend to]

She wore a simple lavender color saree which she would generally wear for any outings.

"ishitha u look beautiful!! Lekin kuch aur pehno!! Hot i mean a bit much prettier", he told her still looking at her from her head to toe for which she faked a smile and went back.

[ishitha u look beautiful!!! But wear something much hot... i mean a bit much prettier]

"bhai!!!..." exclaimed simmi only to get interrupted by raman.

[bro!!]

"maa!! Mein ishitha ko lekar yeh weekend hamara farmhouse pe bithana chahta hoon!! Waise wahan kuch repairs bhi karvana hai!!!" he completed.

[mom!! I'm going to spend this weekend in our farm house with ishitha!! And there are some repairs to be done!!]

"wow!! Bhai !! weekend ,farm house, bhabhi ke sath kya plans hai??" asked romi laughing.

[wow!!bro!!! weekend, farm house, wife ?? what are your intentions?]

Before raman can retort toshi shushed them and blessed raman and expressed her happiness over his decision.

Meanwhile someone in their bedroom were muttering curses under her breathe.

'something much hot..no..no..pretty!! i'll show what ishitha iyer is!!!" said ishitha doing last minute touch-ups.

Even though she was angry she liked this teasing alot. She also wanted to look sexy and hot to her husband's eyes. This was also one of her resolves to make him happy. She imagined his expressions earlier when she had dressed up and blushed.

She elegantly and slowly walked downstairs. She already succeeded in her mission. Her red saree with golden border was contrasting her glistening skin. Her sleeveless golden blouse which had given a generous view of her back made him gasp as she was posing like a model asking whether she was pretty. This was her revenge ,he knew it. This is the biggest punishment anyone could ever suffer, his wife posing sexily infront of his whole family. How would he control himself? He thought.

"raman!! Bolo na yeh pehnu yaw oh blue off shoulder wali sadi pehnu?? Waise blue aapki fav color haina?!" she completed with a smirk curling the ends of her hair which were already curled.

[raman!! Tell na!! Should i wear the blue off-shoulder saree?? Blue is your fav color na?!]

"no!!!...NO!!... woh... blue sadi bag pe rakna aur jaldi chalo mere sath!!" he stammered trying his best not to pounce on her.

[no!!...no!!!... pack that blue saree of yours into a bag and come along with me]

I know i stopped at wrong place!! But sry!! I can't write anymore!! And more over sry for not adding ishra confession in this part!! I thought it will b too long to read then!!! Im havng exams and so unable to manage!!but as i promised even though my health is giving up here is my update!! So do comment and like!!! By d way pls tell whether my narration is in slow pace??? Next update will b based on the comments.

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