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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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kuch iss tarah
...
Part 4
...
Gadodia mension

Swara's sleep is disturbrd by a phn call it was frm ragini...
Swara: ha ragini bol
Ragini: swara i cant come college today
Swara: bt why
Ragini: vo himanshi's dadi sufferred a heart attak n thetr is no one at her place so i hv to be with her
Swara: ok u take care n if anything required call me n i will send ur clother to himanshi's place
Ragini: swara is eberything alryt?
Swara: ya bt y r u asking this.
Ragini: u r sounding low..that bubbliness is missing frm ur voice
Swara:(understoods that she is caught red handed) vo ragini i was sleeping na thats y...n u go byeee(n cuts the call)
Ragini(in mind) there is smthbg fishy...
...
Kavita's mension

She knock the door n found sanskar no where...then she saw balcony's open door she wrnt there n saw sanskar sleeping there peacefully with a smile on his face...
Kavita in mind" y he is sleeping here ?? N this smile i hv seen smile on his face after years i dont the reason behind that bt i wish he keeps on smiling lyk this..."
Kavita"sanskar get up itz 8 n y were u sleeping here?"

Sanskar: (In sleepy bt happy voice) her voice is so pacyfing yr...

Kavita; what??

Sanskar: umm nthng vo good morng

Kavita: sanskar dont lie just tell me..

Sanakar: vo do u rember i hv yold u about a girl singing aarti...?

Kavita: ya i do rember bt y r u asking this?

Sanskar: i hv heard the same voice a girl was singing in the neighbouring mension...bt i wonder y she sang at 3

Kavita: what at 3??

Sanskar: yup...well leave all this n get ready we hv to leave...
...

Swara called abhay n asked him wether he get any solution or not...abhay said that he has fixed his appointment with a specialist n he will meet him tommorrow...
She left vo pia's home..
...
Sanky n kavita were at shopping mall as uttara demanded for a hand bag n that too frm a particular mall...he was waiting outside n kavita was buying that for her...some girls saw him n gatherd around him they were hugging him..he went out of control when a girl kissed him...he fumes in anger n left kavita to saw that n rum behind him.."hey sanskar wait yr"

While going towards the parking he bumps into a girl... that girl was feeling dizzy...(that girl is none othde than swara)

Sanky hold her n then make her stand n burst out on her
"What the hell is ur problrm? Y u girls always try to come close to me?"
Swara: look m sorry i hvnt done that intensionally itz just that i was fdeling dizzy..

Sanskar: n y u girls always feels dizzy when m around

Swara: what(surprised)?

Sanskar: ya y r u so surrised ha ...oh actully itz nt ur fault its uf upbringing...itz ur parents mistake u kno ur brother may love such cheap tricks bt m nt lyk that...got it..

Swara was now fuming in anger n she said while crying"u cant be lyk my brother he is special n ya rahi baat upbringing ki to mujhe kisi or ka gussa kisi or pe utarna nhi sikhaya gaya hai n ya m sorry"
Swara while going fell unconcious on ground kavita saw that n run towards her...she asked sanky to hell her bt he denied...
"Mr maheshwari it enough u cant just bust out at her she is literally burning in fever n ya frm when u hv become that whom u hate most?"

Sanky was numb he was feeling guilty..

He took swara in his arms n drive to his place...
They called doctor n after examination he ask them to take care of her as she is very week...
After that he took her phn n called last dialed number...it was abhay's
Abhay: ha swara bol
Sanky:(in mind) swara wow beautiful name
Abhay: shona are u there
Sanky:(shona he must be her guy) hello m sanskar..
Abhay:(shocked) who are u n swara ka phn tumhare pass.
Sanky explaind everything n he came to their place with pia...
...
Pia called adi that swarA will be staying at her place..
Abhay n pia were given rooms as swara was still unconcious...
...
At night 2 pm
Swara got up she strted cryng she was so upset that she could not even think where she is...sanky while passing by saw her cryng n enters her room...she was shocked to see her sanky apologises for his sayng n they chatted a while...
...
Sanky while going out ask her:may i ask u smthng
Swara:hmm
Sanky: y were u cryng
Swara: vo nthng
Sanky: if u want to talk to me u can (smile)
Swara: ok i will
He turns to go oug bt swRa called him" listen mister"
Sabky: yes
Swara: try to be happy...u never kno at what point life snaches everything from u..
Sanky rembers sm past moments n smiles n says "ok now u take rest"
...
The end

Precap: sanskar's meet with that singing girl
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
Nice story and concept I am sorry for the late comment and I actually read all the parts just now and yes I loved them
Edited by harshitaloomba1 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: harshitaloomba1

Nice story and concept I am sorry for the late comment and I actually read all the parts just now and yes I loved them

thanx for reading n loving 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Red.orchid

Nice update👏

Thanks for pm

Sorry my like button is not wrking😕

thankyou 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
kuch iss tarah
...
Part 5
...
In morning swara n sanskar were sleepin in their respective rooms...(only they were sleeping) kavita abhay n pia were eating brealfast...abhay gets a call n he rush to swara
" swara get up"
Swara: what happend abhay?
Abhay : get up yr...dr. mehta called me n ask me to meet him in an hour
Swara wakesup n run outside
Abhay: oh god this girl...swara wait yr...
Swara: no abhay we should leve or else we miss the opportunity..
Abhay: ya we will bt before that u hv to eat breakfast u r still week ...
Swara took a plate n serve food in it n ask abhay to leave...
Abhay: ur breakfast?

Swara: here it is now lets go.
Pia: swara n how will u return this plate rember u r at kavita's house
Swara: oh ha i forgot...(shouted) kavitaaa
Kavita: ya swara r u ok.?
Swara: kavita can i take this plate with me i will return it by night promise
Kavita:(shocked n surprised) ok u..before she can complete swara hold abhay's hand n run...
Sanskar was seeing all this n simles..
...
Abhay n swara met the doctor n he said that swara can save him by donating her bone marrow to him.(guyz itz all finction i dont kno anything in this matter as i m a commerce student )
Swara was on cloud nine she happily went to her college...
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In college
Ragini: (hug's swara) shona i missed u so much
Swara: even i also missed u...n hwz himanshi's dadi now
Ragini: she is better n her parents hv also came...
Pia: arrey guyz do u kno that today is a conference in our college n a big business man is the chief speaker
Swara: who ?

Pia: dont kno koi sanskar maheshwari h...

Then a car stopped infront on college gate a guy step down from car n all girls went crazy...
Girl 1 : oh god he is so hot
Girl 2 : yr he is so charming

Swara: guyz lets go ye ladkian to pagal ho gai ...music room m chlte h...trio left

That guy was passing from coridoor n again listened that sweet voice which took away all his worries he was about to knock the door bt someone called him frm back" mr. Sanskar maheshwari this way please"
He left..
Swara didnt attend the confrence as she has no intrest yes she is a scholar bt without intrest...

Swara got call on her phn " swara jldi aa yudi fir se ragini ko tang kr ra h usne uspe paani daal dia h"
Swara: pia just teo min aaj ise esa maza chakhaungi k yaad rkhega...
...
At college ground
Ragini was cryng as yudi throws water on her which makes her clothes stick to her body she was too uncomfertable..
Yudi: jiya baby where is her body guard (laughs)

Jiya: baby may be darr gai ho tumse

Sanky saw this all n fumes in anger he strted moving towards her then suddenly soneone throw the bucket full of paint on yudi n jiya...ends up making them red yellow blue ( badicly colorful )

Swara:(in angry attitude) i hv warned u not to mess with my sis ...jitti jldi smjh jao utta achha hoga...(holds ragini's hand) chal ragu...n left

Sanskar in mind oh so she is her sister oh god she is damn confident...then he rembers about about the girl he went there n found it to be empty...
...2 days later...
Business party it was a masked tgeme party
Kavita sanskar swaragini were in party...

Then an announcement is made "aaj ki shaam hamare beech ek bhut achhi singer h so can we please hv miss gadodia on stage"
Swara went on stage n sang...sanky recognised her voice n decides k aaj to mill k he rhunga...
SwaSan dance together...both were lost in each other's eyes they couldn't even notise that the song was over long back
They came back to reality when everyone claped
Sanky took her out n say" u r beautiful"
Swara: what?
Sanky: voh u r singing..itz beautiful...
Swara: oh thnx..i thought u were flirting with me (winks)
Sanky: (laughs) ohh dont worry i will not flirt with u...achha may i ask ur name...
Swara: ummn no
Sanky: but why
Swara: whag if mere sunder se naam ko nazar lag gai toh(launghs)
Sanky: (laughs too) u r so funny
Swara: achha leave that my name is..(interpted by phn call)
Swara " ji bhai".

Adi: cmon yr come back itz too late
Swara: ok will be there in hlf n hour ...(cuts call)
Swara: ok mister so hv to go bye...n leave in hurry..
Sanky: shit yr naam b ni pta uska..
...
The end
...
Precap : sanky back to mumbai n 2 monthes leap
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update meher liking it so much.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: soumi93

Nice update meher liking it so much.

thnku dear ...

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