how to end my ff plz reply coz it's waste

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey guys after rading other members FF even i decided to write one and hope you will like it and i'll update my FF every two days a week, hope u understand.

introduction

dr. shashank:50 years old married to Padma and have 2 daughters

padma gupta: 49 years old who share 25% with business tycoon Nitya. married to dr. shashank

Anjali Gupta:21 years charming girl who loves her family. She's studying at spencer college and best friend with Atul. wonder who is her dream boy atul or ???

Ridhima gupta: recently moved to spencer college and love her sister a lot. she's cheeky but lovely and best friend with Sapna. she's 19 years old and daughter of Shashank and padma and sister of Anajali

Shilpa Anand

Nitya anand: Business tycoon and widowed, 49 years old and love her Amrita Singhchildern-Sapna and her son.

Sapna: She's same as ridz but very quiet at begining. She loves her brother and her best friend.She's 19 too

Surveen Chawla

Armaan:He's hot, young and surrounded by girls..love his bro..and ready to do anyfing for him. He doesn't like his dad but who will bring him n his dad together sapna or ridz or anji???

Karan Singh

Atul: very close to anji. he's another hot dude and act tough infront of Arman but love him lot

do u fink i should continue???

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Posted: 18 years ago
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wowwwwwwww new faces very much intersting please post soon honestly i never reply to anyones fanfic or post but i reply u bcoz its so interesting 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ya u SHUD cont...yaar cumon plzzzzz cont asap 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ok guys here it goes...n first fing my hindi and english writing isn't gd..lol
part 1
a girl with aarti on her hand stand infront of durga ma idol..and turn around n take blessing of her parents..
Dr.s&Padma:Jitiraho beta

Anjali:thanks mama papa

padma:ridhima kahan hai? aj uska college par phela din hai aur(get interrupt)

dr.s:woh bichari thak gayi hogi(he loves her a lot)

Padma:shashank tum vi na kaisa bahane banteho

anjali on dining:mama mein dekhtiho ap log nasta lijiye

Shasank:haan chali humein late hojaye gi

anjali:ridz niche ao mama gussa hain
Dr.s and padma leaves

camera focuses on her lips:ok bye baad mein milte hain mama se daat paregi..
it's non other thank ridhima, she comes running downstairs


ridz:D, i love u a lot

Anjali:thik hain main samaj gayi. waisi maam kaphi naraz hai lekien

ridz(cut in): apne mujhe bachaliye. d,Sapna ko pick up karna padega ok?

anju:theek hain tu nasta karke gadi mein ja, main change hokar ati hoon

on th car
ridz looking at her sis:oho d tum itna achi kyun lagrahen ho? koi hain kya?

anjali:pagal aur sapna k barema bata?

ridz: d kya batau tum use janti ho aur kya?

anju:are mera matlab uske ghar k address bata..

Nitya house:
nitya:beta achi tara se nasta karlo, kahan bhagi jara hi hon?

Sapna:mom ridz arai hogai..waisi vi m full

Nitya:gadi lejati takhlip diya?..aur khir lelo

sapna:um woh ridz na kahan

Nitya:samaj gayi acha vaiya ne kya kahan

Sapna:hosiyar rehna..bhagera bhagera..n laugh n run..bye mom..lov u

Nitya:pagal,bhagwan jane is ladki ka kya hoga? and gets call by padma
haan bolo kya baat hain?

padma:are dost hoon..vul gayi..haan yo meetin para arai hona?

nitya:haan.aur ab ladkiya bade hogaye..

padma: wohi toh..acha mein rakhti hoon koi hain bye

at college

anjali and others reach college and sees Atul at parking point and goes there

sagar:hey anju, meet my vai n looks for him..hey where is he?

anjali: kya hua(laughs).newaz meet Sapna and ridz..(who wasn't there too)

they hear someonw arguing..who are they?

ok fankx u two..here it goes..
PART 2
Ridz: ankhen hain ki button dekh kar chal nai sakte?
Arman :he turn around

and talk as if he got annoyed:hey chill!dis is not court..ok?
Girl1: honey high skwl se hogi, clege k bare mein kya pata
Ridz:U just shutup waisi apni ap ko kya samjati hai..tu vi mere skwl k hain bhool gayi(aru ridz uske mupar chudki marti hain) 😆
Ar: plz stop dis cat fight n Ms.high skwl..just leave us alone
Atul:Arman plz dont forget dat even u r newcomer and laughs..? 😆
Ridz: oh..toh apvi junior hai(to arman)..(to sagar) thank you, apne asliyet bata di varna?
Arman:Varna kya? (very close to her)
Anju(goes in between)..plzz. Ridz ki taraf se mein sorry bolti hoon
Ridz: dd yeh kya..
Arman: hey gorgeous tum(to anju)
Atul: yes..mera vai..ridz ki behen hai..
Ridz and arman are still giving evil to each other..and the music is at bckground whenever they have funny fight..arman leaves wid some girls.

Bell rings
Sapna: dd chale?
Anjali: sorry tum dono yeah map follow karlo..bye I've to leave
Sapna: ok dd, (to atul) ap vi junior he kya so..help us showin her map
Atul: mein nahin..sorry n shouts..anjali wait
Then ridz and sapna go on their own n they are late for their lesson

At lesson
Teacher: u too are late so see me after lesson
Both r and S: sorry miss
Ridz: waisi teacher hum kahan bethange?(looking toward Arman who had his leg on the spare table)
Teacher(shouts): arman let them seat
Arman: ok miss beautiful u can seat her..but u(to Ridz)
Ridz:uuuuuu…but stops coz sapna was holding her hand
Sapna: Fankx, ridz tu idar bet thik hai?
They both stays for 15 minutes extra.

At canteen
Ridz with sad face: hi dd
Anjali:kya hua?Sapna kya baat hain?
Sapna explains her everthing then Anjali ask her to ignore this stupid things
Atul: Hey don't worry pata hain mein Anju ko vi aisa hi karta tha but now we are best friend, kyun anju?
Sapna: Atul, baat aisi nahin hain..Arman is too much too Ridz
Anjali: Atul,jahan tak mein janta hoon Arman bahut pyara ladka hain magar..
Ridz: dd plz..lets get somefing to eat..wat do u say?
Everyone ask her to get what they want..Ridz goes to order the food and bumps on someone..and says sorry without looking.
Who is that?????

Edited by mujhi - 18 years ago
Helen24 thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey nobody likes it.. 😭 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
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fankx but..i dont fink it's dat gd..lol..i should keep trying..lol
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Posted: 18 years ago
#7
Its really nice due continue
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Posted: 18 years ago
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fankx checkout the part 2

Edited by mujhi - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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veryyyyyyyyyyyyyy nice just loved it thanxxxxxx!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey its very nice. Plz do continue. I really like surveen and chaitanya 👏 👏 👏

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