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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi guys,

I have attempted another OS. Hope to get your support for this also.

I TRUST YOU

Things are back to normal in Anjali Nivas. Astha has regained her memory and is slowly taking back her duties as bahu of Agnihotri Parivaar. Varad, Sojal and Shlok take very good care of her. As usual she is the best fried of Kavya.

One day when Sojal is taking Kavya to school, Kavya starts crying saying she wants her Chachi also to come to her school. So Aastha also accompanies her. They reach the school and Sojal goes to leave Kavya in her class. Aastha keeps waiting in the corridor of the school. Few ladies come there and talk to her. One lady says "kya aap Astha Agnihotri hai?" Astha says " Haan." She says " Hum bahut kush ki aap teek hai." Aastha smiles and acknowledges. She leaves from that place. Behind her back they talk with each other. " Astha saath (7) mahine kisi ghair mard ki saath rehethe thee. Maana hai ki iski yaadgaash chale gayi. Magar us mard tho accha tha na. Kya ummeed hai ki usne Aastha ko isthamal nahi kiya hoga. Isme hum Aastha ko dosh nahi de sakthe hai... bechari yaadgash tho chali gayi na. Ye kya kar sakthi hai. woh tho samaj gaye honge ki uska pati hai..." Now Astha heard all this since she had not completely left from that place. She became very upset. Sojal came back and heard those ladies talking like this. She shouted at them..." aap log chup nahi reh sakthe kya? Aap hamari Astha ke saath aise kaise baath kar sakthe hai?" and she left from there. While coming back home Astha was very quiet in the car. Sojal got a doubt if Astha had heard those ladies talking and that is why she is quiet. On reaching home Astha pretended to have headache and went up to her room.

Evening inspite of kavya trying to cheer up Astha, she was not okay. The ladies' talk was bothering her very much. Sojal notices this and calls up Varad and asks him to tell Shlok about the same. Shlok is dsiturbed on hearing this and he can very well understand what Aasths must be going through. He comes home early and sees Aastha sitting in a corner in their room. He tells her" Aastha aaj mujhe pani puri khane ka mann kar raha hai, chalo bahar chalthe hain. " she refuses. But Shlok compels her and takes her out on a long drive. He takes her to the cliff from where he falls off before marriage. He gets her out of the car and walks with her hand in hand. He tells her "Aastha tum meri zindagi ho. tumne mujhe jeena sikhaya, hasna sikhaya, har situation ko handle karna sikhaya. Main tume udaas nahi dekh saktha hoon. Kya hua? Kyun udaas ho tum?" On hearing this, Aastha breaks down. She hugs shlok tightly and cries. Shlok rubs her back lovingly and lets her cry and let out her sorrow. Finally when she stops crying she tells Shlok" Meri yaadgaash chali gayi isme meri kya galathi hain? Log kyun aise bolthe hain?" and she tells all that happened in school in the morning. Shlok tells her" Meri rothlu..thum is falthu batho mein kyun dyaan dethe ho?" And he starts acting like Rajesh Khanna and sings the song "kuch tho log kahenge..logon ka kaam hain keha.." She forgets her sorrow and starts laughing when she sees Shlok acting like Rajesh Khanna. She hugs Shlok very tightly and says "I love you shlok" "Me too" says Shlok. He buys her paani puri and mango ice cream and takes her back home.

Varad and Sojal are happy to see Aastha back to normal. They smile at each other and think that only Shlok can handle Aastha and vice versa. All of them have dinner together. After dinner while clearing the dishes Aastha faints and falls down. Varad calls the doctor and shlok carries her to their room followed by Sojal.

To be concluded in the next part...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Good going 👏
Aastha is disturbed hearing the gossip of those ladies... Shlok understands her, and cheers her up with his love and care...
But now she faints... Hope she is alright soon... Waiting for the concluding part...

Would have liked to read the complete story in one go 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Is she pregnant...?
Nice going waiting for next part...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: dazzles

Is she pregnant...?
Nice going waiting for next part...


Yup... I was thinking the same...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It is a very good OS... Waiting for next part, wonder why Aastha fainted???!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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A very lovely start buddy... And u do have all our support..so keep going
Waiting for the next update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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beautifully written
thanks for the treat waiting for next part
thanks for taking time to write it
hope u continue ur writing

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Dear All,
Sorry to have kept you waiting. Below is the conclusion

The doctor arrives and confirms the good news that Aastha is pregnant. He refers a gynaecologist for future check ups. Once the doctor leaves Varad gives a side hug and congratulates Shlok. Sojal also hugs Aastha and says she will organise donation at the temple. Shlok is happy beyond words. He just lifts Aastha and whirls her around. He hugs her very tightly and kisses her on the forehead, the cheeks and a long passionate kiss on her lips. She also reciprocates the kiss and they forget the surroundings and enter their own world of love. Aastha is laying her head on Shlok's shoulder satisfied and happy. She feels Shlok's tears on her face and lifts her head and sees him crying. Aastha tells him" I know what you are feeling..Aap Aayi ko miss kar rahe hai na? Mein bhi... aayi bahot khushi hogi...yoh aayegi hamari beti bankar aap dekhiye na" Shlok was surprised. he says "tumhe kaise pata mein kya feel kar raha hoon?" " kyonki aap meri patidev hain".


The next day Shlok goes along with Aastha for the first appointment with the gynaec. She prescribes some iron and vitamin tablets and tells her to come for a scan after a few days. Two days later Shlok gets a call from the gynaec. She tells him that she wants him to see him and that it is regarding Aastha and the baby. Shlok is very worried and rushes to see the doctor. She meets him and tells him "Mr.Shlok mujhe aapse yeh ummeed nahi thi. Maine socha aap bahot aacha insaan ho, padi likhi ho, cultured ho, accha khandaan ka ho. Phir aap aise kam kyun kar rahe hain?" Shlok was confused. He did not know what the doctor was talking about. He tells her to clarify it to him. She says "Aastha came here yesterday. She has given me a sample of your hair and wants it to be used to check the DNA of her baby. Aapne kya kaha? Kyon who test chahthe hain aap?" Shlok tells the doctor that he did not ask for the test. But the doctor is not convinced. She gives him the result of the test and says the baby is yours only. Aastha ko shak math keejiye"


At night Shlok asks Aastha "kya tum kal doctor ke paas gayi thi? Doctor ne mujhe bhulaya. Tumne kyun DNA test karvana chahthi thi? Kya mera pyaar itna kamzor hai ki main thumne shak karoonga? Mujhe bahut dukh pahunchaya tumne Aastha. Bas tum itna hi jaanthi ho na mujhe?" He is very upset. Aastha comes and hugs him and tells him "Yeh test maine mere liye kiya. Mujhe aap par poora barosa hain. Aap kabhi nahi shak karenge mujhe, mujhe patha hai. But I wanted to do this test for myself because I wanted to assure myself that I am still your Aastha only and have not been cheated by him."


Shlok says "Aastha I trust you, I believe in our love. Our love can never fail us." Aastha is in tears and Shlok wipes her tears lovingly, hugs her tightly and carries her to their bed to enter into loveland.


Do leave in your remarks.

Thanks for all your encouragement.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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A very cute and emotional update.. Thanks for this wonderful OS
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Posted: 9 years ago
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cute OS nice keep it up
i expected Shlok would fire at those ladies who talked at her back 😆
thanks for OS hope u write like this more often and dont be sorry for being late

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